Kitty Pryde, Betsy Braddock, and America Chavez race against time itself to save Jean Grey and the X-Men in this epic Multiversal adventure reimagining Marvel origin stories.
So many worlds, so little time. Infinite possibilities, creating infinite realities. Long have I watched generations of mutants live in a world shaped by Jean Grey’s legacy. But what if . . . that legacy was cut tragically short, dooming the world to a future without the X-Men?
What if . . . a watcher must do more than watch?
The year is 1990: The X-Men all perished more than a decade ago, and Kitty Pryde is no hero. Emma Frost rescued Kitty from an obscure existence as a mere rebellious teen kicked out of boarding school, terrified of ever being discovered as a mutant. After growing up under the tutelage of the White Queen, Kitty is an apex predator of a superior species, yet she lives alone in a tiny, rundown apartment, preferring isolation to a knife in the back. What is her alternative? The world is what it is.
But sometimes Kitty isn’t so sure of that. Sometimes it feels like she phases right out of her own life. Breathe She’s suddenly surrounded by friends she’s never known, living out events that never happened. Breathe It’s all back to normal. Kitty always shoves these flashes down, until someone from that other life finds her. This familiar stranger, Betsy Braddock, is a rambling confirmation that something is wrong with their world.
Betsy has a wild theory and if it’s right, Kitty’s only shot at changing the present is to free-fall into the past. The girls follow a tenuous psychic trail back to Xavier’s School for Gifted Youngsters in its glory days and embed themselves with the X-Men. There they discover that the inflection point that will unravel their future revolves around a certain omega-level mutant, destined to become the Phoenix. But little do Kitty and Betsy know, they’re not alone in their search.
The year is 1975: Jean Grey has weeks left to live. The Whisperer is coming. He has recruited an ally and accounted for every foreseeable variable. He will leave nothing to chance. He will lead this reality to its Doom.
Rebecca Podos is the Lambda Literary Award-winning author of YA and Adult novels. What If…Kitty Pryde Stole the Phoenix Force? is her latest. Homeward for a Spell, the sequel to her adult fantasy debut Homegrown Magic, co-written with Jamie Pacton, comes out next. By day, Rebecca is a Senior Agent at Neighborhood Literary. She serves as a co-director of the Communications and Fundraising Committee for Literary Agents of Change, and on the Board of Directors for QT Library, a nonprofit, queer and trans lending library based in Boston.
What if ... the promised inciting event from the book's TITLE didn't happen until the very end, and was then never answered. What if Kitty Pryde stole the Phoenix force then did nothing with it and then the book is over?
What if ... a book that despite giving the impression it's an isolated story, like virtually all Marvel What If...? stories throughout history, is actually fourth in a sequential series, but this important fact is not indicated anywhere on the book? What if I'm just not that interested in the other stories in this series (not particularly interested in Moon Knight; so what if Spider-Man and Scarlet Witch were brother and sister, why is that intriguing?)? Too bad! Because this is an ongoing multiverse romp with a main story has little to do with the specific topic that might draw a reader to one of the books specifically.
A much better title would have been, "What If ... Kitty Pryde joined the Hellfire Club instead of the X-Men?" because that's what this book is about. In part. The rest is about Dr. Doom lamely trying to take over the multiverse and also apparently America Chavez is a Watcher? When the hell did that happen? It's unclear if that's just from this series of books or some other comics sequence I'm unfamiliar with.
Look, I was an ardent Marvel comics reader in the 90s. I'm very familiar with the Pheonix and Dark Phoenix sagas. I totally had a crush on Shadowcat as a kid and thought her powers were the best. This book should have totally been my bag, but all the other nonsense muddied up what could have been a perfectly fine standalone What If...? story. There was so much finely sifted Marvel comics lore stuffed into various places, it gave the impression this book was only meant for the obsessive multi-decade, multi-title reader. Not only do you need to know standard X-Men lore up to Krakoa, you need detailed knowledge of Captain Britain's history including an entire related British military force, America Chavez with the particular set of powers she has in this iteration, the events of the prior books in this series, and specific Psylocke and Rachel Summers backgrounds including the time Rachel Summers was a dinosaur.
You can get through the book regardless, but it's so often, oh they're referencing something I have no experience with, okay then, let's just keep going.
The writing is fine, Podos pulled off the assignment, as convoluted as that assignment may have been. My favorite parts were passages when it was just classic X-Men chilling, despite the cheesiness of those parts.
I need to pull some of my first-run What If...? comics as an antidote. What if a change in a standard Marvel comics baseline events was proposed, and then we were given an entertaining little story that looked at possible outcomes of that change, and then that thought experiment was over, rather than exploding into an unnecessary multi-book multiverse event that drew on such a broad range of Marvel IP that no reasonable person should be deeply familiar with in its entirety?
