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Margot Bennett thought she was leaving the past behind when she moved to the quiet town of Mount Dora, Florida. A fresh start, a charming old house, and the promise of peace—until she unearths something sinister buried beneath the floorboards of Hawthorn Manor.

As Margot digs deeper into the manor's history, she finds herself tangled in the chilling legacy of George and Cecilia Hawthorn, a once-beloved couple whose presence still lingers in ways no one dares to explain. Nightmares bleed into reality. Puzzles stretch throughout the sleepy city. And the deeper she searches, the more she realizes the truth—no one is safe here.

Someone is watching—always. As the house's walls close in, Margot must decide how much she is willing to sacrifice to answer one "What is the cost of keeping the dead quiet?"

Perfect for fans of psychological thrillers with a haunting twist, The House That Held Her is a gripping tale of obsession, guilt, and the weight of secrets buried just beneath the surface.

340 pages, Paperback

First published May 11, 2025

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Ellis Hart

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I'm an independent author who lives in Orlando, Florida, with his wife, three children, and delightfully curious cat, Jovie. The House That Held Her is my debut novel, and I am incredibly proud of it. After eight rewrites, four different endings, and many characters killed, saved, and killed again, I think The House That Held Her will have you turning pages faster than ever.

I'm always eager to connect with fellow book lovers. If you’d like to chat about this novel or swap reading recommendations, you can reach out via any of my official author platforms.

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Profile Image for Nikki Lee.
605 reviews536 followers
June 16, 2025
How on earth is this your debut, Ellis Hart? I am literally blown away by your talent in writing. Bravo 👏

First, you gotta experience how stunning this book is in person! It’s absolutely gorgeous. This will definitely make a beautiful trophy on the shelf.

The story——
Margo and Nate decide they need a do-over and move to Mount Dora, Florida. They re-locate into a historical home within the town that is notorious for its history.

After arriving, Nate heads out of town on business trip, while Margo gets nosey. She realizes that she knew nothing about the house before moving. The town folk mention some unsettling deaths took place which inspires her to play detective.

What happened to the previous owners? Was it something sinister? Look, yes, Margo is your classic character making dumb decisions. Who’s there ….and all that nonsense. Sometimes I was screaming for her to run.. not investigate lol.

The writing is fantastic and Ellis’s talent is that of a seasoned author. The story is instantly atmospheric, eerily creepy, spine-tingling …. Gripping horror! Twists that shock you! The perfect read for horror and thriller lovers.

4 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Trigger Warnings -
Child death, child abuse, spousal abuse, and I might be missing some, however I feel the TW are lightly mentioned.

I look forward to Ellis’s next chapter.
Profile Image for Kim ~ It’s All About the Thrill.
802 reviews583 followers
October 23, 2025
Have I got a spooky 👻 recommendation for you!! This book is perfect for spooky season! 🖤 This is one amazing debut!! 👏👏

@ellis_hart_author is a phenomenal writer and I can’t wait to read more by him! This book was SO atmospheric… creepy… and disturbing.😳 SO clearly.. I loved it!!

Welcome to Hawthorne Manor… your new home. 😳 Once a beautiful prestigious home.. actually the talk of the town… Mount Dora, FL. This manor has been empty for WAY too long. The previous owner vanished. No worries… the new owners Margot and Nate have plans for the manor… little did they know.. the manor had plans for them as well. 😬😳🫣

This started out with creepy vibes building into a high intensity gothic work of horror. It freaked me out in the best possible way!! I am VERY picky about what horror books I read and this one checked ✅ all the boxes!!

I can’t let you all go without telling you about the actual quality of the book. It’s so stunning and gorgeous! It’s actually heavier and the quality of the pages are stunning. You really have to see it IRL to fully appreciate it. Swipe to see what is under the cover. 😍

Wow!! I seriously can’t wait to read more by this author!! His writing is beautiful and atmospheric.
Profile Image for The Pastel Bookshelf.
317 reviews351 followers
April 16, 2025
Thank you so much Ellis for trusting me with your very first book! Just to be transparent, Ellis sent me a copy of his book with absolutely no obligation to post a review so these are my unbiased views.

