Part two of a three-part serialized novel
This part of the story deserves a trigger warning because of all of the abusive male characters.
A main feature of Mai's magic, that if she owes any money at all, even a couple of dollars, to anyone, no matter how dangerous they might be, she cannot escape their radius. She is literally nailed in place, and she has to obey their orders. You'd think that this would cause Mai to never, under any circumstances, allow herself to owe anybody any money. But no. She's not that smart. The fact that the person she owes money to is her romantic interest, Gunner, presumably is supposed to add a sexy, S&M aspect to their relationship, but I just found it creepy. Being forced to obey another person is a scary form of loss of autonomy that amounts to downright slavery as the story progresses.
In addition, Gunner himself has an enslaved relationship with his older brother (a sick theme this author is obsessed with in this story), which is really awful to witness. The brother seems to be an hereditary alpha of their werewolf pack, which is quite out of keeping with how werewolves are typically presented in urban fantasy. The brother also runs his pack like some kind of Caligula. He demands that the wolves he rules over, including Gunner, engage in gladiator type brawls in a smaller version of the Roman Colosseum, with female werewolves as the prize for victory. He also claims the right to have sex with all of the female werewolves in his pack, which is sexually abusive. But what makes it even worse is that the author portrays a female werewolf, who is described as a "pack princess," as perfectly fine with the fact that Gunner wins her as a prize after a gladiator battle.
In neither of the first two books of this trilogy are we ever informed as to how someone becomes a werewolf. And the reason why werewolves want to slaughter every fox shifter like Mai and her sister is never explained in a way that makes sense.
Finally, Mai's sister is the entire source of every bit of trouble that Mai gets into. The sister is 13 and has been old enough for years for Mai to sit her down and explain the realities of their magic and the risks they face from werewolves. If Mai had done this years ago, her sister would never have sold on eBay the magical artifacts inherited from their dead mother, allowing them to end up in the hands of a mortal enemy. Every time the younger sister does something incredibly stupid and dangerous, Mai just smiles wryly and writes it off as inevitable and unfixable due to her sister' fox nature and being a teenager. Which is one more way for the author to make Mai perpetually a helpless victim of circumstance. Trying to keep her sister from being killed, due to impulsively walking into danger and getting kidnapped, continually forces Mai to alternate between being helplessly trapped in the power of Gunner, his evil brother, and/or multiple horrible villains.