A terrible tale that loses its impact
Laura Lukasavage has done an excellent job exploring the difficult subject of domestic abuse in her novella, ‘Enough is Enough’. Immediately gripping from the first page, she paints a starkly unpleasant but realistic picture of an abusive husband, ex-cop Jim.
‘Enough is Enough’ has an excellent, very promising start. Lukasavage gives us a masterful opening, but once the tension diminishes, so does the reader engagement, as Elena’s life becomes more manageable through the support of family, friends and a therapist.
All too quickly, what was a shocking read becomes a saccharine set of vignettes: the abusive husband’s letter explaining how he loved her and knew his actions were wrong, the painless divorce accompanied by enough money to start again, and the unending love of Jason, life-long best friend and soon to be second husband.
Abuse is the central character of this short book. It is cleverly highlighted through flashback scenes, easily signposted by the author. Perhaps as people recover from terrible situations, that central character naturally fades away, yet this is a story; it is fiction, and we need to know what happens to those characters. Lukasavage doesn’t do enough to explain what drove Jim to violence (surely not alcohol alone). We need to know if Elena is faultless and why she remained for so long, especially as she has a self-confessed capacity for wrongdoing. There are some great ideas, but the novella transitions from alarmingly realistic to fairy tale ending far too swiftly.
This novella needed Jason to turn out to be just like Jim because Elena didn’t grow in any meaningful way such that she wouldn’t make the same mistakes again. One more chapter with the new relationship becoming abusive would have made this a great read. Then another to see the protagonist genuinely change and become a fiercely independent woman, protective of her future and child, which would be a five-star story.
A tight edit would help clear up a few errors, give Elena more time with therapist Jacci, tone down the cutesy second act and give us more insight into Jim’s decline and Jason’s enduring love for his childhood friend. And more importantly, have Elena drive the story, not react to it.
This is a harrowing and terrible tale, but its impact gets washed away all too soon. Readers will align themselves with the protagonist from the first page, but it will not hook all of them to the end.