Wow! I actually can’t believe this is the author’s first book. The suspense and atmosphere Ellis created in this book had my heart pounding when I was reading it. I loved that Margot was an unreliable narrator of her own story and she didn’t know if the house was haunted or if she was losing her mind. This book gave me proper gothic house vibes and I loved the mystery/puzzle solving elements to it too. I literally inhaled the second half of the book, it was so fast paced!

It lost a star just because I guessed the twist and did find it a bit predictable towards the end but I still had a fantastic time while I was reading it and would recommend it to anyone who loves a psychological thriller.

Can’t wait to read more from this author
Profile Image for Shae Bentley.
273 reviews21 followers
May 25, 2025
5⭐️ - Guys, this may be one of the easiest five stars I have ever given! The House That Held Her is brilliantly written, incredibly well thought out, and packed with such intricate detail. Every element, from the characterisation to the unfolding mystery, is so thoughtfully constructed that it blows my mind this is a DEBUT!!! 🤯

The story follows Margot, who moves to the quiet town of Mount Dora with her husband, Nate, for a fresh start. Their new home, Hawthorn Manor, is a crumbling gothic estate, and when a hurricane causes a leak, Margot discovers something hidden beneath the floorboards. What follows is a chilling unravelling of the manor’s past.

I loved the gothic vibes, the creeping sense of dread, and the puzzle/mystery elements had me completely invested. The house itself felt like a living, breathing character, and Hart captured the unsettling atmosphere so perfectly.

I buddy read this with my book bestie, Jess, and we both absolutely devoured it. If you love haunting settings, clever mysteries, and beautifully crafted writing, this one is a must read! Ellis Hart is definitely an author to watch! He is also absolutely lovely to chat to - funny, kind, engaging and clearly passionate about his work 🩷
Profile Image for Liza Armstrong.
268 reviews26 followers
June 2, 2025
"The Darkness stirs, ever hungry but never satisfied." A debut and indie author?! What a hit for his first book. From page one it’s fast-paced, atmospheric, and extremely creepy. No such thing as a dull moment in this book. 

You'll like this book if you're a fan of: 

- Inheritance Games mysteries & puzzles, but with horror and suspense. 
- Reading with every light on. 
- Scooby Doo shenanigans but at an adult level of creepiness. 

Also, I highly recommending following the author on Instagram. He's very friendly with the book community and posts a lot of fun content. 
Profile Image for Abby Draper.
131 reviews10 followers
July 11, 2025
I’m having a hard time rating this book. Maybe 2.5 stars. The plot was so intriguing that I dropped everything to read this book. I’ve been in a reading slump and it sounded like just what I needed to get out of it. The plot is good and well-thought-out. There are a couple good twists even though they weren’t too shocking.

The thing that bothered me the most was that there were a lot of very small plot holes and repetition that could have been avoided with more editing. For example, Margot takes some pictures, says her phone dies, and then is immediately flipping through the photos on her phone…that was supposed to be dead. Or when she went straight to the museum, passed the bakery without going in, but then somehow showed up with bagels and chai that she had picked up on the way.

The ending really turned this book around for me because I’m a sucker for a happy ending. The ending was also probably the best written part of the whole book. However, it was kind of unreasonable that Margot would forgive Nate for going to these extremes to keep secrets from her, including hiding from her when she thought his mutilated body was in a bathtub….

