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Condition Evolution #2
Condition Evolution 2: A LitRPG/Game-lit Adventure
Out of Anatoli and life is nothing like Shaun and Ember could have ever dreamed of.
Hunted by the ancestors of humanity across the darkness of space, they can only hope the changes they have undergone and powers they have gained will be enough to keep them alive.
Life will never be the same again. Somehow, they need to find a way back to earth....
Hunted by the ancestors of humanity across the darkness of space, they can only hope the changes they have undergone and powers they have gained will be enough to keep them alive.
Life will never be the same again. Somehow, they need to find a way back to earth....
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First published October 16, 2020
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December 1, 2020
Pales in comparisons to the first book.
First thing, the book is no longer LitRPG, it’s cultivation based now. I love cultivation but without the system they had in the first book things are less fun and jumping from one system to the other took out a lot of what I loved with the first book.
What dragged down this book for me is that everything goes incredibly right for them all the time. There are some bad situations but all of a sudden they are getting the greatest things in probably the galaxy, from weapons to crew mates to technology. It just sit right as a reader how “lucky” things go for Shaun and I hate the style of writing.
Also, the dialogue between everyone just doesn’t really work either. I thought I came to terms with how Ember and Shaun worked together but it just doesn’t fit in this book. Ember is a complete and utter asshole to Shaun all the time and it’s supposed to be “teasing” but it’s just straight up mean.
Still a OK book and will most likely pick up the the third when it’s released but I don’t see this being a favorite of mine.
First thing, the book is no longer LitRPG, it’s cultivation based now. I love cultivation but without the system they had in the first book things are less fun and jumping from one system to the other took out a lot of what I loved with the first book.
What dragged down this book for me is that everything goes incredibly right for them all the time. There are some bad situations but all of a sudden they are getting the greatest things in probably the galaxy, from weapons to crew mates to technology. It just sit right as a reader how “lucky” things go for Shaun and I hate the style of writing.
Also, the dialogue between everyone just doesn’t really work either. I thought I came to terms with how Ember and Shaun worked together but it just doesn’t fit in this book. Ember is a complete and utter asshole to Shaun all the time and it’s supposed to be “teasing” but it’s just straight up mean.
Still a OK book and will most likely pick up the the third when it’s released but I don’t see this being a favorite of mine.
November 2, 2020
Awesome book! Well plotted, great characters and good fun!
I like the character development. All of the characters chip in on decisions, so no alpha male and damsel in distress. Fun fight scenes, the humor is great. The oppression of the little guy and the fight for the marginalized to get their own back is uplifting in these times. Good light read despite the politics. Best book I’ve read in ages. His first book is great too!
I like the character development. All of the characters chip in on decisions, so no alpha male and damsel in distress. Fun fight scenes, the humor is great. The oppression of the little guy and the fight for the marginalized to get their own back is uplifting in these times. Good light read despite the politics. Best book I’ve read in ages. His first book is great too!
October 22, 2020
Fast paced fun and hilarious. A good choice for David Weber ,John Ringo and Allan Cole Chris Bunch fans.
A fast paced fun mix of litrpg and space based that will keep you guessing about
where you are going next.
A good choice for David Weber,John Ringo ,Allan Cole and Chris Bunch fans.
A fast paced fun mix of litrpg and space based that will keep you guessing about
where you are going next.
A good choice for David Weber,John Ringo ,Allan Cole and Chris Bunch fans.
October 21, 2020
And its called an axe,,,an AXE.
What a great 2nd book Kevin manages to turn the trope and go from Swords and sorceries to swords science fiction
What a great 2nd book Kevin manages to turn the trope and go from Swords and sorceries to swords science fiction
October 20, 2020
Great Fun
Lots of snark, action and humor. Oh, and some British slang and/or spelling too.
Much less LitRPG in this the second book.
Hurry with the next episode (or two)!
Plenty of unnecessary profanity, but no sex - yet.
Lots of snark, action and humor. Oh, and some British slang and/or spelling too.
Much less LitRPG in this the second book.
Hurry with the next episode (or two)!
Plenty of unnecessary profanity, but no sex - yet.
October 16, 2020
The first book hit like that one night you never forget only you wake up and realize that it’s not over and you can live this way forever. Until suddenly you are running for your life from ancient humans across space and such. A fast paced, violent, race back to Earth with great world building, great characters and powers, and epic sci-fi moments.
Love the direction this series is going.
Love the direction this series is going.
January 3, 2021
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First, my review: “This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.”
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I enjoyed this book, so my goal is to promote it and help the author. If you are a potential reader, just stop reading now and take the above as all you need to know. I am not going to share my reasoning, thoughts on the book, or any opinions that would influence your decision to read it. It is my opinion that Art needs to be experienced at an individual level. You are the only one that can determine what you like and don’t like. Don’t let others make that decision for you. You should definitely read the book and completely ignore all of the reviews. Or not if you don’t think this book is for you. That choice is all yours and the beauty of art appreciation. You are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.
