This is my second take on the review of this book. I wrote the first when I "rage quit" reading this book, and gave it 1/5 which, in hindsight is not fair to this book.
I got to page 270 of 500 page and could not carry on, but to this book's credit, it is probably the closest to a stand-alone in the whole series. It's just too slow in light of the whole series, and you still need to have read the first two books in the trilogy to really know what is going on.
The good:
This book is set in a cool world, and most of the characters are likeable. However, a lot of people say the author takes his time to develop characters, etc. and that's the polite way to say it.
If you really care about just getting to know some characters regardless of what they ultimately accomplish (or do not accomplish), then sure, dive in.
It's well-written, very creative.
The problem with this book:
The challenge with trilogies is that each story must be a standalone and connect to the others in the series. This trilogy does not do that. Books 1 and 2 are basically ~800 pages of what feels like back-story that frankly, I didn't really care for in light of the direction Magebane went. Therefore, I didn't just quit on page 270/500 in this book, but page 1070/1300 for the trilogy.
SPOILERS BELOW THIS LINE
The main flaw of Magebane is not as a standalone book, but as the culmination of a trilogy. There is almost no payoff for any of the plots from books 1 or 2 in this book - with the exception of Kai/Akosh. And it just left me wondering the point of Books 1 and 2 really were when nothing that happened in those mattered in Magebane.
--> Tammy being made into The Old Man is a nice back-story, but it would have been fine to just have her become The Old Man in the same story as she fights the plague.
--> Wren... I swear the author just doesn't know what to do with her because she's redundant to Tianne later.
--> Both Wren and Tianne's plot from books 1 and 2 are essentially just back story to what they are meant to do in this book.
--> Danoph's nature being a mystery for 2 books is way too slow that I honestly didn't care for the reveal at the end of book 2, only to finally develop him in book 3... after I lost patience.
--> Akosh has a good arc from mastermind to cornered, to hunted, but that didn't need to happen across 3 books.
--> Munroe is just a no-patience/no-nonsense mage all the way through. I frankly don't care for this character she's just always out to hurt people.
--> Balfruss and Garvey basically got written out of the story for book 2 and in book 3 where I quit had yet to do anything - I know they amount to something, but it's too slow and could have been covered.
--> The Cadre of Mages for Choilan... I mean the whole point of Tianne in book 2 to explain why the cadre exists, but it's not worth it because they all just get possessed by Maran and they fold into the Kai plot in any event.
--> the plague was the plot in Perizzi, but we had to wait 2.25 books to get it, and I frankly didn't care by the time it got there.
--> Kai's involvement is really cool... but I didn't like waiting for 2.25 books teasing that Akosh was the final boss of this series, only to find out it was Kai all along - again basically negating Akosh's plot.
--> Red Tower falls? Who cares? All these characters seem capable of operating independently and we barely got to know the Red Tower anyway.
--> Wren meets the queen of Shael and saves a whole province of Shael? Irrelevant because the plague is in Perizzi as well as her destiny.
I could go on, but I hope I have made my point. It's ironic (and paradoxical) that you need books 1 and 2 to know what is going on, but also that those stories are basically irrelevant to the final conclusion in this book. There is no point building up a character or plot only to have it retconned or made irrelevant by a subsequent book.
Magebane made books 1 and 2 feel like a complete waste of time - like a meandering trail of pointless adventures before the main event (Magebane). Magebane itself is also a slow read - as very little had happened up to 270/500. Yes, I know about the ending, which I am not spoiling here, I did skim to the end to prevent any further loss of time.
I hate quitting a series more than 75% through, but it just left such a bad taste in my mouth that the prior 800 pages (books 1 and 2), which were a bit of a slog in retrospect, felt like a waste based on the direction that Magebane took. I honestly could not tell you which parts of Book 1 and 2 were relevant to Magebane aside from who is who and the general setting.
I kept being told this is the best book in the trilogy, and it ends "with a bang" and words to that effect. But the glacial pace of this book, coupled with the glacial pace of the whole trilogy, and the retcons/pointless prior plots, is just unforgiveable.
Specific things that irked me....
The exact chapter where I put the book down and then skimmed the rest is worth mentioning. The whole trilogy is just build-up, but no resolutions. In the chapter when Akosh, Munroe and Vargus, and Kai, and Danoph all finally meet just past halfway through: NOTHING happens. It was a stalemate. That was the exact chapter I realized this book is way too much padding/irrelevant plot lines to go on in earnest.
