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Things Grak Hates
Grak hates things. Lots of things. And with a peculiar intensity, too.
Grak's contempt is so strong, in fact, that it often leaves his fellow tribesmen bewildered. And when attempting to describe his personality, they find themselves in need of words with greater nuance. "Neurotic" is typically used. "Sociopath" and "narcissist" are also common terms. The most popular descriptor, however, is "pathological."
Grak, on the other hand, sees his situation in a rather different light. He finds his behavior "necessary" and "selfless," or even "benevolent" when his mood is just so. Most often, though, he simply attributes his nature to "being human."
But of all the things Grak despises, his antipathy for olives takes precedence. In his efforts to be rid of this nuisance, he gets his first taste of power and ignites a series of events with troubling consequences. Unwilling to give up his newfound influence, he sets about honing his only true manipulation. But as his grip tightens, Grak's naively selfish exterior crumbles to reveal a dark and malicious evil....
In his debut work, author Peter J. Story brews a robust psychological satire infused with dry humor and a pinch of emotion. Set just prior to recorded history, Things Grak Hates chronicles the life of a bizarre nomad and his descent toward evil. Along the way, this unconventional and introspective allegory explores a variety of complex issues. Among power, politics, religion, redemption, the dissemination of ideas, and human nature itself.
Grak's contempt is so strong, in fact, that it often leaves his fellow tribesmen bewildered. And when attempting to describe his personality, they find themselves in need of words with greater nuance. "Neurotic" is typically used. "Sociopath" and "narcissist" are also common terms. The most popular descriptor, however, is "pathological."
Grak, on the other hand, sees his situation in a rather different light. He finds his behavior "necessary" and "selfless," or even "benevolent" when his mood is just so. Most often, though, he simply attributes his nature to "being human."
But of all the things Grak despises, his antipathy for olives takes precedence. In his efforts to be rid of this nuisance, he gets his first taste of power and ignites a series of events with troubling consequences. Unwilling to give up his newfound influence, he sets about honing his only true manipulation. But as his grip tightens, Grak's naively selfish exterior crumbles to reveal a dark and malicious evil....
In his debut work, author Peter J. Story brews a robust psychological satire infused with dry humor and a pinch of emotion. Set just prior to recorded history, Things Grak Hates chronicles the life of a bizarre nomad and his descent toward evil. Along the way, this unconventional and introspective allegory explores a variety of complex issues. Among power, politics, religion, redemption, the dissemination of ideas, and human nature itself.
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About the author
Peter J. Story
2 books28 followersPeter J Story lives in San Antonio, Texas with his wife and their two pugs. He writes code by day and fiction by night, considering himself an author of deliberate, genre-free stories with a soul. While his is not a pen name, he does enjoy chuckling to himself about how well it suits his passion.
Being extremely shy as a youngster, Peter spent his days in two primary hobbies: studying people and reading. He found both pastimes equally fascinating. Among his favorite characters were Encyclopedia Brown, Sebastian the Super Sleuth, and Sherlock Holmes. When in search of new mystery stories, he read Murder on the Orient Express and found the tale intriguing. Unfortunately, he felt that the name “Hercule Poirot” was unseemly, and abandoned any further inquiries in the character’s direction.
Then one day, at the age of ten or so, Peter’s uncle introduced him to the work of J.R.R. Tolkien, and his world changed forever. He was carried away by the story and tried his hand at mimicking the epic. Unfortunately, due to his existing love for Star Trek: The Next Generation, this took an unholy turn toward a hybrid of the two worlds. But he enjoyed it, nonetheless, and isn’t that what matters most? Of course it is.
As he grew, Peter learned to enjoy a variety of new writers, such as George Orwell, Leo Tolstoy, Herman Melville, Ernest Hemingway, Fyodor Dostoyevsky, Stephen King, Dave Barry, and C.S. Lewis, all of whom had a tremendous impact on his writing style. He planned to go to college (with a vague notion of majoring in something to do with literature), then decided to instead spend seven years as a missionary (mostly in Mexico City). The time paid off, however, and taught him even more about human nature and the art of telling a subtle, character-driven story.
Being extremely shy as a youngster, Peter spent his days in two primary hobbies: studying people and reading. He found both pastimes equally fascinating. Among his favorite characters were Encyclopedia Brown, Sebastian the Super Sleuth, and Sherlock Holmes. When in search of new mystery stories, he read Murder on the Orient Express and found the tale intriguing. Unfortunately, he felt that the name “Hercule Poirot” was unseemly, and abandoned any further inquiries in the character’s direction.
Then one day, at the age of ten or so, Peter’s uncle introduced him to the work of J.R.R. Tolkien, and his world changed forever. He was carried away by the story and tried his hand at mimicking the epic. Unfortunately, due to his existing love for Star Trek: The Next Generation, this took an unholy turn toward a hybrid of the two worlds. But he enjoyed it, nonetheless, and isn’t that what matters most? Of course it is.
As he grew, Peter learned to enjoy a variety of new writers, such as George Orwell, Leo Tolstoy, Herman Melville, Ernest Hemingway, Fyodor Dostoyevsky, Stephen King, Dave Barry, and C.S. Lewis, all of whom had a tremendous impact on his writing style. He planned to go to college (with a vague notion of majoring in something to do with literature), then decided to instead spend seven years as a missionary (mostly in Mexico City). The time paid off, however, and taught him even more about human nature and the art of telling a subtle, character-driven story.
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November 20, 2013
While I admit that I'm the author (and my opinion should be judged accordingly), I also feel it should be valued if presented with as little bias as possible. If I give my book four stars, then I'm either lying or didn't give it my all. And if I give it five stars, but lie about that, then it's just as useless.
But I honestly feel that "Things Grak Hates" is a five-star book. The story is dear to me. It's a robust psychological satire full of emotion, dry humor, and hidden meaning. It's an unconventional cross between Animal Farm, A Confederacy of Dunces, and an evil version of Forrest Gump. And more than that, I've dedicated an overwhelming number of hours to ensure a professional standard.
At the same time, I know it's not for everyone. I wrote it that way. The slow pace is intentional, designed to be a relaxing read that, hopefully, pulls you out of the hectic world and gives you time to think about what the words are saying. I attempted to defy certain writing conventions in hopes of focusing you, the reader, on the story underneath. While editing, I took care to inject certain anachronisms to bridge the gap between our modern world and Grak's ancient world.
So, to those of you who aren't into stories of this sort, thank you for considering it. And to the rest of you, please enjoy this bit of my soul.
But I honestly feel that "Things Grak Hates" is a five-star book. The story is dear to me. It's a robust psychological satire full of emotion, dry humor, and hidden meaning. It's an unconventional cross between Animal Farm, A Confederacy of Dunces, and an evil version of Forrest Gump. And more than that, I've dedicated an overwhelming number of hours to ensure a professional standard.
At the same time, I know it's not for everyone. I wrote it that way. The slow pace is intentional, designed to be a relaxing read that, hopefully, pulls you out of the hectic world and gives you time to think about what the words are saying. I attempted to defy certain writing conventions in hopes of focusing you, the reader, on the story underneath. While editing, I took care to inject certain anachronisms to bridge the gap between our modern world and Grak's ancient world.
So, to those of you who aren't into stories of this sort, thank you for considering it. And to the rest of you, please enjoy this bit of my soul.
October 25, 2014
Quite an unique story-line. Coming from a first time author, the writing is also quite fresh and with an interesting and funny prose, the book proves to be a hilarious ride for me!
Who is Grak?
A pri-historic nomad belonging from an primitive era! Grak is stupid, can't do a single thing with a fault in it, have no skills, better to say almost useless.
What is his problem?
He is himself is the problem to his tribe! People from his tribe openly make fun of him.
Height of stupidity???
Grak hates Olives!!!! With scarcity of animal-protein, people from his tribe had to live on Olives, and when they learned that Grak hates olives, they started to name their daughters as Olives. People started taunting him because of his stupidity!
Grak's step to survival?
He started telling stories to cover himself up! Lies blatantly!! Moreover, he started the game of manipulating his tribe mates! And soon his tribe mates make Grak the leader!
Well this is not an easy book to read first of all, but author's way of narrating the whole story turns out to be an easy, and funny read for me! Grak's characterization is quite strong and he will make you laugh the entire except when he becomes the leader, you will feel that Grak is very vile!
The author has cleverly manipulated our minds from liking Grak so much to hating him with all our resentment! As I said, it is a must read unique book!
I won this book in a Good reads giveaway! Thanks to the author for providing me with a copy of his book.
Who is Grak?
A pri-historic nomad belonging from an primitive era! Grak is stupid, can't do a single thing with a fault in it, have no skills, better to say almost useless.
What is his problem?
He is himself is the problem to his tribe! People from his tribe openly make fun of him.
Height of stupidity???