If you are a member of the IAK Guild (thanks, Jason) or part of the review police, feel free to criticize me and challenge my philosophy on reviewing art. I think we all love a good debate. The forums are open and I welcome your comments. I was wrong in my previous request to get you to stop. Your blatant disregard for that request has led to some fun discussions. Growth is important for us all.
Cheers
First, my review: “This was a fun book. I am glad that I read it. You should try it too.”
Second, I am not a bot...at least I don’t think I am. Yes this is copy pasta (just learned that term, so fun!) simply because I feel like any book I read deserves acknowledgement but at the same time my feelings on reviews conflict with the normal review process.
I enjoyed this book, so my goal is to promote it and help the author. If you are a potential reader, just stop reading now and take the above as all you need to know. I am not going to share my reasoning, thoughts on the book, or any opinions that would influence your decision to read it. It is my opinion that Art needs to be experienced at an individual level. You are the only one that can determine what you like and don’t like. Don’t let others make that decision for you. You should definitely read the book and completely ignore all of the reviews. Or not if you don’t think this book is for you. That choice is all yours and the beauty of art appreciation. You are a much better judge of what you will like than anyone here.
If you are a member of the IAK Guild (thanks, Jason) or part of the review police, feel free to criticize me and challenge my philosophy on reviewing art. I think we all love a good debate. The forums are open and I welcome your comments. I was wrong in my previous request to get you to stop. Your blatant disregard for that request has led to some fun discussions. Growth is important for us all.
Cheers
October 21, 2020
Book two
Mistakes: I found two before the 18% Mark but nothing else. This was a short fast read that I enjoyed more than book one.
Plot: Aliens, space, battles, ships, and more!
Characters: I don't mind big and dumb, but I don't like the way the female lead sometimes talks to or about the male lead. She is better in this book but needs to keep improving.
7/10
Mistakes: I found two before the 18% Mark but nothing else. This was a short fast read that I enjoyed more than book one.
Plot: Aliens, space, battles, ships, and more!
Characters: I don't mind big and dumb, but I don't like the way the female lead sometimes talks to or about the male lead. She is better in this book but needs to keep improving.
7/10
July 3, 2021
Good read
The story has interesting developments for characters where there very powerful and lucky to get through some of the challenges they face.
The story has interesting developments for characters where there very powerful and lucky to get through some of the challenges they face.
November 23, 2021
Good continuation, but Ember still an a** of a character. Sincerely I have no idea what's Shaun infutation with her. The world gets a drastic expansion, not to mention the weirdness of the ending.
October 24, 2020
Solid follow up
I wasn't too sure going into this, seemed like a wild twist from the first book. Gotta tell you, it works. If you enjoyed the first then you'll enjoy this one.
I wasn't too sure going into this, seemed like a wild twist from the first book. Gotta tell you, it works. If you enjoyed the first then you'll enjoy this one.
September 10, 2023
I liked the 1st one, but not the 2nd one.
I am sure this didn't happen, but it is almost like 1st book was written on spec, it got bought, and they want 2 more, "What am I going to do now?"
Don't get me wrong, I couldn't do this good. The problem is that you are sure that no one is going to die. He does have good instincts. For example, he learns to become a lie detector because of an incident earlier in book. I have read books where I know the characters aren't going to die, but I am wondering how are they going to get out of this? That just isn't here.
I gave up on page 174
I am sure this didn't happen, but it is almost like 1st book was written on spec, it got bought, and they want 2 more, "What am I going to do now?"
Don't get me wrong, I couldn't do this good. The problem is that you are sure that no one is going to die. He does have good instincts. For example, he learns to become a lie detector because of an incident earlier in book. I have read books where I know the characters aren't going to die, but I am wondering how are they going to get out of this? That just isn't here.
I gave up on page 174
November 23, 2020
Fun
Fairly standard fare for a space opera, but decently written and I can see several more books gathering strength before it is "save the earth" time. Only knock against it is how ,with fixable mental stats, both MCs keep wasting time, especially when it is out of character for one of them. It is somewhat understandable for the other MC, since a lot of the charm is his cluelessness.
Fairly standard fare for a space opera, but decently written and I can see several more books gathering strength before it is "save the earth" time. Only knock against it is how ,with fixable mental stats, both MCs keep wasting time, especially when it is out of character for one of them. It is somewhat understandable for the other MC, since a lot of the charm is his cluelessness.
May 17, 2021
I liked it
I would like it more if Ember wasn’t such a horrible and negative person. Shaun is constantly having his intelligence questioned but he seems like a likable person. It escapes me why he loves such a toxic woman. I’m not sure I’ll keep reading because of her constant negativity.
I would like it more if Ember wasn’t such a horrible and negative person. Shaun is constantly having his intelligence questioned but he seems like a likable person. It escapes me why he loves such a toxic woman. I’m not sure I’ll keep reading because of her constant negativity.
