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The Sleepy Hollow Incident

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In a small town shrouded in shadows, a sinister alliance between love and darkness is forged. Winter, 1997. Marc Saduj, a romance writer, watches his beloved Lori Francon slip away after a car crash. Desperate to save her, he makes a deal with the mysterious Man in Black - his soul in exchange for her life. But as Lori miraculously recovers and returns to Long Island, Marc retreats to a foreboding mansion in Sleepy Hollow's western woods.

As mutilated bodies start appearing in town, Detective Stephen Carver follows a trail of medieval torture and satanic worship, all leading to Marc. But the truth is far more terrifying than anyone could imagine. When Lori discovers Marc's notebook detailing the murders, she rushes back to save him, only to find herself at the center of an ancient evil's resurgence. The Man in Black is no ordinary demon, and Marc's bargain has set in motion a chain of events that could unleash hell on earth.

As a celestial portal threatens to open and Marc's possession deepens, Lori must face the ultimate question - when someone sells their soul to save your life, what are you willing to sacrifice to save theirs?

Some bargains are sealed with a kiss. Others with a scream.

273 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 7, 2025

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P.D. Alleva

26 books777 followers
PD Alleva writes thrillers. Whether those thrillers are Sci-Fi Fantasy’s about Alien Vampires attempting to subjugate the human race, or steeped in a haunting mystery, or an urban paranormal fantasy, PD always provides readers with a profound, entertaining, and satisfying reader experience, in a new genre he has coined as alternative fiction. His novels blend mystery, conspiracy, psychology, and action with the supernatural, horror, fantasy, and science fiction. Alternative fiction is PD's attempt at describing what readers uncover in any one of his books, a new discovery towards mainstream storytelling. He's been writing since childhood, creating and developing stories with brash and impactful concepts he describes are metaphors for the shifting energies that exist in the universe. PD lives inside of his own universe, working diligently on the Sci-Fi/Fantasy series, The Rose Vol. II, the urban paranormal fantasy series, Girl on a Mission, and Jigglyspot and the Zero Intellect, PD’s upcoming horror novel.

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Profile Image for Kat (Katlovesbooks) Dietrich.
1,598 reviews208 followers
September 27, 2025

The Sleepy Hollow Incident by P.D. Alleva
is a paranormal/horror/romance novel about the legendary Sleepy Hollow....but with a whole new spin.  I consider it more horror than any of the above.


First, let me thank the author, for providing me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.


 
Please be aware that these books must be read in order, and you will have to read them all.  The story just continues from one book to the next.  It's a four-book series.  That being said, Alleva can really write.  He pulls you in from the start, so you crave the next book.

I may not like romance novels, but this is so much more than that!  Let's face it, anything set in Sleepy Hollow is going to be more that simply a love story. Okay,  I admit that in one way it is a love story.  What will you sacrifice to save the love of your life?  In another way, it's a good vs evil book.  It's about manipulation and deceit.  It's also turning out to be a pretty good mystery.  Oh, and it's both suspenseful and gory.

Overall, this book is a very atmospheric tale, filled with supernatural and devilish forces.  It is dark.  It is eerie.  And it is good!

Anyway, until next time!


For a more complete review of this book and others (including the reason I chose to read/review this book, my own synopsis, author information and a favorite quotation or two from the book), please visit my blog: http://katlovesbooksblog.wordpress.com/
Profile Image for BookMadLibrarian.
370 reviews29 followers
October 16, 2025
Alleva has a way of getting into your head, delving into the darkest parts of the human condition and leaving you in pieces. I’m a huge fan of Alleva’s work. His Jigglyspot and Golem still haunt my dreams! Part of a 4 book series, part one of The Sleepy Hollow Incident is a fast-paced 66 page novella full of the madness and brutality that is characteristic of Alleva’s work.

A love story is at the centre of this story- a novel aspect in Alleva’s books but it quickly becomes a dark and twisted tale that only he can write and you know that it isn’t going to end well. When Marc makes a desperate attempt to save his partner Lori’s life, he makes a bargain that he doesn’t fully understand and all hell will break loose.

The supernatural gothic vibe is there at the core of this story, the murder mystery working alongside the supernatural elements and I cannot wait to read the next 3 books in the series. Alleva’s fascination with the dark and twisted minds comes to the forefront with the addition of the asylum scene and a character who I can’t wait to read more about (giving Renfield and Hannibal Lecter vibes which I love!)