Grak hates Olives!!!! With scarcity of animal-protein, people from his tribe had to live on Olives, and when they learned that Grak hates olives, they started to name their daughters as Olives. People started taunting him because of his stupidity!
Grak's step to survival?
He started telling stories to cover himself up! Lies blatantly!! Moreover, he started the game of manipulating his tribe mates! And soon his tribe mates make Grak the leader!
Well this is not an easy book to read first of all, but author's way of narrating the whole story turns out to be an easy, and funny read for me! Grak's characterization is quite strong and he will make you laugh the entire except when he becomes the leader, you will feel that Grak is very vile!
The author has cleverly manipulated our minds from liking Grak so much to hating him with all our resentment! As I said, it is a must read unique book!
I won this book in a Good reads giveaway! Thanks to the author for providing me with a copy of his book.
October 2, 2014
“Power tends to corrupt, and absolute power corrupts absolutely.” Lord Acton
Leaving behind all discussions with regard to intent, the Platonic concept of philosopher kings, or benevolent dictators, what remains are the all-too-unfortunate (and numerous) individuals whose characters are an unsavory amalgam of weakness of will, questionable morals, shaky ethics, narcissistic tendencies (i.e. “the ends always justify my means”), greed - or all of the above.
Tragically, we know how events can transpire when the more “shaky” members of society grab some power with their acquisitive little hands. The course of human civilization abounds with a veritable legion of individuals who have taken power and corrupted it to serve their own ends; ranging from politicians (pick up any newspaper on any given day and you will be regaled and disgusted with their shenanigans), minor officials, and petty dictators, all the way up to a person who, through cold, canny acumen, manipulation, mendacity and intimidation, take over entire countries, committing crimes and evils against humanity that are almost impossible for an evolved individual to fathom.
These themes are the structure around which Peter J. Story’s novel is built. And, it should come as no surprise that we are not going to spend the next 300+ pages hearing about how kind and benevolent Grak is. So, make no mistake about it, by the end of this novel, I can tell you unequivocally:
Paula hates Grak. No, not the novel. Just Grak.
And so should you. If not, I hope you live in a galaxy far, far away.
The novel has a rather innocuous beginning. We are introduced to Grak and the tribe of which he is a very unimportant member. This is a primitive society with a simple regard for each other. They follow the deer herds through the seasons and forage for the rest of their food (nuts, berries, etc.). They are industrious, content and happy.
Well, except for Grak. Grak is never industrious and he is seldom content and happy. He harbors petty resentments against most of the tribe because they seem to be able to do - well, everything - better than he. No matter the job, his results (in hunting, carpentry, sewing, etc.) are mediocre at best. He is a paranoid little gnome of a man who thinks everyone in the tribe – except for his friend Doran - looks down on him and makes fun of him behind his back.
Grak’s trajectory to dictatorship begins, as many such journeys, very small and rather humorously. His trigger? He does not like olives. Actually he hates them, not only because of the taste, but also because of the way they make his mouth pucker - which provokes some good-natured ribbing from his fellow tribe members, and which he definitely does not receive in a good-natured way. Since olives are a major food source for the tribe, it is difficult for him to avoid them. To rub salt into the wound, the tribe loves the very name, “olive” and so begins a tradition of naming their daughters Olive.
Olives the food source, and females named Olive, are everywhere.
What begins as a series of seemingly innocent lies (lying is an unknown concept in the tribe) told in order to avoid the hated food, is so surprisingly successful, it gets Grak’s reptilian little brain clicking as he reflects upon his gratifying and effortless success (Grak is all about obtaining things with the least amount of effort). Inevitably, he begins to explore how to expand his methods, attacking and eliminating other things he hates (which becomes an ever-expanding list) and how to get what he wants (which is also an ever-expanding list).
Up to this point, we are a little uncomfortable, but still laughing at this rather pathetic little guy who has no skills, and is smelly, awkward, boastful, and intensely hungry for approval. Someone who longs to possess a sense of importance and rank within the tribe. He wants their approval, their love, but, most importantly, their recognition and acknowledgment that he is special.
It is in how Grak strategizes to attain his desires, and how those desires evolve into an insatiable appetite for obeyance and adulation, that Mr. Story weaves his disturbing tale.
During the course of the novel we discover that, contrary to our initial impression, Grak does indeed possess an entire arsenal of innate talents. He is a master of deceitfulness, manipulation, intimidation, fear-mongering and quick-wittedness, combined with a complete lack of empathy, and a disturbingly cold-blooded, merciless approach when it comes to levying retribution for violations of his long lists of rules. All of this is as easy to him as breathing, and he comes to enjoy his ability to manipulate and persecute the tribe. For him, it’s not only rewarding, it’s fun.
Mr. Story does an excellent job of developing Grak’s mental pathology and escalating violent behavior as he gains more and more control over the tribe. We can easily equate Grak’s dark, disturbing trajectory with other human monsters in our history…the endless rationalization for actions taken…“I wouldn’t have to do these things if they didn’t make it necessary”…”If they would only listen”…”If only they would stop questioning my authority and realize that I know what’s best for them”. As their behavior escalates, so does their paranoia, and they project their own dark tendencies upon the personalities of those with whom they surround themselves. Everyone becomes a foe, an enemy…someone not be trusted - because they themselves are not to be trusted. Liars and manipulators always assume that everyone else must be lying and manipulating as well.
This is Mr. Story’s first novel and the writing is generally tight and well-constructed. As I said, he absolutely nails the mental pathology of someone with narcissistic personality disorder and what can happen when such individuals are allowed free, unrestricted rein over others. We usually assume that a dictator’s rise to power - be it over tribes, districts, cities, states, countries – are the result of some sudden coup. As Mr. Story reminds us, this not always the case. Instead, such takeovers can begin very small. These monstrous manipulators are like spiders spinning webs. The web oh-so-gradually becomes bigger and bigger, one small, sticky thread at a time. At first, just a few people are ensnared or enthralled…then more…then more. Until, everyone is caught in some way – either as an active enabler…or a victim.
However, as much as I appreciate Mr. Story’s impressively successful portrayal of a cruel despot in the making, I found it was a book I more appreciated on a clinical, intellectual level than I actually enjoyed reading as a novel. Although Grak’s behavior and hold over the tribe becomes increasingly dangerous; as much as he literally destroys the balance and harmony of the group, replacing it with fear and violence, it is difficult to appreciate how truly chilling these events are. This is partly because of the rather shallow, cartoony nature of the portrayals and events. I believe I read somewhere a suggestion that this would make a good graphic novel and I would agree. I think Mr. Story’s tale would be better served in that format. Perhaps this would be an interesting adaptation project he could pursue.
The other weakness in the novel is that we spend almost the entire time riding around in Grak’s head. We see others and experience events only through his eyes and how he perceives them. This is a problem. Narcissists have no empathy for others. Other people aren’t really people to them, they are merely human tools that only have relevance in how they impact the narcissist. A narcissist feels about people like you “feel” about your refrigerator. It has importance to you, but you don’t think about it at all unless it gives you trouble or it doesn’t hold everything you want or makes too much noise. It’s just something you use…something that serves your purpose. And that’s it. If it gives you trouble and doesn’t live up to your requirements, what happens? You become exasperated with it – and maybe you just get rid of it.
Such is the perception of the narcissist.
Because Mr. Story never personalizes the other tribe members so that we can perceive their reactions (pain, fear, confusion) to Grak from their viewpoint, because Grak feels no remorse at all for the pain and violence he wreaks upon the tribe members, because he has no empathy for others, because they are not really “real” to him, because of all these things, they never become real to us. Throughout the book, we never get to really know any of the tribe members. Sure, we know “of” them and we know some facts “about” them and some of the group dynamics, but again, only through Grak’s perception – which is, of course, extremely narrow and limited in scope. As the book proceeds, it becomes more and more claustrophobic to be sitting in Grak’s twisted little brain and it would have been nice to get a better, more personal sense of what the tribe is going through and how they are reacting to all the horrific events and disintegration of the group society. However, I will say that this viewpoint is very interesting and gripping when Grak eventually starts “drinking his own Kool-Aid” so to speak and we get to experience firsthand his mental breakdown.
I don’t know whether or not this was the effect Mr. Story intended. Perhaps it was. Perhaps he wanted us only to experience the cold, calculating detachment of a fledgling bloody dictator and how they treat others as nothing more than game board pieces – moving them around to suit the will, and amusement, of the game player. If so, he was successful.
But for me, the result is a little one-dimensional. I would have appreciated more depth and insight into someone besides Grak. The confined viewpoint made the book feel long to me. I think cutting about 75 pages of repetitious beatings and comedic gags – or replacing them with narratives that would have brought the other characters to life - would have maintained a better tension in the overall arc of Grak’s reign.
All in all, this is a good, solid first novel. Mr. Story writes well; he has very interesting ideas, easy, intelligent prose, and knows how to build and tell a story. I very much look forward to what he writes next.
I received this book via Goodreads First Reads in exchange for a fair review.