June 23, 2023
A new universe. It's ti,e for an Uprising
Always excited to find a new author of well written Litrpg. Funny, thoughtful, a growing storyline that is leading to more excitement. Challenging situations where dedication made by our bumbling hero somehow are the opposite of what most would do, but turn out to be the right choice both morally and to save their behinds
Always excited to find a new author of well written Litrpg. Funny, thoughtful, a growing storyline that is leading to more excitement. Challenging situations where dedication made by our bumbling hero somehow are the opposite of what most would do, but turn out to be the right choice both morally and to save their behinds
December 12, 2020
From fantasy to sci-fi
Good transition. Book 2 was better than book 1 and rather enjoyable. Entertaining and exciting new journey for our main characters with new friends along the way.
Good transition. Book 2 was better than book 1 and rather enjoyable. Entertaining and exciting new journey for our main characters with new friends along the way.
January 29, 2021
Great Continuation!
Sooo... I'm not gonna lie, I'm not a huge space fan, so I almost didn't read book two , but I'm so glad I did! The segway into the rest of story was great, and the non-stop action kept it very exciting! Looking forward to book 3!
Sooo... I'm not gonna lie, I'm not a huge space fan, so I almost didn't read book two , but I'm so glad I did! The segway into the rest of story was great, and the non-stop action kept it very exciting! Looking forward to book 3!
March 20, 2022
Well we'll well
Another cliffhanger you genius, son of an author. I said I was going to binge the series till the end of the month but I doubt it'll last the next week. Well done and keep up the good work.
Another cliffhanger you genius, son of an author. I said I was going to binge the series till the end of the month but I doubt it'll last the next week. Well done and keep up the good work.
September 25, 2022
Simple but fun
Sinclair takes a pretty straightforward approach to his writing, but it works. Really fascinating worldbuilding. The plot definitely took some turns I wasn't expecting, but that just made it more interesting in my mind. In to the next book!
Sinclair takes a pretty straightforward approach to his writing, but it works. Really fascinating worldbuilding. The plot definitely took some turns I wasn't expecting, but that just made it more interesting in my mind. In to the next book!
December 27, 2022
Cracking Drama
The story has now taken us into space and into a burgeoning rebellion in the making. With so much happening Sinclair has made this super easy to turn each page with likeable characters, fortuitous events, and cool action scenes.
The story has now taken us into space and into a burgeoning rebellion in the making. With so much happening Sinclair has made this super easy to turn each page with likeable characters, fortuitous events, and cool action scenes.
July 14, 2023
Condition Evolution 2 is a wild and uproarious journey that catapults Shaun and Ember into an exhilarating adventure beyond Anatoli. Packed with a perfect mix of humour and excitement, this book guarantees an enjoyable and thrilling ride from start to finish.
February 2, 2024
Don't bother doesn't get ant better
This series is an absolute waste of time. Do yourself a favor and find something else to read. This was utterly disappointing because the concept has great potential but just fails miserably.
This series is an absolute waste of time. Do yourself a favor and find something else to read. This was utterly disappointing because the concept has great potential but just fails miserably.
November 10, 2020
with matured characters facing fresh challenges the condition evolution train continues to gather pace with the second instalment and it doesn't disappoint, great work Kevin Sinclair.
November 21, 2020
Good second step if a little jarring
Going from litrpg to space opera is not what I expected but was an awesome plot twist. Can’t wait to see where this ends up
Going from litrpg to space opera is not what I expected but was an awesome plot twist. Can’t wait to see where this ends up
December 1, 2020
Awesome
What a cast! Really enjoying this can't wait for the next one. New author for me, but I have been caught up in his universe...can't wait for the next one
What a cast! Really enjoying this can't wait for the next one. New author for me, but I have been caught up in his universe...can't wait for the next one
December 3, 2020
Loving this series!
Second book in a series I can't wait to read more of! It's fast, funny, and written to be enjoyed.
Second book in a series I can't wait to read more of! It's fast, funny, and written to be enjoyed.
December 21, 2020
Very entertaining read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and would recommend it highly to anyone that like litRPG type of books.
I enjoyed reading this book very much and would recommend it highly to anyone that like litRPG type of books.
July 15, 2021
A great sequel
The twist at the end of the first book was very jarring, but this book provides a rewarding payoff to jumping down that rabbit hole
The twist at the end of the first book was very jarring, but this book provides a rewarding payoff to jumping down that rabbit hole
July 21, 2021
Good second book
This book is a bit different to the first one but has a good storyline. I am enjoying the world building and character building the author has done.
This book is a bit different to the first one but has a good storyline. I am enjoying the world building and character building the author has done.
August 23, 2021
Getting even better
The first book was good. The story is more developed in this book. The new characters help increase the believability.
The first book was good. The story is more developed in this book. The new characters help increase the believability.
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