The description for this book grabbed my attention. I love reading fantasy, horror, and thriller stories. I was also intrigued by the roleplaying aspect because I am a forever DM and love playing D&D with my friends. I thought it was a good fit for me, so I requested an eARC on BookSirens.
Unfortunately, this book did not meet my expectations. I know other readers enjoyed it, but it wasn’t a good match for me after all.
The author does a good job of describing the setting and characters so you can picture them. I found the descriptions went on a tad too long in many cases, which causes the story to drag. More focus on the action and less focus on the background setting may have helped.
It takes too long for the main character to be introduced. Once I got to that, I became concerned. The main character is a walking stereotype. Using the fat, loser, nerd harmful stereotypes are not clever and so boring. Every person in the comic book store was described using these stereotypes. There was fatphobic stuff weaved in throughout the entire book.
The detectives had such a thin, flimsy connection between Terry and the murders. Despite zero evidence or even obvious connections with all the victims, the detectives somehow were convinced it was him and went after him hard. It didn’t make sense to me.
I didn’t find any of the characters likable. I didn’t find myself caring about what happened to any of them. The main character was a terrible person and I couldn’t empathize with him. When I read horror thrillers, I expect to be on the edge of my seat. A real page turner. Unfortunately, everything was too predictable. There wasn’t any mystery, shocking twists or big reveals.
For a book that is supposed to have D&D as a central theme (based on the title and blurb), it lacked D&D. There are a few references to it (that aren’t very accurate either), but it was severely underutilized.
The plot had potential and I wish it could have been fleshed out more.