On her eighteenth birthday, she anticipated a rite of passage, not a sentence. Destined to bond with both the formidable Alpha and his loyal Beta, she becomes entangled in a web of power and passion she never sought. The pack's whispers reveal a cruel their hearts yearn for another, leaving her an outsider within her own fate.
Yet, amidst the shadows of rejection, the Alpha's intense gaze ignites a spark within her, while the Beta's gentle touch offers solace. As ancient secrets unravel and alliances shift, she must navigate a treacherous path of self-discovery. Will she succumb to the destiny others have chosen, or forge her own path against the tides of tradition?
Dive into a captivating tale of love, betrayal, and the quest for identity in a world where fate holds the strongest leash.
ugh this had such good potential especially for the plot BUT I couldn’t get over how flip floppy the FMC was. They confess to her that they want her and she gets rid of her memories but throws it in their face that they didn’t want her when that was the last thing they told her was that they did. Not to mention it didn’t take them long to come to the conclusion they only wanted her and they didn’t treat her poorly so the excuses she made were not valid. I feel like she was with every male in the story which didn’t make sense since she had two mates. She was kissing a vampire she just met but then later on they decided it was just friendship? Then she’s with MC brother even after getting her memories back..? She knows he’s insecure and it’s very obvious he doesn’t want to share her but she still decides it’s a smart idea even tho when it comes to her mates she won’t be able to help herself. I know his wolf claimed her after some time but wouldn’t he have his own mate? I feel like he should’ve had his own mate and they could’ve coparented all their kids together he deserved that with all his insecurities. I think the plot definitely got lost because the title is the alpha and his beta not the alpha his beta and his brother.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
DNF — I only picked this up because I accidentally watched the ongoing AI-slop adaptation, which somehow tricked me into reading this equally sloppy source material.
There are a lot of things I have issues with in this story, but what irked me the most was the fact that the OW slept with three of the main guys, which later led to an absurd amount of paternity drama (made even worse by the fact that they all conveniently had "amnesia"). It was messy in the worst possible way lol.
Honestly, I felt terrible for the heroine. She wasn't just everyone's second choice tho. Worse, every single one of the male leads genuinely loved the OW despite her thoroughly unlikeable personality. Then the OW died in childbirth, which only further solidified her martyr status. And did I mention she also gave birth to TWINS? (The heroine could never! 🤌)
I've read plenty of stories where the heroine comes second, but this one somehow made it feel even more humiliating. She ended up collecting ALL the OW's sloppy seconds (and a couple of guys who didn't stick around long enough to even be relevant.)
You have to pay for a mini series. The characters are ok. The alpha and beta are stuck up. I prefer lanie to Alice. And we all know what is going to happen. Alice will treat lanie like a servant and the only way the alpha and beta will be able to sleep with Alice is thinking of lanie. Do better
My only concern is often in the book it is obvious that the author gets mixed up with who is speaking and who is narrating the character which makes it confusing when names are accidentally switched. Also, there are a lot of grammar errors. If you can look past this, it so far is good.
The story was fast-paced and kept me engaged, but this might be part AI or needs a good editor. Names keep getting mixed up and a few things are repeated