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Do What I Say is a contemporary romance novel about an office love triangle. Jane and Ann are best friends and co-workers at this small law firm in Fort Lauderdale, Florida. Everything is business as usual until a handsome new associate named Joe comes in and proposes to them both a sexy game that must be kept secret. The game has only three rules: only two players at a time, no one can know about it or get involved; the players have to do what the other says, no questions asked; and no falling in love with each other. Needless to say, the game Do What I Say gets out of hand, leading to scandal and murder. Get to know each character and their own point of view in this exciting and intriguing book. So, Do What I Say and read it now!

599 pages, Kindle Edition

Published April 10, 2025

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Profile Image for Sarah Jensen.
2,092 reviews186 followers
June 30, 2025
Do What I Say – A Steamy, Twisty Romance That Keeps You Guessing
Rating: 4.25/5

M. S. Novaes delivers a sizzling, high-stakes romance in Do What I Say, where office flirtation spirals into a web of secrets, passion, and dangerous consequences. Set against the sun-drenched backdrop of a Florida law firm, this book hooked me from the first page with its bold premise and morally ambiguous characters.

Why It Stands Out
The chemistry between Jane, Ann, and Joe crackles with tension—both erotic and emotional. Novaes masterfully balances steamy scenes with psychological depth, making the “game” at the story’s core feel tantalizing yet fraught with peril. The alternating perspectives add layers to each character, revealing their vulnerabilities and hidden agendas. I especially loved how the author blurred lines between desire and control, leaving me questioning who was truly pulling the strings.

Emotional Rollercoaster
This isn’t just a romance; it’s a thriller-lite with teeth. The playful premise (no falling in love) quickly darkens, and I found myself torn between rooting for the characters and gasping at their choices. The pacing is addictive—I devoured it in two sittings—but what stuck with me were the quieter moments of introspection, where the characters grapple with guilt and obsession.

Constructive Notes
While the twists are delicious, a few plot turns near the climax felt slightly rushed, and I’d have loved even more backstory on Joe to understand his motivations fully. The office dynamics occasionally tipped into melodrama, but that also amplified the book’s soapy, binge-worthy charm.

Final Verdict
Do What I Say is a bold, unapologetic ride perfect for readers who like their romance with a side of suspense. It’s “The Secret History” meets “Fifty Shades”—if both were set in a law firm with killer stakes.

Thank you to the author M. S. Novaes for the gifted copy. This book left me equal parts breathless and unsettled—in the best way possible. If you’re craving a romance that plays by its own rules (then breaks them spectacularly), do what the title says and pick this up!

Pair with: A frosty cocktail and a clear schedule—you won’t want to put it down.
Profile Image for Diya Ramwani.
247 reviews16 followers
May 17, 2025
What starts as a fun and flirty office game quickly spirals into a dangerous web of secrets, passion, and betrayal in Do What I Say by M. S. Novaes. The story kicks off in a small law firm in Fort Lauderdale, where best friends Jane and Ann work together—until Joe, a charming new associate, proposes a sexy secret game with three bold rules. One: only two players at a time. Two: no one else can know. Three: absolutely no falling in love. But with such intense chemistry and tension in the air, how long can anyone play by the rules?

From multiple points of view, this novel grips you with its shifting dynamics and the emotional rollercoaster each character rides. Jane is smart and cautious, Ann is bold and passionate, and Joe... well, he's the spark that lights the match. As the trio gets tangled in a love triangle that's anything but ordinary, buried feelings, power plays, and shocking decisions begin to unfold. The deeper the game goes, the higher the stakes become.