Really, I don't know why I should expect much from any IP-based novel, and I didn't in this case, but it still managed to disappoint those reasonable expectations.
Okay, so I didn't know this was actually a series and you needed to start with book 1. I thought it was like the What If comics and just random stories. this is NOT accurate.
However as long as you have some basic X-Men/Marvel knowledge you should be fine. Podos is an engaging author and Im now going to go search out her other books.
Kitty Pryde and Jean Grey continue to be the greatest X-Men/Marvel characters ever created.
I found this, of the current 4, to be the most cohesive of all so far. The book ended where it began, and set up for the next story, and culmination of the series, in a way that didn’t take away from this story - as so happens quite frequently in Marvel projects. Oftentimes a season serves only to set up the next, a testament to Disney’s desperate clawing for continued interest and income. Podos, however, has created a story that yes, serves this purpose, but is ultimately a well written and well contemplated story.
What I found most comforting in this story is that, the X-Men feel exactly the same as they always have been. Welcoming, different, friendly, and loving. You can tell, as mentioned in her acknowledgements, that Podos really is a lover of the X-Men, and has captured exactly in her writing why they are such beloved characters.
Kitty Pryde herself is persistently shown to lack confidence in herself, and I do hope that if she appears in the next iteration, she realises her true worth and strength. She’s surrounded, eventually, by people that love her, which she of course more than deserves. The only reason that I docked a star from this story, is that the beginning of the story is a little convoluted (for me, at least) and I struggled sometimes with the vision-hopping and flashbacks (or forwards, or sideways). I reckon on a re-read, now with more understanding, that would be less of an issue. Podos has contributed a pretty strong next-step in the series, and has set a standard that I really really hope the next book can maintain!!
sorry but no i simply do not accept this ending! or the fact that i have to read a doom centric finale book to get the whole story! absolutely not! kitty saved everyone in my book!
This was an odd duck. It starts out solid, slows down for a bit, picks up in the "early middle", and then ends on a disappointing note. It had a decent pace from start to finish; it held my interest throughout and was easy to pick back up where I had left off. The character development was so-so.
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Overall, I enjoyed this book. I enjoyed it more than the prior books and thought this one was fairly well-written (overall. There were some parts/moments that were definitely better than other parts). I am glad I took a chance and read this book as I could see myself reading it again.
Despite there being some familiarity in some of the back-story/origin-story plot points, this has a pretty good pace, above-average prose, and is a solid multiversal adventure. Littered with familiar characters and a fun villian that are all central to the conflict, the writer is clearly a fan of the comics and definitely knows how to write an action scene. Loyal fans will also be happily rewarded with a few callbacks to the other books in the series that add some additional perspective.
The Watchers observe the multiverse, appearing at times of great disasters but forbidden from acting (mostly). Somewhere along the way, a version of America Chavez was made a Watcher, but the code of non-interference never sat well with her. When one of the versions of Dr. Doom began a quest through the different worlds to amass power on a terrifying scale, she broke her oaths and began to work against them.
Kitty Pryde, in most worlds, is one of the X-Men. In the one this book focuses on, she's the White Knight of the Hellfire Club, leading the Hellions and working directly for Emma Frost, the White Queen. But she keeps getting odd flashes of another world where she's living a better life, or at least a happier one. Who are these X-Men that she's only heard of as rumors of the past, would-be heroes long dead?
When Betsy Braddock finds her with half-memories of a different life that was supposed to be, Kitty listens in spite of herself, and then embarks on a desperate quest that leads them to Latveria and then gets even more dangerous from then. Kitty and Betsy end up in Westchester County at the X-Mansion, and try to figure out where there world went wrong. But Doom is coming, and he has made plans.
Can Kitty and Betsy help the X-Men overcome the schemes of a specially prepared and even more powerful Dr. Doom? Can they save the life of this world's nexus being and keep that power out of wrong hands?
I'm a big superhero fan, and I really like the X-Men. So why am I not rating this book higher? There are a lot of weird things in this book that kept throwing me out of the story. I'm being picky here, so if that kind of thing makes you roll your eyes, skip all this.
The X-Men are a group of heroes. Throughout just about every single one of their appearances, if they're talking about themselves, one member is an X-Man. Throughout this book, we get versions of "I'm an X-Men." With the arguable exception of Multiple Man, who is not in this book, no, a singular hero is not X-Men.
The events of the Island nation of Krakoa, which are relatively recent as I write this, are oddly in the 90's. That one's not a big thing, but it's another bit of weird.
At one point, several heroes are captured, and because their captor is smart and thorough, put in restraints that cancel powers. After a character explains that, she then uses her powers to escape from the restraints. So either the villain screwed up, or hers were defective somehow?
