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Ard's Oath #6
King's Fall
Ard and his companions are being hunted by King Martin, who has gone completely scorched earth on his own kingdom in an effort to root them out. The lovable mage finds a quiet spot in the uninhabitable wilds of Garrish to train his soul magic—only nothing ever goes quite according to Ard’s plan.
Driven out by King Martin’s escalating mania, Ard must now go through the king to reach the goddess behind it all.
Driven out by King Martin’s escalating mania, Ard must now go through the king to reach the goddess behind it all.
425 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 7, 2025
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About the author
Bruce Sentar
51 books804 followersBorn and raised in the agricultural midwest, I moved every year after school even as far as Shanghai before settling down with my wife in Chicago.
I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.
I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.
Connect with me on Facebook for updates on my latest books.
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I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.
I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.
Connect with me on Facebook for updates on my latest books.
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June 22, 2025
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February 18, 2026
Title: Chaos, Gods, and the Cost of Wit — When Humor Meets Escalation in a Power Fantasy
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Hook and Thesis
King's Fall by Bruce Sentar represents a turning point in the Ard’s Oath series, escalating the narrative from political maneuvering into divine-level conflict. While maintaining the humor and energetic pacing that define the series, this installment highlights both the strengths and limitations of its formula — particularly the balance between comedic protagonist energy and increasingly serious stakes.
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Introduction
As the sixth entry in the Ard’s Oath series, this volume builds upon prior developments by pushing Ard into direct confrontation with larger forces manipulating events behind the scenes. The story combines escalating magical power systems, expanding harem dynamics, and growing mythological lore, positioning itself as both continuation and narrative escalation.
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Basic Plot Summary
Ard and his companions become targets of King Martin, whose increasingly extreme actions threaten the stability of his own kingdom. Forced into survival mode, Ard retreats into the wilds to develop his soul magic, only to find himself repeatedly drawn into conflict. As the king’s obsession intensifies, Ard discovers deeper manipulation involving divine entities, ultimately forcing him toward confrontation not just with a mortal ruler but with a goddess influencing events from the shadows.
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Analysis / Evaluation
The novel’s strongest feature lies in momentum. The plot advances quickly, driven by constant conflict and escalating stakes. However, the narrative sometimes struggles to balance its comedic tone with the darker implications of war and divine manipulation. Reader responses suggest that while Ard’s humor remains entertaining, it can occasionally undermine tension during moments that might otherwise feel more dramatic.
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Characters
Ard remains a polarizing protagonist. His sarcastic banter, irreverent attitude, and hidden intelligence make him distinctive within the genre, yet some readers find his personality overwhelming or repetitive. Supporting characters — particularly the anchors and romantic partners — provide emotional grounding and variety, though the expanding cast risks reducing individual development for some members.
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Setting
The story expands beyond political intrigue into larger mythological territory. Garrish’s wild regions provide a harsh training environment, while divine interference introduces cosmic stakes. The progression from localized conflicts to god-level threats reflects the increasing scale typical of long-running progression fantasy series.
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Structure
The narrative follows a layered escalation:
This structure maintains forward momentum but leaves limited space for slower character exploration.
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Themes
Key themes include:
- Power versus responsibility.
- Chaos as both strength and weakness.
- Manipulation by higher forces.
- Loyalty and relationships under pressure.
The story also examines how humor functions as both defense mechanism and identity.
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Writing Style
Sentar’s writing style emphasizes accessibility and speed. Dialogue-driven scenes and witty exchanges dominate the narrative flow. Action sequences remain clear and energetic, though tonal consistency varies depending on the balance between comedic and dramatic elements.
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Tone
The tone blends irreverent humor with epic fantasy stakes. Ard’s personality sets the emotional rhythm, creating a playful yet occasionally chaotic narrative atmosphere. For some readers, this tonal mixture enhances engagement; for others, it reduces emotional gravity.
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Impact
As a later-series installment, King's Fall expands the mythology and raises stakes significantly, setting the stage for future developments involving divine-level threats. Its impact lies more in narrative positioning than in delivering standalone resolution.
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Praise and Critique
Praise:
- Engaging protagonist with distinctive voice.
- Strong pacing and entertaining dialogue.
- Expanded lore involving gods and higher magic.
- Action-driven storytelling that maintains reader momentum.
