Please Note:
The themes and scenes in this book is not to be idoloized in real life. I understand this is a work of fiction and would hope everyone going into this book understands this as well. This is not what real love looks like nor is this how a loving partner should treat their significant other. IT IS ABUSE!!!
I suggest if you are confused and see yourself romanticizing these themes, to see professional counsel (i.e. therapist, priest, etc.)
I only finished this quickly because it was an easy read and I had text to speech and an entire day of chores.
I did NOT expect it to go this way...I most definitely did not expect almost 20% - 30% of the book to just be those types of scenes. Almost no growth was accomplished whatsoever. This book could have easily been 100-150 pages shorter and two more books were unnecessary.
The main characters have almost no personality apart from their unfortunate circumstances and backgrounds. Like...what's your favourite colour? Let's start there. Why not go on a picnic or watch a movie on the couch at home?
Piggybacking off the above point- why couldn't any scenes remain sweet and tender? Two people can definitely have feelings for each other and just enjoy each other's company without it turning into something more.
It's also frustrating that at BEST she has 2 or 3 good days and then something happens (really the same thing repeats itself- her insecurity just showing differently).
🤥 Didn't Elena notice that Chloe lied about her family history with drinking?
(Reference: Page 26)
👩 Akira and Midge were definitely my favourite characters!
💍 How did he know her ring size for the wedding ring? Most women don't even know their own; it's not something you can easily guess.
The age gap bothered me. Not so much the amount of years but the difference in life stages they are at. (For example, 40 and 50 is a significantly better pairing than 19 and 30).
I suggest, make it so that she was older and her life turned upside down after some major event so as to still keep the drama but to make her a more comfortable age.
Also, Bryce got over that age gap too quickly for my liking...(not that he should ever really get over it).
I liked the initial fast-pacing of the book. However, coming to the end, it felt very repetitive and I would have liked if Bryce was hot and cold in his treatment of her for a little while longer. To really lower her expectations.
MY COUNTRY WAS MENTIONED!!!
Noah is lowkey so disrespectful. HOWEVER, he once said "Nah. If he wanted to talk to us, he coulda called," and he is so right! (Referring to their dad reaching out to them.) (Reference: page 225)
On the same page, Chloe was made out to be this "wonderful sister" but as soon as she started developing feeling for a man, she is nowhere to be seen. How come? Why is Dale taking better care of HER brother? She literally went DAYS without talking to him. Even when she was locked in her room, she didn't attempt to reach out to him. But, do you know who she argued with the guards over? DAPHNE! WHAT!?
""Yes. It is." But he wasn't looking anywhere but at me." Such an iconic scene!
At no point did this book mention protection. How in the world is she not pregnant???
My theory is that he sneaks the pill into her food.
A lot of repetitive statements (i.e. pure female satisfaction, he was [jealous, etc.] for me)
Bryce expecting maturity and loyalty from a 19 year old is ridiculous.
I was hoping for a character with a bit more backbone. However, I do understand she is still a teenager.
Really Minor Things:
On page 208, she said she hung the dress up in the wardrobe...isn't it dirty? Why not put it in the dirty laundry?
About 2 or 3 grammatical errors.
Red Flags:
🚩 Extract: "He's been through a lot." He cocked his head. "Haven't we all?"
TO A CHILD!?
🚩 "My virgin" makes me so uncomfortable.
🚩 Page 374. I refuse to type his reaction to seeing her so vulnerable and helpless.
🚩 Having her "checked" multiple times (I believe twice).