The science vessel Hermes has been urgently recalled from its mission to survey the moons of Saturn, just as First Officer Miranda Lee receives bad news from home - her mother is dying so she must leave the ship and return to Earth - for good. Commander Scott McNabb is so distraught by her sudden decision to leave that he pays little or no attention to the parameters of the new mission being requested by the Council of Europa. Big mistake.
Powerful forces on Earth are now moving to resume inter-AI communications, risking the development of an all-out war. But other powers within the System are also mobilizing to prevent them from achieving their objective. Scott and the remaining crew of the Hermes are totally unaware that they are now at the very nexus of an inter-planetary battle - and ultimately heading toward disaster.
As the mission starts to fall apart Scott begins to realize the secrets that the ship’s QI, Aria, has been hiding from them all along. Secrets that could tip the balance of power within the System. He must now put aside all thoughts of Miranda and focus on trying to save his crew - including Aria. Failure to do so could ultimately plunge the entire System into total chaos.
No pressure, then.
About Entropy: The story is set a few centuries into the future where humanity has colonized most of the inner solar system. The asteroid belt (The Belt) is now a hive of mining activity and ships ply the trade routes to Earth and Mars. The technology depicted is, for the most part, what I consider to be technically plausible, although I do stretch it a little with quantum entanglement. That said, you won’t need a calculator or a slide-rule to enjoy the story.
The dialogue isn't natural. It's hard to even imagine most of the exchanges. I'm sticking with the series because they're short and my completionist OCD demands it.
Scott McNabb’s ship is out on a scientific mission, but they are asked to return to undergo a special diplomatic mission organized by the Council of Europa. Miranda, who is having a relationship with Scott, is urgently called to Earth because her mother is dying, and her rich family is sending an airship to fetch her. Nothing is going as planned for Scott when he finds out that his ship’s QI, Aria, is hiding some secrets that could make a difference in a war that has been boiling for some time.
I was looking forward to continuing this series, as I had enjoyed the first book. Here some of the main characters are different to the ones in the first book, but the main story arc evolves and we get more information about the risks of a possible war and who can be the players. Like in book one, the QI’s play a crucial role, and their motivations and modus operandi is something above every human weakness.
This is a quite different story than the one in the first book, but there was still plenty of action, emotions, and intrigue. Scott and his friends’ lives were in danger more than once, and we find out about the main bad guys in this story. There is still a lot to be said in this conflict, and I foresee that the QI’s willing play again an important hand to in it.
Steven Jay Cohen’s narration was highly enjoyable. He not only did bring the characters to life but he also transmitted their emotions very powerfully. The characters are well written, but not sure Cohen’s interpretations brought them to the next level, and it was impossible not to care for them.
I am looking forward to listening to the final installment on this series and see where this all goes to. I am truly intrigued! The
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“Entropy - a thermodynamic quantity representing the unavailability of a system’s thermal energy for conversion into mechanical work..” What the heck that has to do with this book, I’m really not sure. It may be that our main character, Commander Scott McNabb has become a love-sick puppy because his Flight Officer, Miranda Lee has left the Hermes, but I don’t know. The title just seems kind of strange.
If you’ve read the first book, “Entanglement”, you know about the wild exploits of the Hermes and her crew. You also know that one, Rick Marantz didn’t survive the all the excitement. That was pretty hard for the crew and Commander Scott McNabb to take, especially since the Commander felt directly responsible for his death. Yet, now Scott is in for an even harder loss. He and Miranda have developed a relationship as everyone aboard the Hermes has known for quite some time. They don’t go out of their way to hide the fact that they are involved and since their current mission now for the Europa Council will last awhile, it really doesn’t matter. Until it does.
The Council of Europa contacts the Hermes mid-mission and directs them to return to Europa! They won’t say why or what for and that annoys Scott to no end. It will take them about three weeks to return and then they will get more information. Why they can’t be told now of the reason is not specified, but it just isn’t.
Meanwhile, Miranda has just received a very private, secure message from Earth and her Father, Fredrick VanHeilding, one of the Seven major corporation owners back on Earth. Miranda hadn’t spoken to him in over nine years. So why was he messaging her now? Well, he stated that her Mother was in ill health and wanted to see her before she died. At first, Miranda didn’t believe him, but then she considered that even he wouldn’t be so cruel to make a lie like that just to get her back home. He also told her that a company ship would be arriving at Europa in three weeks to bring her back to Earth. Was it just a coincidence that three weeks was what it was going to take the Hermes to get back to Europa? She didn’t really think so.
Scott had noticed Miranda being a little more reserved lately and not wanting to get very close to him although they were trying to be somewhat discrete. He decided that something was wrong so he cornered her one day on their way back to Europa. That’s when Miranda told him she was leaving the Hermes! Unfortunately, this devastated Commander Scott McNabb. He withdrew from his responsibilities and turned most of his command responsibilities over to the Hermes QI, Aria.
