This book was selected by a member of my book club this month. Women's romance is not something I would usually explore, and after reading this one, I can't say that has changed much.
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Overall: The story had good momentum (other than the 50 pages or so of flirtation and falling in love in the middle). It was a page-turner; I did want to find out what happens.
CHARACTERS: Here's where some problems start. The main character, Lexi, is detailed well. We get to know her inner-workings. The male lead, however, is much more one-dimensional. He becomes little more than a walking erection; gorgeous despite his scar, perfect body, able to make love seven times in one day! There are very few other characters; the author conveniently kills off Lexi's parents; Sloan turned his back on his; and there don't seem to be any siblings or annoying friends.
PLACE: The book takes place in Savannah, GA, but could have taken place just about anywhere. There are mentions of a river, park, farmer's market, etc., but that could be Anywhere, USA. More detail might have helped bring us into the environment. For example, Lexi buys a bike early in the story. Why not have her go for a ride around her neighborhood and tell the reader what she sees?
The rest of the action takes place inside her house. The descriptions of the repairs are good. I liked the scene where Sloan and Lexi write the names of people who have hurt them on a wall to be demolished, then smash away.
STRUCTURE: I thought this was the strongest part of the book. Things come together well at the end with a sweet moment accompanied by a sinister one. Also, the date that Lexi agrees to early on becomes a major plot point toward the end.
LANGUAGE: Was the weakest aspect of the book, IMO. Not only was the text shot through with spelling errors, there were more serious errors like word usage. Sloan, for example, is said to be in the "Marine Corp." Is that a corporation run by the Marine Corps? Or, when Sloan learns, "...every detail and nuisance of her curvaceous body." Does the author mean "nuance?"
Other word usage that I found problematic was the overuse of explanation, like this: "'Please Alexis, I promise I'll keep my hands to myself.' Sloan beseeched" Isn't it already clear from context that Sloan is beseeching? No need to knock us over the head, we get it. Oh, and usually periods don't appear inside of quotation marks if the sentence is continuing.
Anyway...this is a fun read. It's the start of a series, so maybe someday I'll circle back around to the next issue; they're available right now as free downloads on amazon Kindle.