Book 1 is available now with the other 3 available to preorder. If you want a deep dive into all things supernatural and terrifying, Alleva’s books need to be on your tbr. Go check out his other books too but just don’t forget to leave a light on at night 😉

5 ⭐️
Profile Image for Tracy Hinson.
90 reviews26 followers
March 31, 2026
This book crushed me. I cannot read the next book right now.
Profile Image for Elaine Rainbolt.
229 reviews9 followers
May 7, 2026
I want to say that even though this isn't my kind of story or genre this story was definitely well written. This was book 1 of 4. It might be a little bit but I do want to go and read what happens with Marc and Lori.
Profile Image for Nancy (The Avid Reader).
3,188 reviews147 followers
October 4, 2025
I was immediately engrossed in the dark and unsettling tale of The Sleepy Hollow Incident Book One. I was drawn into the horrifying events on the first page.

The Sleepy Hollow Incident Book One begins with a body, sliced from end to end, resting on a bed in a hotel room. What a gory scene! I can picture it all in all its glorious, horrifying glory because the words are so well worded.

In The Sleepy Hollow Incident Book One, they are involved in a horrific accident that puts both in the ICU. Marc wakes up first, while Lori remains in a coma, in critical condition. Lori’s mother, Elena, won’t allow Marc to visit, but the determined man slips into her room while her mother is away. Marc enters a dark world when he learns that Lori may not survive. He makes a deal with a dark man, offering his life for Lori’s.

I was unable to put the book down because of the overwhelming suspense. As I hurried to the end of The Sleepy Hollow Incident Book One, I was captivated and eager to see what would happen next. What a terrible tale!

I am eager to see what occurs in Book Two of The Sleepy Hollow Incident!
Profile Image for Tanya Kolb.
239 reviews9 followers
April 28, 2026
A great read. If you like demon stories, you'll love this one! I'm so glad that I read Golem before this one. I saved this for my last read in the melee because I knew that I wouldn't be able to stop with book one and that was the best decision I could have made! On to book 2!
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Author 15 books130 followers
October 11, 2025
Perfect read for Halloween season! A deft blend of gothic vibes, historical fiction, crime thriller. I can’t wait for book 2.
Profile Image for Kayla Frederick.
Author 24 books157 followers
September 11, 2025
Dark, brooding, and deeply atmospheric, The Sleepy Hollow Incident is a supernatural gothic tale that sinks its claws in from the first page and doesn’t let go. P.D. Alleva masterfully blends elements of horror and romance in this haunting opener to a four-part saga, offering readers a chilling look at love and sacrifice.

Set in Sleepy Hollow, the story follows a romance novelist named Marc who strikes a bargain with the Man in Black to save the love of his life from certain death. What begins as an act of devotion soon descends into horror as a series of gruesome events erupts across town.

What makes The Sleepy Hollow Incident stand out is its emotional resonance and the layered, slow-burning tension that builds toward something far more epic. After reading, you’ll be left with one question: how far would you go for someone who gave up everything for you?


Profile Image for Josette Thomas.
1,348 reviews1 follower
September 1, 2025
Pt.1-Lori and Marc decide they are soulmates. Lori had a past history of a broken heart so when she met Marc; she was able to believe in love again. Marc has always been different but that is why Lori loves him. He loves her just as much. He cannot imagine life without her. Both have this uneasy feeling that something is coming ; they don’t know what but they know that the world is about to change and not in a good way.
Pt.2-After the terrible accident that almost took both their lives, things began to happen that neither one had any control over. Marc soon began to realize that Lori was injured really bad and that she may not live. The reader learns that Marc has a ‘guardian Angel-like’ person from his life that might be able to help him with the current situation. The reader is then exposed to the reality that Marc and Lori are pawns in a game of good vs. evil. As I read further, I began to realize, it was clear that evil was up to no good. What occurs next lets the reader know this has been planned for a long time.
Profile Image for Brandon Wilson.
Author 1 book10 followers
October 7, 2025
The first part of the serialized novel really drew me in. It did what I believe all serial novels should do, in that it made me hunger for more.

PD Alleva writes with such wonderful prose that it is enough to make you fall in love with his writing, with his stories, and with the characters.

There is plenty of mystery, and that's what makes this such a fun read. I have no clue what is going to happen in the later volumes.
Profile Image for Katy The Sleepy Reader.
403 reviews42 followers
October 12, 2025
The first book I ever read by this author was Golem. It was fantastic and if you haven't read it, then quit reading my review of this and go pick it up, then come back and read this book.

This book is part of a series. I would like to thank the author for reaching out and asking if I would read them. I didn't even hesitate; the answer is always yes. Some authors are just like that.

