Exiles is a wonderful play, it really is. The Ibsen influences are obvious and for the most part welcome. Refreshingly liberal and open in its ideas, Exiles is a play that is well worth the reading. With some changes, Exiles could have had been a masterpiece, but it is pretty impressive as it is. What changes you might ask? It is hard for me to put a finger of it, but this play did feel a bit unfinished. Perhaps it just needed more work and thought. Exiles has the potential without doubt, it has some wonderful dialogues but I feel something is missing. It may be that Joyce's talent was principally that of a novelist. Drama needs tragedy, confrontation and you know 'drama'. Even in its more modern forms, drama needs a conflict, a moment of intensive feeling.
The Ibsen influence in drama is obvious and as I said, for most part it is handled well. However, it is not natural in sense that it completely fits the story. By that I mean that the feminist issues are a bit unfinished. Ibsen did a better job with female characterization that Joyce. I do not mind Joyce looking up to Ibsen but he should have worked on his dramatist skills a bit more or offered a more complete view of his principal female character in this play. Joyce is autobiographical in this one, not something that can be completely merged with Ibsen influences, taken they were not a single individual.
Moreover, Exiles is a play about a great many things. There are many themes in Exiles, perhaps too many: liberation, feminism, Ireland, religion, autobiographical things, morality. The list goes on. in my opinion, Joyce is too analytic to be a really great dramatist. He is a wonderful writer, but he didn't realized his true potential in this play. Perhaps he just needed more writing practice, for this play is quite strong, even with its flaws. Joyce did a great job writing this one, he infused it with a great many interesting ideas and thoughts, but something is still missing. A dramatist should not explain, he should show. That being said, I believe that anyone who is a fan of Joyce will look besides things like that and be attracted to the subtle meaning behind Joyce words.
I cannot picture it on stage, but that does not bother me, I've loved many "only to read" plays. Perhaps with some editing and rewriting Exiles could have been really great. ( Here I go with the maybes: If it had been a great success would it have been edited and improved? Ah, questions, questions). I cannot help wondering what it was that the critics of the time resented to this play. Could it have been the liberal ideas? Although there is nothing shocking about Exiles for today’s standards, there are lines that will make moralist dislike it, such as:
ROBERT: I am shore that no law made by man is sacred before the impulse of passion. Who made us for one only? It is a crime against our won being if we are so. There is no law before impulses. Laws are for slaves…
To me, Exiles was quite an enchanting read, even if I did not understand the characters all the time, even if I had to read it more than once to sort of understand what was going on, even if there are some faults in it. There are lines in the play that are so good that the reading of the play can be justified even if the rest was utter rubbish- and it is not. Joyce is not afraid to criticize himself in Richard. The character of Richard is so clearly biographical (and in that sense similar to Stephen and other semi-autobiographical characters Joyce created) that I have to wonder has he reproached himself with words he put in Bertha’s mouth:
BERTHA : “ All is to be for you. I am to appear false and cruel to everyone except to you. Because you take advantage of my simplicity as you did- the first time.”
There are parts in the dialogue between Richard and Stephen where the influence of Ibsen is obvious such as:
ROBERT: There are moment of sheer madness when we feel an intense passion for women.
We see nothing. We thing of nothing. Only to posses her. Call it brutal, bestial, what you will.
RICHARD: I am afraid that longing to posses a women is not love.
However, there are dialogues that are more true to Joyce, that in other words raise difficult questions, cruel truths and make you think. Ah, those thoughts that make his writing wonderful, I don't even mind the fact that I'm feeling sad when and after I read them. The exiles is not without pathos, it is not a play that should have not been a play but rather a play that could have been better. Nevertheless, it is well worth a read. I'm sure any lover of literature would appreciate it, for it is a fine piece of writing.