This review contains spoilers. If you are allergic to them, please note, this is positively riddled with them. You should either take some epinephrine, or skip it altogether.
As a modern re-telling of the Odyssey, this proves an interesting example of why some things are best left alone, especially if you don't address the topic in a particularly fresh or inventive way. I feel the sting in that, even as I write it, but in truth, I don't see how Atwood moved the needle one bit in re-opening, or even re-inventing, the case of the murdered maids. Their brutal slaughter hangs in the air, still, and rests where it always has, squarely on the shoulders of Telemachus; and on the shoulders of men like him, throughout the ages. Odysseus may have ordered the slayings but it seems Telemachus took far too much pleasure in executing the deed, with his own nasty twist on things; in modern view, it barely scratches the surface of the eons of injustice and cruelty directed towards women.
I admire that the attempt has been made to re-invent an old myth, given that mythology works best when it is fluid and mutable. But what has Atwood changed here that makes it work either as a reinvention of an old song, or a modern cautionary tale?
I like, very much, how Atwood deals with the wandering and philandering Odysseus: she hangs very close to the truth on that one I think, even more than our dear Homer.
Rumours came, carried by other ships. Odysseus and his men had got drunk at their first port of call and the men had mutinied, said some; no, said others, they'd eaten a magic plant that had caused them to lose their memories, and Odysseus had saved them by having them tied up and carried onto the ships. Odysseus had been in a fight with a giant one-eyed Cyclops, said some; no, it was only a one-eyed tavern keeper, said another, and the fight was over non-payment of the bill. Some of the men had beeen eaten by cannibals, said some; no it was just a brawl of the usual kind, and others, with ear-bitings and nosebleeds, and stabbings and eviscerations; she'd turned his men into pigs -- not a hard job in my view -- but had turned them back into men because she'd fallen in love with him and was feeding him undeard-of delicacies prepared by her own immortal hands, and the two of them made love deliriously every night; no, said others, it was just an expensive whorehouse, and he was sponging off the Madam.
So are myths created. A rowdy night on the town becomes an adventurous tale of derring-do in the hands of an expert wordsmith. It is the reason we count on poets: they enrich our lives immeasurably.
In the same breath as Atwood takes Odyssesus down a peg or two, however, so does Penelope suffer. No longer is Penelope the long-suffering, loyal wife; in Atwood's hands, she emerges as more than a bit of a harpie and as someone who is manipulative and a little too-clever by half, stemming from her inferiority complex. Compared to Helen, she was only "second prize" and this rancoured in her breast, Atwood suggests.
[Helen] gave her patronizing smirk of someone who's had first chance at a less than delicious piece of sausage but has fastidiously rejected it. Indeed, Odysseus had been among the suitors for her hand, and like every other man on earth he'd desperately wanted to win her. Now she [Penelope] was only a second prize. Helen strolled away, having delivered her sting. The maids began discussing her splendid necklace, her scintillating earrings, her perfect nose, her elegant hairstyle, her luminous eyes, the tastefully woven border of her shining robe. It was as if I wasn't there. And it was my wedding day. All of this was a strain on the nerves. I started to cry, as I would so often in the future, and was taken to lie down on my bed.
Whenever Penelope feels stress, she lies down on her bed and weeps, rendering her more ineffectual in this modern version than in the original. It is this motif of powerlessness, running like a serpent in her life, that proves the maids' downfall for, while the maids are being slaughtered Penelope is sleeping, having barricaded herself in her room. Afraid of standing up to Odysseus to defend her maids, whom she had nurtured and schooled into spying for her, she hides away, hoping to avoid Odysseus' s wrath, and the worst of consequences. In the end, the blame for the maids' deaths hangs more on Penelope's head than it does on Odysseus. She knew of their loyalty and trustworthiness, and as such owed them her allegiance. Odysseus was only acting true to his nature, based on the facts at hand. She abdicates her power to Odysseus, and ultimately to Telemachus, and lets the maids hang -- literally and figuratively, forever suspended in time.
I'm disappointed in Atwood's version of Penelope; I think she is far stronger and more resilient in Homer's version. (One would have hoped that in the retelling, Atwood would have made her stronger, not weaker than what she was.)
The most moving, the most powerful, the most evocative lines come in the form of Atwood's poetry:
we had no voice
we had no name
we had no choice
we had one face
one face the same
we took the blame
it was not fair
but now we're here
we're all there too
the same as you
and now we follow
you, we find you
now, we call
to you to you
too witt too woo
If Atwood had penned only this, it would have spoken more powerfully than the entire Penelopiad in returning even an iota of justice to their murdered bodies. (At the very least, it gave them their voices back.)
And once again, it comes down to this: Atwood's poetry is astoundingly good. She is a marvel as a poet. When Atwood parses her words, her thoughts, the distilled result becomes a masterpiece; yet, when she plays with too many words in the toybox, she becomes a bit of a dunderhead: it's like too many words trip her up, or she gets stuck in the web of her own thoughts and emerges less than who she is.