This book falls into the paranormal/romance/horror genre. The book takes place in the infamous Sleepy Hollow, a place I have always wanted to visit. I was immediately sucked into the story and could not put this book down. The story centers around Marc and Lori. Two people very much in love but each holding a secret. In the story they are involved in a horrific accident and while Marc wakes, while scarred, Lori remains in a coma. Even worse her mother refuses to let Marc visit her. What would you give to save the one you love the most? I have been married for almost 20 years to a man I truly believe was made just for me, so I would go to the ends of the earth to save him.

The suspense within this story is intense, yet it keeps you turning the pages to see what will happen next. I am beyond excited to see how the next three books play out. This book is the perfect beginning to October, and we head towards Halloween I am excited to keep reading.
Profile Image for Sharron Joy Reads.
858 reviews41 followers
September 22, 2025
A four book series soaked in blood and eternal damnation. Epic storytelling and world building, incredible characterisation and grotesquely gothic in feel. This is a story of good versus evil, it has sacrificial love, a creepy house in the woods, a small town’s horrific past, dark occult practices, hidden family secrets, demons, witches, ghosts and a literal portal to hell! It is brutal and gruesome but epic in its scope. The whole series will be out and published by the end of December 2025 but part one is unleashed on 7th October.

Book One - Marc and Lori are in love, she is from a wealthy family with nefarious links and suffers from horrific waking nightmares. Marc is a romance writer from a fractured home who has spent his life haunted by a man in black who whispers into his mind. Following a near fatal car accident, Marc makes a deadly deal to save Lori’s life. Meanwhile the local town is plagued by horrific murders, the hearts of the victims are torn from their chests and Detective Carver, races to find the killer. Meanwhile a local criminal asylum has a riot and a particularly terrifying and manipulative inmate walks out amidst the chaos.
Profile Image for Angel Medina.
Author 12 books113 followers
October 3, 2025
PD Alleva is one heck of a writer and when he asked me to ARC read his book, I was too excited to do so. PD pulls off a great combination of supernatural horror and a romance plot. It's a love story that answers the classic question, how much are you willing to sacrifice? It's an eerie tale that continues with the next three books in the series that I can't wait to read.

What gets me is the prose of the story, it drive you in. It's pretty hard to explain and you just have to read it for yourself. Then again, anything involving Sleepy Hollow will be spooky and this is no exception. PD continues to impress me with his works. Grab this one when it releases!
Profile Image for Hailey Owen.
172 reviews6 followers
October 7, 2025
This series is an absolute insane demented ride!!

Book One: Just like Jigglyspot PD loves multiple POVs and these characters are super interesting! You can feel the growth from PD was a writer and it is amazing! I love the little nods to Sleepy Hollow and Salem’s Lot and the first chapter starts out with a bang! The first book is very focused on Marc and Lori’s relationship and the incident. By the time I finished the first book I was itching for more! I love the writing style and knew it was just going to go insane from here!

Boy was I right…
Profile Image for Dawn Schock.
337 reviews11 followers
November 17, 2025
This is so atmospheric and rich and dark and riveting. Its equal parts detective story and horror story with a heart-wrenching romance woven in for good measure. I love how it's set against the backdrop of Sleepy Hollow, making it the perfect read for fall.

