3.5 🌟
"Now she wanted vengeance. She wanted blood, and she made a promise to herself that she would stop at nothing until she found the man who took her father’s life...." (Prologue)
Vampire Romantasy | Enemies-to-Lovers | Secrets | Forced Proximity | Slow-burn
The writing was a little choppy. Odd sentence structures, incorrect word choices, and present/past tense inconsistencies made it a bit painful to read at times. However, I gave it a chance, and luckily, I felt myself being drawn into the story and didn't want to set it aside. It was a fairly quick read and probably would have finished it all in a day if my eyes didn't get so heavy and tired.
"His looming presence over me washed over my body like a shadow stretching beneath the dying sun— dark, inescapable, and suffocating in the most intoxicating way." (Ch 12)
Lilah sure did get her head hit a lot in a short amount of time. It's a wonder she survived all of that! And her power was a little unclear, confusing, she had it, but didn't or couldn't wield it at will (maybe it was due to her head getting smack so many time, heh).
Also, in the next book, I hope they go more into details of who Lilah's mother was exactly instead of a statement of fact and leaving it at that.
Nyx was kind of a let down, under the circumstances, powerless.
"As Nyx pulled me forward through the darkness to my inevitable doom, all I could feel now was the racing pulse of my heart." (Ch 28)
The plot had potential, but it was a bit up and down. For one, she was so coveted, so powerful, so important, but they kept letting her out of their grasp to risk her life on some trials and quests? If anything happened to her, then they'd be SOL and everything lost. Didn't make sense.
“It’s like drowning, your lungs begging for just one more breath of air, and you are so close to feeling that sweet release, yet it’s just out of your touch.” (Ch 20)
Hopefully, book 2 will be more consistent.
eARC courtesy of NetGalley