If no one fears the world beyond the wall, everyone will leave. And then what will the angels do for sustenance and care?
eden is the second novel Jim Crace has published since Harvest, which he said at the time was to be his last.
He wrote The Melody is part due to the success of Harvest, winning the prestigious and well-remunerated Dublin Literary Award: "I was surprised by its success. It was shortlisted for the Man Booker Prize and won two international awards. Prize money is not for spending on a cruise or golf club membership. It’s supposed to pay for more books, so the puritan in me said I owed the prizes a novel."
I will be interested to see nearer publication his comments on eden, although it feels it may be attempting to close out the "religious" (although Crace is an confirmed atheist) strand to his literature (most notably Quarantine). And this may explain, as a confirmed believer, my lack of apprecation of the novel.
eden opens with a Crace signature, the invented epigraph:
Regard the Angels and their glisten’d Wings; Behold their flightless underlings At labour in the fields.
VISITATIONS 7: 12.
The novel imagines a Garden of Eden post Adam and Eve's departure, but still populated with people ('habitants', numbering around 50), supervised by angels (here a species of bird), and with The Lord as an exalted, but largely rumoured, presence, the world outside, so the angels tell the habitants, untamed, dangerous and rife with something unknown in eden: death.
It would perhaps be too incongruous for Crace to incorporate many of his signature references - the angels don't swig Boulevard Liqueur while driving their Panache saloon cars and quoting Mondazy's Truisms or the philosopher Pycletius. Pleasingly however, the trees in the garden include tarbonies.
As the novel opens, one of those working in the garden, Tabi has disappeared and is presumed to have done the unthinkable, and followed Adam and Eve out of the closely guarded gate or over the wall.
She does her duty and totals the five blessings. Her thumb is witness to the love the lord bestows on her. Her pointing finger is the safety and the care provided by the angels. The middle finger stands for plenty, the riches of the table and the garden. The fourth is warmth and shelter. And the last, the little sapling of the five, is to know the joys of life eternal. What more can a person want than love and care, and those abundances of living which will never end with dying?
They might want to know what other loves there are, besides the lord’s, Tabi cannot help but think. And they might care to wonder what the perils are of stepping out from underneath the angels’ wings. And they might choose to experience, for a day or two at least, a life without abundance, for scarcity gives value. As for everlasting life? Such a blessing – if it means anything at all – is beyond reach and meaning, always distant, always immaterial.
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We’re pinned down in our orchards and our fields, she says, for fear of someone who’s not real.
The angels rush to warn the others of the dangers outside, and the priviliges of those within eden:
They understand their workers, now fewer than fifty, are bereaved and must be reassured at once, before the imp of disobedience takes hold like some fastgrowing tare; and first one, then another, then a crowd grow bold enough to think that, possibly, the world is more enticing than eternity. Then what of eden? Those tares will multiply. Those fields and gardens will grow wild. The masters cannot tend them on their own. Those walls and barns and sacred roosts will age and crack like trees, weighed down by ivy, moss and vines, brought down by wind and time. And what of angels? Where will they take wing?
But Tabi's closest companion, Ebon, is unsettled himself by her departure and questions whether eternity is a prize worth staying for: Perhaps those few who’ve broken out into the world – from Eve to Tabi, if that indeed is where she is – are happier than he is now, despite their awful transience and ageing.. As is the angel closest to the habitants, Jamin, who has a broken wing from when he flew to close to the ground on a foray out of the garden. Meanwhile another habitant Alum acts as the angels’ nose, their eyes, their ears, snitching on all three of them to the senior angels. And all three have their own reasons for considering going out of eden into the world in search of Tabi, with the attendent risks of their own mortality, and bringing the world back into Eden.
If Crace has a point it seems to be that eternal life (either in Eden pre the Fall, or presumably by inference Heaven) is rather dull. Indeed eden here resembles in one sense the pre-1989 Soviet Union, or even more so North Korea now, a place where those inside are trapped not just by a wall, but as much by rumours of the more hazardous, chaotic world outside.
But I found the result a rather simple, and disappointing story. 2.5 stars.
Thanks to the publisher via Netgalley for the ARC.