Do What I Say is more than just a steamy romance—it's about trust, manipulation, and how fragile friendships can become when hearts are on the line. M. S. Novaes delivers twists you won’t see coming and moments that’ll leave you gasping. It’s thrilling, unpredictable, and a must-read for fans of spicy drama with a dark edge!
12 reviews
October 27, 2025
Do What I Say had me hooked from the very beginning! The concept of the game was so unique and kept me on edge the whole time. The character development was really well done, and I loved how the three points of view gave deeper insight into each character’s thoughts and motives—though at times, it did feel a little repetitive. Joe’s relationships with both Jane and Ann were electric and full of tension, keeping me guessing about how it would all play out. Overall, it’s a fast-paced, addictive read that’ll have you questioning who to trust until the very end!
Profile Image for Janvi Santwani.
632 reviews46 followers
May 7, 2025
From the first page, Do What I Say had me hooked — the cover, the title, the tension, all screamed drama and desire! Set in a seemingly ordinary law firm in sunny Fort Lauderdale , the story quickly dives into a steamy and risky office love triangle. Jane and Ann are besties and colleagues, but everything flips when Joe, a mysterious new associate, enters the scene with a secret game that promises thrill ,and danger. The premise alone? Totally binge-worthy.

The plot unfolds through multiple POVs, which makes it easy to get inside each character’s head — and trust me, that makes the betrayals and secrets hit harder. The storyline builds tension with every chapter, balancing sexy, scandalous moments with psychological twists and even a shocking murder. Novaes’s writing is sharp and playful, yet knows when to get dark. The dialogue feels real, and the pacing is tight — I couldn’t put it down. Every rule of the game adds a new layer of suspense and emotional stakes.

Beyond the seduction and secrets, the book explores the consequences of crossing lines in both love and loyalty. It’s about trust, manipulation, and what happens when people try to play with fire. Personally, I loved how bold and daring the concept was — it’s not your average office romance. Do What I Say is perfect if you’re into messy love, intense mind games, and unexpected twists.In short: wild ride, great characters, and an ending that lingers. Highly recommend this one for your next spicy read!
Profile Image for Nikita Reads.
195 reviews14 followers
May 15, 2025


If you’re into romance with a twist, Do What I Say by M. S. Novaes is your next obsession! 📚🔥 Set in sunny Fort Lauderdale, this story follows Jane and Ann, best friends and coworkers whose lives flip upside down when the charming Joe joins their law firm. 💼☀️ Everything starts as a daring little game… until it doesn’t.

The secret game Joe introduces sounds simple: three rules, no feelings, and no one else involved. 😏🎲 But things get hot, messy, and way out of control fast. You can’t help but get pulled into the thrill, the danger, and the hidden motives behind each character’s actions. 🚫❤️

What makes this book even better is how it shifts between characters’ points of view, so you’re never just seeing one side. 🧠📖 It’s steamy, dramatic, and honestly impossible to put down. The tension builds with every chapter, and the secrets lurking behind the game lead to serious consequences. ⚖️💥

From office romance to scandal and even murder, this novel has everything a modern love drama needs. ✨🕵️‍♀️ It’s daring, bold, and totally unpredictable. So if you’re ready for a spicy, suspenseful ride, Do What I Say—read this book! 📘💋

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41 reviews1 follower
December 12, 2025
This book was great! Throughout the novel, we get to see three different perspectives. Unlike other novels that I’ve read, this one does one whole perspective, then moves onto the next and then the last one. Each perspective gives us a new take on the events and find out who truly knows what happened. This method added to the suspense and thriller, making you think you know what is going on, but then are given a completely different take on the scene.

The order of the perspectives are Jane, Ann, and then Joe, all of whom are involved in the main plot of the story. Since Joe’s is the last perspective, his is the one that sums up the events and helps put the final pieces together. The epilogue also ends on a somewhat cliffhanger that is similar to what you would see in a thriller ending since it is not a full happily ever after you would see in other romance novels. My favorite perspective was from Ann’s because she was really thrown into the mix of something she did not know the extent of and knew the least about.
Profile Image for Kelly Rose.
97 reviews3 followers
October 25, 2025
Do what I say is definitely not what I thought it was going to be! I love steamy romances but this one was unbelievable and amazing! What started as a weird clove triangle and game in the office between two friends Ann and Jane and newcomer Joe, took a crazy turn form all fun and games leads to a scandal and murder. This book is not only entertaining but keeps you on your toes! I love that it combines romance and thriller vibes all in one book and you it blends together so well! This is a book you won’t be able to put down and I know you’ll love it!
Profile Image for Sheyma Ben.
Author 3 books1 follower
November 19, 2025
This book tells the story from multiple perspectives, giving readers insight into the thoughts and feelings of several characters. The plot focuses on their relationships and interactions, showing how their actions affect one another. The author clearly put a lot of effort into developing the story and the characters, and readers who enjoy detailed, character-driven stories with complex dynamics will likely find it engaging.
Profile Image for Kristina Stangl.
Author 9 books63 followers
July 17, 2025
A high stake dark romance that will keep you guessing until the very end. This was a real page turner and I thoroughly enjoyed it!

