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Gene. Sys.
The world is in ruin. War, disease and famine have exponentially depleted Earth’s population to its lowest since the 19th century. Atom, an enhanced 18-year-old human, has only been alive for a month, and already the entire weight of humanity rests on his shoulders. He, his counterpart Ev, and 10 other Genesys, have been groomed by scientists to become the first of a new human race. One that will thrive after the scientists set off a nuclear apocalypse to eradicate the current, failing system.
When their compound is attacked by a large group of outsiders who want to stop the scientist’s plan, Atom’s life is saved by a clone named 80. The budding friendship between them sets off an awakening within both to the true state of the world. The attack forces the apocalypse to be expedited, making Atom decide if he will be complacent to the scientist’s plans, or if he will choose his own path and fight for those who are simply trying to survive.
Inspired by the classic dystopian novels, GENE. SYS. takes a look at the attempt to create a dystopian society. What are the choices that need to be made to save the human race? What if the weight of those decisions rested entirely on your shoulders?
When their compound is attacked by a large group of outsiders who want to stop the scientist’s plan, Atom’s life is saved by a clone named 80. The budding friendship between them sets off an awakening within both to the true state of the world. The attack forces the apocalypse to be expedited, making Atom decide if he will be complacent to the scientist’s plans, or if he will choose his own path and fight for those who are simply trying to survive.
Inspired by the classic dystopian novels, GENE. SYS. takes a look at the attempt to create a dystopian society. What are the choices that need to be made to save the human race? What if the weight of those decisions rested entirely on your shoulders?
360 pages, Paperback
First published October 21, 2014
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Aaron Denius
13 books541 followersBorn in the wonderful state of Virginia, Aaron spent his childhood splitting time between Venezuela and the U.S. After graduating from Virginia Tech, Aaron moved to Los Angeles to pursue a career in storytelling.
Constantly putting the pen to the paper, he found a writing home on the TNT show "Leverage". Following a two year stint on the show, Aaron moved on to more personal endeavors in both film and books.
In his spare time, Aaron enjoys painting, acting, performing stand up comedy and being active.
Constantly putting the pen to the paper, he found a writing home on the TNT show "Leverage". Following a two year stint on the show, Aaron moved on to more personal endeavors in both film and books.
In his spare time, Aaron enjoys painting, acting, performing stand up comedy and being active.
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July 13, 2018
This scientific dystopia is an excellent read for those who like apocalyptic stories!
The world is getting ready for the apocalypse, and Atom is at the center of it all. Him and the other teenage Genetic Systems must survive and help "restart" the earth when everyone is wiped out. Along the way, drama, romance and war ensues - all creating havoc upon the teens.
This book reminded me of a Young Adult novel - the drama and fighting definitely sat around a young adult audience level, in my opinion. I could easily see youth and adults enjoying this book. The plot itself was very reminiscent of many YA novels I've read - apocalypse, teenagers being the only ones who can save the world, and the YA romance tropes.
I did find the writing and conversations to be very simplistic. That doesn't make the novel bad, but I'm a reader who likes complex words, not using "said" or the same words all the time, and lots of excitement. The writing style just didn't match with my reading style! I feel like there is a lot of potential in this book, and maybe in a sequel (?? pretty please??) it could be enhanced to a much higher level.
I did like the plot itself - I think Aaron Denius Garcia put a unique and fun spin on it that made me want to continue reading this book. I was desperate to follow these characters (specifically Atom and Ev) to see where their adventure would go. Throwing in actual history was also a really cool part of this story, since it was looking at history from a different point of view. I also found the nuclear aspect to be extremely scary (due to the realism) in this fictional world. It did take me about half the book to get really into the story, but once I got there I was hooked and addicted. I absolutely HAD to finish this book!
I felt the book left off in a way that it could continue in some form, so I'll definitely be looking out for the next book! I hope Aaron continues with this story because it has so much potential, it's really fun and it has one epic story! Maybe one day a publisher will pick this book up and pimp it out to readers everywhere!
I'd highly recommend this book if you like sci-fi, apocalypse stories, young adult or just fun fiction! It's a great book, even if it wasn't the best book for me! I loved it and would definitely want to read more!
Three out of five stars!
