One of the things that I particularly enjoyed about this romance was this: Even though both the hero and heroine had issues to resolve, their issues were NOT WITH EACH OTHER. Too often, it seems authors throw up artificial barriers to keep the H/h apart. I like: man and woman meet, they get to know and appreciate each other, they overcome obstacles TOGETHER (with prayer and God's help), they get married and live happily ever after.
I found some areas in the Kindle text of At Bluebonnet Lake which could use improvement:
Page 10, Ah yes / Ah, yes ; 15, bring in your bags too / bring in your bags, too ; 21, no more than a couple weeks / no more than a couple OF weeks ; 26, looking for a couple things / looking for a couple OF things ; 27, you were looking for a couple things / you were looking for a couple OF things ; 35, handsome too / handsome, too ;38, overlooking the oh so romantic / overlooking the oh, so romantic ; 45, A couple inches below / A couple OF inches below ; 51, Oh no! / Oh, no! ; 52, Me too / Me, too ;
Page 55, to laugh more too / to laugh more, too ; 66, Me either / Me, either ; 67, They were indeed / They were, indeed ; 67, Single too / Single, too ; 69, Oh no, Kate / Oh, no, Kate ; 83, You too / You, too ; 85, Me neither / Me, neither ; 95, The Sip 'n' Sip appeared / The SIT 'n' Sip appeared ; 103, Good morning to you too / Good morning to you, too ; 103, My boys were like that too / My boys were like that, too ; 112, I did too / I did, too ; 114, That must be hard now / That must be hard, now ; 118, Me too / Me, too ; 119, Me too / Me, too ;
Page 120, you're wrong about that too / you're wrong about that, too ; 131, Mine either / Mine, either ; 134, I had a couple scholarships / I had a couple OF scholarships ; 135, We do too / We do, too ; 136, looking for money too / looking for money, too ; 144, Your mom does too / Your mom does, too ; 152, Me too / Me, too ; 152, won't go hungry either / won't go hungry, either ; 152, only a couple hours' drive / only a couple OF hours' drive ; 153, that Roy might too / that Roy might, too ;
Page 157, They'd eaten certifiable junk food and drank enough sweet tea / They'd eaten certifiable junk food and DRUNK enough sweet tea (They'd ... drunk enough sweet tea) ; 160, Kate knew that too / Kate knew that, too ; 160, Let's have caramel corn instead / Let's have caramel corn, instead ; 169, It sounds good at my age too / It sounds good at my age, too ; 177, I enjoyed my job too, until one day / I enjoyed my job, too, until one day ; 187, That's what Greg said too / That's what Greg said, too ; 195, Not just the ads but the labels too / Not just the ads but the labels, too ;
Page 200, his death sentence and hers too / his death sentence and hers, too ; 204, the possibility her grandmother could / the possibility THAT her grandmother could ; 205, It's what I want too / It's what I want, too ; 217, Roy's welcome to come too / Roy's welcome to come, too ; 219, Ah yes, your job / Ah, yes, your job ; 222, giving the boot maker a couple ideas / giving the boot maker a couple OF ideas ; 226, there are a couple critical differences / there are a couple OF critical differences ; 252, I'd stay too / I'd stay, too ; 261, that was all right too / that was all right, too ;
Page 262, That's what I was thinking too / That's what I was thinking, too ; 276, only a couple weeks / only a couple OF weeks ; 277, the weather's a factor too / the weather's a factor, too ; 280, Like Superman and Spiderman / Like Superman and SPIDER-MAN (Stan Lee added the hyphen to avoid confusion between Spider-Man and Superman) ; 283, and the clients like it too / and the clients like it, too ; 283, No thanks / No, thanks ; 285, make a couple phone calls / make a couple OF phone calls ; 316, weak and oh so defenseless / weak and oh, so defenseless ;
Page 317, your grandmother is too / your grandmother is, too ; 327, disappointed to discover the Sinclairs had / disappointed to discover THAT the Sinclairs had ; 327, Drew may have told Greg he lacked / Drew MIGHT have told Greg THAT he lacked ; 327, Not just a logo but a slogan too / Not just a logo, but a slogan, too ; 332, given her a couple Mother's Days ago / given her a couple OF Mother's Days ago ; 336, We love you too / We love you, too ; 337, I need to make a couple calls / I need to make a couple OF calls ;
Page 338, spoke for a couple minutes more / spoke for a couple OF minutes more ; 340, Good morning to you too, Roy / Good morning to you, too, Roy ; 343, a couple small bottles / a couple OF small bottles ; 344, that was okay too / that was okay, too ; 357, that's okay too / that's okay, too ; 371, she pulled a couple books from the next / she pulled a couple OF books from the next ; 374, only a couple times a year / only a couple OF times a year ; 377, Me too / Me, too .