So bad.
Desperately needed an editor. The first twelve chapters could have easily been condensed into three to four without losing anything relevant. It would have different if the writing was immersive or lyrical or simply fun to read but instead it was repetitive (if one of the men had said, 'no pressure' one more time I was going to scream), filled with continuity errors (you just had this conversation at the end of the last chapter!) and exaggerated melodrama. (Heads up: she is not in hiding from abusive parents as the story first leads you to believe, she is choosing to hide from the world because apparently the dynamic, proactive woman, who had a go-bag at ready, walked out to live her life her way when her parents gave her an ultimatum and created a whole secure, stable life for herself by herself within a single year's time, then turned into this broken bird for author only knows what reason because it certainly wasn't on-page.)
Female lead was weak, immature and her inner monologue was needlessly repetitious, self-involved and boring af. I get it, you think you have been hard done by because your toxic parents gave you the choice to either marry at their will or be disowned. But you were a grown-ass woman with a flourishing career and enough savings to travel to a new destination, secure a safe and comfortable place to live AND start your own frickin' business so privileged would be the description for your situation, not tragic, and all this I'm-so-sad-and-alone whining just makes you look narcissistic and spoiled. Personally, I think you should be grateful to your parents for disowning you because it gave you the kick in the rear you clearly needed to leave the nest and take control of your life and you didn't even have to deal with their toxicity and interference while your were doing it. (Also, the female lead closing her store during her business hours on more than one occasion to spend time with the men with no care for her customers, just made her look more narcissistic and spoiled. And, since it was at the men's request, it also made them look self-important and disrespectful of her work.)
"Lydia, your input has already elevated this project beyond anything I could have imagined. I would be honored if you'd consider designing the cards as well.”
The flattering of the female lead by the male leads was so over-the-top ridiculous, it sounded fake, manipulative and nefarious, especially since they didn't actually need her and her 'artistic talents' because one alpha already did commercial design work, another was an actual artisan woodcarver (and Elias, Finn was the one who originally came up with snowflakes for winter and blossoms for spring, not her, the one idea she had at dinner was stupid) and a third already had a successful business created around his specialty preserves. On top of the that, the project he was rhapsodizing about were wooden gift boxes containing jars of preserves, so it's not like it was cutting edge stuff, commercially or artistically.
Started skimming at 35% due to how boring the story was compounded by the stupidity of the phone situation. First off, she owned an art supply story so she would have had a business phone in her store for customers to contact her for information and ordering (people picking up orders is mentioned in the story), especially since she didn't have a webpage providing hours, directions, product info, ect. Second off, the male lead telling her she was going out to dinner with him, as opposed to asking her, was just plain rude. Third of all, the male lead wanting her to check-in with him every day at the same time is huge red flag territory. And pray tell, how would that prevent them from needlessly worrying again if this scenario were to repeat itself given they would still need to come to the shop because she still wouldn't have had any way to contact them?
Completely quit at 42%. The writing was poor, the story was boring, the female lead was a self-involved twit and the male leads come off as predators manipulating a broken, vulnerable woman and the omega male lead crawling in to sleep with the female lead without prior intimacy, reason, invitation or permission tipped the scales into too creepy for me.
Do not recommend.