I received this book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
On a side note, I LOVE that Aaron signed my copy of the book AND spelled my name right! Authors (and anyone really... coworkers, family, etc) rarely spell my actual name right, and it made me so giddy!
The world is getting ready for the apocalypse, and Atom is at the center of it all. Him and the other teenage Genetic Systems must survive and help "restart" the earth when everyone is wiped out. Along the way, drama, romance and war ensues - all creating havoc upon the teens.
This book reminded me of a Young Adult novel - the drama and fighting definitely sat around a young adult audience level, in my opinion. I could easily see youth and adults enjoying this book. The plot itself was very reminiscent of many YA novels I've read - apocalypse, teenagers being the only ones who can save the world, and the YA romance tropes.
I did find the writing and conversations to be very simplistic. That doesn't make the novel bad, but I'm a reader who likes complex words, not using "said" or the same words all the time, and lots of excitement. The writing style just didn't match with my reading style! I feel like there is a lot of potential in this book, and maybe in a sequel (?? pretty please??) it could be enhanced to a much higher level.
I did like the plot itself - I think Aaron Denius Garcia put a unique and fun spin on it that made me want to continue reading this book. I was desperate to follow these characters (specifically Atom and Ev) to see where their adventure would go. Throwing in actual history was also a really cool part of this story, since it was looking at history from a different point of view. I also found the nuclear aspect to be extremely scary (due to the realism) in this fictional world. It did take me about half the book to get really into the story, but once I got there I was hooked and addicted. I absolutely HAD to finish this book!
I felt the book left off in a way that it could continue in some form, so I'll definitely be looking out for the next book! I hope Aaron continues with this story because it has so much potential, it's really fun and it has one epic story! Maybe one day a publisher will pick this book up and pimp it out to readers everywhere!
I'd highly recommend this book if you like sci-fi, apocalypse stories, young adult or just fun fiction! It's a great book, even if it wasn't the best book for me! I loved it and would definitely want to read more!
Three out of five stars!
I received this book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
On a side note, I LOVE that Aaron signed my copy of the book AND spelled my name right! Authors (and anyone really... coworkers, family, etc) rarely spell my actual name right, and it made me so giddy!
January 10, 2015
A few months ago when I was just getting back into blogging and learning the joys of Twitter, I came across Aaron's Twitter feed and heard about this book. I requested an ARC, and he was kind enough to send me the first five chapters, which I reviewed here. A few weeks ago he followed up with a copy of the completed book, and I was really excited to see what happened beyond those first five chapters.
As you've seen with some of my reviews, I may give a slightly better review to a book because I like the author as a person. I'm pretty clear when I do this, and I'm not ashamed of it. But in the case of GENE.SYS. not even the super nice and kinda hot author is going to help this review.
Don't get me wrong. I still feel the way I did when I published my sneak peek review. I still think the story is a unique take on the post-apocalyptic and dystopian young adult sub-genres. I still think it has a lot of potential. But, unfortunately, I don't think that potential has come close to being fulfilled. And there is one reason for this: GENE.SYS. is self-published.
Again, don't get me wrong. The platforms that allow authors to publish their own work are amazing. Many fabulous books see the light of day as a result of self-publishing, some of which are picked up by the bigger publishing houses (Amanda Hocking's work comes to mind). But self-publishing has its drawbacks. The major one, in my opinion, is that there are no editors or proofreaders. At least not unless the author hires them. And they absolutely should. I'm not just picking on Aaron here. I'm talking about all self-published writers (even those who may be editors or proofreaders themselves). Think about it. You've looked at your writing day after day, week after week, month after month. At a certain point you're going to stop seeing new things. And that's not a big deal, as long as you have a disinterested person edit and proofread your work.
I think, had Aaron hired at least a proofreader, my opinion of GENE.SYS. would have been different. As it is, I was so irritated at the grammar and punctuation that I just couldn't get past it. Had he also hired an editor, well, I'd likely be giving this book a different rating. There were so many things that an editor would have caught that just drove me nuts. The example that stands out most in my mind is the repeated references to blood tasting salty. Now, if you've ever brushed your teeth a bit too hard, you know that blood tastes like biting into a penny. Not salty at all. Had that small thing been changed, I may not have been so annoyed. Change the other small things an editor may have pointed out, and I may not have been annoyed at all.
