And in any era… there are always idiots eager to find a reason to go to war.
To say that the mystery central to this story does nothing for me is a gross understatement, honestly. Having magic abilities flying around and blue squirrels or whatever totally undercuts any possible suspense from figuring out what happened.
Chloe’s shrewd gambler instincts should be enough to carry this along. There’s a potentially great scene where she tries to use Tarot cards to divine information, relying on her observational talents to figure her quarry out.
Instead, one of those blue squirrels runs off with a card and disrupts the whole thing. To call this unsatisfying is a grave disservice to the very concept of unsatisfying. The story just loves to pull me out when it should be drawing me in.
Chloe and Erald also continue to feel like a discount version of Maomao and Jinshi from The Apothecary Diaries. Erald in particular is incredibly dull and more of a face than a realized character. Chloe does get somewhat more interesting as the volume moves forward, mercifully.
The problem is that when the mystery isn’t working you don’t have these two playing off one another well enough to make up the difference so this sags more than once during most of its page count.
Yet it decides to zoom out and examine the politics at large in the realm and suddenly this got so much more interesting. It was genuinely going to be my last volume of this, but the final chapter or so made me rethink my choice.
The history of this country is built on refugees and also no small amount of misogyny, plus that entirely too relevant quote that lead off the review. Suddenly there are factions and the threat of war and an indirect point about the futility of revenge. If the story had been this engaging from the start it would have been way better.
Chloe similarly goes from ruminating about the church’s excesses to crusading hard for a small boy she meets and this energy is everything that I’ve been missing from the story to this point. We even get a little suspense within the main plot that works pretty darn well, even if it is rooted in magic chicanery.
So, I still think the mystery is fairly underwhelming, but we finally get something interesting surrounding that. It’s an uneasy truce that I’ve reached with the material, but it’s no lie to say that the last 20-30 pages were better than anything so far in the series.
3.5 stars - little extra for doing such a good job at the end, but we’re still not holding my interest with the core premise at all, so… what can you do? Hopefully next volume has more of the good stuff in it.
There is nothing wrong with this series. There is also, so far, nothing wildly extraordinary about it.
Volume 2 still feels very much like we’re in the middle of the world-building phase. The story takes its time explaining how this world works, and that inevitably means that a bit of plot momentum is sacrificed so the reader can get properly oriented. In that regard, I think the manga does exactly what it needs to do. It’s fine as it is, and I’m still curious enough to see where the story will take us next.
That said, depth is still a bit lacking—both in the characters and in the overall plot. We don’t get much more than the continued suggestion that everyone could potentially have a motive for being the murderer, which is intriguing, but not yet particularly layered. At this point, it feels less like a complex mystery and more like the groundwork for one.
The vibe reminds me a lot of Murder, She Wrote—but with younger characters, manga aesthetics, a fantasy setting, and the possibility of a love story quietly simmering in the background. Whether that romance will actually go anywhere remains to be seen.
All in all, there’s not much more to report yet. The story hasn’t fully spread its wings, but it hasn’t lost me either. Consider this a solid “I’m still watching you” kind of volume.
Erald and Chloe back at it again, their banter and chemisty just as whimsical as ever. Ines the assistant to Erald so funny, she's nonchalant yet loves Laz the blue squirrel. The mystery is deepening, I'm suspicious of every candidate now, even little sweet animal communicator Monique. Salome is also strange, I think she might have been closer to Ciro than we know. We now know there were two people involved in Ciro's murder, including a Paladin, but who, and why? Erald is definitely hiding something. I love Chloe's kindness and determination, especially with the children at the orphanages. However, her actions have gotten her in trouble, will her true intentions and identity finally be revealed?
While I enjoy the series well enough, I don’t find it captivating. The central mystery is fine. The cast of suspects are fine. However, something in the pacing and exposition feels a little off to me. Or at least, not quite to my liking. The most interesting bits (imo) are the moments where Chloe uses her keen skill of observation to analyze others and gamble with her social plays, but these moments are few and far between. This volume expands on the world history as it relates to the church and the blessed maidens, but not by much. I’ll probably try the third volume, but I’m pretty sure it’ll be my last for the series.
Maybe they are trying to rush cause there is so much world building and info dumping in this volume. I also don’t particularly care for either main character. I will keep reading my library gets it but I don’t think I would seek this out otherwise.