Book 3 is very fast-paced, it may be a little too fast paced. Some time should have been spent in the beginning of the book as to the continuing attacks by the Jiserians, as to how how Talis helps the wizards, and thier swaying loyalties. Why won't they teach him to fly and how much time has pasted? The stage would have been better set if theses questions had been answered, and they still don't get answered at the end of this book either. As for spelling errors, which are alot of them disrupting the reading so much so causing you to reread several times trying to figure out what is being said. Still a Good read!