I normally don’t post reviews, especially negative ones. But now that this series is finished, I had to make a GR.
This ending was…. Disappointing, to put it mildly. With that said, the first page literally says it’s not a happy story. So, I didn’t go in expecting one. My disappointment isn’t with who did or didn’t end up together (maybe a little bit), but with the quality of this entire story altogether.
Having read this series since the very beginning, I really love the overall story. But it’s rife with inconsistent characters and incompatible couplings that bring no joy at all, queer baiting and mismanaged details that truly hold it back. Only this universe would secure a HEA for a literal rapist and monster. It’s like Addie ending up with Rocco in Hunting Adeline.
Firstly, in most of the WTW book, it’s spent obsessing over where Blue/Jane was, after Baron discovers she’s not in the grave he buried her in. No interaction with her, besides with Mabel, then all of a sudden she blows in, kills Duke, grabs her sister and books it, with Barons baby. Dukes death was so unnecessary and clumsy and riddled with plot holes.
- How did she even know where they (Duke, Mabel and Baron) were to drive by and shoot Duke?
- Why at that moment, did she decide to return home after a whole year of apparently surviving?
- Why did this read like someone panicked, couldn’t find someone who would kill Duke, and the author realized the messed up in the first book and decided to resurrect Blue/Jane, for the purpose of killing Duke?
- There’s zero build up or information on Jane/Blue, but yet she’s alive for an unexplained reason? The injuries Baron inflicted would’ve caused literal death (ie: him drilling a hole into her head, trying to rupture her uterus with an enema? Raping her with a gun until she bled out?)
Who edits and beta reads for this author?
Secondly, the big “Mabel” reveal at the end of this series.
Why was this even a mystery? She was so built up and for what? Mabel has to be one of the most blandest and underwhelming character reveals I’ve ever had to sit through and wait for. She’s nothing but a bag of contradictions. One moment, she’s protecting women. The next, she’s participating in their downfall. She’s written like the author has tried too hard to make her quirky and it’s just so flat. I waited for years for a basic wet rug.
She’s far from a satisfying powerful female character that I think the author wants to sell. She goes on and on about playing a “big game” and how they’ll pay, but then marries and procreates with her rapist. In the beginning, she gave off how she always hated her family’s name and money, then becomes exhaustingly materialistic. Killing the grandpa that molested her, I completely understand. But what was the other stuff? What was the point of her luring men if she wasn’t the BWK? That’s still never answered.
Thirdly, throughout this entire series, most the couplings make no sense and have zero chemistry. Colt and Gloria, at the biggest ones. Yes, they have a reversed bully moment, but it’s congested by a love triangle with Dixie and some nobody guy, that had no value to the story. By the second book, any draw for Gloria and Colt have is exhausted, for me.
The only couples that had any natural chemistry like that, was Devlin and Crystal, as well as Harper and Royal. The characters that did have chemistry, namely Duke and Colt, don’t end up together…why queer bait so much? The first time, it was so exciting to see something different. But then the author continues to Queer bait throughout the rest of the books. If you’re gonna have Queer characters just for some “inclusivity” quota, and not touch them again or dangle carrots in front of readers, knowing you’re gonna throw them in a heterosexual relationship… It feels so performative and disappointing.
In fact, Colt discovering that Duke was in love with him for years was so disappointing to me. He treated it so coldly. I understand Duke was far from innocent and Colt is not obligated to forgive him. So then how is it supposed to be a satisfying ending, if the one that did worse than Duke, gets it all? The constant contradiction in this series holds it back so much.
On the Colt and Gloria point. Why did Gloria even keep the baby a secret from Baron, or any of the Dolces, if she was going to revert back to her mousey ways and just tell him at his brothers funeral? She could’ve told Harper and Harper could’ve taken the baby with Royal, and said it was theirs to protect them. That just made the ending of Gloria’s book meaningless. So much for Gloria being a “badass” and threatening to kill Baron if she saw him again. She completely undid her own ending.
For Colt and Duke, once again, I completely understand Colt not wanting to be with Duke because of the torture he doled out to him. But Gloria participated just as much, if not more. Just because she was nice a couple times, she still tortured his sister just as much as the twins did. The argument that she was “forced”, could also be applied to Duke. So his argument for forgiving Gloria, makes no sense.
Dukes death adds nothing to Barons outcome or the stories. Is he sad? Yes. But he’s still with his twin brothers indirect-murderer and even married her and gets the happy ending he doesn’t deserve.
I love that this author isn’t afraid to “go there”, I just wished it was more organized, outlined and that the characters made sense. There were so many opportunities these stories could have gone, but ended up in the most blandest plots.
Despite my negative overtone of this review, this is a great universe and hope, one day, the writer revisits this story and maybe republishes it with a stronger backbone.