Another good storyline with lots of action and I love the characters, however, the proofreading has not gotten any better. The use of wrong words in multiple places as well as trouble with grammar and punctuation just ruins a book for me. I was taking notes on this book and the first in this series, of all the grammar, spelling, punctuation, just plain wrong words and it definitely took away from the storyline. I'd love to be on the ARC team, if this writer has one. I'm definitely interested in more stories from this world but hope that the proofreading gets much better or I may just have to write the series off.