When you are halfway through a book and really do not want to pick it up again, it's time to say good-bye or start some rapid skimming. As I wanted to know how the story plays out, I skimmed a lot from about 57% into the book.
I really wanted to like this. I expected a mix of The Abyss, which I love to pieces, and The Last Days on Mars (Liev Schreiber, zombies on Mars, very creepy) and I wasn't that far off. The first 40% or so of the story were interesting enough, with some nice, initial story set-up. I liked the two main characters. But I also had misgivings, a lot of them.
World building: The story is set in the not so distant future and we get some backstory about a black-out scenario in Dubai. Why is the story set in the future? Why did the blackout happen? What is the state of society? The setting in the future has no relevance to the story at all and is just an unnecessary distraction.
The relationship between the two main characters is interesting enough, although the romance is pretty much non-existent. If it was supposed to be an important part of the story, it could have done with some more fleshing out.
Sex scenes are not shown in the beginning, you get the usual fade-out of books with a low PG rating. Until about 40% into the book, when out of the blue there is a pretty detailed and explicit scene. I like explicit sex, but either you write descriptive sex scenes or you don't. Both in the same book does not work.
At that point in the book the writing suddenly started to get pretty uneven and scattered and I almost stopped reading. There was no real tension to the story, and unexplained leaps and holes in the plot, that had me going back whole chapters to re-read and figure out what I had missed. Action scenes were only talked about, but not shown.
You never get a feel for how many people are on board of the pod. You are told, but not really shown. During the course of the book people change and die and I had no grip at all, how many were left. New people kept popping up to do things, when needed and it threw me to read sentences like "Most of the pod is still confined to quarters." At that point I was surprised that anybody was left to be confined. They all felt interchangeable and did not get any backgrounds with the exception of Mo and his unexplained past in Dubai.
The scientific setting could have added interest, but also did not happen. They bring the mysterious rock on board and I would have thought you get some insight in what they do with it and maybe some technobabble, but nothing.
So, the beginning is interesting, but lacks character and world building. The romance is lacklustre. The sex happens out of sight with the exception of one scene, followed by nothing. Instalove with some sort of happily ever after. Some action, a little creepiness early on, but it didn't hold my attention through the story. Plot holes, leaps in logic, very meh experience for me. I am glad I made it through the book and read the ending, but if I had dumped it halfway through, I would have been ok with that, too.
I was debating between giving this one or two stars and finally chose two -- it is a good plot idea and there were parts that I enjoyed, even if the book as a whole left me diasappointed.
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