Now to counter all this negativity, let me say this. I hope GENE.SYS. gets picked up by a decent publishing house. Clean Teen seems like a good fit in my uninformed opinion. Because with a publishing house behind it, GENE.SYS. gets some editing and proofreading. Because it really does have potential.This review was originally posted on LeilaReads
As you've seen with some of my reviews, I may give a slightly better review to a book because I like the author as a person. I'm pretty clear when I do this, and I'm not ashamed of it. But in the case of GENE.SYS. not even the super nice and kinda hot author is going to help this review.
Don't get me wrong. I still feel the way I did when I published my sneak peek review. I still think the story is a unique take on the post-apocalyptic and dystopian young adult sub-genres. I still think it has a lot of potential. But, unfortunately, I don't think that potential has come close to being fulfilled. And there is one reason for this: GENE.SYS. is self-published.
Again, don't get me wrong. The platforms that allow authors to publish their own work are amazing. Many fabulous books see the light of day as a result of self-publishing, some of which are picked up by the bigger publishing houses (Amanda Hocking's work comes to mind). But self-publishing has its drawbacks. The major one, in my opinion, is that there are no editors or proofreaders. At least not unless the author hires them. And they absolutely should. I'm not just picking on Aaron here. I'm talking about all self-published writers (even those who may be editors or proofreaders themselves). Think about it. You've looked at your writing day after day, week after week, month after month. At a certain point you're going to stop seeing new things. And that's not a big deal, as long as you have a disinterested person edit and proofread your work.
I think, had Aaron hired at least a proofreader, my opinion of GENE.SYS. would have been different. As it is, I was so irritated at the grammar and punctuation that I just couldn't get past it. Had he also hired an editor, well, I'd likely be giving this book a different rating. There were so many things that an editor would have caught that just drove me nuts. The example that stands out most in my mind is the repeated references to blood tasting salty. Now, if you've ever brushed your teeth a bit too hard, you know that blood tastes like biting into a penny. Not salty at all. Had that small thing been changed, I may not have been so annoyed. Change the other small things an editor may have pointed out, and I may not have been annoyed at all.
Now to counter all this negativity, let me say this. I hope GENE.SYS. gets picked up by a decent publishing house. Clean Teen seems like a good fit in my uninformed opinion. Because with a publishing house behind it, GENE.SYS. gets some editing and proofreading. Because it really does have potential.This review was originally posted on LeilaReads
October 25, 2014
**I received this book from the author in exchange for my honest review**
Original review can be found here: http://superbookgrl13.blogspot.com/20...
This book is a YA/Dystopian book about a group of genetically engineered kids that are a group of scientists last resort for humanity. The were genetically engineered to be perfect in just about every way, but in order for them to live and thrive and start over, everyone else in the world has to die, and some people aren't ready to have that happen.
This book was on my TBR pile down the line a bit, but the last book I read was so thought provoking and heavy to read, and my next one is a historical book that started off very heavy and stuff, I wanted something I could sink into and grip me from the start. The synopsis of Gene. Sys. captured me and I had to read it.
From the start I was completely enthralled. The author created a world and scenario and characters that were real and believable. I love that the book gave a brief synopsis of the world from the 1900s on, and gave brief mentions of 4 world wars and what happened, so that the reader wasn't boggled down by it. I felt both horror and sympathy at the characters for this book, feelings for the "outsiders" that were basically fighting for their survival, versus Atom and Ev and the genesys created group, that are going to be the next evolution for human kind to thrive. Realization that if humans of today continue on this path, the future of this book could very well come into pass.
There was a lot of action, a bit of crushes, some spy and friendships, and a bit of a love triangle between Atom and Ev, who he seemed to be engineered for her, or Atom and Fe, who he dreams about. I read this in one sitting. And I really enjoyed this book, and it was upsetting when my nook reached the last page and I couldn't turn it anymore. I want a book 2. I want to keep going.
Original review can be found here: http://superbookgrl13.blogspot.com/20...
This book is a YA/Dystopian book about a group of genetically engineered kids that are a group of scientists last resort for humanity. The were genetically engineered to be perfect in just about every way, but in order for them to live and thrive and start over, everyone else in the world has to die, and some people aren't ready to have that happen.
