(3.5 stars) - Good story in the main, though a little sparse for cheer
This is a sweet story, but like all separation/divorce stories, it's starting from a tough place. It's well written & the characters are decently fleshed out, but ironically, Derick is more sympathetic than Ivy.
We meet Ivy at a point when she is wrapped up in herself. Even with her kids, it's largely about how things reflect on her as a mom. We're told that her lousy marriage affected her, but since that's vague allusions to things in the past, & all we see is how she is now, she's not especially likeable.
Derick, on the other hand, sounds like he was a real self-absorbed man-child, but when we see him now, he's not & is trying so hard to make up for his past. So even though, on paper, things tally up quickly in Ivy's favor over Derick's, as characters, he easily garners more general reader sympathy than she does.
Much as I wanted them to reconcile, and even though it may have been deserved, it frustrated me to see Derick have to repeatedly suck things up, swallow his pride, and often not even be able to explain or defend himself.
Again, Ivy may have been completely justified, but we haven't seen enough to support that so we're supposed to just assume her perspective is reasonable - even while several times she notes her own similar mistakes.
I was glad to see her recognize that, and between that & her development as a person, it allowed me to feel more positively toward her by the end, but it would have been better if I didn't have to work to like her.
So, 4 stars for the writing, but 3 stars for the story - 3.5 stars - it has a well done happy ending, but I wish it had been a little lighter and that Ivy was a nicer person.
*Clean romance level: sweet kisses