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Totally Screwed: An Alpha Bad Boy Romance Collection
I never thought that it would come to this. I've watched my best friend's brother fight for years without letting myself go there. And now that tragedy has struck I can't help but be drawn towards him as we cling to each other like never before. I know he'll hate me once he realizes that his world fell apart because of me.
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Published September 7, 2016
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December 5, 2020
DNFed @ 11% due to a mixture of terrible grammar and the articulacy of a teenager.
- "Machine's don't quit!"
- "sharp curves"*
- "holding the back on my neck with a warm glasp"
- "And it no doubt looked like it had been painful"**
- "I can't get that close"***
- "I just need to stay away"***
- "I floor it"***
- "He scares the shit out of me"***
- "I hated my life since Bree’s been gone."
- "I gulped. Oh God."****
-"..." I couldn't be bothered to count the amount of times ellipses were used in the section I read, but according to my e-reader, in the book as a whole, it was 856 times. That's not an error, as per se, but it's certainly excessive and therefore irritating and ineffective.
* Admittedly, this is not a grammatical issue, but, rather, a contradiction.
** No doubt or looked like, not both.
*** Why are we suddenly in the present tense? Pick a tense and stick to it, ffs.
**** This is a reaction to a text chain. Said text chain is italicised to denote the conversation, which is perfectly effective . . . when the bits that aren't conversation aren't italicised too.
- "Machine's don't quit!"
- "sharp curves"*
- "holding the back on my neck with a warm glasp"
- "And it no doubt looked like it had been painful"**
- "I can't get that close"***
- "I just need to stay away"***
- "I floor it"***
- "He scares the shit out of me"***
- "I hated my life since Bree’s been gone."
- "I gulped. Oh God."****
-"..." I couldn't be bothered to count the amount of times ellipses were used in the section I read, but according to my e-reader, in the book as a whole, it was 856 times. That's not an error, as per se, but it's certainly excessive and therefore irritating and ineffective.
* Admittedly, this is not a grammatical issue, but, rather, a contradiction.
** No doubt or looked like, not both.
*** Why are we suddenly in the present tense? Pick a tense and stick to it, ffs.
**** This is a reaction to a text chain. Said text chain is italicised to denote the conversation, which is perfectly effective . . . when the bits that aren't conversation aren't italicised too.
January 9, 2024
2 1/2 stars really liked it just felt misleading
Love the collection of stories for MMA and the marine stories were good too. My hang up is the book says bwwm but that’s just the first half. I wasn’t expecting the jump away from bwwm and so my interest dropped. I would still recommend the book to others. Definitely sweet and spicy.
Love the collection of stories for MMA and the marine stories were good too. My hang up is the book says bwwm but that’s just the first half. I wasn’t expecting the jump away from bwwm and so my interest dropped. I would still recommend the book to others. Definitely sweet and spicy.
January 13, 2020
Six Great Short Stories...
All six of these stories I very much enjoyed reading. The first three was very bad ass. I love bad boys that fight for what’s was their in the past. Of course the last three had me suckered at men in uniforms.
All six of these stories I very much enjoyed reading. The first three was very bad ass. I love bad boys that fight for what’s was their in the past. Of course the last three had me suckered at men in uniforms.
January 20, 2024
Liked the stories
Six different stories - three featuring so called "alpha" males and three featuring returned Marines
Some were second chance romances the rest were love at first or second sight
A few grammatical and typos but all in all good quick reads
Six different stories - three featuring so called "alpha" males and three featuring returned Marines
Some were second chance romances the rest were love at first or second sight
A few grammatical and typos but all in all good quick reads
May 2, 2024
Sexy, quick and exciting!!
This book of four books was a very quick read for me but it had some really good spice! The love may have been fast in each book but it was very hot and steamy!! Definitely a good read!
This book of four books was a very quick read for me but it had some really good spice! The love may have been fast in each book but it was very hot and steamy!! Definitely a good read!
January 31, 2019
It was not what the blurb promised.
He was not an Alpha male!
He was not an Alpha male!
January 17, 2020
Not Okay
Since it started out using the "f" bomb which was overkill, I just didn't finish. The stories sounded good but the "f" was way too much. I wouldn't recommend.
Since it started out using the "f" bomb which was overkill, I just didn't finish. The stories sounded good but the "f" was way too much. I wouldn't recommend.
July 21, 2021
Buff Men and Their Women
MMA fighters and military men who have fallen for beautiful black women who make their lives whole, happy and complete.
MMA fighters and military men who have fallen for beautiful black women who make their lives whole, happy and complete.
December 22, 2021
Brief
The stories didn’t have much to entice reading for the length given.
It was good but lacked some details, not through.
The stories didn’t have much to entice reading for the length given.
It was good but lacked some details, not through.
March 18, 2022
Awesomeness
I liked everything about it. There was a ton of different stories wrapped into one. It’s amazing what can happen in a person’s life.
I liked everything about it. There was a ton of different stories wrapped into one. It’s amazing what can happen in a person’s life.
April 8, 2023
These were all cute short stories. There were a lot of typos though.
November 14, 2024
Romance
I loved all the stories, the women were strong, not easily pushed, the men were alpha's with a soft side.
I loved all the stories, the women were strong, not easily pushed, the men were alpha's with a soft side.
March 19, 2025
Very short, quick reads.
Sexy, fun and hot! Beautiful women and real , strong men. Not really "bad guys" but definitely Alphas and protective.
Sexy, fun and hot! Beautiful women and real , strong men. Not really "bad guys" but definitely Alphas and protective.
April 18, 2025
so i enjoyed the mini stories, but the Grammer and spelling was terrible. I wish these mini stories weren't so quick.
October 3, 2021
A struggle to get through this book. The first story was OK. The rest were a slog.
May 29, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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