Doll: Cut To Fit: A Dark MM Feminization Story

by Daniel May

“What am I to do with you?” he murmured. He stroked his thumb over Christoph’s lips, which bore only the faintest hint of lipstick still. “Running around and seducing strangers. What does a bad girl like you need to learn how to behave?”

Christoph is a beauty despite his best efforts, a failed boxer who has tried since puberty to get his pretty face broken.

Waltz is a domineering and possessive shut-in with deep pockets, for whom it isn’t enough to merely buy Christoph’s time.

Finding himself irresistibly drawn into Waltz’s clutches — the money too good, his circumstances too desperate — Christoph can only succumb. Transformed by a regiment of supplements and Waltz’s rigid discipline, made chaste and increasingly feminized, Christoph deteriorates gradually into Waltz’s greatest a human doll.

The obsession only deepens when a former client materializes — the heavily tattooed, wealthy, unpredictable and dangerous mobster’s son named Grant. Grant’s encouragement instantly ups the ante, accelerating Christoph’s transformation and Waltz’s ambitions, further ensconcing them all in a depraved subculture.

Finally, there remains only one more level of degeneracy to transcend.

Cut To Fit is a compilation of the four short books of the Doll Doll Part I, Doll Part II, Doll Part III, and Doll Part IV.
A work of dark contemporary MM, it features forced feminization, emasculation, relationship horror, and a brief departure into MMM. It takes place in the same universe as the Obsessed With Him books and the Fresh Taste of Ink trilogy.

Genres: M M Romance, Dark, Erotica, Horror

148 pages, Paperback

Published April 3, 2025

Reviews

[Elizabeth · Rating 4 out of 5]

“So very good,” whispered Waltz. “And so pretty. The prettiest little doll"

Daniel May's books are so descriptively filthy and creative. Sometimes I read the blurbs and genuinely wonder if I'm into that, and then I realize it doesn't really matter because I'm usually very into the way Daniel writes that. Doll is one of those books. I read the book and enjoyed it, and I'm still not sure lol. I don't have any criticisms of the writing itself- I think the book is well written. It started as a serial and I think that's fairly obvious in the way each chapter is sort of connected but doesn't quite fit together how you'd expect. With that said, for the amount of plot in the book that really isn't a problem. The mindbreak elements will appeal to fans of Princess, Claiming the Cleanfreak or Fair Game.

“One of these days,” he murmured, “you’re going to walk out of your house as a man for the last time.”
Christoph’s lips stilled for a moment.
“You’re going to come visit me,” Waltz continued, tone low and intimate, “and you’re going to leave as nothing… but… a doll…” His fingers trailed down Christoph’s neck, slid around, and crept slowly down the top of his chest. To the straining laces of the negligee. “Maybe… it was even today.”

In Doll, we meet Christoph, a sex worker who has been involved with Waltz for awhile. He's been led down this path of going along with things he isn't really into and actively resents. Christoph hates Waltz, but hey- everybody's gotta make a living. The more Waltz plays with him, the more he needs it. The more Waltz changes his body, the less he can appeal to the average person who isn't into men who look like him. I enjoyed reading Waltz break Christoph and smash through his boundaries bit by bit. Waltz isn't the first person to teach Christoph about rough sex though- and when someone from his past pops up unexpectedly, has he finally gotten in too deep? Or will he completely surrender who he is to Waltz and Grant? My only real issue with this book was the ending... it's told from Waltz and Grant's POVs and I really wanted to know how Christoph was feeling. I'm pretty sure it's on purpose- after all, dolls don't have emotions or preferences- but I felt a bit let down since quite a bit of the rest of the book is from his perspective.

What was a toy without someone to play with it?

As usual with Daniel May's work, check the trigger/content warnings before deciding if this is for you. If you prefer your romance soft and kind, this isn't for you. If you don't like sex work, sharing, or boundaries being completely disregarded, this isn't for you. If you're not into feminization, body modification or the use of feminine descriptive words for male body parts, this isn't for you. If none of the above is an issue, then enjoy!

Rating: 3.75
Angst: 3.5/5
Steam: 4.5/5

I received an advance copy of this book and this is my honest review

[Brooke · Rating 4 out of 5]

⭐️ 3.5 stars ⭐️

“Why are you trying to destroy me?” Christoph asked.
“Because,” Waltz said, “I want to ruin you for other people.”

