Honestly feels appropriate to have one final one star read of the year. More to follow, but yikes.
Alright, let's see how much I feel like deconstructing what went wrong here. (Spoiler alert: a lot.)
Very little of this story is actually about getting Maggie's (FMC) book published. Basically, disregard the book summary because yeah it's kind of there, but mostly this book is about something else. Namely, this book is about a scandal caused by Bridger's (the MMC) older brother (Paul, nicknamed "Pimm"), the heir who is presented for most of the book as a complete wastrel. Pre-story, Pimm got a girl pregnant in Bath and abandoned her, resulting in her family needing to be paid off. The problem is that Pimm and Bridger's family is in dire straights because Pimm is spending well beyond their income (which I was led to believe would be sufficient if not for Pimm's poor management and extravagant ways). So, Pimm went to Bridger's best friend Lane, who served in the navy (I think? Some branch of the military at any rate) for the money to pay off the girl's family. Lane does so because Bridger saved his life, but Lane also doesn't admit any of this to Bridger??? I don't really understand any of this (Bridger directly asks Lane, his supposed best friend, and Lane lies about it), but whatever. Bottom line is that Pimm is presented as someone with a drinking problem and a generally lousy person. Again, see ruining a girl in Bath and getting her pregnant and not marrying her.
The actual story mostly takes place at the wedding celebration of Lane (the aforementioned best friend), who comes from a fairly wealthy family. He also happens to be the cousin of the FMC, Maggie. Maggie's mother and Lane's mother are two of three sisters. Maggie's mother married for love, and the other two married for wealth. The other two sisters view this as a betrayal, and constantly are saying terrible things about Maggie's mother. (Maggie's mother does not actually appear in this story at all.) The third sister (the one who isn't Lane's mother) is supporting Maggie's family (Maggie, her mother, and her two younger sisters) since their father died, leaving them with very little. That support comes at a price though, which is that the aunt expects Maggie to give up her writing dreams and marry well. Maggie would rather not marry just for money, and would rather try to support her family by writing novels. Maggie's two aunts quite frankly were terrible people - shallow, selfish, and uncaring, and had no redeeming qualities - and I suppose I'm grateful that the author didn't try to redeem them. Since redeeming terrible people (Pimm, specifically) is a thing this author did try to do.
ANYWAY, Maggie's cousin Lane is getting married to a lovely woman named Ann, who is one of the few characters in this book I liked without reservation. Ann was great, and she and Maggie got along very well. At the wedding, a scandal breaks out because someone impersonates Ann and is seen kissing another man. Maggie is really the only person who stands up for Ann. Even Lane doesn't seem to be 100% on her side. (This did not leave me feeling great about that particular marriage, even though Lane is supposed to be one of the "good" characters.) Maggie and Bridger end up trying to figure out what really happened. Bridger is convinced his brother had something to do with it. Maggie just wants to clear Ann's name. A good portion of the story deals with the scandal and sorting it all out. It was, in fact, Pimm who caused the scandal, along with Ruby, one of Ann's cousins, who just wanted to be noticed and felt overlooked. Pimm and Ruby plan to get married, and ultimately Maggie and Bridger stop them.
In around all of this, Bridger's ex-betrothed (I think??? Former love interest at any rate), Regina, is also there, and she despises Bridger because, well, he was pretty cruel to her when he decided to break off their relationship. Regina is frequently kind of treated as a villain or a would-be villain, but to be 10000% clear, she is entirely justified in her dislike. Years ago, Bridger, the supposed hero of this story, decided to break off their relationship when his father (who is also terrible, more on that in a bit) told Bridger that Regina's family wasn't noble or rich enough. Instead of being honest with her, Bridger was cruel and belittled her in letters to the point that Regina broke it off herself. For example, Regina also loved to read and write and I guess also had aspirations to be an author, but after his letters, she lost all her confidence and felt put down. What he said to her was never specifically mentioned, but it's clear enough that he behaved very badly. What's not clear is what the point of all this was, except that Regina becomes something of an obstacle to the romance since she warns Maggie away from Bridger. (Again, feels justified as a woman looking out for another woman who wants to be an author.)
As far as the Maggie trying to publish her book part of the story went, I don't even know. Bridger hated the first few pages when he originally read it, but then he catches a single page when it blows out of Maggie's window at the wedding and suddenly he knows this book is incredible and publishing it will save his family???? (Oh, he also received another manuscript that's going to help save his family. Turns out that was written by Regina. [Insert Phoebe Buffay shocked face gift here] Yeah, it really was that obvious.)
I can't even really put my finger on why this book was such a mess, other than that the characters were largely unlikeable (the male characters especially) and most of the plot really made no sense. The character motivations were poorly drawn out, and there was too much going on for any real character or relationship development. (Like, there was also a side storyline about Maggie's paternal aunt, who ran away to become an actress and was never heard from again. That story was fine in the grand scheme of things but also why, when there were twenty other things going on.)
After everything Pimm did, including getting the woman pregnant in Bath and causing the scandal at the wedding, then the author tries to humanize him by having him explain to Bridger that he took beatings as a kid and intentionally screwed up to attract their father's attention away from Bridger. That's all well and good, but it doesn't excuse all of his screwed up behavior as an adult? He caused/potentially caused the ruination of multiple women. Significantly more work needs to be put into trying to redeem a character like that?? And what was the point of trying to present Regina as a villain? Largely that whole episode makes Bridger look pretty bad. I don't know what the author was trying to do there???? And then there's Ruby, who so much wanted to be noticed that she caused scandal for her cousin, potential ruination for herself, and after Maggie and Bridger rescued her, went and told Maggie's aunts about how Maggie and Bridger spent the night together, thereby causing Maggie's aunts to go ballistic on Maggie. (All this while Maggie was doing everything she could to minimize the scandal/damage to Ruby's reputation by keeping a bunch of secrets about what Ruby had done.)
Oh, and after all this happens, Maggie's aunt takes her to her house in Mayfair and starts reading/returning her mail, thereby separating Maggie and Bridger. Bridger learns pretty soon after that Ruby spilled the beans and Maggie's aunt forced her to leave the wedding/house immediately without even saying goodbye to her cousin, and then just keeps writing letters, not for once thinking that Maggie might not be receiving them even after all of the signs that her aunt might be interfering???? You'd think that he'd have learned a lesson in all of this about taking some action, but no, he did not.
I'm completely rambling and probably not even making sense, but this book was a mess. The plot was not what was advertised, the entire drama with Ann and Lane and Ruby and Pimm was frustrating at best. A large number of characters were difficult to root for, some (like Pimm) were terrible people whom the author tried to redeem, and others (like Regina) were presented as villains when it was actually the supposed hero of the story who was in the wrong. Giving a big YIKES to all of this, and putting this author on my "never waste my time reading them again, thanks" list.