The story pulls you in from the beginning. It's dark and gritty and disturbing, but also endearing in so many moments and you find yourself rooting for Lori and Marc.
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249 reviews35 followers
December 7, 2025
What an entry! The first chapter of this does certainly not hold back. Within mere minutes of opening the pages we are in a dark motel room with blood and gore coating the walls, a body flayed open, organs neatly arranged and a few missing. Just another entry into the realm of PD Alleva and I'm all here for it! There are multiple POV's but not so many that you feel overwhelmed, and just the overarching tension of knowing that the only way is down for the characters but up for the reader! Onto part two!
447 reviews22 followers
December 15, 2025
This is a good book to read if you enjoy horror this is book one and I plan to read the whole series.Marc and Lori are a couple both having nightmares about a man in black and then they decide to take a vacation and end up in the hospital after an auto accident.Marc is injured but gets released from the hospital but Lori is in a coma in critical condition in order to save
Lori Marc must give up his soul to the man in black a real page turner.
Profile Image for Renee.
74 reviews1 follower
October 4, 2025
I was hooked and reeled in for the beginning. Making deals with a dark man to save the love of your life? Umm heck yeah! This book is more than just romance. It will leave you in terrible suspense. On to book 2. See you there!
415 reviews15 followers
December 17, 2025
A true horror story with elements of gothic thriller. Marc and Lori are in love when a tragic car accident injures Lori who may not survive. A stranger appears with a deal for Marc- could it be the devil? This story grabbed me from the first chapter!
110 reviews7 followers
April 5, 2026
I enjoyed this first book. Mark trades his soul to the Man in black to save his fiance Lori, after a car crash leaves her near death. The doctors think it's a miracle. But, the portal to hell is about to open, bringing demons into the world, bringing darkness and evil to end humanity and light.
182 reviews5 followers
April 16, 2026
This was a fantastic spin on Sleepy Hallow story. I love his writing style and honestly it crushed me a little but cant wait to dive into the next part of this story! A little goth,romance, and a lot of horror! Excellent book!
Profile Image for Jenny Coyne.
983 reviews46 followers
April 29, 2026
While I'm not sure these books my style of reading, I can't justify giving it less than 4 stars. It's quality writing, just a little slow for me. I understand there are 3 more books and I'll probably revisit them at a later time to see if the story peaks my interest more.
Profile Image for Erica Fields.
262 reviews12 followers
November 7, 2025
I loved this book so much!!! Everything about it is amazing!!! A gothic supernatural crime novel at it's finest & I love the character Wren! I can't wait to dive into book 2!!
Profile Image for Chiara Cooper.
580 reviews32 followers
October 4, 2025
No one writes supernatural horror and both the fascination and the inevitability of evil like P. D. Alleva, and Book 1 of The Sleepy Hollow Incident is no different. Compared to other novels I read by this author, we have a love story at the centre of this tale, but as you can foresee, it doesn’t end well. In a rush to save his lover’s life, Marc agrees to a bargain he doesn’t fully understand but that he can already feel wasn’t a good one.

As always with P. D. Alleva, I’m hooked and can’t wait to continue the series, to follow the fate of Marc and Lori, but also all the shady and evil characters that have been introduced, as well as the murder mystery.
Although the story has only begun, the characters already show depth, but I can already anticipate that they will show so much more intensity and nuances, making me rethink my loyalty.

The author really knows how to draw the reader in with a great premise and the promise of a complex plot where evil and pain are the protagonists. I’m looking forward to the next book!

Thanks to the author for a copy and this is my honest opinion.
108 reviews1 follower
October 7, 2025
This one is a slow burn, the story building at the beginning is quite long but well worth it and needed gor the rest of the book. Great story and I can't wait to read the next book.
Profile Image for Danielle Yvonne.
332 reviews42 followers
October 20, 2025

"But who controls the narrative? Who decides what information is plausible or fiction? Eventually, it becomes too much information, and that’s when we all tumble down a rabbit hole, seeking the very truth that exists within each and every one of us. But here’s the rub, that rabbit hole never ends."

Alleva has proved himself to be one hell of a storyteller. I absolutely loved this book. It had me in a chokehold from cover to cover. The plot was amazing and unique. The characters are done really well, and despite there being a lot of them, it was easy to keep track. Same with the plot, there is a whole lot going on, but again, the way Alleva is able to curate a story makes it easy to follow along without getting lost. A LOT happens in book one. A LOT. There is a full range of emotions that happen. There’s also a ton of different tropes, etc., that are touched upon.

I will say that this is a series you will want to binge-read. I am fortunate to have the ARC’s and therefore start book two as soon as I finished the first, but the struggle of waiting to see what would happen would have been there to the max had I not had the rest of the series.

There isn’t a horror reader that I wouldn’t recommend this book/series to. It really is incredible, and again, Alleva can create a hell of a story and tell it perfectly.
Profile Image for Robin.
51 reviews20 followers
December 18, 2025
Thank you PD for an advanced copy of this book!

It has been a while since I’ve read some books from PD, so I was excited to see more from him, and I’m so glad he’s still writing so many books! Publishing a whole series back-to-back is no small feat!

For this novel, there's a lot of great twists and turns. The mysteries were cool as well. However, this book, to me, was hard to get into. If you love lots and lots of descriptive prose and fewer scenes, you'll love this book. But for me personally, I prefer his older books, my favorite being The Rose.

He's taking a different approach with this series, and it isn't working for me so far, but it could work great for someone else. Either way, he's a great horror writer to support.
Profile Image for Robin Ginther-Venneri.
1,127 reviews90 followers
September 21, 2025
The Sleepy Hollow Incident: Part One & Two: A Gothic Tale of Horror, Romance & Fantasy!
Book 1 of 4: The Sleepy Hollow Incident
By PD Alleva
Publisher: Chamber Door Publishing, LLC
Publication Date: October 7, 2025
ASIN: B0DM588F1L
Pages: (Prepare your stamina, it’s gothic, it lingers)
Triggers: Satanic ritual vibes, demonic possession, gruesome bodies, and the kind of romance that asks, “Would you sell your soul for me?”
Star Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Skull Dread Rating: 💀💀💀 (Sleep with the lights on. And maybe sage your house.)