Telepathy is the ability to read minds. Someone who can move objects with their minds is using telekinesis (or pyschokinesis). At a few points, there's talk of redirecting flames "telepathically" and creating a shield to stop physical attacks "telepathically." It's not the same thing, and especially if you're writing about superheroes, you should know that.
Yes, these are relatively minor points. But if you're writing heroes with a big following, someone should have caught this kind of thing. As someone who would love to write a tie in book with superheroes, I definitely noticed and it really snared my attention each time.
I wanted to like this book. I really, REALLY, did but honestly I found the majority of the book deeply unsatisfying. I will now go into detail why, spoilers be damned.
First, the portions of the book that I personally found the most compelling were literally moments from X-Men comic history that the author basically transcribed from the original comics and slapped into the narrative at ‘pivotal’ moments. Now, I have mad respect for some of the deep cuts that happened here. But for a book that’s supposed to focus on an alternate continuity, I don’t think it’s a great sign that the book’s strongest moments literally come from Marvel’s mainstream.
Second, of our three characters Miss America was the most effectively fleshed out. Which is probably because three other authors have spent three other novels drawing out the nuances of this iteration’s role as a Watcher and her growing frustration with how powerless she is. Meanwhile the titular Kitty Pryde doesn’t stand out very much and doesn’t have a ton of characterization beyond ‘long suffering queer Jewish woman’. She wasn’t the cold hearted ruthless mutant that you’d expect the Hellfire club to produce in a world without the X-Men and her willingness to embrace a different life felt WAY too easy. Finally we have Betsy Braddock, one of my personal favorite comic characters, who in most versions of the character is a badass mutant with an epic backstory, and here is merely reduced to a wreck of a woman seemingly because she never met her ‘one true love’ in the story’s altered timeline. Personally I don’t find that premise anywhere feminist, nor did I find her sudden heel turn at the end into someone vaguely competent to be terribly believable.
Finally, the entire book is more plot than character driven. Dr Doom kills Jean Grey. Kitty Pryde winds up with the phoenix force. We knew this was all going to happen, hell the characters all knew it was going to happen, and their best plan was to just wait around at the mansion and wait for him to show up? They didn’t even bother to call the fantastic four, the avengers, or the rest of the X-Men’s reserve members like Beast? How stupid do you expect us to believe Xavier and the rest of the team are? These are people who at this point in time allegedly clashed with numerous heavy hitters; Magneto, Apocalypse, and god knows who else. And the best they could come up with dealing a dimension hopping Dr. Doom with their heads up their asses?
I came to this book with such high hopes, I loved the Scarlet Witch and Spider-Man what-if, but in the end all I am is disappointed and a tad infuriated.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
I have been very excited about this book since its announcement. A prose novel featuring a time-travel team-up between three of my favourite Marvel heroes - hell, three of my favourite fictional characters overall - going through one of my favourite eras of comics? I knew I needed to read this.
It was genuinely everything I wanted and more.
The basic premise here is simple: In another world, Kitty Pryde is the depressed, cynical White Knight of the Hellfire Club, working under Emma Frost as the White Queen. Occasionally, she phases out of that world and into another one that more closely resembles Earth-616, full of friendship and love with the X-Men. When Betsy Braddock turns up with a theory about their world being broken and a plan to fix it, Kitty gets pulled into a time-travel adventure about found family, cosmic love, and preventing utter Doom.
Podos makes brilliant use of Marvel continuity to tell an original story, picking and choosing what aspects of canon to highlight and what to discard wonderfully - the complete omission of Betsy's body-swap era is especially appreciated. The references range from the expected to the obscure, with some of the continuity pulls blowing my mind - It even capitalized on things that I think the comics themselves have struggled to do, especially in its use of
The book had a good balance of metaphorical and non-metaphorical content in its discussion of marginalization, with Kitty talking about her experiences both as a queer Jewish woman and as a mutant. America's overlapping identities was also given nice focus and there was even a moment that highlighted Doom's underdiscussed Romani heritage, which was nice to see.
This book probably isn't for everyone, but for me? This is immediately one of my favourite Marvel stories of the 2020s. I read it in one sitting and spent so much of it crying in all the right ways. I'm honestly just so happy this book exists - especially in this political climate.
So...this one was fun but ultimately I felt like this book was more of a set up book for the 5th book more than anything else, which was the biggest let down for me.
Honestly, I also think the whole "Kitty Pryde stole the Phoenix Force" aspect is a bit misleading. Yes it happens but not until the very end, and then nothing happens because of it. So this is less "What If..." and a lot more "How come?". Which would have been great to know before I was halfway through the book and I kept having to ask myself "When are we getting to the fireworks?!?".