Critique:
- Protagonist’s humor may feel excessive or repetitive.
- Large supporting cast can dilute character focus.
- Power escalation risks reducing tension.
- Emotional stakes occasionally overshadowed by banter.
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Evaluation
The book succeeds as a continuation for established fans, reinforcing familiar strengths while revealing structural limitations inherent in long-running progression fantasy narratives. Readers invested in Ard’s personality and worldbuilding will likely remain engaged, while newcomers may find the tonal style polarizing.
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Comparison
Compared to earlier entries such as Magic's Mantle or Merchant of Rebellion, this installment leans more heavily into divine-scale conflict and large narrative escalation rather than foundational character development. Within the genre, it aligns with mid-to-late series arcs where power levels increase rapidly and mythological frameworks become central.
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Conclusion
King's Fall delivers a fast-paced, humor-driven continuation that pushes Ard’s journey into larger and more dangerous territory. While its strengths lie in entertainment value and escalating stakes, its reliance on established character traits and rapid progression may divide readers seeking deeper emotional or structural refinement. Nonetheless, it effectively prepares the series for its next phase while preserving the chaotic charm that defines Ard’s Oath.
--------------------------------------------------
Hook and Thesis
King's Fall by Bruce Sentar represents a turning point in the Ard’s Oath series, escalating the narrative from political maneuvering into divine-level conflict. While maintaining the humor and energetic pacing that define the series, this installment highlights both the strengths and limitations of its formula — particularly the balance between comedic protagonist energy and increasingly serious stakes.
--------------------------------------------------
Introduction
As the sixth entry in the Ard’s Oath series, this volume builds upon prior developments by pushing Ard into direct confrontation with larger forces manipulating events behind the scenes. The story combines escalating magical power systems, expanding harem dynamics, and growing mythological lore, positioning itself as both continuation and narrative escalation.
--------------------------------------------------
Basic Plot Summary
Ard and his companions become targets of King Martin, whose increasingly extreme actions threaten the stability of his own kingdom. Forced into survival mode, Ard retreats into the wilds to develop his soul magic, only to find himself repeatedly drawn into conflict. As the king’s obsession intensifies, Ard discovers deeper manipulation involving divine entities, ultimately forcing him toward confrontation not just with a mortal ruler but with a goddess influencing events from the shadows.
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Analysis / Evaluation
The novel’s strongest feature lies in momentum. The plot advances quickly, driven by constant conflict and escalating stakes. However, the narrative sometimes struggles to balance its comedic tone with the darker implications of war and divine manipulation. Reader responses suggest that while Ard’s humor remains entertaining, it can occasionally undermine tension during moments that might otherwise feel more dramatic.
--------------------------------------------------
Characters
Ard remains a polarizing protagonist. His sarcastic banter, irreverent attitude, and hidden intelligence make him distinctive within the genre, yet some readers find his personality overwhelming or repetitive. Supporting characters — particularly the anchors and romantic partners — provide emotional grounding and variety, though the expanding cast risks reducing individual development for some members.
--------------------------------------------------
Setting
The story expands beyond political intrigue into larger mythological territory. Garrish’s wild regions provide a harsh training environment, while divine interference introduces cosmic stakes. The progression from localized conflicts to god-level threats reflects the increasing scale typical of long-running progression fantasy series.
--------------------------------------------------
Structure
The narrative follows a layered escalation:
1. Flight and survival under royal persecution.
2. Training and exploration of soul magic.
3. Escalating confrontations with King Martin.
4. Revelation of divine manipulation and larger stakes.
This structure maintains forward momentum but leaves limited space for slower character exploration.
--------------------------------------------------
Themes
Key themes include:
- Power versus responsibility.
- Chaos as both strength and weakness.
- Manipulation by higher forces.
- Loyalty and relationships under pressure.
The story also examines how humor functions as both defense mechanism and identity.
--------------------------------------------------
Writing Style
Sentar’s writing style emphasizes accessibility and speed. Dialogue-driven scenes and witty exchanges dominate the narrative flow. Action sequences remain clear and energetic, though tonal consistency varies depending on the balance between comedic and dramatic elements.
--------------------------------------------------
Tone
The tone blends irreverent humor with epic fantasy stakes. Ard’s personality sets the emotional rhythm, creating a playful yet occasionally chaotic narrative atmosphere. For some readers, this tonal mixture enhances engagement; for others, it reduces emotional gravity.