I wanted to love this book because I love to support indie authors, but the more I think about it, the more issues I find. I wish there had been a better editing process because it could have been a great novel.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Profile Image for Kate Yost.
2 reviews1 follower
March 23, 2025
I had the pleasure of receiving an ARC copy of this book, and all I have to say is- WOW! How is this a first time author?? The character development, build up of suspense and mystery, and ultimately all the twists and turns this book brings will keep you turning pages! I canNOT wait to see what Ellis Hart gives us next. If you enjoy dark thrillers, definitely check this one out!
Profile Image for Katie Holcomb.
184 reviews150 followers
May 18, 2025
What an amazing debut novel from Ellis Hart! Seriously, you need to check it out if you are a fan of psychological thrillers/horror books. This one hooked me right from the start & didn’t let go. Only reason it took me longer than normal to read is because of an unexpected cancer diagnosis. Otherwise, I would have flown through it. The chapters were nice & short with cliff hangers at the end just begging you to keep reading. The characters were also really well-developed. I was shocked for sure by a couple different twists! Highly recommend this one!
Profile Image for Cory Holcomb.
11 reviews71 followers
June 7, 2025
An absolute page-turning psychological thriller! So well written with some of the best imagery I have felt in awhile! This book was full of twists and turns and was very hard to put down! Will be recommending to everyone who likes this genre. A must read!
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176 reviews54 followers
July 23, 2025
Nope. We find out what is happening about middle of the book. The story just gets silly after this and is infuriating.

I did like all the clues and secret passages
Profile Image for Marie.
26 reviews
April 5, 2025
Margot and Nate moved to a historic house in Mount Dora, Florida, seeking a fresh start. They left their past in Maryland behind but now face a strange mystery at their new home.

Although I thought the book started slowly, as the story progressed, so did the momentum of the plot. The author’s writing style was engaging, drawing me in with imaginative descriptions and a compelling plot. I thought I knew how the story would end, but it surprised me with an unexpected twist!

In his debut, Ellis Hart delivers a suspenseful book that kept me engrossed in the main character’s story. I’d recommend this to anyone who likes psychological thrillers.

I received an advance review copy from BookSirens, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. All opinions are my own.
Profile Image for Rachel_loves_to_read.
215 reviews16 followers
May 11, 2025
The blurb:

Margot Bennett thought she was leaving the past behind when she moved to the quiet town of Mount Dora, Florida. A fresh start, a charming old house, and the promise of peace—until she unearths something sinister buried beneath the floorboards of Hawthorn Manor.

As Margot digs deeper into the manor's history, she finds herself tangled in the chilling legacy of George and Cecilia Hawthorn, a once-beloved couple whose presence still lingers in ways no one dares to explain. Nightmares bleed into reality. Puzzles stretch throughout the sleepy city. And the deeper she searches, the more she realizes the truth—no one is safe here.

Someone is watching—always. As the house's walls close in, Margot must decide how much she is willing to sacrifice to answer one question: "What is the cost of keeping the dead quiet?"

My thoughts:

This was a fairly fast paced, suspenseful read. I was drawn in from the start and hooked up until the end.

To say this book creeped me out a bit would be an understatement, however I still kept reading as I needed to know what was going on!!! I was getting vibes of The Shining and The Ring from some of the descriptions.

I enjoyed reading through the different pov and being told the story along several timelines filling in gaps. The story is so well told and felt that there were no details left out.

Really cleverly written. I loved learning bits about the characters and loved piecing together what was going on. There was one thing that I had a suspicion about and was right, but it didn’t spoil the story and there were so many details and a few twists that I didn’t see coming!

There are a few trigger warnings which are clearly detailed at the start of the digital copy I received.

Thank you so much to the author for reaching out to me with a free digital copy of his debut book. All opinions expressed here are my own. I really enjoyed, and quickly devoured it. For those who enjoy psychological thrillers and horror, this is one to look out for on May 11th.
Profile Image for Emily.
190 reviews6 followers
March 21, 2025
ARC Review of The House That Held Her by Ellis Hart
Publishing on May 11, 2025.

I received an ARC from BookSirens in exchange for an honest review.

4.5 stars rounded up!

This book is a major page turner. For those who have a guilty pleasure for whodunits, this one will have you on the edge of your seats, turning pages with great anticipation. Ellis Hart exemplifies extremely cohesive writing in this book that has a natural flow. The build up entices tension within the reader as they are lured in, but the build up is pleasantly paced. The build up is not too quick, nor does it drag on. This is the perfect book to spend the weekend tied up in and will have you thinking about it for days after.