This book was on my TBR pile down the line a bit, but the last book I read was so thought provoking and heavy to read, and my next one is a historical book that started off very heavy and stuff, I wanted something I could sink into and grip me from the start. The synopsis of Gene. Sys. captured me and I had to read it.
From the start I was completely enthralled. The author created a world and scenario and characters that were real and believable. I love that the book gave a brief synopsis of the world from the 1900s on, and gave brief mentions of 4 world wars and what happened, so that the reader wasn't boggled down by it. I felt both horror and sympathy at the characters for this book, feelings for the "outsiders" that were basically fighting for their survival, versus Atom and Ev and the genesys created group, that are going to be the next evolution for human kind to thrive. Realization that if humans of today continue on this path, the future of this book could very well come into pass.
There was a lot of action, a bit of crushes, some spy and friendships, and a bit of a love triangle between Atom and Ev, who he seemed to be engineered for her, or Atom and Fe, who he dreams about. I read this in one sitting. And I really enjoyed this book, and it was upsetting when my nook reached the last page and I couldn't turn it anymore. I want a book 2. I want to keep going.
May 17, 2015
I had no clue what to expect from this book...but I was pleasantly surprised.
A futuristic story about the on going self destruction of humanity and the scientific decision to start a fresh.
Over the decades humans have slowly destroyed their environment through ignorance, waste and a constant need for power. War has torn many countries apart and global warming has completely changed the world as we know it.
Dr Anfang, a genetic expert, with a team of like minded colleagues, has created a group of perfect humans known as Genetics Systems or Genesys for short. His plan is to complete the destruction that humanity has already started and allow the Genesys group to repopulate the world.
The main character is Atom, who is being groomed to lead the Genesys into the new world. The story shows as he naivety fades, the true burden of responsibility slowly weighs him down. We meet his "mate" Ev and ten other genetic systems, all of which have very different personalities. Atom struggles to begin with but soon becomes the leader he needs to be.
Gene.Sys. is an Evolutionary take on the bible story from Genesis and is a clever eye opening story of where humanity could be heading if we continue down the selfish road we are all on.
The ending is really just the beginning so I am hoping that this is one of many books in the Gene.Sys. series. Mr Garcia you a very talented story teller and I look forward to reading many more of your stories!
A futuristic story about the on going self destruction of humanity and the scientific decision to start a fresh.
Over the decades humans have slowly destroyed their environment through ignorance, waste and a constant need for power. War has torn many countries apart and global warming has completely changed the world as we know it.
Dr Anfang, a genetic expert, with a team of like minded colleagues, has created a group of perfect humans known as Genetics Systems or Genesys for short. His plan is to complete the destruction that humanity has already started and allow the Genesys group to repopulate the world.
The main character is Atom, who is being groomed to lead the Genesys into the new world. The story shows as he naivety fades, the true burden of responsibility slowly weighs him down. We meet his "mate" Ev and ten other genetic systems, all of which have very different personalities. Atom struggles to begin with but soon becomes the leader he needs to be.
Gene.Sys. is an Evolutionary take on the bible story from Genesis and is a clever eye opening story of where humanity could be heading if we continue down the selfish road we are all on.
The ending is really just the beginning so I am hoping that this is one of many books in the Gene.Sys. series. Mr Garcia you a very talented story teller and I look forward to reading many more of your stories!
August 12, 2016
Last book read at the beach - Gene.Sys. by Aaron Denius Garcia.
Humanity has used up the planet and is headed to extinction. Scientists have designed 12 genetic systems to survive the planned nuclear apocalypse and save humanity. But not everyone is on-board with a nuclear option. Mayhem ensues.
This is definitely written for teens and l struggled a bit with the writing. It does get a little cheesy at times. There are some plot holes, but it's a decent story. I'll want to read the next one to see what happens. And wasn't it the Exodus when they left Egypt?
Humanity has used up the planet and is headed to extinction. Scientists have designed 12 genetic systems to survive the planned nuclear apocalypse and save humanity. But not everyone is on-board with a nuclear option. Mayhem ensues.
This is definitely written for teens and l struggled a bit with the writing. It does get a little cheesy at times. There are some plot holes, but it's a decent story. I'll want to read the next one to see what happens. And wasn't it the Exodus when they left Egypt?