What Did I Just Walk Into?
It’s Faustian Bargain: The Romance Edition. Marc Saduj, a broody romance writer, makes a deal with the Man in Black to save his beloved Lori Francon after a car crash. Soul? Gone. Love? Alive. Consequences? Oh honey, the bodies pile up like it’s a Black Friday sale at the morgue. Detective Carver is connecting dots, Lori is catching on to Marc’s nightmare-fueled spiral and somewhere in the shadows, the Man in Black is watching, cane in hand, waiting for the portal to Xibalba to tear itself open.

This isn’t just a story. It’s gothic atmosphere dripping down the walls, a romance that’s equal parts sweet and cursed, and horror that doesn’t apologize for being grotesque.

Here’s What Slapped:
• The setting: Sleepy Hollow isn’t just a backdrop, it’s basically a character with its own ghostly side-eye.
• Marc and Lori’s devotion: Heartbreaking and terrifying all at once. “Till death do us part” gets redefined real quick.
• The Man in Black: Moves like a nightmare, talks like a riddle, ruins lives like it’s his side hustle.
• That blend of gothic, horror, romance, and fantasy? Mr. Alleva stirs the pot and serves it hot.

What Could’ve Been Better:
• Honestly, nothing. Unless you wanted less gore, in which case, wrong book my friend.
• Oh, and Marc? Maybe don’t accept deals from mysterious shadow men. Just saying.

Perfect for Readers Who Love:
• Gothic sagas with twisted romance
• Small town horror crawling with shadows
• Deals with the devil that never end well
• Dark tales that demand you cancel weekend plans

Book Series Order:
The Sleepy Hollow Incident: Part One & Two: A Gothic Tale of Horror, Romance & Fantasy!
Book 1 of 4: The Sleepy Hollow Incident
The Sleepy Hollow Incident: Book Two (Parts Three & Four): A Gothic Tale!
Book 2 of 4: The Sleepy Hollow Incident
The Sleepy Hollow Incident: Book Three (Parts Five & Six): A Gothic Tale!
Book 3 of 4: The Sleepy Hollow Incident
The Sleepy Hollow Incident: Book Four (Parts Seven, Eight & Nine): A Gothic Tale!
Book 4 of 4: The Sleepy Hollow Incident

Reviewed by Robin for Robin’s Review
Profile Image for Tasha.
527 reviews11 followers
October 27, 2025


If gothic horror is your kind of a story, then The Sleepy Hollow Incident is a must-read. The story adds a modern touch to the classic Sleepy Hollow set in the late-1990s.

Marc and Lori are living a great life together. Lori practically fell in love instantly, with Marc not far behind. However, both of them have demons in their closets. As Lori said in the book, Marc is an “introverted extrovert.” Marc had a difficult childhood that has led to some incidents in his past that he struggles with. This carries over into his current daily life. Lori suffers from day terrors at all times of the day. Together, they help each other through the ups and downs of life. One evening, after a lovely date, things turn dark. Lori and Marc are in a horrible accident, leaving Lori on the brink of death. Marc, in turn, makes a deal with an entity to save her life. Lori and Marc are forced into a horrible situation that costs them both.

While they are fighting for each other and committed to their love, Detective Carver is busy trying to solve a murder happening in Sleepy Hollow. A mutilated body turns up and he needs to solve the murder before more are found.

Per PD Alleva style, scene development is top-notch. Alleva has a way with words that draw you into a place in the story that makes you feel like you are there, in the scene, a part of the story. It is so easy to fall into the tale and become a ghost to watch the struggles, the horror, and the love in this story.

As well as being a part of the story, the character development is on point. You can feel the love between Lori and Marc, and you end up caring deeply for the two of them. When the story gets intense and the horrors begin, it is so easy to fall with them. It doesn’t take long to become attached.

Alleva has the ability to lure you into his stories right from the beginning and forces you to hold on for a wicked ride. The amount of commitment Alleva has to share his stories with readers, easily comes across in his books. Alleva writes for the love of story-telling, and it shows. This passion of his and his ability to write fantastic stories, will no doubt become must-reads for all readers.

I absolutely recommend this for all gothic-horror readers. This is also a fantastic story to get introduced to PD Alleva. And keep a look-out for book two!
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