Things didn’t get any better when they got to Europa. Miranda’s ship was waiting so she went aboard and left, just like that. Scott didn’t know what to do. He was pretty mad when he met with the Europa Council and got even madder when they told him the Hermes was going to escort the Chairperson Regina Goodchild and the Belt representative on Ceres, Chancellor Bezzio, to a special session of the UN System Council. That meeting was to be held in Jezero City, Mars. So, Scott said the Hermes and his crew were dragged off a very important scientific mission to act as bus drivers delivering passengers to Mars! And that was about what it amounted on on the surface.
But, there was more going on than Scott or anyone else knew. Even the great QI, Solomon, of Europa didn’t know what was happening in the background. He did know and was quite aware that the Earth corporations, the Seven, didn’t want the meeting to have a successful outcome. What he didn’t know was to what extent they would drive their desired outcome.
This story is very interesting although I think Scott gets to bent out of shape when Miranda leaves. He really wasn’t acting much like a Commander responsible for the Hermes or any mission they were on. He should have been relieved. Additionally, I felt that Scot and one of his crew make some pretty dumb mistakes that put them in very dangerous situations. They seem to get rescued just in the nick of time and by a surprising rescuer every time. But, that makes the story exciting, I guess.
I’m taking a break from this series and not going directly to book 3, “Evolution”. I just want to read about some other characters and hope they don’t start making the dumb mistakes Scott McNabb seems to be making. I’ll get back to the series for sure, but not right now.
Entropy is the second book in The Belt trilogy, written by Gerald M. Kilby. It is the continuation of the space ship captain Scott McNabbs experiences with quantum intelligence computers and political intrigue, set two years after the first book.
The writing and the narrator were exactly the same as with the previous book, and given that they were published back to back, I assume they were written and recorded in one long go. Thus my general comments and critique is essentially the same as for the first book in the trilogy, and I refer to my review of the first book (https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...) which gives a deeper insight into the shortcomings and positives. The following sections will assume you’ve read/listened to the first book.
The story is a direct continuation, albeit with a minor temporal gap, of the first book and was nicely woven together with the previous story. While the first book can be read as stand alone, this one is a fine sequel as such. I did appreciate that the book took on a comparison between artificial intelligences, and quantum intelligences, as that was interesting and actually portrayed very well. You got a good feeling of how artificial intelligences were vastly inferior to their quantum counterparts. And given the lack of a definable antagonist in the first book, it was nice to have a proper one this time around. The ending was also much more satisfying than the first book.
We again see hints to a political background, but still only graze the surface, which is a real pity. But the ending of this book lays real potential for really opening up the political side of the universe, so that’s at least hope. We see more info dumps, yet now we also have a situation where a character breaks the fourth wall, telling us (The readers) that we are in for a long explanation - That’s just such a big no-no for me!
We also still have problems with writing of the characters. Our protagonist fell deeply and madly in love with crew member Miranda in the previous book, and she in him, despite that we’re told they didn’t like each other previously. And now… Out of nowhere, she’s not in love with him after all, even though they’ve been together for 2 years? I am again really lacking some background here! The story tries to explain a bit of why this is, but it comes of as forced and not believable at all. At least the book tries to finally give Miranda some background, but surprise, surprise, she’s actually not a nobody, but a high class chick! It felt pretty cliché, given that we knew nothing about her before, so it also came of as yet another McGiffun plot device. And then we have another yet unnamed McGuffin with regards to Miranda which I will not mention here.. But I will mention that I yawned out loudly when it was told, because it was so cliched… The medic which was completely absent in book 1, now suddenly has a role in book 2. Yet we know absolutely nothing about her, other than her name and role.
I was wondering why the book was titled Entropy? I have no idea. The titel of the first book fit really well, but this one?
In the end, if you enjoyed the first book, you’ll also enjoy this one for sure. If you disliked the first one, then this will not turn things around.
I received this audiobook for free in return for a review. I have no affiliation with the author, the narrator, the publisher, or their pets (Although I am sure the latter are quite nice!).
I received this audiobook in exchange for an honest review.
Entropy is written by Gerald M. Kilby and narrated by Steven Jay Cohen. It's the second entry in The Belt Series, and it makes for an engaging, exciting adventure through the depths of space. The characters are intriguing and the dialogue is believable, although this work maintains the same simplicity that is found in the first book. Entropy manages to stay engaging throughout, and this is only bolstered by Cohen's excellent narration.
