Leaving a review after winning a free Kindle copy from a giveaway.
The first third of this book, detailing the (un)natural disaster at Capri in the year 2033, is easily the highlight of the book for me. It reads almost like the plot of a disaster movie - a mix of action, thriller, and horror with a side of science fiction. The pacing, both slow build-up and driving action, feels solid, and the characters (who are mostly there just to die tragically) are just unique enough to care a bit about. Honestly, I would have been perfectly happy to have read this section as a short story or novella - I think it's strong enough to stand on its own.
The book nearly lost me in the middle. The transition into "present" day (2093) wasn't done particularly effectively. Rather than cutting straight to the action, or at least to characters we know, we have several chapters of clunky exposition dumping. Lots and lots of exposition dumping. I also struggled to connect to the characters - I still would struggle to tell you anything distinguishable about Steven or Bill's personalities.
It does pick up a little once we get moving toward the start of the titular space mission. The characters continued to stay a little flat, but at least the plot was moving - and the author seems to be pretty good at writing action scenes. The ending is a decent-enough cliffhanger.
Of course, this book is only part 1 out of 6, so it's really like watching just the pilot episode of a TV show - it's difficult to judge before I have a chance to get to know the characters and world better.
Still, I'm giving this a 3 out of 5. The opening sequence is great, in my opinion, but the rest is mediocre at best. Unsure if I'd be willing to give future volumes a try. We'll see.