Leaving behind all discussions with regard to intent, the Platonic concept of philosopher kings, or benevolent dictators, what remains are the all-too-unfortunate (and numerous) individuals whose characters are an unsavory amalgam of weakness of will, questionable morals, shaky ethics, narcissistic tendencies (i.e. “the ends always justify my means”), greed - or all of the above.
Tragically, we know how events can transpire when the more “shaky” members of society grab some power with their acquisitive little hands. The course of human civilization abounds with a veritable legion of individuals who have taken power and corrupted it to serve their own ends; ranging from politicians (pick up any newspaper on any given day and you will be regaled and disgusted with their shenanigans), minor officials, and petty dictators, all the way up to a person who, through cold, canny acumen, manipulation, mendacity and intimidation, take over entire countries, committing crimes and evils against humanity that are almost impossible for an evolved individual to fathom.
These themes are the structure around which Peter J. Story’s novel is built. And, it should come as no surprise that we are not going to spend the next 300+ pages hearing about how kind and benevolent Grak is. So, make no mistake about it, by the end of this novel, I can tell you unequivocally:
Paula hates Grak. No, not the novel. Just Grak.
And so should you. If not, I hope you live in a galaxy far, far away.
The novel has a rather innocuous beginning. We are introduced to Grak and the tribe of which he is a very unimportant member. This is a primitive society with a simple regard for each other. They follow the deer herds through the seasons and forage for the rest of their food (nuts, berries, etc.). They are industrious, content and happy.
Well, except for Grak. Grak is never industrious and he is seldom content and happy. He harbors petty resentments against most of the tribe because they seem to be able to do - well, everything - better than he. No matter the job, his results (in hunting, carpentry, sewing, etc.) are mediocre at best. He is a paranoid little gnome of a man who thinks everyone in the tribe – except for his friend Doran - looks down on him and makes fun of him behind his back.
Grak’s trajectory to dictatorship begins, as many such journeys, very small and rather humorously. His trigger? He does not like olives. Actually he hates them, not only because of the taste, but also because of the way they make his mouth pucker - which provokes some good-natured ribbing from his fellow tribe members, and which he definitely does not receive in a good-natured way. Since olives are a major food source for the tribe, it is difficult for him to avoid them. To rub salt into the wound, the tribe loves the very name, “olive” and so begins a tradition of naming their daughters Olive.
Olives the food source, and females named Olive, are everywhere.
What begins as a series of seemingly innocent lies (lying is an unknown concept in the tribe) told in order to avoid the hated food, is so surprisingly successful, it gets Grak’s reptilian little brain clicking as he reflects upon his gratifying and effortless success (Grak is all about obtaining things with the least amount of effort). Inevitably, he begins to explore how to expand his methods, attacking and eliminating other things he hates (which becomes an ever-expanding list) and how to get what he wants (which is also an ever-expanding list).
Up to this point, we are a little uncomfortable, but still laughing at this rather pathetic little guy who has no skills, and is smelly, awkward, boastful, and intensely hungry for approval. Someone who longs to possess a sense of importance and rank within the tribe. He wants their approval, their love, but, most importantly, their recognition and acknowledgment that he is special.
It is in how Grak strategizes to attain his desires, and how those desires evolve into an insatiable appetite for obeyance and adulation, that Mr. Story weaves his disturbing tale.
During the course of the novel we discover that, contrary to our initial impression, Grak does indeed possess an entire arsenal of innate talents. He is a master of deceitfulness, manipulation, intimidation, fear-mongering and quick-wittedness, combined with a complete lack of empathy, and a disturbingly cold-blooded, merciless approach when it comes to levying retribution for violations of his long lists of rules. All of this is as easy to him as breathing, and he comes to enjoy his ability to manipulate and persecute the tribe. For him, it’s not only rewarding, it’s fun.
Mr. Story does an excellent job of developing Grak’s mental pathology and escalating violent behavior as he gains more and more control over the tribe. We can easily equate Grak’s dark, disturbing trajectory with other human monsters in our history…the endless rationalization for actions taken…“I wouldn’t have to do these things if they didn’t make it necessary”…”If they would only listen”…”If only they would stop questioning my authority and realize that I know what’s best for them”. As their behavior escalates, so does their paranoia, and they project their own dark tendencies upon the personalities of those with whom they surround themselves. Everyone becomes a foe, an enemy…someone not be trusted - because they themselves are not to be trusted. Liars and manipulators always assume that everyone else must be lying and manipulating as well.
This is Mr. Story’s first novel and the writing is generally tight and well-constructed. As I said, he absolutely nails the mental pathology of someone with narcissistic personality disorder and what can happen when such individuals are allowed free, unrestricted rein over others. We usually assume that a dictator’s rise to power - be it over tribes, districts, cities, states, countries – are the result of some sudden coup. As Mr. Story reminds us, this not always the case. Instead, such takeovers can begin very small. These monstrous manipulators are like spiders spinning webs. The web oh-so-gradually becomes bigger and bigger, one small, sticky thread at a time. At first, just a few people are ensnared or enthralled…then more…then more. Until, everyone is caught in some way – either as an active enabler…or a victim.
However, as much as I appreciate Mr. Story’s impressively successful portrayal of a cruel despot in the making, I found it was a book I more appreciated on a clinical, intellectual level than I actually enjoyed reading as a novel. Although Grak’s behavior and hold over the tribe becomes increasingly dangerous; as much as he literally destroys the balance and harmony of the group, replacing it with fear and violence, it is difficult to appreciate how truly chilling these events are. This is partly because of the rather shallow, cartoony nature of the portrayals and events. I believe I read somewhere a suggestion that this would make a good graphic novel and I would agree. I think Mr. Story’s tale would be better served in that format. Perhaps this would be an interesting adaptation project he could pursue.
The other weakness in the novel is that we spend almost the entire time riding around in Grak’s head. We see others and experience events only through his eyes and how he perceives them. This is a problem. Narcissists have no empathy for others. Other people aren’t really people to them, they are merely human tools that only have relevance in how they impact the narcissist. A narcissist feels about people like you “feel” about your refrigerator. It has importance to you, but you don’t think about it at all unless it gives you trouble or it doesn’t hold everything you want or makes too much noise. It’s just something you use…something that serves your purpose. And that’s it. If it gives you trouble and doesn’t live up to your requirements, what happens? You become exasperated with it – and maybe you just get rid of it.
Such is the perception of the narcissist.
Because Mr. Story never personalizes the other tribe members so that we can perceive their reactions (pain, fear, confusion) to Grak from their viewpoint, because Grak feels no remorse at all for the pain and violence he wreaks upon the tribe members, because he has no empathy for others, because they are not really “real” to him, because of all these things, they never become real to us. Throughout the book, we never get to really know any of the tribe members. Sure, we know “of” them and we know some facts “about” them and some of the group dynamics, but again, only through Grak’s perception – which is, of course, extremely narrow and limited in scope. As the book proceeds, it becomes more and more claustrophobic to be sitting in Grak’s twisted little brain and it would have been nice to get a better, more personal sense of what the tribe is going through and how they are reacting to all the horrific events and disintegration of the group society. However, I will say that this viewpoint is very interesting and gripping when Grak eventually starts “drinking his own Kool-Aid” so to speak and we get to experience firsthand his mental breakdown.
I don’t know whether or not this was the effect Mr. Story intended. Perhaps it was. Perhaps he wanted us only to experience the cold, calculating detachment of a fledgling bloody dictator and how they treat others as nothing more than game board pieces – moving them around to suit the will, and amusement, of the game player. If so, he was successful.
But for me, the result is a little one-dimensional. I would have appreciated more depth and insight into someone besides Grak. The confined viewpoint made the book feel long to me. I think cutting about 75 pages of repetitious beatings and comedic gags – or replacing them with narratives that would have brought the other characters to life - would have maintained a better tension in the overall arc of Grak’s reign.
All in all, this is a good, solid first novel. Mr. Story writes well; he has very interesting ideas, easy, intelligent prose, and knows how to build and tell a story. I very much look forward to what he writes next.
I received this book via Goodreads First Reads in exchange for a fair review.
November 21, 2013
Love this book! It's tone is snarky and light-hearted, and yet it contains a surprising amount of depth if you're paying attention!
I started reading because I wanted to find out why Grak hated olives as much as I do, but by the end of a first chapter I was totally hooked. Of course I hated the character more and more as the story wore on, but that's the point!
Definitely a book worth reading.
I started reading because I wanted to find out why Grak hated olives as much as I do, but by the end of a first chapter I was totally hooked. Of course I hated the character more and more as the story wore on, but that's the point!
Definitely a book worth reading.
October 7, 2014
Things Grak Hates by Peter J. Story literally blew me away. Who is Grak and what does he hate? Grak is a tribesman that sees life in a peculiar way. In fact, Graks fellow tribesmen are confused with what Grak feels is necessary in life. Graks has guilty pleasures of watching children being scolded and witnessing the agony of others. He feels he is not a total monster because he does feel some concern with others tribulation.