--------------------------------------------------
Impact
As a later-series installment, King's Fall expands the mythology and raises stakes significantly, setting the stage for future developments involving divine-level threats. Its impact lies more in narrative positioning than in delivering standalone resolution.
--------------------------------------------------
Praise and Critique
Praise:
- Engaging protagonist with distinctive voice.
- Strong pacing and entertaining dialogue.
- Expanded lore involving gods and higher magic.
- Action-driven storytelling that maintains reader momentum.
Critique:
- Protagonist’s humor may feel excessive or repetitive.
- Large supporting cast can dilute character focus.
- Power escalation risks reducing tension.
- Emotional stakes occasionally overshadowed by banter.
--------------------------------------------------
Evaluation
The book succeeds as a continuation for established fans, reinforcing familiar strengths while revealing structural limitations inherent in long-running progression fantasy narratives. Readers invested in Ard’s personality and worldbuilding will likely remain engaged, while newcomers may find the tonal style polarizing.
--------------------------------------------------
Comparison
Compared to earlier entries such as Magic's Mantle or Merchant of Rebellion, this installment leans more heavily into divine-scale conflict and large narrative escalation rather than foundational character development. Within the genre, it aligns with mid-to-late series arcs where power levels increase rapidly and mythological frameworks become central.
--------------------------------------------------
Conclusion
King's Fall delivers a fast-paced, humor-driven continuation that pushes Ard’s journey into larger and more dangerous territory. While its strengths lie in entertainment value and escalating stakes, its reliance on established character traits and rapid progression may divide readers seeking deeper emotional or structural refinement. Nonetheless, it effectively prepares the series for its next phase while preserving the chaotic charm that defines Ard’s Oath.
April 15, 2025
Sentar back to his roots! More hijinks available...
This was a very enjoyable addition to the series. It had a lot of the magic that made me follow Sentar in the first place.
I especially like where things look like they're going. I feel a little disappointed that it's closing soon. There is so much to be explored. There are so many possible adventures and discoveries to be made on this new level of playing field. We could even start poking at other worlds!
Alas, we don't want to tie in too deeply to a larger, cross narrative lore. It's usually too restrictive. To do such well requires a level of internal consistancy on a scale that most fail at. In my opinion. Although a "timey whimey, wibbly wobbly" Doctor Who style hand wave works well.
But Sentar likes to provide a sense of closure. Though I will say that this series feels like it could continue more easily than Saving Supern Villains. As much as THAT would please me. I just feel like there's more territory left here to naturally uncover hijinks.
This was a very enjoyable addition to the series. It had a lot of the magic that made me follow Sentar in the first place.
I especially like where things look like they're going. I feel a little disappointed that it's closing soon. There is so much to be explored. There are so many possible adventures and discoveries to be made on this new level of playing field. We could even start poking at other worlds!
Alas, we don't want to tie in too deeply to a larger, cross narrative lore. It's usually too restrictive. To do such well requires a level of internal consistancy on a scale that most fail at. In my opinion. Although a "timey whimey, wibbly wobbly" Doctor Who style hand wave works well.
But Sentar likes to provide a sense of closure. Though I will say that this series feels like it could continue more easily than Saving Supern Villains. As much as THAT would please me. I just feel like there's more territory left here to naturally uncover hijinks.
April 25, 2025
Is it good?
If you like the previous books in the series, you're going to like this one. If you didn't like the previous books in this series, I don't know why you're still reading it and you won't like this one. If you haven't read the previous books in this series. Also, you should start at the beginning. You'll have a lot better time. The only thing I want to warn you is the first book is a little slow getting off. The author does everything he can to get start the action as quickly as possible, but it's almost impossible in the book to start the action immediately. He does a good job with characterization of the characters. While still having plenty of fights and magical battles. They're able to do some stuff on the homefront and on the battlefront and resolve a few things. I can't be any more explicit than this without ruining the plot for you. I hope this helps you somewhat. I'm writing this review with voice to text so I apologize for any spelling errors or grammatic
If you like the previous books in the series, you're going to like this one. If you didn't like the previous books in this series, I don't know why you're still reading it and you won't like this one. If you haven't read the previous books in this series. Also, you should start at the beginning. You'll have a lot better time. The only thing I want to warn you is the first book is a little slow getting off. The author does everything he can to get start the action as quickly as possible, but it's almost impossible in the book to start the action immediately. He does a good job with characterization of the characters. While still having plenty of fights and magical battles. They're able to do some stuff on the homefront and on the battlefront and resolve a few things. I can't be any more explicit than this without ruining the plot for you. I hope this helps you somewhat. I'm writing this review with voice to text so I apologize for any spelling errors or grammatic
April 10, 2025
fantastic
Bruce Sentra is by far my favorite author that I have found on KU. His writing is top notch weaving sex and adventure into every book he puts out. If you aren’t reading his works you’re doing yourself a disservice. King’s Fall is easily one of his best works that you must read.
