PHYLLIS

The Page Twins #2

by Dorothy Whitehill

Phyllis by Dorothy Whitehill is a heartwarming coming-of-age novel that captures the spirit of youth; self-discovery; and love. The story centers around Phyllis; a young woman navigating the challenges and joys of early adulthood. As she embarks on a journey of personal growth; Phyllis faces various dilemmas; including the complexities of family life; friendship; and romance. Her relationships with those around her shape her understanding of herself and her place in the world. The novel explores universal themes of independence; ambition; and the pursuit of happiness; all while providing a vivid portrayal of the social norms and expectations of her time. Phyllis’ character is both relatable and inspiring; as she contemplates the decisions that will define her future. Whitehill’s writing is rich with emotional depth; creating a story that resonates with readers who have experienced the transformative power of youth and self-reflection. Phyllis is a delightful read that examines the challenges of growing up and the importance of forging one's own path in a world full of possibilities.

Genres: Fiction

156 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 1920

Reviews

[Orinoco Womble (tidy bag and all) · Rating 1 out of 5]

I wanted to like this one more than I did, but unfortunately it's part two of a series and Whitehill simply didn't bother. We're given hints and scraps of Story One, but very little action in Story Two after the first couple of chapters. Lots of characters that the reader is supposed to know all about, and doesn't if they haven't found the first book (and as Gutenberg doesn't have it, I don't suppose I ever will). Most of the girls' fun times happen off-camera, with activities such as a visit or day out glossed over in one or two sentences after the fact. They build up to, say, a day spent helping Auntie with her "settlement girls"--then you turn the page and several days have passed, and it's all over! You never see how the day went. At one point one of the twins says, "I am so tired of dances and skate parties and afternoon teas. We've been going to them all winter." Well, the reader certainly hasn't! Even in 1920 New York City had a lot more to offer than Whitehill seems to care about--museums, concerts, ballet...but all we get are repeated (scamped-over) visits to the zoo to see the lion Akbar. Toward the end Phyllis says Jan can't tell a story of something that happened to her because "she leaves all the best part out." Well, so does Whitehill.

Did I say no action? Oh, there is, but not much to do with the girls themselves learning to live together. No, for that we have a less-than-believable kidnapping of a small child! I can't shelve this as "social realism" because nothing happens. It's a lazy regurgitation of the first book with a few added bits.

Huge disappointment.