Grak hates everything! Out of everything Grak hates, he despises olives the most! He loathes olives so much his fellow tribesmen would agree it is a trait of his bizarre personality. Confronting the cook of the tribe, Grak felt he was bitter in his response of “not enough food” and “everyone else likes olives”. Grak felt a scheming plan was necessary in resolving this matter with the cook. Grak regrets his words to the cook, because he went too far with the scheme and it would be difficult to follow. So since his plan didn’t work, he had to come up with another scheme to offset the first.
The ever-scheming and manipulating Grak seized the opportunity and took leadership over the tribe. He was loved by the tribesmen and was growing in popularity. Grak feels his barbaric ways of leadership is necessary for a disciplined tribe. Soon his devoted followers become bewildered and confused with Grak’s leadership abilities when he takes his leadership to another level of being self-centered and vengeful. The tribesmen then realize the need to regain peace within their people, so they plan an uprising. Grak underestimates the mentality of the people, which in turn lands him in such turmoil, he finds it difficult to manipulate his way out.
This book kept me as bewildered as Grak’s followers regarding his beliefs. I was taken on an emotional journey with a roller coaster ride of betrayal and merciless evil. I was entertained with the ways of a primitive people with an added touch of comedy and wit. I look forward to reading more from Peter J. Story - a great imaginative story teller!
Review by Monica McDaniel for eBook Review Gal. eBook Review Gal received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Grak hates everything! Out of everything Grak hates, he despises olives the most! He loathes olives so much his fellow tribesmen would agree it is a trait of his bizarre personality. Confronting the cook of the tribe, Grak felt he was bitter in his response of “not enough food” and “everyone else likes olives”. Grak felt a scheming plan was necessary in resolving this matter with the cook. Grak regrets his words to the cook, because he went too far with the scheme and it would be difficult to follow. So since his plan didn’t work, he had to come up with another scheme to offset the first.
The ever-scheming and manipulating Grak seized the opportunity and took leadership over the tribe. He was loved by the tribesmen and was growing in popularity. Grak feels his barbaric ways of leadership is necessary for a disciplined tribe. Soon his devoted followers become bewildered and confused with Grak’s leadership abilities when he takes his leadership to another level of being self-centered and vengeful. The tribesmen then realize the need to regain peace within their people, so they plan an uprising. Grak underestimates the mentality of the people, which in turn lands him in such turmoil, he finds it difficult to manipulate his way out.
This book kept me as bewildered as Grak’s followers regarding his beliefs. I was taken on an emotional journey with a roller coaster ride of betrayal and merciless evil. I was entertained with the ways of a primitive people with an added touch of comedy and wit. I look forward to reading more from Peter J. Story - a great imaginative story teller!
Review by Monica McDaniel for eBook Review Gal. eBook Review Gal received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
November 2, 2014
The first and most important thought that I had in mind while reading this book was that the writer, Peter J. Story is so talented. His book made me laugh out loud (literally) but unlike other books I've read, the humor in it isn't silly; it is in fact extremely meaningful.
The book is well crafted and perfectly written. The writer seems to put part of himself, part of his heart into his writing in order to fabricate a beautifully fascinating masterpiece.
This book is different; it is genre-free in a good way. I thought I was going to enjoy reading it, and I wasn't wrong.
Giving Things Grak Hates 5 stars is just fair. Giving it less than 5 stars means it is imperfect (or it contained some not-so-good parts or any disappointments whatsoever), which is absolutely not the case.
I'm so looking forward to read Story's next work!
The book is well crafted and perfectly written. The writer seems to put part of himself, part of his heart into his writing in order to fabricate a beautifully fascinating masterpiece.
This book is different; it is genre-free in a good way. I thought I was going to enjoy reading it, and I wasn't wrong.
Giving Things Grak Hates 5 stars is just fair. Giving it less than 5 stars means it is imperfect (or it contained some not-so-good parts or any disappointments whatsoever), which is absolutely not the case.
I'm so looking forward to read Story's next work!
October 15, 2014
I received this book as a Goodreads Giveaway.
This was a thoroughly entertaining and enjoyable look into human nature. As the book progresses, you will be bewildered by Grak's behavior and, more so, by his "children."
I look forward to reading more by Peter J. Story.
This was a thoroughly entertaining and enjoyable look into human nature. As the book progresses, you will be bewildered by Grak's behavior and, more so, by his "children."
I look forward to reading more by Peter J. Story.
December 7, 2014
This was my first ARC and I would like to thank Peter J. Story and Paper Newt for giving me a copy in exchange for an honest review. Peter was very pleasant to deal with and we discussed the book via email first to make sure it was the right fit for me.
The first thing I should say is that this book is not a lazy-Sunday-afternoon-easy-read. It’s a novel designed to make you uncomfortable and force you to think about the darker elements of human nature that you would normally rather avoid. Grak’s behaviour is supposed to be hateful and disturbing and we are encouraged to loathe him as much as he loathes everything else in his life. It’s very character-centric so there isn’t a compelling plot behind it; rather it’s what’s happening inside Grak’s manipulative and narcissistic mind that drives the story forward.
Travelling around in Grak’s head felt a bit claustrophobic and at times I was wishing I could get the perspective of some of the other characters (preferably the ones not involved in torture and executions), but that’s the whole point. I wanted to escape from the narcissistic madman and seek refuge with other characters who appeared more sane and compassionate, but I couldn’t. Even when Grak’s behaviour became so disturbing that I actually felt a bit sick (mounting a dead man’s head on his staff and carrying it around with him as a “friend” springs to mind) I had to stick with him if I wanted to finish the story, which I definitely did.
Grak’s tribe had never had a leader before, or ever needed one, so watching how easily Grak manoeuvres himself into power and then manipulates everyone around him in order to maintain it was both fascinating and frightening. The rules which Grak imposes are often so ridiculous that I actually laughed at some of them, yet the tribe follow them and their leader down a self-destructive path. I kept hoping that someone would stand up to him, but when that finally happened it was not in the way I would have hoped for the tribe.
When you surrender your free will and autonomy it is very difficult to get it back, especially if you don’t even realise you’ve lost it because you’re being skilfully manipulated. The old adage “absolute power corrupts absolutely” came to mind a lot as I was reading. I don’t think Grak was ever a particularly nice person, but once he gained power he became a monster who managed to make his followers believe he was acting in their best interests. Something to think about given the state of politics these days!
If you’re looking for a novel with a lot of action and a range of developed characters, then this isn’t the book for you. But if you’re looking for an intelligent and well thought out exploration of the darker threads of human nature and the corrupting influence of power, then I think you will get a lot out of this book.
You can read the full version of this review over at my blog: http://driftingpages.wordpress.com/20...
The first thing I should say is that this book is not a lazy-Sunday-afternoon-easy-read. It’s a novel designed to make you uncomfortable and force you to think about the darker elements of human nature that you would normally rather avoid. Grak’s behaviour is supposed to be hateful and disturbing and we are encouraged to loathe him as much as he loathes everything else in his life. It’s very character-centric so there isn’t a compelling plot behind it; rather it’s what’s happening inside Grak’s manipulative and narcissistic mind that drives the story forward.
Travelling around in Grak’s head felt a bit claustrophobic and at times I was wishing I could get the perspective of some of the other characters (preferably the ones not involved in torture and executions), but that’s the whole point. I wanted to escape from the narcissistic madman and seek refuge with other characters who appeared more sane and compassionate, but I couldn’t. Even when Grak’s behaviour became so disturbing that I actually felt a bit sick (mounting a dead man’s head on his staff and carrying it around with him as a “friend” springs to mind) I had to stick with him if I wanted to finish the story, which I definitely did.
Grak’s tribe had never had a leader before, or ever needed one, so watching how easily Grak manoeuvres himself into power and then manipulates everyone around him in order to maintain it was both fascinating and frightening. The rules which Grak imposes are often so ridiculous that I actually laughed at some of them, yet the tribe follow them and their leader down a self-destructive path. I kept hoping that someone would stand up to him, but when that finally happened it was not in the way I would have hoped for the tribe.
When you surrender your free will and autonomy it is very difficult to get it back, especially if you don’t even realise you’ve lost it because you’re being skilfully manipulated. The old adage “absolute power corrupts absolutely” came to mind a lot as I was reading. I don’t think Grak was ever a particularly nice person, but once he gained power he became a monster who managed to make his followers believe he was acting in their best interests. Something to think about given the state of politics these days!
If you’re looking for a novel with a lot of action and a range of developed characters, then this isn’t the book for you. But if you’re looking for an intelligent and well thought out exploration of the darker threads of human nature and the corrupting influence of power, then I think you will get a lot out of this book.
You can read the full version of this review over at my blog: http://driftingpages.wordpress.com/20...