Was this hot? Yes. Was this uncomfortable? Also yes. Not that I expected any different from Daniel May.

Everything about him, every part of his body, existed for male pleasure. And he was no male. He was no female, either. He was pleasure. He was cocksleeve, he was fucktoy. He was the word ‘yes.’

A dark erotica, feminization taken to the next level, a questionable ‘relationship’, a doll that wants to hate it but deep down can’t give it up.
It was very extreme, very fantasy-like, a bit disturbing, almost too much at times. I still enjoyed it…I think?

Christoph looked in the mirror. A lovely doll’s face stared back at him.

I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews, and this is my honest review.

CW and NSFW info (spoilers):
- Sex worker MC
- Extreme forced feminization (surgery, hormones,shrinkage)
- Lingerie
- Brief MMM/sharing
- Hate sex/rough sex
- D/s dynamics
- Chastity/Cock cages
- Emasculation
- Degradation
- Restraints
- Rimming
- Public teasing
- Throat-fucking
- Semi-public sex

[Kathleen in Oslo]

I love me some Daniel May and I love me some feminization erotica and I read enough creatively tagged E-rated fic to think I can cope with dark, but this was too much even for me. Phew. May is not fucking around with the CWs!

This was really well written and, at some level, I wanted to see where it ended up, but -- too yikes for this delicate flower. Calling time at 47% with no rating and no hard feelings.

I got an ARC from GRR in exchange for an honest review.

[Mandy · Rating 5 out of 5]

This author always leaves me feeling a little disturbed but in the best way possible and this book is no exception. It’s not a story for everyone because at its core it’s dark, and there is a definite power imbalance, but the characters are well crafted and their emotions jump off the page, so much that I couldn’t put it down. If you enjoy dark and twisted romance then this book is definitely for you.

[angie_bookrecs · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book was an absolute fever dream.

Did I enjoy it? Yes. Yes I did.

[Don · Rating 5 out of 5]

NOW THIS IS HOW YOU WRITE A DARK ROMANCE.

Actually so much better than I expected! And frankly I had high expectations haha. The premise sounded so good, and while at first I wasn't the biggest fan of the sharing aspect (just not my personal preference) I think everything fell into place quite nicely.

(Also I fell in love with Grant and his two 'ladies' heheh)

The prose was beautiful, the characters deliciously twisted and the sex was HOT as HELL. I applaud the author for writing such successful psychological erotica, and I will definitely read more from them.

Thank you for the ARC.

[F ౨ৎ · Rating 4 out of 5]

good stuff 🚬

[lex ❄ · Rating 5 out of 5]

Holy shit, this was one of the hottest things I've read ever. I'm very glad to discover that there are works from this author's catalogue that totally work for me, this one was amazing.

So this is actually a compilation of earlier works from the same series that follow the same characters. The story is simple: Christopher is a sex worker involved with a rich client, Waltz, a man that has been transforming his body into his 'doll' through feminization. Christopher hated the idea at first, but the book explores his feelings towards his new body through sex and his relationship with Waltz, adding a past client to the mix.

First things first: this was hot as fuck. Yes, I know I already mentioned, but I have to say it again because of how well the author uses the erotica element. It's fantastic, never got bored, I was always at the edge of my seat because it is thrillint to follow Christopher's journey and trying to guess what Waltz will do next with him.

Besides the sex scenes, the dynamic was fascinating as well. I really like the whole set up with some push a pull between them, Christopher hating Waltz but not being able to help to crave having sex with him - wanting a connection, until he realizes he might be deeper into the whole thing than he initially thought.

Then there's the added element of sharing and involving another guy to their dynamic, which was exciting too. All three work very well together. It was hot to read about Christopher between two men, and the conclusion regarding their relationship was satisfying.

The last chapter was perfect and the reveal was thrilling. Those two aren't really the healthiest couple, but I'm obsessed with their mutual freakness. Also, I wouldn't mind an extra or something about the new trio from the ending.

-I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews, and this is my honest review.

Tags: (might miss some of them)
-POV: third person
-Content warnings: forced feminization turned consensual, consent issues turned fully consensual, forced body modification turned consensual, coercitive elements, sort of mindbreak
-Elements: size difference, age gap, erotica, darkish
-Kinks: dirty talk, pierced dick, body modification, feminization, choking, chastity cage, feminine lingerie, crossdressing, free use, identity porn, biting, nipple clamps, sharing partner/cuckolding, voyeurism
-Sexual act(s): barebacking, creampie, blowjobs, facial, fingering, riding, toys/plugs, rimming, threesome
-Dynamic: MM (+M for sharing), strict older top and younger bottom, unbalanced power dynamics, sex worker x client

[Amanda Winter · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book was absolutely unhinged—and I kinda loved it?

