Sit down, lock in - this is going to be lengthy, and unabashedly, unapologetically honest.
I am, admittedly, a KG Reuss fan after discovering her by way of the Boys of Chapel Crest. Now, when I received the notification this book had been released, I realized it was only available in paperback format, so I bought it on Amazon immediately.
Let’s start with the obvious. There are significant typos, to the extent that the one on page 134 made me wheeze laugh. “I responded instinctively, my body pressing into his, my fingers twisting in his SHIT…” Yes, it said shit instead of shirt. That paired with about five others led me to the conclusion that proofreading was haphazardly done or completely skipped altogether. Also, the pictures…why? Like, we have imaginations…you could just simply describe them to us, I didn’t need a big ass picture of each of them at the start of EVERY chapter.
Moving on, I’m not sure if this book was meant to be enemies to lovers, or a bully trope? Like, Elena, is the FMC, and the two MMC, Adrian and Troy, are her older stepbrothers (not significant age gap). Apparently they’ve “hated” her from the start, because….? Because her mom married their dad? Because she’s pretty? I have no fucking idea, and neither will you. But hey, it doesn’t last long, both MMCs “struggle” (and yes, I say it very loosely) with their true feelings for her within the first couple chapters of the book, with one of them talking about how the FMC is actually antisocial toward them - makes zero sense. Anyway, they get on a plane, and of course there’s a ton of foreshadowing, so by the time the plane actually crashes, no one, not even my naive Grandma, is surprised. Prior to it going down, the FMC has a panic attack that’s honestly just so pathetic, I could not stand her at all.
Plane is down, they’re all injured, pilot (a longtime family friend named Dean) is dead. The “survival” ensues which is really just a ton of boring chapters of them whining and her losing her virginity. Oh, and can I just say, for her first time, they all wanted to DP? Like…what? Get out of here.
Anyway, the MMCs know everyone is starving to death so they hack up the pilot and feed her, and she’s miraculously come back to life. She finds out it’s the pilot after a while and then she magically hates them again and doesn’t want to talk to them.
(Unnecessarily) Long story short, they get rescued and she’s so traumatized that she doesn’t talk to them for a year. One of the MMC randomly bumps into her in a library or some shit, and it’s like, ok, I love you again. The HEA is absolutely ridiculous, with them proposing to her, holding the same ring, and I’m laughing even typing this. More DP happens, she becomes a stupid ballerina…the end.
I wanted to like this, truly…I LOVE a gripping survival story, but this? What the hell even was this?
1.5 stars (generously rounded to 2)…