Tropes: fish out of water, MC blackmailed, marriage of convenience, friends to lovers, interfering in-law, Big Secret
3.25 stars. I loved the cover for this book and was interested in reading a HR with a multicultural angle. The writing style is strong. Unfortunately, other than the MFC mentioning how she never quite fit with the Ton and felt like an outsider due to the color of her skin, there is no exploration of her roots or of prejudice during the Regency period. There is an underlying connection the MFC, Hettie, feels with her manipulative cousin Phillip due to race (she’s surprisingly easy on his behavior for the most part even so), but their childhoods aren’t well fleshed out. Phillip is just a two-dimensional sneering baddie. He runs hot-cold at times but has no compelling or redeeming qualities.
This is my biggest gripe with this book: thin characterizations and a storyline that gives into conventions. It isn’t a bad book, but based on the author’s smooth style it should have easily been a 4 star read. If only it didn’t bind itself up in trope constraints.
*Warning.................there are some possible spoilers ahead*
Finn, the MMC, becomes unrecognizable in the second half due to these constraints. Hettie's mother-in-law is another example. Before Hettie and Finn marry, she thinks of Hettie as a “nobody” and unworthy of Finn, then once they’re married she’s childish and self-centered. She claims she doesn’t like Hettie because Hettie doesn’t love Finn (ridiculous considering how affectionate Hettie is toward Finn; besides, love didn’t seem to be a requirement when mom was pressuring Finn to marry other women). The concept of racism lurks here, but is never addressed. Later in the book the mom-in-law has an abrupt character arc, because it’s convenient for the plot.
I was honestly disappointed by Finn. He starts off as a true cinnamon roll hero, then when the nitty-gritty of why Hettie is being blackmailed comes out, he throws a huge temper tantrum. It would have been more realistic if he and Hettie hadn’t started out as friends, but strangers, because it’s really hard to reconcile the Finn of the first 65% with the Finn of the rest of the book. He never asked Hettie at the beginning for details surrounding her blackmailing and pursued her quite adamantly. He also stood up for her when his mom was being a bully. But he didn’t help Hettie with the blackmail plot until the very end, as he was too busy scorning her and languishing in his angst.
As far as Hettie goes, she is a bit of a “Mary Sue” and on the gullible side. She is likable for the most part and does have scenes where she stands up for herself, but she is is very much controlled by plot mechanisms. I would have loved for her not to have settled for the HEA given her at the end.
The early banter between Finn and Hettie is fun and sweet, and their chemistry is good (although the language and behavior are pretty modern). The pacing is rather slack in the first half, with the major conflict first being between Hettie and Phillip and then between Hettie and her mother-in-law, but I enjoyed the details about Finn’s clan and the insights into life in Scotland. There are a few stand-out steamy scenes, such as when they're swimming in the cave together and he calls her a "selkie". I was hoping for some more interactions between Hettie and the people of the clan.
It’s just too bad the author followed the HR script so closely and chose angst over character development and a meaty storyline.
I read an advanced reader copy of this book and this is my voluntary review. Opinions are my own.