Entropy's lead protagonist is Commander Scott McNabb. He doesn't have much depth, but his motivations and values are clearly felt. Standout characters from the first, including Miranda, Aria and Solomon, make a reappearance here. A few protagonists enter the series as well, and they are well written. The dialogue is natural and witty throughout, and all the characters share likeable qualities. Like the first, there is minimal character backstory throughout Entropy, and it's clear that the listener could grow a deeper attachment to these characters with a richer understanding of their history. Nonetheless, I grew to appreciate each character for the value they add to the adventure.
The story is as fast-paced and captivating as the first. Although the crew begins by traveling across the galaxy on a peaceful research mission, they're quickly swept up in a quest for survival that impacts life in the entire galaxy. The narrative separates between multiple locations, and Kilby does a great job keeping each narrative intertwined. He includes a sufficient number of twists and cliff-hangers to keep the listener guessing, and he builds strong momentum for the final book in the series.
Steven Jay Cohen does another admirable job with his narration. The voices and inflections he uses for each character carry over seamlessly from the first book. He brings a layer of emotion and passion to this project that engages the reader. It's easy to get swept up in the action and truly care for the well-being of each character, and Cohen's narration heavily contributes to that.
Entropy is a great read. Kilby presents a solid sequel with relatable characters, and Cohen does a superb job bringing those characters to life. If you liked the first book or are a fan of science fiction, I highly recommend this adventure.
This is the second book in a continuing series and you need to read the preceding book to understand this one fully. The book ends at a natural break in the narrative but there is a bit of a cliffhanger.
After helping to avert the start of a solar system wide war, Scott and his crew are working on a scientific expedition on the behalf of Europa, the independent academic body that stands neutral from politics and commerce. When their mission is curtailed and they are recalled back to Europa in order to undertake a new mission they reluctantly obey orders. At the same time Miranda is called back to Earth to see her estranged mother before she dies. The timing is suspicious. It looks like the crew of The Hermes are going to be drawn in to more political intrigue, whether they like it or not.
There is a lot more action in this book than the previous one, probably because there is less world-building, so there is room for hand to hand combat in Zero-G in the storyline! Whilst there is room for more action there is no extra space allocated for deeper character development. There is very little said about the main characters, except what is absolutely necessary for the plot to move forward, which reduced my enjoyment of the book. I feel that with interesting characters I have more enjoyment of the plot because I’m more heavily invested in what happens to them and I’m disappointed that this isn’t the case here.
There is still little to no backstory for the characters, which is a shame because I think these characters could be very interesting. I feel, however, that the little insight we are given into Miranda isn’t explored fully enough and because of it, her character is less likeable. I almost wish the author hadn’t bothered with the little peek inside her head they gave to explain her behaviour, because it wasn’t enough to fully explain who she really is. Maybe the author is just playing to his strengths and keeping story tightly focused on plot and action.
Whilst I’m enjoying the storyline of the series a lot, I will probably take a bit of a break before reading the next book. I need to find some characters to connect to!
I am reviewing the three books of The Belt series altogether, as this reads as a seamless story. The first instalment (Entanglement) is a decent read, if not very original at least quite a genuine space opera. It's a solar system story, a sub-genre which I particularly like, it has a competent sci-fi approach overall and, despite character development and dialogues are rather basic, it reads quite nicely. Three stars. The second one (Entropy) is weaker, very thin plot, lots of bang-bang kiss-kiss which, yeah, happens to take place in the space but could really be anywhere. Here I also started growing annoyed with the self-righteous, pompous A.I./Q.I. Two stars. The last piece of the trilogy (Evolution) is a strong deviation from the first two: the space opera angle, already diluted in book 2, here completely evaporates as this is a post apocalyptic story set on earth. Clearly in this last instalment the story is loosing energy and momentum, as I did...DNF before the end. One star. Gerald M. Kilby confirms here the impression I took away from reading some others of his books: the stories are not bad, they are just not great stories and, more importantly, they are not very original stories. Colony Mars reminds a lot Red/Green/Blue Mars by Kim Stanely Robinson. The Belt reminds a lot The Expanse by S.A.Corey. Just they are not better...
I would give this a 4.5 rating. Another strong novel in the Belt series, the second of three. Kilby kept the adventure firing, bringing new challenges and dangers into the story organically so that nothing felt forced or contrived. The characters continue to evolve as do their relationships, and QI Aria herself is taking on more individuality. Scott and his crew finished their first mission, and now have QI Aria installed on their ship with the incredibly important ability to communicate instantaneously with other QI, all of which is unknown to the political and criminal factions. They are given a new assignment which seems totally illogical for the Hermes to undertake, but they do, and are immediately the target of pirate forces working for various of the ruling corporate/political families. QI Aria is kidnapped, and the crew divided with slim to no chance to rectify their situation. A real page turner, with good dialogue, a tightly composed set of plots and sub-plots and the kind of stakes that makes all the danger believable. A really gripping space opera, with hard science, political scheming, and lots of good human drama.