If you enjoy smartly written books, complex love triangles with multiple points of views, and a bit of drama, then you’ll appreciate this novel.

Highly recommend!
Profile Image for Melina.
636 reviews5 followers
July 14, 2025
⭐ DNF at 14% — A game of chaos with no winners

“Do What I Say” sets the stage for an enticing office romance triangle with a dash of secrecy, tension, and scandal. The premise is genuinely intriguing: two best friends, one seductive colleague, and a high-stakes game with three rules and plenty of consequences. I was drawn in by the potential for layered character dynamics and morally gray dilemmas.

Unfortunately, the writing didn’t rise to meet the concept. Dialogue is riddled with exclamations, insults, and emotional whiplash. Characters veer between manic and submissive without clear motivation or development, often landing in extremes that feel more disorienting than compelling. Rather than complex, they come across as childish, erratic, and frankly exhausting.

Stylistically, the prose felt disconnected and oddly paced—at times I wondered if it had been translated. And while I’m all for nostalgia, a 21-year-old character with a CD collection in the digital age was just one of many eyebrow-raising details that pulled me out of the story.

While the plot may have intriguing turns ahead, I found myself too distracted by the delivery to continue. For readers who thrive on shock-driven melodrama, this might still entertain—but personally, I had to tap out.

I wish the author continued success with future readers.
Profile Image for Official Books.
32 reviews6 followers
November 9, 2025
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ “When passion turns into power, and secrets become currency, love is never just a game—it’s survival.”

📘 Title: Do What I Say
✍️ Author: M. S. Novaes
📝 Review: Do What I Say by M. S. Novaes is a daring and seductive exploration of desire, deception, and danger set within the sleek walls of a Florida law firm. When best friends and co-workers Jane and Ann find themselves drawn into a provocative game with the firm’s new associate, Joe, boundaries blur and emotions ignite. The rules are simple—two players at a time, no one else can know, and never fall in love—but the consequences are anything but.

As the game spirals out of control, what begins as harmless temptation morphs into obsession, betrayal, and ultimately, murder. Each chapter pulls readers deeper into the tangled web of passion and deceit, revealing how quickly control can turn to chaos when hearts and secrets collide.

Novaes masterfully captures the tension of forbidden attraction and the psychological complexity of people pushed beyond moral limits. Do What I Say is an intoxicating mix of romance and suspense—a thrilling reminder that when love becomes a game, someone always loses.
Profile Image for Maya.
15 reviews1 follower
January 4, 2026
✨🤫Do What I Say | ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️(4/5) | eBook via Kindle 🤫✨

This book is the literary equivalent of watching your coworkers make increasingly TERRIBLE life choices while you sip your iced coffee and pretend you’re “not involved.” Jane and Ann are just trying to do their jobs at a tiny Fort Lauderdale law firm when Joe strolls in like a walking HR NIGHTMARE. Suddenly everyone’s signing up for a “game” that absolutely should’ve required a waiver, a witness, and maybe a priest ✝️

What starts as “fun” quickly snowballs into secrets, jealousy, and the kind of drama that makes you text your best friend “GIRL. LISTEN.” The POV shifts only add to the chaos — like being handed security footage from every angle of a disaster you just can’t stop watching 😵‍💫

By the time things teeter from spicy to “oh no, someone call a lawyer who ISN’T in this book,” you’re way too invested to look away. It’s messy, it’s bold, it’s unhinged in the BEST way.