Taking place in the charming town of Mount Dora, Florida, Margot Bennett is seeking a fresh start in life. Her and her husband Nate are the proud new owners of Hawthorn Manor. Things are going smoothly until she finds something discomforting beneath the floorboards of their home. This is where things at Hawthorn Manor start to seem off. Unnerving events continue to unravel in Margot's life until she becomes unsure of what's real and what's not. Margot's 'fresh start' is quickly fading into the abys. She can feel a presence but what she doesn't know is that these puzzles she continues to resolve are bringing her closer to the truth, but at what cost? The House That Held Her is a masterful psychological thriller that weaves elements of horror and suspense into an intricate tapestry of obsession, guilt, and buried secrets that will have you on the edge of your seat throughout the entire book.
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255 reviews6 followers
August 7, 2025
PHENOMENAL debut novel.
I simply stumbled across this author and his new book by pure booksta luck. However, after reading this debut novel, I'll certainly be following the rest of your writing journey because this book was outstanding.

This is a psychological thriller that dives into some dark, creepy themes. It's got a unique storyline and stands out from a popular thriller crowd. There's a slight crossover of horror, but not the fantastical type.

The book started strong with domestic drama, a mysterious map, and a box full of skulls. Although it starts like a slow-burn mystery, before you know it, you're whisked into a whirlwind of calamity.

This is the story of Margot and Nate. Their move to Hawthorn Manor in Florida is meant to save them and their marriage. Margot has had a very tough year; the trauma of caring for neglected children carries a heavy burden.
Nate also has his own dark secrets.
However, small towns hide the darkest secrets of all, and you never know what might crawl out of the woodwork. This might just turn their life upside down.

The wide cast of strongly developed characters matched this tale perfectly. There was a good mix of personalities: some very likeable and some extremely creepy. They each stood out and were memorable despite the main narrator being Margot. I easily became invested in Margot's tale and connected to her immediately.

There were so many singular stories included in one novel; it was a lot to digest. But the way Hart crafted these meticulous layers was ingenious. Every little intricate detail seamlessly slotted into place.
A highly complex story but composed with such precision, it was sharp and intelligible.
There is many twists and turns along the way. I wont spoil anything but your in for a sudden jaw-dropping shock.

The novel was executed meticulously.  Nothing is as it seems. I was fooled continuously by this manipulative treat of a book, and I loved it all the more for it. The guessing game was addictive.

This tale is inclusive of some blood, guts, and gore. Everything reveals itself towards the end of the book as each of the pieces slot together; I was mesmerised. What was an interesting takeaway from the whole story was the symbolic undertones of child abuse, neglect, and long-term impact. It has a bittersweet ending. Within 24 hours, I devoured this book, which left me feeling completely satisfied.
Profile Image for Taylor Els.
4 reviews
May 11, 2025
FAST PACED.

What did I just read?!

PLOT TWIST.

THAT JUST HAPPENED!


I cannot believe this was the first book written by this author.
READ… THIS… BOOK!

Honored to have been able to read this ARC!!!
Profile Image for Selena.
419 reviews6 followers
July 5, 2025
Everyone in this book was either stupid or evil, or both. It was so sloppily written and how it came together relied solely on the fact that none of the characters used any common sense when making decisions.
Profile Image for Elizabeth.
433 reviews46 followers
May 9, 2025
A very slow burn mystery involving a historically intense gothic manor. Margot intrigued me. She had her traumatic past and becomes this unreliable narrator you can’t help put root for every step of the way. The manor itself had so much characterization and I absolutely loved it. Eerie, sinister, and ominous. Half way through the plot really picks up and becomes a true page turner. The hidden clues and scavenger hunt for the culprit was a nice touch. Things were a bit predictable. With that being said, the amplified delivery of each twist and turn was worth every minute. The House That Held Her is a well crafted suspenseful gothic thriller buried with hidden secrets.

