"it was why they tormented each other mercilessly, desperate to find ways to somehow, despite everything, still feel alive."
— four point two five stars
would i recommend this book? definitely!
trigger warnings: violence/light gore.
what a fantastic first novel for i.v. marie. like genuinely, i am extremely impressed. i wasn't too sure what to expect when i had preordered this. unlike some people, i wasn't familiar with the author or her bookish content, and i honestly just bought it because i thought it looked pretty. a sin, i know, because i didn't even read the synopsis when i purchased it, so i literally had no clue what to expect. i think, though, that this novel definitely blew my expectations out of the water.
immortal consequences follows six students—wren, august, olivier, emilio, irene, and masika—at blackwood academy, an academy for dead people where they learn to harness their magic in order to reap souls, and to pass the time before they begin to forget all of their memories. students are promised, though, one chance at beating the forgetting with the decennial, a trial where one student is nominated and has to prove their skills in reaping and their magical abilities in order to become ascended (or cross to the "other side", which no one has done before.)
given the premise, i was a bit skeptical, because six povs sounded entirely overwhelming and too much to follow and keep up with, but i ended up pleasantly surprised that it wasn't too hard to distinguish each character from each other. i would usually delve into some character analysis here, but because of the six alternating povs and the side characters, i truly just don't feel like doing that. sorry y'all. but i do have personal likes (and dislikes) when it comes to all six of our main characters and how their arcs and development were handled, so i'll dive into that instead.
to change it up a little bit, i'll start with my gripes on how character development was handled. because of how many povs there were, it was challenging for the author to truly flesh out every single character. for that reason, characters such as olivier and masika felt brushed past in terms of development, both of them feeling quite 2d rather than fleshed out like their counterparts. even emilie toed the line between 2d and proper characterization, finding himself to become more of the "shy boy" trope rather than an actual character, but because he held more weight in the plot, he had just a liiiiittle more development than masika or olivier.
it is incredibly obvious who the main characters of the story were given a few specific plot points, and i almost wish the story would have just been told from their povs rather than all six of them, as we likely could have seen more character development from wren, august, and irene in that case and have been given more reasoning to care about them all individually. in fact, out of every character, the only one we get a concrete backstory for is wren, which i think can be seen as both a detriment to the other characters and a plus for solidifying wren as the true main character in this story.
however, on that same point, i actually did kind of enjoy the mystery behind the characters "alive" lives and their afterlives. the fact that they were all apprehensive to talk about who they were when they were alive gave all the characters a sense of rebirth, a second chance if you will. (which this is why i liked irene's character so much, despite my previous gripes.) i also enjoyed how their past lives and their past decisions haunted the narrative—for example, the bad thing that wren did whilst she was alive (which i'm omitting for spoiler purposes, obviously) was her entire driving force, and it did make me gasp when it was finally revealed.
on the same vein, though, i do wish our villain character was better developed as well, because though he was downright despicable, the fact that one of the "parts" of the book was titled betrayal, but we didn't actually spend enough time with our villain previously to truly feel betrayed by him impacted the weight of the story, in my opinion. i do think he was an interesting antagonist, and i enjoyed the backstory we got for him, but it also failed to truly carry any actual weight outside of shock value because of a. how underdeveloped his relationship with the other characters was and b. the explanation felt brushed past because of how much else was going on in the story.
now i also realize that up until this point it reads as though i didn't like this book, but that's not the case. i promise. sometimes i just tend to be overcritical about things i truly enjoy, which sounds insane i know, but it also just means i spent more time analyzing every page.
the plot itself, as i briefly mentioned above, is interesting enough. i was intrigued to see how the author would handle a topic as ambitious and difficult to truly define as the afterlife and how she would put her own unique spin on it, and in truth i wasn't left feeling disappointed. i actually quite enjoyed her explanation for blackwood academy and how people were chosen for it (i'm not sure if this would be a spoiler, but i'm not going to mention it just in case. it was revealed in like the first hundred pages though?) and i felt that the worldbuilding was really solid. i was easily able to envision blackwood, the ether, and so on.
the pacing is where the story lost me just a bit, because i do think it toed the line between being too fast and too slow, as if the story didn't know how it wanted to progress. there were some time skips that kinda made the flow of the story a bit choppy, but nothing too bad that it made reading the book impossible or anything like that.
my main thing with the plot is that there is so much going on that it is very easy to get lost. i.v. marie obviously had a lot of ideas, and she was very ambitious in trying to tackle them all, so it was easy to get overwhelmed, and a lot of plot points didn't have enough time to settle or breathe before we were immediately whisked to another earth-shattering twist. however!!! i think that the chaos actually helped the story, rather than hindered it, because i feel like a story about the afterlife and a competition for eternal power should be chaotic. if the story had less things going on, it may have been easier to digest, but it would have lost a lot of its charm and what actually made the story interesting, if that makes any sort of sense.
i do wish, too, that we would have gotten to see the magic system more fleshed out. we weren't given much of an explanation on how any of it works or how people get their powers after they die (and quite frankly we didn't get enough scenes actually in classes, because i think that if we had, the magic system would have felt more full to me.) however, i did enjoy that most of the characters had a type of magic that they specialized in. just some of the uses of magic felt choppy because the system itself was poorly explained.
enough of my rambling though. i'm angry this ended on a cliffhanger and i have to wait for the next book because who knooooows when that'll be... but despite my gripes and over-analysis, i did find this book to be quite good, especially for a debut novel. i truly do hope the second book is even stronger than the first as i.v. marie finds her narrative voice and writing style, and i absolutely will be seated to see it.