March 9, 2015
First of all, kudos to Aaron Garcia on such a fantastically engaging story! In this book we meet Atom and Ev, two Genesys created by one of a group of scientists, instilling in them the responsibility to lead other Genesys when this world is purposely destroyed. Gene.Sys is a fast-paced book that you won't want to put down once you start it. The details were so vivid, and the cliffhanger will definitely leave you wanting more of this great story!
January 13, 2015
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
The premise: Following the fourth world war, hundreds of scientists congregated at a compound near the Great Pyramid of Giza and hatched a plan to save humanity. They created 12 genetically superior humans, Genesys, to repopulate the earth following a calculated nuclear apocalypse. Atom, the protagonist, must quickly get on board with this plan, and naturally, there are plenty of outsiders who believe these scientists shouldn’t be able to decide the fate of humanity.
Sounds pretty awesome, right?! I’ll start with the things I really liked about this book:
1: The premise. The idea here is a good one. Humanity very well could take a turn so far south that the only way to ensure our species doesn’t go extinct is to hit restart.
2: The futuristic world. Scientists can create carbon-copy clones who don’t question or fear death, create genetically superior humans capable of surviving the nuclear restart, and heal broken bones within a couple days. Again, the imagination behind our future was pretty good. My only gripe here was why, with all these advancements, are the Genesys only eating protein pouches? Why aren’t they engineering meat or plants in a similar fashion for human consumption?
3: Certain characters. Titan. I LOVED that he pushed Atom’s authority at every turn. Atom and Ev were pulled from their incubation tubes all of a couple months before Titan and the others, and Titan is the only one who wanted to know why he should follow them. Why shouldn’t the leader have to prove him/herself first?
Fe. She was spunky, clever, and didn’t give a rats behind that Atom and Ev were made for each other.
80. This clone broke away from the mold, grew from not caring about life to being willing to do anything to survive, and it was so fun to watch him make this transition. This reinforced the idea that no matter how much the scientists tinkered with the clones’ DNA, they couldn’t remove their humanity.
4: I liked that Grant had a husband, and no awkward attention was given to it. It was as though this sort of thing was not only acceptable but as normal as any other relationship.
5: I hadn’t guessed who was involved on the inside, except for one really obvious person noted in my comments as I was reading, so kudos there.
Okay, now for the things that just didn’t work for me.
1: IMHO, this book reads like a rough draft. I’d like to be clear that it doesn’t matter if it takes you three years or a month to write a novel, but DO NOT publish until the book is ready. And by ready, I mean polished to a shine. In addition to odd tense shifts and a slip into second person narration, here are some of the issues I encountered time and time again while reading Gene. Sys. I’ve added a couple examples to help explain what I mean.
Missing commas and repetitive word choices:
“Instead I slide down against the window and sit down against the wall.”
There was even an instance where I counted at least 8 instances of “run” on a single page.
“Look” is another popular word throughout the book: “My cheeks feel flush and when Rene looks at me I look away.”
“Titan steps to push Cal again but before he can I pull his arms behind his back and pull him away.”
“’He’s asked me to help him out and I want you to help me out.’”
Filters, filters everwhere:
“…we hear… I feel… I look up to see…” And this is from just one paragraph. As a reader, this sort of writing makes me feel as though I’m reading someone else’s account of the events rather than experiencing them right alongside the protagonist, so I never truly felt pulled in by the story.
Too much telling:
After Atom beats his combat instructor: “As he struggles to regain his senses I can see his true age. He is rapidly approaching 40.” Does he look haggard? Worn? Are wrinkles or dark circles more pronounced? I don’t know what Atom is seeing when he makes this assumption.
While Atom is talking with Ev: “I can tell she is growing uncomfortable with the questions.” Is she getting antsy? Shifting restlessly? Biting a nail? Again, I don’t know what Atom is seeing when he makes this assumption.
Other sloppy mistakes:
“Chills rush up my spine because I just realized that have probably had cameras on me my entire life watching everything I do.”
“Before they get her takes off running into the white abyss.”
2: Atom.
This is Atom trying to work out what Breekball is. “I try my best to imagine what that would be. It must be some sort of game.” And that’s all he’s got on the subject…
“’I’ve got him, Titan!’ the dark skinned girl yells at the blond haired guy, whose name I can only assume is Titan.” Brilliant skills of deduction.
