Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for the opportunity to read this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
At 30, Rikki Romona has it all, thriving careers, amazing friends, and success in everything except love. After modern dating disappointments and failing to find a plus-one for a wedding, she attends solo… only to meet Reed, a charming and attractive man who seems perfect, except he lives across the country. A relationship might be complicated, but Rikki figures. . .what’s the harm in trying?
I had high hopes for this book. The title and premise immediately drew me in, and the dedication was an instant win, especially as a single woman who just turned 30. I was excited to see a relatable, fresh take on modern dating and life in your thirties. The early chapters were promising, and the male lead, Reed, was charming and funny. Unfortunately, the story quickly lost its footing.
While the book had potential and a strong emotional setup, it took on too many directions at once. Plotlines felt scattered, and by the middle of the book, I found myself struggling to stay engaged. What began as a grounded, romantic narrative turned chaotic with the addition of an unexpected magical realism element, a journal that teleports the main character across the country. At that point, it was hard to take the story seriously.
Additionally, the characters felt overly idealized. Both protagonists seemed to be experts in every creative field imaginable, from acting to drawing to writing, which made them less believable. While it’s possible to have many hobbies, the lack of limits made them feel more like fantasy avatars than real people.
As a licensed therapist, I also had concerns with a key subplot in which the protagonist provides couples therapy to her cousin and her cousin’s husband. While not illegal, it is highly unethical, even without compensation. It presented a major conflict of interest that could’ve been avoided with deeper research or sensitivity to real-world boundaries in clinical work.
Another challenge for me was the overuse of pop culture references. While I appreciate timely nods to music, social media, and trends, their frequency became distracting. It pulled me out of the narrative and made the main character feel more like a teenager than a thirty-year-old professional.
I truly wanted to connect with this story, especially given how much I related to the setup. But between the disjointed plot, unrealistic character traits, and lack of grounding in key areas, this read more like a chaotic Wattpad story than the layered romantic journey I was hoping for.