November 5, 2014
It’s interesting to note that big events often hinge on seemingly inconsequential things. Small, otherwise unimportant factors can set off a chain reaction – and in some cases, this chain reaction affects many, many more than one would ever anticipate.
Such is the case with Grak. His journey begins on a rather innocuous note. He hates olives. Unfortunately for Grak, olives are a consistent feature on the menu of his nomadic tribe. While meat supplies fluctuate, olives are pretty much a constant. And this brings nothing but grief for Grak.
While most of us (at least the non-sociopathic group) would grin and bear this minor inconvenience, Grak sets out to change things. Naturally, his efforts at olive eradication start small, beginning with little lies and tentative attempts at manipulation. Before long, however, Grak realizes that he has quite a knack for manipulation, deceit, and intimidation. The once leaderless tribe quickly succumbs to Grak’s “leadership,” and events spiral further and further out of control.
As others have mentioned, this is not a comfortable book. While the author’s wry sense of humor makes for an amusing read, Grak’s actions and attitudes strike a little too close to home. While it’s rare to find someone so completely sociopathic and shamelessly narcissistic as Grak, there’s still enough of these traits in most of us to make a reader cringe.
This isn’t light reading, but it’s definitely worth the read. If nothing else, Things Grak Hates is going to make you think about your own character, morals, and ethics. Of course, Mr. Story’s clever prose, interesting ideas, and dry humor make for a solid, enjoyable novel.
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for a fair review.
Such is the case with Grak. His journey begins on a rather innocuous note. He hates olives. Unfortunately for Grak, olives are a consistent feature on the menu of his nomadic tribe. While meat supplies fluctuate, olives are pretty much a constant. And this brings nothing but grief for Grak.
While most of us (at least the non-sociopathic group) would grin and bear this minor inconvenience, Grak sets out to change things. Naturally, his efforts at olive eradication start small, beginning with little lies and tentative attempts at manipulation. Before long, however, Grak realizes that he has quite a knack for manipulation, deceit, and intimidation. The once leaderless tribe quickly succumbs to Grak’s “leadership,” and events spiral further and further out of control.
As others have mentioned, this is not a comfortable book. While the author’s wry sense of humor makes for an amusing read, Grak’s actions and attitudes strike a little too close to home. While it’s rare to find someone so completely sociopathic and shamelessly narcissistic as Grak, there’s still enough of these traits in most of us to make a reader cringe.
This isn’t light reading, but it’s definitely worth the read. If nothing else, Things Grak Hates is going to make you think about your own character, morals, and ethics. Of course, Mr. Story’s clever prose, interesting ideas, and dry humor make for a solid, enjoyable novel.
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for a fair review.
May 11, 2015
I just stumbled upon this book, and I have to say that I was quite impressed. Story has crafted a character that is just too easy to hate. This small-minded despot is a fascinating microcosm of the worst in human nature. What’s interesting though is that in hating Grak, the reader essentially becomes Grak. Hate is never a productive emotion, and the author did a wonderful job showing just how far it can go. Looking forward to what Peter J Story comes up with next.
December 12, 2017
Grak made me hate him
I have disliked characters before....but Grak, Grak made me hate him. His manner got on my nerves from the very first chapter and it just seemed to get worse as the story went on. I felt for the rest of his tribe
I have disliked characters before....but Grak, Grak made me hate him. His manner got on my nerves from the very first chapter and it just seemed to get worse as the story went on. I felt for the rest of his tribe
January 29, 2015
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Brought to you by OBS reviewer Scott
ourney back to the early days of hunter-gatherer tribes and into the world of Grak. Within Things Grak Hates are all the fine points that go into an entertaining novel: hatred, greed, lust, suspense, intrigue and power. The novel, in its own charming way, describes the rise and fall of Grak, a finicky character who succumbs to his whims more often than he listens to reason; or just listens for that matter. It’s a tale, however, with morals that are not so complicated.
Things Grak Hates explores, through Grak, the dangers of too much power in such a society (in the small; it easily conforms to the larger picture) and the ramifications bestowed, Never preaching a moral high ground, Peter J. Story weaves this rise to power, Machiavellian intrigue, and the dissension in the tribe with flair and panache, The writing style, though a little slow and awkward to begin with – there are three tenses used –third person omniscient, third person active and first person – becomes all too natural the further one gets in the book, eventually becoming ultimately transparent.
It’s this transparency that allows a controversial theme pertaining to government of the people to shine through. The central theme can’t be placed in a “power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely” mold, although a strong argument could be made for this. As events start innocently enough it’s hard to stop the rolling stone, and for a simpleton like Grak, who definitely qualifies for anger management intervention (perhaps a little psychological counselling about his hatreds as well), things spiral out of control almost through or despite his actions.
Peter Story’s plotting, from the beginning, to the climax to the ending, is an impeccable piece of work. Grak hates a lot of things and each “hatred” is both reflected in the chapter’s title and events. As the ball starts down the hill with Grak’s seemingly harmless hatred of olives, it soon gathers enough momentum to make any trivial matter a possibly terrifying conflict in the book. It’s this unpredictability that drives the story forward and makes the reading experience a joy.
The pacing in the novel, as mentioned before starts out slow, but mostly because of the three grammatical tenses used. It rapidly becomes second nature and, as mentioned, transparent after a few chapters. The events flow naturally both from what Grak hates, and from a storytelling perspective. There are twists to be sure but nothing ever seems untimely, or out of place. The ball rolls at just the right speed it needs to be at any given point in the novel.
The story is told from Grak’s perspective, and it’s through him that the menagerie of supporting cast takes their roles. Each character shines in their own way and dialogue is witty and true to the character Grak envisions them to be. Lago, the tribes chef, for example, is seen as “lazy” because he doesn’t do anything with regard to the hunt and just cooks all day; laziness, is something that Grak hates. In fact most of Grak’s “hate list” are anthropomorphized and show themselves in well-rounded characters.
Fans of historical novels, Machiavellian thrillers, and those just looking for the next gem in their collection are strongly encouraged to try out Things Grak Hates. You won’t be disappointed you did.
*OBS would like to thank the author for supplying a free copy of this title in exchange for an honest review*
Brought to you by OBS reviewer Scott
ourney back to the early days of hunter-gatherer tribes and into the world of Grak. Within Things Grak Hates are all the fine points that go into an entertaining novel: hatred, greed, lust, suspense, intrigue and power. The novel, in its own charming way, describes the rise and fall of Grak, a finicky character who succumbs to his whims more often than he listens to reason; or just listens for that matter. It’s a tale, however, with morals that are not so complicated.
Things Grak Hates explores, through Grak, the dangers of too much power in such a society (in the small; it easily conforms to the larger picture) and the ramifications bestowed, Never preaching a moral high ground, Peter J. Story weaves this rise to power, Machiavellian intrigue, and the dissension in the tribe with flair and panache, The writing style, though a little slow and awkward to begin with – there are three tenses used –third person omniscient, third person active and first person – becomes all too natural the further one gets in the book, eventually becoming ultimately transparent.
It’s this transparency that allows a controversial theme pertaining to government of the people to shine through. The central theme can’t be placed in a “power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely” mold, although a strong argument could be made for this. As events start innocently enough it’s hard to stop the rolling stone, and for a simpleton like Grak, who definitely qualifies for anger management intervention (perhaps a little psychological counselling about his hatreds as well), things spiral out of control almost through or despite his actions.
Peter Story’s plotting, from the beginning, to the climax to the ending, is an impeccable piece of work. Grak hates a lot of things and each “hatred” is both reflected in the chapter’s title and events. As the ball starts down the hill with Grak’s seemingly harmless hatred of olives, it soon gathers enough momentum to make any trivial matter a possibly terrifying conflict in the book. It’s this unpredictability that drives the story forward and makes the reading experience a joy.
The pacing in the novel, as mentioned before starts out slow, but mostly because of the three grammatical tenses used. It rapidly becomes second nature and, as mentioned, transparent after a few chapters. The events flow naturally both from what Grak hates, and from a storytelling perspective. There are twists to be sure but nothing ever seems untimely, or out of place. The ball rolls at just the right speed it needs to be at any given point in the novel.
The story is told from Grak’s perspective, and it’s through him that the menagerie of supporting cast takes their roles. Each character shines in their own way and dialogue is witty and true to the character Grak envisions them to be. Lago, the tribes chef, for example, is seen as “lazy” because he doesn’t do anything with regard to the hunt and just cooks all day; laziness, is something that Grak hates. In fact most of Grak’s “hate list” are anthropomorphized and show themselves in well-rounded characters.
Fans of historical novels, Machiavellian thrillers, and those just looking for the next gem in their collection are strongly encouraged to try out Things Grak Hates. You won’t be disappointed you did.