*I have to give special credit for these three annoyances in the the trilogy, once you see them the immersion is gone:
1. It is so ambiguous that Choss and Munroe's son are dead. You don't see it happen at the end of book 1. And yet every chapter in Munroe's perspective has to remind us they're dead, which is weird because she didn't see whether they lived or died. If they're obviously dead why keep saying it? If they're not dead, when are they coming back? I just wanted to know and it's this stupid loose thread with no payoff (at least where I stopped).
2. Every single fight with a man against a woman - the woman wins. Every single time. There is no tension for any of Tammy's fights or Munroe's fights because they always break that guy's nose, twist his arm, knock him out, etc. I'm not invested in those fights because I already who is going t win.
3. Every single male character has basically been written out of the trilogy at this point. The two coolest characters in the whole series: Balfruss and Garvey? Completely absent so far. But annoying characters like Tianne? Every third chapter. Danoph, Kai and Vargus don't count; they're gods. I don't have a problem with female characters like Tammy, she's cool, but this series started off with both male and female characters and there are basically no male characters left.
4. Every single character in this book is either a complete rookie, or some extremely accomplished mage. There are no in-betweens: Dox, Wren, Tianne, etc. never know enough about magic. Munroe, Garvey and Balfruss are complete masters with god-like power. We never see anything middle of the row. It's just weird.
How this book essentially ruins the trilogy:
This is how you need to view the series:
Mageborn: Backstory part 1
Magefall: Backstory part 2
Magebane: The actual story
When I read Mageborn, I gave 4 stars.
After I read Magefall, I gave that 3 stars and lowered my Mageborn rating to 3 stars because I was confused how basically nothing happened in Magefall that really continued from Mageborn, and nothing big happened in Magefall.
Now since reading Magebane - or as much of it as I could get through - I am just left disappointed. This story drags way too much. Nothing gets resolved. I have lowered all my reviews in this series to 2/5 stars as a warning to others.
A note to authors and publishers: semi-constructive criticism...
If you're writing a trilogy, it has to be 3 self-contained stories that link to a bigger whole. Like Lord of the Rings or Hunger Games. Each book stands alone, and each book links to a larger whole. These are good series for that reason.
The problem with the Age of Dread is that these books are not stand-alone stories (except maybe Magebane). They're all meandering, fluff-ridden messes where not much happens in any one book. This trilogy is slow and bloated with pointless plots.
I honestly think this trilogy could have been a 500-600 page book that had a little more pace to it, with slightly fewer POV characters, and a focus on the actual Akosh/Kai threat, and the mages ability to counter it in the face of a population that doesn't trust them.
- Skip the fall of the Red Tower, or have that as its own series.
- Delete the whole of the second book.
- Skip Tammy's back story, or have it shortened so the Old Man catches the plague and then Tammy has to take over for him that way - a "field promotion"
- Have Tianne and Wren be more seasoned, and more experienced... maybe recent graduates from the Red Tower.
- Have Danoph be revealed sooner... or delete him altogether, I wouldn't miss him.
- Have Munroe do SOMETHING besides hurt people for 3 books. you could probably actually just delete her if you really wanted.
- Replace Munroe's role with Garvey and/or Balfruss but keep them as counter-points to each other: one is thoughtful and tries to help people, and the other is all bitter and rage-filled.
This book has all the right parts, they're assembled in a bloated, boring and endless manner. There was a real story here, but it didn't take 1300 pages to tell.
That's why you lost me in this book and trilogy.
To Publishers:
I have a hunch - to the author's credit - that the editor and publisher are largely to blame for this endless, bloated and boring trilogy.
People see through this "trilogy" chase/trend you're into now. Not every has to be a series or a trilogy. Not everything needs multiple entries, especially when one good entry would have beat two bad ones and a mediocre one.
My favorite analogy is to film - the first Matrix and the the first Pirates of the Caribbean were masterpieces, and the remainder of those series were just bloat or a cash-grab by the studios.
I see the same thing with the Age of Dread. I feel like the only reason this is a series and not one decent book, is because of the publisher's desire for more money, at the cost of an actual good story that required too much fluff to make this trilogy happen.
I would have loved to see what this author could do in a 500-600 page rewrite of this series.