Thank you to Ellis Hart & BookSirens for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
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120 reviews6 followers
April 26, 2025
“Oh my goodness, this book is literally WILD” a verbatim text I sent multiple times to my friend while reading this book. I cannot express how much enjoyed this book. It was so entertaining, the twists just kept coming up until the last page. The fact that is a debut book is really so impressive, I truly can’t wait to see what Ellis Hart has in store for us in his next novel.

I would recommend this to my sister, my friend, my grandma, literally everyone. A big thank you to Booksirens, Ellis Hart and Dusk and Dagger Publishing, for an ARC of this ebook in return for an honest review! ✝️💗
Profile Image for Sam R.
174 reviews3 followers
October 8, 2025
I really enjoyed this story. It was unique, the writing was amazing and made you feel like you were actually IN the book with the characters. Awesome twists and turns!
Profile Image for Rebecca Dimanche.
104 reviews3 followers
April 17, 2025
Thank you to BookSirens for the ARC!
I really enjoyed this book! There were so many good twists that it kept me reading until the very end. Literally was on the edge of my seat reading certain parts wondering how it will turn out. And some parts I didn’t want to read at night because of how intense they were but I loved that. You don’t find that in books very often!! I also loved that there were 2 parts to the book from the perspective of Margot and Nate. That really made it interesting and a fun read. If you’re into thrillers with lots of twists and turns I would definitely recommend this book. Looking forward to reading more Ellis Hart books in the future!
Profile Image for Leah Fowler .
93 reviews2 followers
June 29, 2025
I loved everything about this book. This is the authors debut novel and I see big things happening for him. The twists and turns were great. Had me on the edge of my seat most of the book. Then when I got to the big twist in the middle of the book I couldn't put it down. If you like murder mystery and thriller then this book is for you.
Profile Image for Savitri (IG: abookishcookie).
388 reviews8 followers
September 26, 2025
Thank you to the author for the #gifted book!

Margot and Nate move to small town Mount Dora, Florida, far away from Maryland in order to escape their past baggage and traumas. Hawthorn Manor is lavish and beautiful, the perfect location to a new chapter in their lives. However, while Nate is away on business, Margot discovers that the previous heir of Hawthorn Manor left some macabre puzzles that Margot unearths one by one, leading up to grizzly findings. Unbeknownst to the couple, there’s also a serial killer on the loose in a town where everyone keeps to themselves…

First of all, I’m shocked this is a debut! Well done, Ellis! Every time I had a feeling I knew where this was going, in comes new twists and turns that had me gasping audibly!

I loved how Hawthorn Manor was a main character of its own, carrying the legacy and burdens of its owners, past and current, silently witnessing all the misdeeds over decades. As a result, I was glad when the house got its ending it deserved. I also really loved the couple being morally grey. Both are far from the idealistic husband and wife but also learn and grow along the way. I particularly enjoyed the chapters from the husband’s POV, whom you’ll love or hate, but I’ll bet my money on hate. Of course, the highlight of the entire book is the serial killer and I just have to say this is one of the best written serial killers ever…meticulous, creepy, manipulative and in need of serious help. I loved how Ellis ends the book with a nod to how the serial killer came to be, and the underlying struggles that are overlooked and underfunded in modern society. I’ll be eagerly looking forward to Ellis’ next novel!
Profile Image for Richard.
2,315 reviews196 followers
May 13, 2025
A new author for me and an opportunity to read a debut novel which allows you as a reader to start that book journey together in real time.

I often wonder how such intricate plotting and outrageous ideas can be nurtured and given voice. This is a complex novel both in concept and telling. Yet the author got me to the end safely, wondering what I had just experienced.

It is a horror novel which seems to border on the supernatural with influences and forces from beyond the grave we usually term as ghosts. Here the physical violence is real but the malevolence seems to be a mansion, simply a house of horrors. If it were associated with a roller coaster of a ride it would be the scariest of them all; where participants scream throughout.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

Do you like books where you increasingly shout at the protagonist for their stupidity for stumbling, almost rushing towards danger? Then you’ll love this novel as the tension builds and leaves you breathless. The start is a little laboured for me at times as the mystery unravels and you question the motivation of Margot for sticking around and placing herself in peril. She seems devoid of friends, short of brains but single-minded on solving cryptic clues to unravel the past. About halfway through you find you can’t put the book down as the ghost train becomes a runaway locomotive rushing towards the buffers.