This story (The Belt Book 2) Entropy continues the story of Commander Scott McNabb and the crew of the Hermes as they’re pulled deeper into the struggle over powerful new technology that could change the balance of the solar system. What started as a scientific mission turns into a dangerous game involving hidden agendas, political maneuvering, and threats that stretch far beyond the asteroid belt. As the story evolves you learn more about the characters and their backstories. It’s a fast-moving follow-up with plenty of tension and action. It’s an enjoyable read that keeps the momentum of the series going strong.
This was a good story and I liked it enough to give it five stars even though I gave it only four. Its a continuation of book one and this book leads in to the final book three. Good characters and lots of action, but not gory. Believable science fiction in my opinion. The main characters in addition to the humans are super computers called QI, for Quantum Intelligence computers.
Another great book by Gerald M. Kilby. The race to get to Aria and the flight of the Hermes to return to Europa after their scientific expedition suddenly gets cancelled was thrilling to follow. Miranda agreeing to return to Earth was certainly a wrinkle. I loved the description of her ship. Autonomous sailing and a swimming pool on board. What a way to travel. All the running around and the twists and turns to the story keep me hanging in there. Now on to Book 3 of this wonderful story.
Really enjoyed this story. Hard to put down. The characters are well developed and I cared about them, just as much as I did in the first book of this series called Entanglement. I've enjoyed all Gerald M. Kilby's books. The Colony Mars series is also great.
This book ends with the next book's plot in the series laid out. Can't wait.
Read book one before reading this title. You will, as I am be eager to read the next book in this series. Although there are references to quantum entanglement, the science does not dominate the action in this book. Rather the characters, human and A.I. dominate the plot.
Well-paced action adventure in true space western style!
Many "Book 2's" tend to lend little more than filler to good story. But "Entropy" does well to stand on its own, start-to-finish, while in turn extending the original storyline.
And while I eagerly await the next chapter, I don't feel cheated with this story's ending.
... Because I'm starting the third book now and need more. The copyediting has improved (thank you) and the story is fast. I appreciate the short, yet thorough, explanations of concepts not well known to the average humanoid in Earth. Keep them coming!
I can really get into these Kilby books; that is until an editing issue has not been addressed. There are several edit needs in both book one and two. What happened to this set? The others are very well done. Would be good if the reader is not so rudely shoved so far away from the story. Love Kilby's story lines and the reference from one set to another.
Not bad. The crew now have a nicely upgraded ship but are called to a new mission. Once again subterfuge and intrigue abound. Their ship destroyed and Aria the QI computer take. Miranda is tricked into returning to Earth, Scott is left dealing with his feelings for her. She realises she'd been tricked and Aria destroyed and goes in search of Scott.
I have 6 book set purchased for $9.99 on July 2, 2023. Interesting space opera, with a bit of alien intrigue and AI involvement, and gangster types, and pirate types involved as well. Finished the first 5 of the series- a genetically advanced woman and her family strive against corporate CEOs who have no scruples.
great quick paced and appealing characters. perfect light reading script
I love that this was in his mars stories universe. Nice touch Gerry. The story’s aren’t deep but they are entertaining and page turning. I suggest you read one then read another author in between to keep the stories fresh.
Entropy was choppy for me. One of the characters has a different position than they did in the first book, which isn’t explained, but several years have passed so maybe Steph pursued another line of work due to how the events in Entanglement shaped her. Scott did make some poor decisions.
I'm having so much fun with these very excellently written novels that are devoid of f-bombs and sex situations.
Brilliantly written all of these so far and I don't usually pay more than two or three dollars for a Kindle book that I've been spending three times that much on these.
Great premise, well constructed story and lots of excitement..these books have it all. I've read one and two in quick succession..just waiting for book 3 in the series
The characters are better developed now and more likeable. The story was still a bit predictable but I enjoyed it as a light and entertaining book. On the the next.
Read and enjoyed the first book and enjoyed this one. Always a fan of space operas with a dash of action and intrigue well written with strong characters and plot
An amazing experience in fast paced action and adventure in a great sci-fi space opera. I really like the characters the author has created and found them easy to identify with. I really like this book and I highly recommend it.
As the Commander learns that there may be a way to stop a war. He reflects on what the Seven have done to him and so is set to go into a veritable death location to help Aria and Solomon.
Still a little slow, the QI's, there are I think four of them in play now, are all talking to each other, and seem to have the welfare of humankind in mind, as they're trying to avert a catastrophic war that could end the human race.
I love how the story has been going so far. What I'm enjoying is how the characters and storyline has evolved so far, I can't wait to read what is in-store for us in book three
The sense of real physics permeates this tale of adventure in the asteroid belt and beyond. It is a standalone read yet build up upon the authors, previous "Colony" series about the development of human settlement on the red planet.