3 Gripped Stars ⭐️
Spicy Level: 🌶️.5/5
I really wanted to love this. I inhaled the first book, and while I had some issues with the second, it was mostly because it felt like a filler book building up for this ultimate ending. Instead, I was frustrated by the constant repetition in plot, dialogue and writing, aspects thrown into the plot with very little buildup or time for resolution, and a plot with the most confused pacing in the world. The middle just felt like two characters sitting in a room talking about what they did, and as a result, those aspects were never really shown to the reader. This is one of my pet peeves in writing: I wanna be shown, NOT TOLD!!!!
The writing in this was also oddly full of purple prose. Internal monologues spiralled endlessly, repeating the same emotions and thoughts so many times. And the SPICY SCENES... I was skimming them because they felt overly emotional and metaphorical, that they were just annoying and so formulaic. WHERE was the Daddy Dacre from the previous books? He turns into a moaning boy with exaggerated descriptions of his love for Verena.
I also found myself counting a lot of repetitive words, and once I start doing that, I know it's normally a bad sign for the book because I get more and more annoyed by the word being used OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN...
THE MAJOR WORD ISSUES:
The Magic System:
I STILL do not know how the magic system works in this world, which is shocking given the amount of metaphorical, internal, poetic monologuing Verena has with her internal struggle to find her magic. And besides Verena’s magic, which is vaguely explained, the magic wielded by anyone other than her father has NO EXPLANATION whatsoever; it's just shadows, energy and feelings. The word "magic" was used 355 times. That is a lot of times to not know how it really works...
The GRIP of Doom:
If I had to read the word grip one more time, I was going to scream. I am not kidding; the word was used 98 times, and I swear each spicy scene had at least 10 mentions in that chapter alone.
Case in point, here’s a breakdown of Chapter 18:
1) "His grip was firm, grounding"
2) "Holding me with a grip that bordered on painful."
3) "Dacre moaned softly, his hands gripping my waist possessively"
4) "His grip tightening like he was anchoring himself"
5) "The slow, measured control he had clung to fractured as his hands gripped my thighs"
6) ""Fuck," Dacre groaned, his hands gripping tighter as I began to move"
7) "and I gripped my breasts in my hands, rolling my nipples between my fingers as he slammed harder inside me"
8) "My hands gripped his hair"
9) "One hand moved to grip my hip"
10) "His hands gripping my hips tightly as he rode out my orgasm with me"
ALL IN ONE CHAPTER. I was seriously starting to lose a grip on my reality. There are so many synonyms... clutch, hold, clench, seize, clasp, lock, and grasp... just begging for use. WHY WAS IT ONLY GRIP?
The Bond Obsession:
Okay, we get it... they have a bond! Bonds are rare. Their attraction and pull for each other is otherworldly, and they spend pages waxing lyrical about it. But the word bond was mentioned 92 times. While this isn't as bad as some books (I am looking at you "The Bonds That Tie" series), I still found myself irritated by how often the concept was repeated.
Dacre’s Father... Who?
What is Dacre’s father’s name? I kept trying to remember if we were ever told, but he was only ever referred to as Dacre's Father in the text. Why is his identity constantly defined by his relationship with Dacre? The first time, it would have been fine. If the text had been "X, Dacre’s Father", a reminder for the reader could explain who he is... But "Dacre's Father" never stopped. His name was mentioned 55 times!
𝙏𝙧𝙤𝙥𝙚𝙨 and 𝙈𝙞𝙘𝙧𝙤 𝙏𝙧𝙤𝙥𝙚𝙨:
▶ Political Intrigue
▶ Found Family
▶ Burn The World For You
▶ Touch Her You Die
▶ Prophecy
▶ Tending to Injuries
▶ "Look at me"
▶ Fated Mates
▶ Chin Lift
▶ On My Knees For You
▶ "Lift Your Hips For me"
▶ "Sit on my Face"
Overall, while I didn’t love this book as much as I had hoped, the world remains intriguing, and I wanted to see the HEA, and there are still aspects that kept me entertained, which is why I continued reading and didn't DNF... I just wish the final installment had delivered more of the Romantasy Crack that was in book 1...
Thank you to Holly Renee for my gifted copy. All thoughts and opinions are my own.