I also thought there were large sections of this book that weren't needed, and almost redundant. The strained friendship between Kitty and Betsy got tiresome after a while, as I kept waiting for Kitty to have her own revelation about her friend or something.
I think in the end, I kept waiting for things to happen in this book, but nothing really did. I felt the same way with the Wanda/Scarlett Witch What If... book.
I will say, I love how Marvel is trying their hands again with printed books, I just hope in the future they're a little bit more cohesive.
This actually turned out better than I anticipated. The title is a bit misleading, but the story really makes up for it. Though the main focus is on Kitty Pryde, Betsy Braddock/Psylocke and America Chavez, both have plenty of supporting storylines in this compelling mystery, interwoven with splintering timelines and jumbled memories. Like the Marvel Animation tv show of the same name, this book is the latest "episode" in the series. While standalone, this one leans into the larger interconnection than the previous ones, no doubt leading to a gathering of previously introduced characters coming together in a climatic battle against Doom in whatever the final book will be. I also particularly enjoyed how they portrayed Doom and perhaps an indication of the direction the MCU will go in the upcoming Avengers movies.
In an alternate universe where the X-Men died decades earlier, Kitty Pryde begins having visions of her life in the reality where they survived. This leads her on a journey through time alongside Betsy Braddock and America Chavez to discover the truth behind these visions and save the X-Men.
I've mostly enjoyed the What If novels up to this point, but I really wasn't vibing with this one. I've never been much of an X-Men fan, so I didn't have a connection with any of the characters in this book. These books have been their own thing, unrelated to the movies, but with all the talk of Nexus beings in this book, and the ending teasing Doom going after Franklin Richards, it really feels like they're trying to tie it into the MCU now. It sounds like the next book in this series is going to be the last one, and I just hope that it will be better than this book.
3.75 rating! It's been a while since I've read the other What if books so it took me a minute to get back into the story. I liked that this one continued to have America Chavez in it as she is a crucial part of the entire Multiverse. Kitty Pryde is a character that I have only vague knowledge of in Marvel but I thought her story here was very well fleshed out. I knew that anything multiverse wise would include the X-Men (especially Jean Gray) and the story moved along in a quick pace. With the announcement of the final book in the series focusing on Doom primarily, I interesting to see where this all ends.
I loved this one for its seamless rep of queer women. There was no attempt to justify who these women were. They just get to be themselves. I like seeing my community in both spectacle and normalcy, but this book was already extremely spectacular. The queer representation just exists and doesn't feel the need to justify itself. Anyway, I love Betsy and Rachel! Kitty was such a thought provoking lead and I have loved getting more America than this series allowed in the past. Let's go book 5!!!!
"What if" were some of my favorite comics when I was growing up. I was disappointed with the title of the book, because it isn't even really about Kitty becoming Phoenix. That doesn't happen until the last 10 or 15% of the book. The real title is what if Doctor Doom killed Jean Grey?
Besides that, I didn't feel like the characters were fleshed out. I didn't learn anything different about Kitty or Betsy. It mostly felt like a rehash of canon comic plotlines.
And because, of all the infinite Betsy Braddocks in the Multiverse, there is only one Rachel Summers. How impossibly wondrous is it that she is the Betsy who gets to love her?
God damn I love how this book treats Rachel and Betsy’s relationship. I’d love to read a proper full length R/B romance action book by the author.
Beginning in 1990, Kitty Pride is a mutant. She is under the control of Emma Frost, the White Queen. America Chavez has broken from the Watchers and is trying to save Jean Grey, the host for the phoenix force.
This is the perfect novel to read while waiting for the December theatrical release of Avengers: Doomsday
This was a struggle for me. Idk if it’s because of my general lack is of X-men knowledge (I’ve seen all the movies but not as much as the mainline MCU films) or if it was the confusing time travel, but I could not enjoy this book.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It had a broken woman, Kitty, trying to uncover the reason for her breaking, but not trusting anybody but herself. By the end, she'd failed in her mission, but became a much better person in the process. I'm excited to read how this story ends.
this book was fucking awesome. i really wish there were more xmen novels because getting to explore the characters (like kitty and betsy) on such a deep level, and using the multiverse to tell a genuinely touching and interesting story is something i wish i could see more all across comic book media
I enjoyed it, it’s a good “what if” story that also throws in some multiverse elements. Good characters, good story flow, it’s a good time all around. I hope they make more.
I don't want to give this 2 stars, but its maybe barely a 3. All of the different timelines and POVs were too messy for my taste, especially in the beginning, but once you settle into the primary storyline in 1975, it does get much, much better. I loved all the character appearances and I'm now a fan of Kitty Pryde and Betsy Braddock, so I have to be grateful to the book for that. It's also got some fun action sequences, too. Overall, it's an averagely decent read.