A solid 4/5 stars: I gasped, I cringed, I questioned everyone’s judgment, and I had a great time 😬
Author 2 books1 follower
June 9, 2025
A book which at first glance looks like 'chick lit' rapidly evolves into something altogether darker and more complex. The talking heads, present tense delivery lends immediacy to this multi-faceted story.

Themes of power, control, manipulation, friendship, trust and betrayal and the enduring presence of the past, interweave in an effective, nuanced and surprisingly revelatory fashion. 'Playtime' in the type of game proposed here, can lead to all kinds of trouble; the rules might be simple, but that does not mean the game is easy for the players.

What you think of one character's behaviour can, in the next moment, be subverted as another layer of the story is revealed. This is a bold book and a page-turner.

I want to avoid spoilers, so suffice it to say, the ending is surprising and leaves the reader keen for the sequel.

1 review
March 1, 2025
The story is told in the first person, which immediately draws the reader into the characters' thoughts and feelings.

The voice is distinct and captures the characters' personalities well. The story moves quickly from one scene to another, keeping the reader engaged and curious about what will happen next.

With the trilogy being the same story being told from the three main characters' different perspectives, in my opinion, it could be an awesome TV Series.

Overall, I enjoyed reading the book and recommend it!
Profile Image for Amaya Okazaki.
160 reviews
August 1, 2025
** Re-writing my review as it disappeared for some reason? I was sent this book on kindle to review by the author. **

I loved the POV's in the book, getting to see things from multiple perspectives really helped the reader understand the perspectives, desires and personalities of the various characters. There was just the right amount of twists, suspense, drama and passion. The ending left me wondering if there would be a sequel~?
Profile Image for Dee Anthony.
122 reviews3 followers
July 3, 2025
Won an e-copy from Goodreads.

Do What I Say had an intriguing concept and a plot that initially caught my attention. I especially liked the idea of the "Do what I say" game and wished it had played a bigger role throughout the story. Unfortunately, reading the same events from three different POVs felt repetitive, and I found myself struggling to stay engaged. Just not my cup of tea.








Profile Image for Kimberly.
1,020 reviews31 followers
July 31, 2025
M.S. Novaes’ Do What I Say is a sharp, emotionally layered take on workplace romance that leans into the tension, confusion, and complexity that comes with mixing business and personal lives. Set in the fast-paced, image-conscious world of corporate life, the novel centers on a tangled love triangle between three colleagues navigating their desires, ambitions, and the unspoken rules of power in the workplace.

The story immediately drops readers into an environment where hierarchy, ambition, and ego collide. It doesn’t romanticize the office setting; instead, it uses it as a stage for exploring deeper themes—emotional manipulation, self-worth, career identity, and the fine line between loyalty and self-preservation. The romance isn’t just about stolen glances or forbidden meetings—it’s about the choices people make when personal vulnerability meets professional risk.

What makes the book especially engaging is Novaes’ character work. The protagonists aren’t painted in black and white. They’re flawed, conflicted, and very human. There’s a rawness in how they speak and react to one another, particularly in scenes where emotions boil over and masks drop. These aren’t just archetypes; they’re people grappling with love, control, and consequences in real time.

The narrative flows easily, with well-paced chapters that balance internal monologues and dialogue. The tension—both romantic and emotional—builds gradually, keeping readers hooked not just on who ends up with whom, but how each character evolves through the process. And while the romantic triangle is central, the novel also carves out space to explore individual growth. One character’s journey toward setting boundaries, another’s battle with vulnerability, another’s misuse of influence—these arcs elevate the book beyond a typical office fling.

Novaes also deserves credit for handling power dynamics with care. There’s nuance in how the story addresses imbalances in status and influence, especially in how attraction can be complicated by authority. It’s an honest depiction that doesn’t shy away from discomfort, yet avoids sensationalism.

Overall, Do What I Say is more than a romance. It’s a smart, emotionally charged story about how love and ambition can coexist—and collide—in the most personal ways. Fans of contemporary romance who want a little more grit, realism, and introspection with their drama will find this novel both satisfying and thought-provoking.

Verdict: A compelling, character-driven romance with real emotional depth. Not just for fans of love triangles, but for anyone who enjoys layered relationship stories that reflect the gray areas of real life.
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