3 stars
Overall, I felt like this book had potential and the romance just killed it. If you want a good mystery, skip this one. If you want a romance that makes you feel secondhand embarrassment, then by all means, dive in. But honestly? I’m still here trying to figure out what kind of love triangle I’ve just been tortured with.
Quick review:
♦︎ Conveniently super smart only when the plot demands it - Female Lead
♦︎ Love? triangle
♦︎ Maybe male lead - rich, full package but has a girlfriend and is the FLs BFF brother
♦︎ Maybe other male lead - Mysterious, assigned mentor, who acts like he hates her
♦︎ Murder Mystery
♦︎ Mysterious School for children who are known as grievers
♦︎ Grimm Fairytale Monsters
♦︎ Huge emphasis on YA
What I didn't like:
Welcome to my rant as I only ever have a long review to write when I got beef with the book.
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Hunter - one of the male leads (gag)
- Rich, good looking, perfect at everything, & FL’s BFF brother. Because, of course, we couldn’t have a love triangle without that nice little sprinkle of incest-adjacent tension. But wait, it gets better. This guy is in a relationship, tells his girlfriend he loves her, and then immediately starts flirting with Everly like he’s auditioning for “Most Confusing Romantic Lead of the Year.” And when things inevitably get messy, he blames Everly for “temptation.” Excuse me, sir? You can’t be a walking contradiction and then play the victim when it all blows up in your face. You are the problem.
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Love triangle
- SIGH Because, of course, we can’t have a dark, supernatural murder mystery without a love triangle. I HATE LOVE TRIANGLES. The romance in this book is so poorly executed, it’s honestly a public service to stay single.
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Everly - The Female Lead
- She’s smart, but only when the plot demands it, which, unsurprisingly, is usually when she's about to figure something out that should’ve been obvious five chapters ago. ALSO, this girl is so starved for attention I’m honestly worried about her food supply. At one point, she’s literally fighting to be initiated into this school (that she obviously really wants to join) and can barely focus because she’s distracted by Hunter’s glorious presence. A girl’s fighting for survival, and her mind is wandering to him like he's a distraction in a physics class. Girlie, wyd? Then, after a traumatic, near-death experience (two people die, and she’s almost burned alive), her thoughts immediately go to Ian and his abs,and because we can't forget the other, almost kisses Hunter. Why is she acting like she’s so starved? Tired of authors shoving romance in any spot in the story without caring about time and place.
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Everly and Stevens...
- Officer Creeper, the 20-year-old who's crushing on Everly. Let me remind you: Everly is 17 and still in high school. I’m not saying this is a “foul” situation, I’m just saying if I were a concerned parent, I’d be calling the cops—oh wait, he’s the cop! It’s the kind of romance that makes you look over your shoulder and go, “Am I reading a YA book or a true-crime documentary about grooming?” Either way, it’s uncomfortable.
- The end with the whole "You have family, it's us" was so cringe, tone it down Fast & Furious. The melodrama was so over-the-top, I half-expected someone to shout, “Brothers and sisters, forever!”
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Grimm fairytale monsters
- They are supposed to add this sinister flair, but honestly, they’re about as threatening as a stuffed teddy bear. They’re just there to make the story seem darker than it actually is. Spoiler alert: They’re more like a backdrop than an actual plot element. I was more interested in figuring out who didn’t deserve to be in a love triangle than figuring out who committed the murder.