Doll: Cut to Fit is dark erotica turned all the way up. It’s twisted, intense, disturbingly sexy, and had me flipping pages like I was hypnotised. The premise hooked me immediately: a sex worker, Christopher, finds himself in the grip of a wealthy, controlling client named Waltz who’s literally transforming him into his perfect ‘doll’ through extreme feminisation. And while it sounded intense on paper...it’s even more unhinged in execution.

The prose is beautiful, the characters deliciously messed up, and the sex? Hot as hell. Like, melt-your-brain hot. Daniel May is a wizard when it comes to psychological erotica, and I’ll absolutely be reading more from him.

This is actually a compilation of earlier works from the same series, all following the same cast. The story itself is simple: Christopher, a sex worker, gets drawn into the world of Waltz, who’s reshaping his body into a living doll. Christopher fights it at first, but the book takes us deep into his shifting feelings—through sex, manipulation, and a growing, complicated dependency.

Yes, it’s extreme. Like, fantasy-level intense. We’re talking forced feminisation (surgery, hormones, chastity), cock cages, degradation, restraints, throat-fucking, hate sex, D/s power games, even public teasing and some MMM action. And yet—somehow—it never felt boring or gratuitous. I was constantly on edge wondering what Waltz would do next, and that tension kept me hooked.

What really got me was the push-pull between Christopher and Waltz. He hates the situation, resents Waltz...but can’t stop craving him. That tension, that desperation for connection beneath all the twisted power play? Absolutely fascinating.

The last chapter? Perfection. The ending reveal had me grinning, and while this couple (throuple?) isn’t exactly healthy...I’m obsessed with how mutually freaky they are. I honestly wouldn’t mind a little bonus story about this new trio—I need more of that energy in my life.

[Eileen Adams · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.25 stars

This author always goes deliciously dark in their books. I had read the other books in this world but somehow missed this one if it was released as individual titles. Now all bundled.

Waltz is a homebound with a lot of money at his disposal. He has a special interest in a former boxer who has their own issues. Waltz loves to degrade them and do whatever he wants to them. He has trained them to perfection and delights in what has become of the former boxer.

Christopher is locked in chastity and dressed as a female. He never has access to to his parts as only Waltz has the key. Christopher has gone a transformation to be Waltz's perfect doll from the hair, makeup, to the nails, to the clothes and most importantly the cage. At times Christopher says they hate Waltz but then it starts all over again.

However Waltz was not the only one Christopher was with. When Grant shows up he takes liberties with what was once his? He helps Christoph with making him feel like trash and Christoph does everything that is asked of him. Grant takes full advantage of all the newness of Christoph's body.

Will Christoph decide to go home with Grant? What will happen when Waltz finds out where Christoph is? Will the two of them combine to give Christoph the night of his life? Will Waltz allow Grant to continue to use his Doll? Will they team up and ignore their Doll and wait for Christoph to contact them? Will Christoph call or find someone new?

Always a read from this author

[Fanykuroi (Sapphire Book Lover9095) · Rating 4 out of 5]

A book I didn’t think I would enjoy as much as I did

Even though I tend to enjoy dark romance or just anything on the darker shade, this was my first Daniel May book and let tell ya…it was INTENSE. Even though sometimes it could be “too much” and I had to take a breather, I always came back for more. Call it curiosity, call it morbid enjoyment, but this book scratched an itch in my brain I didn’t know I had. From the dollification (which I personally adore so much), to the body mods, to the dark, dark romance aspect, this book takes you on a journey of self discovery and acceptance, of peace of mind and settledness in who…or what…you are.

Gotta warn though, this book is definitely not for everyone so please, PLEASE read the TW and CW/NSFW content (full list in detail inside the book): [MIGHT CONTAIN SPOILERS SO SKIP IF WANT TO CONTINUE READING!]

