I've been on a A.S. Harrington reading binge. All her Regencies have a 2014 copyright date so I have no idea when she wrote each individual story. (There are six of them.) I've enjoyed the five I've read so far, including this one, (JUST LANTA is on my Kindle still unread) and have been impressed by the author's writing skills and excellent dialogue. Most of the books have 4- to 5-star writing in them, but there's always some plot device or character's behavior that keeps the whole read from being a 5-star one.
This one has a lighthearted feel to it (for the most part, although there's some adventure and suspense involving spies and French soldiers). Young Lady Augusta, in the care of her aunt and uncle, is of the peerage but a penniless orphan. Her aunt and uncle are planning to marry her off to a rich (and, she believes, old and unpleasant) earl. So Augusta runs off to escape to Paris, where she plans to set herself up as a courtesan. (Don't ask why she thinks this is a better option.)
Justin St. Clare is a handsome, rich, 30-something earl. His family are trying to get him married to a young, penniless woman of the peerage who's related to his sister's husband To avoid this, he sets off for Paris. (Don't ask why he can't just say, "Leave me alone. I'll marry whomever and whenever I decide.")
So both characters are on the same boat from Dover to France. She has adopted the persona of widowed Mrs. Barry. He is not using his title, just calling himself St. Clare. Sparks fly as their personalities clash. He decides to take her under his wing, recognizing that she's a very innocent widow who doesn't seem to know what she's doing. She doesn't want his help. They are both unaware of each other's identity. She remains ignorant for the whole book, until the denouement, although he twigs on to who she is much earlier. You do know by now who they are, right?
And so it goes. They have a big adventure, complete with a highwayman, spies, French soldiers, a stash of gold which must be kept out of Napoleon's hands, bodily injuries, and also life in glitzy 1815 French society. It's fun, but because I've read several Harrington novels now, I compare this one unfavorably to the others with regard to the quality of the writing. What are the problems for me?
1) The dialogue is not as clever and fun.
2) The characters are only sketched out broadly. More caricatures than characters, they needed more development.
3) The secondary romance of a Harrington book is usually as good as, sometimes better than, the main romance. This one was just so-so, probably having to do with the lack of depth of all the characters.
4) The writing is clunkier and less polished than in her other books and there are too many grammar errors for me. One I particularly dislike is the use of "whomever" when "whoever" is the correct form. That happened several times in this story. There were more grammar problems, mostly of the usual variety, such as "lie/lay", etc.
5) I did not appreciate the H's lack of disclosure of his identity, leaving the unsuspecting heroine to suffer until the final pages of the book. Not kind.
I wish it were possible to know the order in which the author wrote her six unrelated stories. I'd like to think this is an early one and that she had polished up her writing skills for the others, rather than to think she devolved in this one. Having said that, I will also say this was a fun, light farce, a nice escape read, and not too expensive, even available free on KU.