The Beast
So, I'm giving this one a 3.65* It was okay. The general premise was good and I liked the character of Steven - who's suddenly curious about what his friend is packing. I was a little surprised that both MC'S just jumped right in, but the guess that's part of the idea. Lucas seems to jump from straight to "something more" pretty quickly and I would have liked a little more introspection on his part, but, again, it was part of the plot. I definitely liked the epilogue and seeing that they got their HEA. My only real complaint is that I wish there was more because just as I'm getting into the story and characters, it's over! Lol Lucas Blaze is great at short erotica and I can't wait to see what he comes up with next.