* Sex worker MC x Rich recluse MC
*D/s dynamics (dollification play/extreme power exchange)
*Brief MMM/sharing
*Extreme forced feminization (details in book TW page)
*Lingerie
*Chastity/Cock cages
*Emasculation
*Degradation
*Restraints
*Public teasing
*Semi-public sex
*Relative HEA (for the context of the story)

Overview:

Overall:3.75/5
Smut: 4/5
Storyline: 3/5
The feels it made me feel: 3/5

**I received a copy of this arc via GRR and this is my honest review**

[Kindle Addict · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ok so clearly don’t go in this expecting romance or tenderness. It’s pure erotica and the dark kind with mind twisting games and some violent bits. Make sure to check the content warnings as a lot of things can be triggering (especially if you feel some body dysmorphia)

I had read the first 2 parts last year and loved them but had been hesitant to read the end because of the subjects of the surgery. I’m glad to say the surgery scene itself was not on page.

In the end, even though I loved the beginning I’d rate it as a 3 stars because of Grant. Obviously Waltz was not an angel but the addition of this disturbing character was not a welcoming one for me. He gave me the creeps and I honestly didn’t get why he had so much time about him at the end. A whole chapter for him when I wanted to focus on the main event was a shame in my opinion.

Overall it was a nice dirty read but to read only if you’re in the mood for that kind of twisted sh*t 😉

[Paula · Rating 3 out of 5]

"Doll: Cut to Fit" by Daniel May is a dark and provocative exploration of forced feminization and relationship horror. The story follows Christoph, a failed boxer who becomes entangled with Waltz, a domineering shut-in. Waltz's obsession leads to Christoph's transformation into a human doll, with the narrative delving into themes of control, identity, and depravity. The arrival of Grant, a dangerous mobster's son, further intensifies the dynamics, pushing the characters into deeper levels of degeneracy.

The book is divided into four parts, blending contemporary MMM themes with elements of horror and psychological manipulation. It is set in the same universe as Daniel May's other works, such as the "Obsessed With Him" series.

You should note that this book addresses sensitive topics, including sex work, sharing, disregard for boundaries, feminization, body modification, and the use of feminine descriptive language for male body parts.

[Miruru Shouting · Rating 5 out of 5]

This gets right into the smut but written so well, you get all the emotions from several POVs. The hate, the restraint, the control, the lust, everything is felt so keenly through the pages. Just wow and so hot.

Body modification, enemies to lovers, sex worker, age gap, sharing, feminization, humiliation, degradation, public sex, dirty talk, and more.

I'm actually glad that it wasn't exclusively Waltz and Christoph. They were hot together, but adding in Grant as someone they shared with and an occasional third, was so hot. Especially that last scene hiding away at the wedding, where there was also some Waltz x Grant action, yummmmm. So perfect.

This is all four parts of the Doll series combined into one collection. I wonder if Grant is going to get his own spin-off with either Rocky or Sorrel (or both?). Would love for him to link back up with Waltz and Christoph and have more poly sexytimes. So hot.

[Mary Forster · Rating 4 out of 5]

This wasn't a story for me but I did read it all the way through. It sounded interesting when I first read the blurb but after getting in a few pages I realized it wasn't a book that I would pick up and read on any other day.

Christoph will do whatever he can for money however when he meets Waltz, he has other ideas of what to do with the money that he pays Christoph. Christoph starts becoming a doll and one that he hates. He hates everything that Waltz is doing but he keeps going back for more.

Waltz will not stop until he gets the perfect doll and he will make Christoph into exactly that. He knows really what Christoph wants even though he fights it every time.

I received an ARC from GRR and this is my honest review.

[Precious · Rating 4 out of 5]

Alright, I'll be honest, I didn't know what I was getting myself into when I picked this book.

I was shocked from beginning until the end. Christoph and Waltz relationship is so twisted and shouldn't be allowed to be honest. There are many ethical rules broken. And I'm just jaw-dropped shocked by how much I ended up kinda liking it.

This is dark, like darker than black. There is absolutely no turning back once you start this book.

The only thing I wish was included was a chapter that clearly spoke of how the two main characters met. I think that would've tied the story together more.


//ARC Review//

[M's ☆~HEA~☆ · Rating 3 out of 5]

So, I'll add this to my "kink-feminization" shelf but this isn't really my kink when presented this way.

I also felt like Cristoph truly despised what was being done to him at first but surely that couldn't be true as evidenced by his later behaviors.

I didn't understand the addition of Grant. If he just existed in that sofa-sex chapter then I'd understand, and even acknowledge that he & Cristoph were undeniable sexier together than Cristoph & Waltz, but otherwise why keep him around. I mean the last chapter was truly bizarre.