*OBS would like to thank the author for supplying a free copy of this title in exchange for an honest review*
January 31, 2015
I recently won a copy of Things Grak Hates, the debut novel by Peter J. Story, as a Goodreads Giveaway. I'm glad I did, as Things Grak Hates is the best book I've read in quite awhile AND the first book I've given 5 stars to under my new rating system.
The book is described as "a darkly funny and occasionally horrifying tale about a man who hates olives and the depths of sociopathy." It is so much more than that. The story is told through the eyes of Grak - a selfish, lazy, unskilled and, we come to find out, VERY manipulative prehistoric nomad. His simple hatred of olives, and his attempt to rid them from the food supply, begins a hysterical yet terrifying satiric tale of power, manipulation, greed, politics and belief. Grak goes from simple tribesman to tribe leader with horrifying consequences.
This book explores the human psyche on many levels. Peter J. Story's writing is impressive. His ability to create a story that is f*&king hysterical (yes, I actually found my self laughing out loud) while simultaneously exploring complex social issues is amazing. I would place Things Grak Hates up there with A Confederacy of Dunces and I highly recommend it.
The book is described as "a darkly funny and occasionally horrifying tale about a man who hates olives and the depths of sociopathy." It is so much more than that. The story is told through the eyes of Grak - a selfish, lazy, unskilled and, we come to find out, VERY manipulative prehistoric nomad. His simple hatred of olives, and his attempt to rid them from the food supply, begins a hysterical yet terrifying satiric tale of power, manipulation, greed, politics and belief. Grak goes from simple tribesman to tribe leader with horrifying consequences.
This book explores the human psyche on many levels. Peter J. Story's writing is impressive. His ability to create a story that is f*&king hysterical (yes, I actually found my self laughing out loud) while simultaneously exploring complex social issues is amazing. I would place Things Grak Hates up there with A Confederacy of Dunces and I highly recommend it.
November 28, 2014
This is an unusual book about a really unusual character. Grak is probably one of the most unlikeable characters I’ve encountered; but oddly enough, that didn’t keep me from loving the book.
There seems to be quite a lot of intricate detail worked into the plot line of Things Grak Hates, but I think it’s easy to miss much of it if you’re not paying attention. If you’re reading casually, you’re just going to find a quirky story about a rather pathetic individual. As I read though, I noticed a number of threads woven through the main plot line, each of which tells an interesting story on its own.
One particularly interesting thread – and one that was pretty obvious – was the satirical take on our current political system. Without giving too much away, Grak is a power-grubbing megalomaniac. In his quest for total dominance and control, Grak is forced to implement a crude (and purely nominal) democracy. The parody of our current political system – especially the two-party system – was hilarious, and spot-on. To me, Things Grak Hates clearly highlighted how our modern political systems are entirely self-serving and only nominally democratic.
There seems to be quite a lot of intricate detail worked into the plot line of Things Grak Hates, but I think it’s easy to miss much of it if you’re not paying attention. If you’re reading casually, you’re just going to find a quirky story about a rather pathetic individual. As I read though, I noticed a number of threads woven through the main plot line, each of which tells an interesting story on its own.
One particularly interesting thread – and one that was pretty obvious – was the satirical take on our current political system. Without giving too much away, Grak is a power-grubbing megalomaniac. In his quest for total dominance and control, Grak is forced to implement a crude (and purely nominal) democracy. The parody of our current political system – especially the two-party system – was hilarious, and spot-on. To me, Things Grak Hates clearly highlighted how our modern political systems are entirely self-serving and only nominally democratic.
November 8, 2014
Grak hates olives and stews over it until he hatches a plan to get the cook banished from the tribe. He soon figures out how to use his devious nature to gain power and rid his world of things he hates. What he doesn't count on is that, instead of simplifying his life, his actions make it more complicated and render his desires harder to get than ever.
This book starts out light and humorous, but gets dark halfway in. It ends up being an allegory of any type of power--political, religious, business--and how the competing goals of those influenced by that power cause leaders to commit terrible acts in the pursuit of their goals and to retain their position. Peter Story handled the sleight of hand masterfully, drawing me in under the guise of a fun and mindless tale, yet left me pondering the psychological transformation of many of history's influential leaders from Julius Caesar to Torquemada to Kenneth Lay
This book starts out light and humorous, but gets dark halfway in. It ends up being an allegory of any type of power--political, religious, business--and how the competing goals of those influenced by that power cause leaders to commit terrible acts in the pursuit of their goals and to retain their position. Peter Story handled the sleight of hand masterfully, drawing me in under the guise of a fun and mindless tale, yet left me pondering the psychological transformation of many of history's influential leaders from Julius Caesar to Torquemada to Kenneth Lay
November 20, 2013
If you're going to read a book this year, make it Things Grak Hates. Peter J Story has crafted a tale that delves into the human condition and examines the course man takes when left to his own devices. In his uniquely wry, witty style, the author tackles the concepts of power and politics, religion and redemption, and the most unfortunate aspects of human nature.
This is a thoughtful book - a refreshing change from much that I've seen and read lately. It's the kind of book that you'll read two or three times because you'll discover something fresh and thought-provoking at each go-round. It's cynical, yet hopeful. Simple, yet incredibly nuanced. If you're up for a thoroughly enjoyable challenge, put this book on your to-read list today.
This is a thoughtful book - a refreshing change from much that I've seen and read lately. It's the kind of book that you'll read two or three times because you'll discover something fresh and thought-provoking at each go-round. It's cynical, yet hopeful. Simple, yet incredibly nuanced. If you're up for a thoroughly enjoyable challenge, put this book on your to-read list today.
November 29, 2013
Things Grak Hates employs off-the-wall humor and satire to examine psychological and political themes. It reminds me a bit of George Orwell's Animal Farm due to it's satire and the exploration of the evolution of political problems. It also reminds me of Bradbury using fiction to analyse problems in society. This book seems unique in the subtle and humorous way these elements are explored. The book has dark elements as well as spots of humor. Things Grak Hates is well written. The story flows well, the writing is tight, and you won't have to suffer through grammatical and spelling errors.
November 1, 2014
4.5 Stars
A great satirical story told with emotion and humor.
Starting with an event caused by Grak’s hate for olives – and his charming personality – we watch him lying and manipulating his way to power. Never satisfied and always looking for new ways to increase his power, we experience Grak’s descent towards the darkest depths of his mind. And we love it.
An original story, intelligently woven and well written, with a pleasant rhythm and great humor. I definitely recommend this book to anyone who enjoys dry humor and satire.
I became a fan of Peter J. Story’s writing and can’t wait to read more from him.
A great satirical story told with emotion and humor.
Starting with an event caused by Grak’s hate for olives – and his charming personality – we watch him lying and manipulating his way to power. Never satisfied and always looking for new ways to increase his power, we experience Grak’s descent towards the darkest depths of his mind. And we love it.
An original story, intelligently woven and well written, with a pleasant rhythm and great humor. I definitely recommend this book to anyone who enjoys dry humor and satire.
I became a fan of Peter J. Story’s writing and can’t wait to read more from him.
November 24, 2014
I LOVED Grak’s Inner Dialogue
This is a hilarious mashup between the style of George Saunders and the character of Ignatius P. Reilly. The author breaks a lot of the conventional “rules” surrounding literature, but he does so in a surprisingly masterful way. For a debut novel, I’d say this one is a homerun.
I loved all of Grak’s inner dialogue. He’s constantly talking to himself, and the author really captured realistic thought patterns. Grak struggles over ways to get people to notice his (less than masterful) craftsmanship, he agonizes over how to look “leaderly”, and the whole time, he’s carrying on this hilarious conversation with himself in his head.
This is a hilarious mashup between the style of George Saunders and the character of Ignatius P. Reilly. The author breaks a lot of the conventional “rules” surrounding literature, but he does so in a surprisingly masterful way. For a debut novel, I’d say this one is a homerun.
I loved all of Grak’s inner dialogue. He’s constantly talking to himself, and the author really captured realistic thought patterns. Grak struggles over ways to get people to notice his (less than masterful) craftsmanship, he agonizes over how to look “leaderly”, and the whole time, he’s carrying on this hilarious conversation with himself in his head.
May 18, 2015
I met Peter at a book festival in Houston and picked up his book on a whim. The premise seemed pretty clever and the author was funny and entertaining (plus, he has pugs).
Now, this isn’t typical reading material for me. I read mostly classics – books that have stood the test of time. I’m usually a bit wary of contemporary work (even when it’s on the “Bestseller” lists); but I have to say that I’d be very surprised if this book doesn’t eventually become a classic in its own right.
Things Grak Hates hits all the right notes – funny, quirky, thoughtful, and smart. Others have said it, and I’ll reaffirm: this book belongs on your bookshelf.
Now, this isn’t typical reading material for me. I read mostly classics – books that have stood the test of time. I’m usually a bit wary of contemporary work (even when it’s on the “Bestseller” lists); but I have to say that I’d be very surprised if this book doesn’t eventually become a classic in its own right.