Bruce Sentra is by far my favorite author that I have found on KU. His writing is top notch weaving sex and adventure into every book he puts out. If you aren’t reading his works you’re doing yourself a disservice. King’s Fall is easily one of his best works that you must read.
April 18, 2025
Another fun one
By this point, you know what you're getting from this series. The characters and their relationships remain the focus and they are well written and fun. The world building supports the story well and gives the author plenty of potential future stories.
This one was a page turner.
By this point, you know what you're getting from this series. The characters and their relationships remain the focus and they are well written and fun. The world building supports the story well and gives the author plenty of potential future stories.
This one was a page turner.
April 22, 2025
This was awesome!
I really loved reading this book. It's one of my favorite series. It was fun and engaging. The story and characters were incredibly interesting and entertaining. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. This book and series are definitely worth checking out.
I really loved reading this book. It's one of my favorite series. It was fun and engaging. The story and characters were incredibly interesting and entertaining. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. This book and series are definitely worth checking out.
June 24, 2025
Ard is every serious villain's kryptonite
Arden is quite possibly my favorite of any sassy mage I have ever read. His insight and aloof appearing persona let him hide the fact that he is smarter than others know, and he wields it like an anchor wields a weapon. A full 10/10 adventure where I keep praying it never ends.
Arden is quite possibly my favorite of any sassy mage I have ever read. His insight and aloof appearing persona let him hide the fact that he is smarter than others know, and he wields it like an anchor wields a weapon. A full 10/10 adventure where I keep praying it never ends.
July 28, 2025
You have to have a lot of tolerance to be able to stomach Ard's annoying character for extended periods of time. Two of these books in the series almost back to back just about put me at my limit. Seriously don't understand how or why he's getting such a big harem of girls. Surely one of them will murder him some day. Otherwise, great story.
January 22, 2026
This was a meh. It didn't go how I expected, but I still enjoyed the story by the end.
However, I feel the protag's "banter" has gotten to absurd amounts. It got to the realm of annoying.
I will pick up the sequel. I wonder if the author is connecting this to his Immortal Dao universe.
3/5 Stars
However, I feel the protag's "banter" has gotten to absurd amounts. It got to the realm of annoying.
I will pick up the sequel. I wonder if the author is connecting this to his Immortal Dao universe.
3/5 Stars
April 10, 2025
So damn good
Man this has overtaken my favourite series of Bruce’s. And Ard is honestly one of my all time favourite Characters in book ever at this point.
It is just that good.
Cannot wait for the next one.
Man this has overtaken my favourite series of Bruce’s. And Ard is honestly one of my all time favourite Characters in book ever at this point.
It is just that good.
Cannot wait for the next one.
April 11, 2025
a Brilliant Time
God, I love this series. Great battles, smartass banter, sexy girls. What’s not to love? The plot was fun and the action was exciting. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
God, I love this series. Great battles, smartass banter, sexy girls. What’s not to love? The plot was fun and the action was exciting. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
April 15, 2025
Another great one!
The beginning of this one started out a little slow, but after 1/4 through, it really picked up, and i couldn't set my phone down. We've got at least one more book in this series and I'm looking forward to the ending!
The beginning of this one started out a little slow, but after 1/4 through, it really picked up, and i couldn't set my phone down. We've got at least one more book in this series and I'm looking forward to the ending!
April 20, 2025
Yay
Ard! Ard has become one of my favorite characters in all my reading. His nervous banter, to dumb jokes, to sweeps of genius sprinkled with a touch of cuckoo. All of the characters are a delight.