Anyway, I enjoy being unsettled sometimes but this one didn't hit any happy notes for me.

[Jo · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 rounded up

This was a journey!! The beginnings of the story we got more in their head thoughts and details. I really wanted more thoughts from Christoph. But as he became more of a doll he became solely focused on the use of his body he become more “no thoughts, head empty.”so, really channeling that doll life. I really did not care for Grant or the dynamic he brought. I honestly don’t understand Waltz at all in that situation. To be fair I don’t really understand Christoph and Waltz’s relationship either. Ownership & dependency? Either way this book made for an interesting read!

[Akilah O · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dollification/Forced Feminization is one of my favorite kinks and boy did Daniel deliver. This is definitely a DARK romance, and I want to emphasize dark as the romance was definitely a side in this story. Christoph and Walz straddled the enemies/lovers line the entire story and even in the end I was still left wondering whether they truly cared for the other. 10/10 for the kinks, but I would have loved a smidge more romance to balance it out at the end as obsession was the only clear feeling.

[amanda rana · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dark & Wild Times

Whew! When Daniel May releases a book and warns "The winter darkness made me deranged and forced my hand, that is all I can say in my own defense." - listen to him. This was intense. And it was so so good, as long as you are in the mood for something buck-wild. Little to no romance, honestly very little plot either... More like a series of events increasing in scale. 🔥

[Traci S · Rating 3 out of 5]

Thank you for the book, here is my honest opinion:
This author always delivers unique, challenging, and dark stories. This was unlike any other book I can remember reading. I appreciate the originality of the feminization and doll-ification topics but I’m not sure this was for me- especially once Grant shows up. Not my favorite but original and well executed if you like genuinely dark storytelling.

[Belinda Zamora · Rating 4 out of 5]

Dark, twisted, deranged, and obsessive.
Waltz pushes Cristoph to become a living doll
in order to satisfy his desires and while Christoph tries to fight it, he slowly comes to realize he enjoys it and therefore hates the situation and himself.
Adding Grant to the mix just upped the ante and pushed them all to the point of no return.

[Deb Kel · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is definite advice to heed the triggers! Though I have to say i found it a compelling story though twisted and some disturbing elements, I was completely invested in the characters journey! If you have a penchant for the dark kink then this one is for you!
I received a free arc copy and this is my honest review

[Ida Umphers · Rating 5 out of 5]

My first book with this trope and while I really wanted to see how May would let this play out to the end it was an unbelievably hard read for me. My heart was ripped apart for Christoph. This fell into the body horror category and this one is going to stick in my head. May continues to be one of those writers who never pulls punches and that's why I keep checking out every new book.

[Nina Diab · Rating 4 out of 5]

"You look like bait. You look like prey. You look like something doctors would euthanize out of pity. And I love it.”

I enjoyed this book. It was unique, definitely dark, and not really something I've read before. So I found myself completely entranced at times, and more than once thought these guys were nuts lol But it was hot! And I couldn't look away. 4 stars.

[m]

I loved Princess and am generally a fan of May’s writing - however I went into this knowing that part one was maybe too intense for me and the full story was definitely just a bit out of my comfort zone. If you like intense feminisation/dollification than definitely give it a try. May has a powerfully descriptive and unhinged voice. Just heed the content warnings.

[riya.reads · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 ⭐️ rounded up
I'm not sure what to think about this book. The spice was okay which isn't great for an erotica book. I've read several other books from this author and the spice in that was amazing even if it was dark. I was introduced to something new, I didn't know femboys to this extent existed but didn't like most of what was happening in the book so that's a bummer.

[Sammy Standing · Rating 5 out of 5]

I absolutely devoured this book in one sitting, this was my first read by this author and my first venture into feminization. I could not put this book down for even a second, I absolutely loved this and will definitely have to check out more books by this author.

[Ashlee · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book is something else - so dark, disturbing, and filthy in all of the best ways! The way it’s written brings you right into the story and keeps you hooked from beginning to end! I’m definitely going to have to read the rest of the books set in this world now!

[R Edwards · Rating 5 out of 5]

Doll is an extremely dark book. Read the warnings. Waltz and Grant push Christoph down a road that is as delicious as it is dark. May really delivers in this diabolical journey of change. For fans of true darkness, this is an absolute must read.