Things Grak Hates hits all the right notes – funny, quirky, thoughtful, and smart. Others have said it, and I’ll reaffirm: this book belongs on your bookshelf.
November 7, 2017
Every now and then, a book comes out and hits you right between the eyes. This one certainly did. Poignant, pithy, and brutally honest about human nature. None of us want to see ourselves in Grak ... but if we're honest, I think there IS a little Grak in each of us.
Highly recommend this author and look forward to future work.
Highly recommend this author and look forward to future work.
April 8, 2017
has heart
Gentle humor about human nature. Fun read. Free of genre tropes. Free of genre. Looking forward to more from this author.
Gentle humor about human nature. Fun read. Free of genre tropes. Free of genre. Looking forward to more from this author.
May 12, 2015
On few occasions have I been willing to put down a book unfinished. This book is one of those occasions.
I met Peter J Story at a book festival in San Antonio, Texas. The over all premise of a pre-historic man finding power and using it to help his people was very appealing. Skimming the cover, a few pages, the overall physical feel, the texture, of the book, I found myself captivated. It also helped that Peter J Story is pretty cool (at least he was for the five minutes my wife and I hung out with him at his booth, he also accepted my Facebook Friend Request, so kudos there, as well).
I disclosed my contact info to Peter in anticipation of an audio copy, tucked the book in the free bag I got at the event, and continued the discovery of other authors. A day or so after the purchase I put aside another book (The Serpent of Venice by Christopher Moore) to embark on Grak's list of despised things.
As I said, few times have I wanted to throw a book into a pit of flames and watch the flames destroy the words in a reaction best described by Ray Bradbury.
Okay, so it's not Story, or even the story, that should be scorched, but Grak, the pro and antagonist. I have never experienced a character so gut wrenchingly annoying and stupidly misguided that I seriously thought about destroying the book. There have been books I have disliked, characters who wear lazy, misguided, or simply too stupid to deserve representation in word form. Story, however, succeeds in surpassing such characters with his creation of Grak.
Grak represents the worst in any leader. As I read his attempts at leadership I thought about other famous world leaders: Hitler, Stalin, myself (fantasies, not reality), and other political and financial leaders either still in power or still alive with enough power to find and quiet me for me to name specifically. Grak has the touch of influence that can get things done, but the ignorance and personal focus to get things done wrong. As has been seen, men in our history lessons had great ambitions, great ideas, great power, and the ability to get so focused on it that ultimately they failed. Grak is the same.
*Sigh*
How does one truly express the drastic nature of a character without revealing too much?
Wait! This is a review, not a summary or book report. Thus, my expressing flaming dislike of a character is good enough!
Grak sucks!
Story, however, is totally awesome. The book, as a whole, is wonderful. There is enough information on the environment to create location, but not so much to drown out the story. There are connections to be made with modern issues, but none to be distracting. Story keeps the focus on the story, on Grak and his failed leadership. If ever there is a course on being a dictator, Things Grak Hates should be in the syllabus.
Story is really good at having the characters create the mood and show me what needs to be seen. After I get through a few other books, Story's will be a rare repeat read. To express how much I enjoy the novel let me share something: My wife and I are book worms; we have a room devoted to books and book shelves with a few boxes of books and books on the floor. We can't really use it as a library because there is only enough walking space to go for a book you want, but only if you know where it is. We also have some book shelves in our bedroom. On those shelves are our preferred authors, novels, and series: Harry Potter*, Jasper Fforde, Christopher Moore, Terry Pratchet, Lois McMaster Bujold, Gregory Maguire, and various sock creature creation craft books. Story, and unfortunately, Grak, have earned a tuck amongst the others. Any future publications by Story will already have a place as well.
Story, you should be proud. Your book is in a place few authors get to. You have surpassed Robert Heinlein, Ray Bradbury, various manga serieses, J. R. R. Tolkein, and a vast collection of Hitler/Nazi/Genocide and serial killer non-fiction (the last two exclusively my wife's and the reason I am concerned about being on a government watch list).
*I reference Harry Potter the character in Rowling's novels and not Rowling because I haven't read her other book.
I met Peter J Story at a book festival in San Antonio, Texas. The over all premise of a pre-historic man finding power and using it to help his people was very appealing. Skimming the cover, a few pages, the overall physical feel, the texture, of the book, I found myself captivated. It also helped that Peter J Story is pretty cool (at least he was for the five minutes my wife and I hung out with him at his booth, he also accepted my Facebook Friend Request, so kudos there, as well).
I disclosed my contact info to Peter in anticipation of an audio copy, tucked the book in the free bag I got at the event, and continued the discovery of other authors. A day or so after the purchase I put aside another book (The Serpent of Venice by Christopher Moore) to embark on Grak's list of despised things.
As I said, few times have I wanted to throw a book into a pit of flames and watch the flames destroy the words in a reaction best described by Ray Bradbury.
Okay, so it's not Story, or even the story, that should be scorched, but Grak, the pro and antagonist. I have never experienced a character so gut wrenchingly annoying and stupidly misguided that I seriously thought about destroying the book. There have been books I have disliked, characters who wear lazy, misguided, or simply too stupid to deserve representation in word form. Story, however, succeeds in surpassing such characters with his creation of Grak.
Grak represents the worst in any leader. As I read his attempts at leadership I thought about other famous world leaders: Hitler, Stalin, myself (fantasies, not reality), and other political and financial leaders either still in power or still alive with enough power to find and quiet me for me to name specifically. Grak has the touch of influence that can get things done, but the ignorance and personal focus to get things done wrong. As has been seen, men in our history lessons had great ambitions, great ideas, great power, and the ability to get so focused on it that ultimately they failed. Grak is the same.
*Sigh*
How does one truly express the drastic nature of a character without revealing too much?
Wait! This is a review, not a summary or book report. Thus, my expressing flaming dislike of a character is good enough!
Grak sucks!
Story, however, is totally awesome. The book, as a whole, is wonderful. There is enough information on the environment to create location, but not so much to drown out the story. There are connections to be made with modern issues, but none to be distracting. Story keeps the focus on the story, on Grak and his failed leadership. If ever there is a course on being a dictator, Things Grak Hates should be in the syllabus.
Story is really good at having the characters create the mood and show me what needs to be seen. After I get through a few other books, Story's will be a rare repeat read. To express how much I enjoy the novel let me share something: My wife and I are book worms; we have a room devoted to books and book shelves with a few boxes of books and books on the floor. We can't really use it as a library because there is only enough walking space to go for a book you want, but only if you know where it is. We also have some book shelves in our bedroom. On those shelves are our preferred authors, novels, and series: Harry Potter*, Jasper Fforde, Christopher Moore, Terry Pratchet, Lois McMaster Bujold, Gregory Maguire, and various sock creature creation craft books. Story, and unfortunately, Grak, have earned a tuck amongst the others. Any future publications by Story will already have a place as well.
Story, you should be proud. Your book is in a place few authors get to. You have surpassed Robert Heinlein, Ray Bradbury, various manga serieses, J. R. R. Tolkein, and a vast collection of Hitler/Nazi/Genocide and serial killer non-fiction (the last two exclusively my wife's and the reason I am concerned about being on a government watch list).
*I reference Harry Potter the character in Rowling's novels and not Rowling because I haven't read her other book.
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November 5, 2014It’s interesting to note that big events often hinge on seemingly inconsequential things. Small, otherwise unimportant factors can set off a chain reaction – and in some cases, this chain reaction affects many, many more than one would ever anticipate.
Such is the case with Grak. His journey begins on a rather innocuous note. He hates olives. Unfortunately for Grak, olives are a consistent feature on the menu of his nomadic tribe. While meat supplies fluctuate, olives are pretty much a constant. And this brings nothing but grief for Grak.
While most of us (at least the non-sociopathic group) would grin and bear this minor inconvenience, Grak sets out to change things. Naturally, his efforts at olive eradication start small, beginning with little lies and tentative attempts at manipulation. Before long, however, Grak realizes that he has quite a knack for manipulation, deceit, and intimidation. The once leaderless tribe quickly succumbs to Grak’s “leadership,” and events spiral further and further out of control.
As others have mentioned, this is not a comfortable book. While the author’s wry sense of humor makes for an amusing read, Grak’s actions and attitudes strike a little too close to home. While it’s rare to find someone so completely sociopathic and shamelessly narcissistic as Grak, there’s still enough of these traits in most of us to make a reader cringe.
This isn’t light reading, but it’s definitely worth the read. If nothing else, Things Grak Hates is going to make you think about your own character, morals, and ethics. Of course, Mr. Story’s clever prose, interesting ideas, and dry humor make for a solid, enjoyable novel.
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for a fair review.
Such is the case with Grak. His journey begins on a rather innocuous note. He hates olives. Unfortunately for Grak, olives are a consistent feature on the menu of his nomadic tribe. While meat supplies fluctuate, olives are pretty much a constant. And this brings nothing but grief for Grak.
