I'm giving this book a strong 3.75⭐, but I won't round it up, simply because I wouldn't read it again and I wouldn't go out of my way to recommend it either, but it was quite a good book, much better than the first two.
Everything's improving and I actually did like a lot of things. The book was still too long (400 pages, could've been 280 - 300), but gave me a good side character whose book I'm looking forward to (Finn's dad).
🔵 Goalie / Ex all-star goalie
🟡 Father's rival
🟢 Both gay
🟣 Age gap 21/35 (good)
🟠 Coming out
🟢 Romantic, gentle, nice love story
🔵 I like the cover
🌶️ Some sex on-page, half of it off-page, but all good; 2 penetrative scenes; oral; kissing; t/b
Finn you've already met in previous books, he's the goalie who has low confidence on ice, simply because he has a very famous dad, who was also a hockey player and their relationship, even though tight, is oftentimes tense and makes Finn uncomfortable.
All of that changes when Finn convinces Jacob, his father's biggest rival and enemy, but a stellar goalie in retirement, to coach him. Jacob doesn't want anything to do with that, but Finn wears him down and they really start making progress, Finn's getting better and better at his game, but at the same time they can't deny the attraction simmering between them.
"He wasn’t here for sex, even though it felt like it had crawled, uninvited, into every moment of silence that fell between them."
The relationship developed at a slower pace, giving it space and time for feelings to grow, which I appreciated, it was more natural and realistic, Jacob was careful and held back, not only because of who Finn was, but also because of the age gap. They talked everything out and Jacob wasn't your underfucked, in the closet, sexually frustrated hockey player, no, Jacob's a romantic and ready for a relationship at this point in his life, and Finn turns out to be the one he wants to be with.
Overall it's a sweet love story, but it dragged on for too long. Not as many side characters and subplots in this one, which works, the story is more focused on the main characters and you're aware of them at all times in the book, so, much better done than in the last two installments, but still not as engaging as I would've liked.
There's also not as much intimacy on-page, that dampened the mood a little bit for me, they took it a bit too fast in the beginning, talking about love and telling Finn's dad, when there wasn't much to tell, so the author then backpedals and tries to tell us they'll wait for this to become something more, so that was a bit confusing. Not that I don't think they can be crazy about each other right off the bat and fall in love in 3 weeks, of course they can, only don't talk about big plans before your first hook-up, you know?
That initial chemistry was strong and it should've been developed into something even stronger, give them a few hot hook-ups (on-page) and really cement the whole thing.
I did like this dialogue and this is the dynamic that should've been heavily emphasized throughout the whole book
“I should’ve told him I had a date,” Finn continued.
Jacob made a face. “And he’s just going to let you leave it at that? He’s not gonna want to meet the guy?”
“Oh, no, he would. And then . . .” Finn paused for dramatic effect. “Surprise!”
Jacob frowned. “We’re trying not to get murdered here.”
“No, you’re trying not to get murdered.”
“I’d think you’d have a vested interest in that too,” Jacob said dryly.
“I do. I do. You can’t fuck me breathless if you’re dead.”
Jacob raised an eyebrow.
“Or uh, be there to be sweet and gentlemanly and treat me right,” Finn revised with a smirk."
but this was just a small snippet, so more of these dialogues and funny, sexy interactions and you would've had me, this would've been really, really worth a higher rating.
Morgan, Finn's dad - was a great addition to the series and I really can't wait for his book. His relationship with Finn drastically improves and Morgan and Jacob's friendship comes out of all this mess and that was really funny and good to read about, I loved it.
The book is better than the last two and the last one is Coach's book, so I'm heading over there. I'm really hoping with the way this author's storytelling has evolved over the last three books, that I'll be getting a really good one with Coach and Zach.