I was completely captivated by the twists and outworking of this tangled plot. This shows the skill of a story teller and promises a positive future for this young author of real talent. I really enjoyed this book that appears a familiar story but has many new concepts and ideas studded within the text. It felt fresh and original at times. The author should be congratulated for bringing this project to production and deserves the plaudits this book will receive.

It tackles serious issues and provides support at the end of the book where the story may touch on sensitive experience. This is a difficult balance to maintain. There are trigger warnings here as with many books now and I trust this author in that process. Certainly it doesn’t inhibit the writer in the telling of this horror filled thriller.
Profile Image for Kim Hess (kims_killer_reads).
314 reviews88 followers
July 8, 2025
Ok, where are all my thriller lovers? Because this story is for you! Like just wow! This book was SO good. I can’t believe it’s a debut novel from @ellis_hart_author. Like what? Get ready for the big times. I mean it, if this is how you start out, with such a banger, I can only imagine where you’ll go in the future. Great job! 👏🏻

I don’t want to give too much away with this book, but I will give you a little teaser. You have Margot and Nate, a young couple looking to start over in Florida. They moved into an old historic house called Hawthorn Manor. Soon after they move in, Nate has to leave on a business trip. Leaving Margot all alone in this huge mansion. Curiosity gets the best of her and she goes snooping around the house. What she finds is a chest. What’s inside this chest is quite horrific. Also, what’s inside leads Margot to go digging even deeper about this house’s history and its previous owners. And what she finds may lead her and her husband to some unexpected danger.

And that’s all I’m going to say. You’re going to have to read it for yourself to find out what happens.
Again, this was such a great book!
I highly recommend it to any thriller lover. You won’t be disappointed. It will make a perfect read for this summer or especially for the upcoming spooky season. This was such an easy ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5 star read for me! I loved it!
Go get this book now! GO!

I just want to give a special shout out to @ellis_hart_author for giving me this gifted, signed copy. It’s sitting pretty on my shelves now. It’s such a beautiful book. I love the cover page to every chapter. Beautiful. And I am in love with your writing style. 🙌🏻♥️
I cannot wait to see what you do next. (So glad I can say I knew you when) Because you sir, are on your way! I wish you nothing but the best.

Have you been lucky enough to get your hands on this one yet? If so, what were your thoughts?
Profile Image for Laura.
9 reviews1 follower
May 12, 2025
I always hate to be hard on a debut novel, but this one did not land for me.

This book is hard to pin down, largely due to what came across as a significant inconsistency of mood and tone throughout the story. The overly generous descriptive language sometimes felt like it was flirting with camp instead of suspense, and as the plot progressed the drama was quickly elevated into melodrama with a hint of the absurd.

There were some mechanical errors and redundancies as well which pulled me out of full immersion in the story. I suspect the book would benefit greatly from another round of solid editing.

This is an unpaid and honest review, willingly provided in kind for access to an ebook review copy of this title.

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1,816 reviews151 followers
April 28, 2025
This is a typical debut psychological horror novel, going for uneven pacing, 'shocking' plot twists, and unnatural character decisions, rather than deep characterization, balanced writing, and reveals which grow organically out of the story. Its strength lies in the author's (surely, very important) ability to create suspense and keep the story fast-paced and full of mystery. If you like riddles, you'll dig this one.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Profile Image for Marissa (holdme.thrillme).
486 reviews81 followers
April 23, 2025
If I had to describe this book in an emoji, it would be 😱. Once I started reading I couldn’t put it down! I was first drawn to the cover and then completely sucked in by Hawthorn Manor and the mystery surrounding it. It was extremely well written and I had a very hard time believing that this is @ellis_hart_author’s first novel because it was an epic one! This will definitely be added to my running top books of 2025 list.
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