While most of us (at least the non-sociopathic group) would grin and bear this minor inconvenience, Grak sets out to change things. Naturally, his efforts at olive eradication start small, beginning with little lies and tentative attempts at manipulation. Before long, however, Grak realizes that he has quite a knack for manipulation, deceit, and intimidation. The once leaderless tribe quickly succumbs to Grak’s “leadership,” and events spiral further and further out of control.
As others have mentioned, this is not a comfortable book. While the author’s wry sense of humor makes for an amusing read, Grak’s actions and attitudes strike a little too close to home. While it’s rare to find someone so completely sociopathic and shamelessly narcissistic as Grak, there’s still enough of these traits in most of us to make a reader cringe.
This isn’t light reading, but it’s definitely worth the read. If nothing else, Things Grak Hates is going to make you think about your own character, morals, and ethics. Of course, Mr. Story’s clever prose, interesting ideas, and dry humor make for a solid, enjoyable novel.
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for a fair review.
November 11, 2014
As a society, we tend to take it a little easier on victims. In many cases, we’ll take horrible acts almost in stride and simply chalk those acts up to the difficulties faced by the perpetrator. This seems to be the case with Grak. This neurotic nomad obviously had a rough go of things as a child. He didn’t really have any desirable skills, and even his best attempts (at building, crafting, etc.) were maligned and mocked. He experienced great loss, was the brunt of bullying, and dealt with tragedy. Thus, his community takes his rather awful nature in stride for a long time.
Of course, everyone has a breaking point. Some arrive at that point sooner than others, but eventually, Grak does push everyone too far. However, the author poses a very intriguing dilemma. Obviously, a victim deserves care, comfort and sympathy. But when does sympathy give way to tolerance of awful behavior? When do we hold a victim culpable for their own actions?
I don’t assume to know the answers here, but it’s certainly a topic worth exploring further – and Peter J Story does so quite well in this book. It was quite intriguing to see Grak’s gradual decline, and it was more interesting still to see how his descent was (in some ways) sped along by the well-meaning actions of those around him.
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
Of course, everyone has a breaking point. Some arrive at that point sooner than others, but eventually, Grak does push everyone too far. However, the author poses a very intriguing dilemma. Obviously, a victim deserves care, comfort and sympathy. But when does sympathy give way to tolerance of awful behavior? When do we hold a victim culpable for their own actions?
I don’t assume to know the answers here, but it’s certainly a topic worth exploring further – and Peter J Story does so quite well in this book. It was quite intriguing to see Grak’s gradual decline, and it was more interesting still to see how his descent was (in some ways) sped along by the well-meaning actions of those around him.
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
May 4, 2015
This is a really good book. It reminds me of Animal Farm, in a sense, as an exploration of how dictatorships form, and how good intentions lead to despotism. It starts off amusing, with Grak a lovably misanthropic protagonist. As the story goes on, it becomes less and less funny, and Grak becomes less and less likable. There's always a degree of sympathy for him, but it's a reluctant sympathy, as he does become a truly awful person, as any dictator inevitably must in order to hold onto power. The story also explores the formation of religions, and the inevitable fanatical branches of any religion.
The writing is excellent. It's a third-person limited present-tense narrative. We get Grak's feelings on events as they happen. The present-tense style ensures we're getting his immediate feelings, not his feelings filtered by time. It lets the reader know more fully exactly why Grak does the things he does. This allows him to be both more and less sympathetic. More important, it lets us see the extent of his self-delusions.
On a very minor side note, there is a lesbian couple in the book. Always nice to see that sort of thing show up.
And finally, I do agree with Grak: Olives are terrible.
The writing is excellent. It's a third-person limited present-tense narrative. We get Grak's feelings on events as they happen. The present-tense style ensures we're getting his immediate feelings, not his feelings filtered by time. It lets the reader know more fully exactly why Grak does the things he does. This allows him to be both more and less sympathetic. More important, it lets us see the extent of his self-delusions.
On a very minor side note, there is a lesbian couple in the book. Always nice to see that sort of thing show up.
And finally, I do agree with Grak: Olives are terrible.
November 20, 2014
In Peter Story’s first novel he tells the story of life through the hyper-focused eyes of a Nomad named Grak. The story takes place in primitive time before recorded history. Grak belongs to a tribe of tent dwellers.
The author gives us a very detailed look of life through the mind, and heart of Grak, who is honest in expressing his hatreds (of olives and cooking and lazy people and whiners, etc) and his fears and odd pleasures. Through his rise to leadership he turns out to be a lying, scheming manipulator who rises and falls from leadership - as things don't always turn out as planned. Grak, who was ‘blinded by his selfishness,’ suffered the consequences of his manipulative behavior.
Mr. Story put together an interesting book for ‘thinkers’ as the issues in this book parallel our political leadership today. It is a book you can read over and over and get more out of it each time you read it.
I appreciated Mr. Story’s talent in putting together a good story and I will look forward to his next interesting read.
The author gives us a very detailed look of life through the mind, and heart of Grak, who is honest in expressing his hatreds (of olives and cooking and lazy people and whiners, etc) and his fears and odd pleasures. Through his rise to leadership he turns out to be a lying, scheming manipulator who rises and falls from leadership - as things don't always turn out as planned. Grak, who was ‘blinded by his selfishness,’ suffered the consequences of his manipulative behavior.
Mr. Story put together an interesting book for ‘thinkers’ as the issues in this book parallel our political leadership today. It is a book you can read over and over and get more out of it each time you read it.
I appreciated Mr. Story’s talent in putting together a good story and I will look forward to his next interesting read.
November 1, 2014
I hate GRAK! He sees most everyone else as lazy, but he is the lazy one. He takes leadership of his tribe so he doesn't have to do anything. The tribe before this did not have a leader, they just all worked together. He manipulates people, actually he is amazing how he gets away with what he does. In the context of someone having more power, which he does by being the leader now, you can see the age old need to keep everyone in line and the beginning of beatings and discipline. This could be written in any day, how people step over others, take their ideas and make it seem like it came from them and death to those who might expose them. Grak is a little crazy too. As I said, I hate GRAK! How long has it been since you have had such an emotion to a character?
I received this book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
I received this book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
November 18, 2014
This is, hands down, the best book I've read all year.
Grak seizes control of his tribe after an ill-conceived plan to remove olives from their dinners nearly kills everyone. But what will Grak do with his new-found power? And how will he hang onto it as difficulties constantly arise, from doubting tribesfolk to pesky whiners with their petty "famine" complaints.
The story is darkly humorous and occasionally horrifying, as it invites us to ponder how sociopaths seize power and the ways we permit them to, the ways fear and rumors turn us against each other and permit the worst atrocities. Grak is a petty Stalin, and his ultimate fate--well, I can't give that away.
My only complaint is that the first few pages are slow. It picks up magnificently after that, and unable to put it down, I finished the whole book in only two days.
Grak seizes control of his tribe after an ill-conceived plan to remove olives from their dinners nearly kills everyone. But what will Grak do with his new-found power? And how will he hang onto it as difficulties constantly arise, from doubting tribesfolk to pesky whiners with their petty "famine" complaints.
The story is darkly humorous and occasionally horrifying, as it invites us to ponder how sociopaths seize power and the ways we permit them to, the ways fear and rumors turn us against each other and permit the worst atrocities. Grak is a petty Stalin, and his ultimate fate--well, I can't give that away.
My only complaint is that the first few pages are slow. It picks up magnificently after that, and unable to put it down, I finished the whole book in only two days.
November 23, 2014
Grak’s Controlling Nature Ends Up Controlling Him
This was quite an interesting look into the mind of a controlling, manipulative personality. Grak doesn’t really have any real useful skills, but he does stumble upon a knack for manipulation. Because his tribe is naively trusting, he’s able to just bend them to his will. When he runs into any resistance, a bit of torture (or “discipline”) gets people right back in line.
What I find really interesting though, is that ultimately, Grak’s controlling nature ends up controlling him. His (somewhat) innocent efforts to avoid olives spin way out of control and Grak gets swept up the whirlwind. It seems like by the end, he’s really just struggling to keep his head above water (both literally and figuratively, heh).
Overall, a really interesting book. NOT light reading, by any means, but excellent through and through.
This was quite an interesting look into the mind of a controlling, manipulative personality. Grak doesn’t really have any real useful skills, but he does stumble upon a knack for manipulation. Because his tribe is naively trusting, he’s able to just bend them to his will. When he runs into any resistance, a bit of torture (or “discipline”) gets people right back in line.
What I find really interesting though, is that ultimately, Grak’s controlling nature ends up controlling him. His (somewhat) innocent efforts to avoid olives spin way out of control and Grak gets swept up the whirlwind. It seems like by the end, he’s really just struggling to keep his head above water (both literally and figuratively, heh).
Overall, a really interesting book. NOT light reading, by any means, but excellent through and through.
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