Ard! Ard has become one of my favorite characters in all my reading. His nervous banter, to dumb jokes, to sweeps of genius sprinkled with a touch of cuckoo. All of the characters are a delight.
April 24, 2025
After epic battle, Ard adds a goddess to his harem
Great continuation of Arden’s adventures. Nothing escapes Ard’s wise-cracks. Not even gods.
You will Laugh out loud at Ard’s verbal jousts.
Great continuation of Arden’s adventures. Nothing escapes Ard’s wise-cracks. Not even gods.
You will Laugh out loud at Ard’s verbal jousts.
December 23, 2025
Great story and character development
Really enjoyed the series and looking forward to the next book! Are is so hilarious and interesting while the goddesses are unique! I can't wait until the next adventure and how he rises!
Really enjoyed the series and looking forward to the next book! Are is so hilarious and interesting while the goddesses are unique! I can't wait until the next adventure and how he rises!
January 23, 2026
Feels like it’s gone the shounen route
Feels like it’s gone the shounen route, with everyone getting power ups but the side characters not really catching up in any meaningful way. And then the main character trades up by the end?
Feels like it’s gone the shounen route, with everyone getting power ups but the side characters not really catching up in any meaningful way. And then the main character trades up by the end?
April 9, 2025
Fanfreakingtastic!
What an amazing book! I absolutely loved this book and such wonderful characters! I can not wait for the next book to come out!
What an amazing book! I absolutely loved this book and such wonderful characters! I can not wait for the next book to come out!
April 12, 2025
When God's play games they can forget that someone that doesn't like rules might not be the best ro go against. Makes it fun for Ard though.
April 13, 2025
Excellent
Love the MCs quick humor and wit, the story . Progresses. Look forward to book 7. Keep up the great writting Bruce!
Love the MCs quick humor and wit, the story . Progresses. Look forward to book 7. Keep up the great writting Bruce!
April 18, 2025
A must read!!
This is a truly must read series,as is everything I've read by this author!!!! Fantastic world building and characters that are a joy to read about!!!
This is a truly must read series,as is everything I've read by this author!!!! Fantastic world building and characters that are a joy to read about!!!
April 19, 2025
Damn what a book 👍
So much information revealed in this one, about the gods, about magic and so much more. I like where this is heading.
So much information revealed in this one, about the gods, about magic and so much more. I like where this is heading.
April 22, 2025
Awesome Ard Again- Triple AAA
Great story, twists and interest builds…and splashes of fun make the reading and imaginative painting of the storyline even better
Great story, twists and interest builds…and splashes of fun make the reading and imaginative painting of the storyline even better
April 26, 2025
Ard is the best at naming things
As always another fun book with Ard. I think he's going to be the god of chaos. Lol. Looking forward to continuing the series!!
As always another fun book with Ard. I think he's going to be the god of chaos. Lol. Looking forward to continuing the series!!
May 3, 2025
love this series
Genuinely one of the best series by the author, can’t wait to see more of Ards shenanigans. Also Ard being Ard with all “new” characters was hilarious
Genuinely one of the best series by the author, can’t wait to see more of Ards shenanigans. Also Ard being Ard with all “new” characters was hilarious
May 3, 2025
Really enjoyable
Really enjoyed this instalment to the series loved bad kitty and Ard's fascinating with her tail and like you love the final boss's nickname. Keep up the good work.
Really enjoyed this instalment to the series loved bad kitty and Ard's fascinating with her tail and like you love the final boss's nickname. Keep up the good work.
May 11, 2025
Just too much fun!
You will love book 6. It is a lot of fun and excitement. You have to read it. You won't regret it.
You will love book 6. It is a lot of fun and excitement. You have to read it. You won't regret it.
June 1, 2025
Enjoyed it
Really enjoyed reading the book. Hoping that Eva gets to join the group of anchors as well. Can't wait for the next book
Really enjoyed reading the book. Hoping that Eva gets to join the group of anchors as well. Can't wait for the next book
June 3, 2025
Good read
If Ard wasn't so naive, he would be a more enjoyable character along with his anchors and Eva. Otherwise, it's nice....
If Ard wasn't so naive, he would be a more enjoyable character along with his anchors and Eva. Otherwise, it's nice....
September 16, 2025
Enjoyed this one! The pacing was right
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