This wasn’t for me! Our protagonist is an annoying knockoff of Issa from Insecure, right down to the job at We Got Y’all. I get the whole concept of a main character not being perfect, but this is just not the way to pull it off. Mavis’ constant whining about everything going wrong in her life (mostly due to her own decisions) was just too much.
There’s also a lot of inconsistency in Mavis’ development—she waffles between saying she works in a nonprofit to continue her family’s legacy of public service, to saying she’s stuck in a dead-end job she only chose because she needed something reliable to pay the bills. Perhaps a more thoughtful author could have shown how both can be true, but Elise Bryant leaves us with these inconsistencies without attempting any sort of reconciliation. My girlfriend is training to be a school psychologist, so I did love the inclusion of that career path for Mavis’ love interest. I found their actual relationship to be flat from beginning to end, though this could be tied to my disenchantment with most straight romance arcs these days.
The setting of the book itself is interesting, but once again, our author fails to fully commit to fleshing it out. We have the outlines of an increasingly white school in a late-stage gentrification neighborhood, but no characters in this world rise to anything but caricatures. Speaking of people I hated, the dad-through-the-phone was just soooo grating throughout the whole story. This whole conceit that Corey wanted to be super close to Pearl, but just had no choice but to follow his heart’s call to be a traveling musician?!?!? It seemed like a lot of justifying quasi-deadbeat behavior to me!!! If you can get a job in your field in your city, and you choose not to for personal preferences, then you are just not that committed to being an active parent. Why was everyone in this book trying to convince us otherwise??? I did not understand it.
This wasn’t a miserable read from beginning to end, and I didn’t actually mind the twists in the mysteries. So, I guess I would recommend it if you just really love mommy murder mysteries, and want to read every single one that is published. However, for almost everyone else, I’d advise y’all to keep looking!