He’s shocked and angry that no one apparently explained to him that Ev, the girl he’s been pining over since he saw her in her incubation tube, was created for him. Of all the stories in the library he’s so fond of, apparently he never read about Adam and Eve, because if he had, surely he’d have made that connection. Even Al, one of the other Genesys, knew: “Don’t be dumb, Cal. You know that he and Ev were created to be together.”
As Atom and 80 attempt to outrun outsiders: “Our enhanced genetics are definitely an advantage as we create distance between the outsiders and us. Most of them have slowed to a walk up the stairs while 80 and I continue at a jogging pace.” Really??? Ummm, are all humans in the future morbidly obese or just really unfit?
Grant expresses to Atom how vital it is that he SURVIVE. Not two pages later, Atom realizes suddenly, like he’s had this profound epiphany, that he was created to SURVIVE. And later he also says, “Suddenly, my purpose seems clearer. I wasn’t created to only save the human race; I was created to also preserve its history.” And when he’s trying to figure out who should go to which classes: “K and Hydro are a perfect match for Survival, but I don’t know where everyone else should go, including myself. I feel that I would be good for all of them.” Atom doesn’t come across as insightful or worldly. This kid sounds like he thinks WAY too highly of himself.
He just never comes across as very bright or superior in any way. I kept wondering why the restart wouldn’t include some of the brilliant minds or athletes or artisans of their century. Shoot, any of the scientists at the compound seemed more competent than Atom. I’m sorry, I just couldn’t get on board with the idea that he’s the best hope for humanity.
3. Ev.
Jealous much?! When this girl saw Atom for the first time, she was instantly possessive. I don’t care what she was told by the scientists about her responsibility to restart humanity with Atom; these kids are capable of thinking for themselves. Hell, there are other Genesys, and it’s not like the scientists would be around after the nuclear restart to reprimand her for not pairing with Atom.
4. Other things that just never sat well with me:
When Atom and 80 sneak out of the compound, Atom finds himself trapped behind a pile of rubble. Outsiders have guns trained on his location. Atom uses the reflection from the broken windows around him to locate the gunmen and 80. Based on the descriptions of the people and decay in this city, these windows are probably coated with decades of dust and grime. How is he able to catch a reflection?
The scientists have been grooming the Genesys for the fallout of the nuclear apocalypse. Over the course of about a half a year, the Genesys have been learning to survive. They are supposed to be smarter than your average humans, so I’m willing to accept that they might be able to learn things quicker despite this never actually being demonstrated. They’ve only ever subsisted on protein pouches until now, so logically, they need to learn which plants and animals are edible and how to prepare them. Let’s ignore the digestive issues that would come from this sort of switch in dietary habits, and focus on the fact that the scientists plan to launch a nuclear apocalypse--one capable of eliminating every human on the planet, except our genetically enhanced Genesys. Of the plants and animals they learned about, how many of those are likely to still be around after that kind of nuclear blast?
A lot of their preparation involves combat training in all sorts of conditions. The dead bodies simulation was particularly interesting. Actually, I genuinely enjoyed most of the simulations and watching as the Genesys learned to work together, but I never really understood why they were training. The compound seems to have an endless supply of drones willing to sacrifice themselves to ensure that no harm comes to the precious Genesys, so the combat training must be for the restart. But again, who or what are the scientists anticipating the Genesys will need to fight? Learning to fight might be a part of learning to survive, but you’d think finding food, water, and shelter or starting fires would rank higher.
Atom does seem to feel bad that everyone else will have to die, but not once does he think to try salvaging what is left of humanity. I had hoped that 80’s despair at wanting to live would wake Atom from his trance. Sadly, it didn’t. He has this to say about the outsiders: “I would say they aren’t worthy of survival, but [the scientists] are no better in this compound.” And this: “The Ragnarok that the scientists are planning is only expediting the inevitable because this current version of humans is doomed to extinction.” He just always accepts what the scientists tell him is right.
Yes, some people have done some pretty bad things, but this book conveniently doesn’t show that there are likely innocent men, women, and children who have done nothing wrong. It doesn’t seem to explain that those innocent children might be the reason some of the men and women are trying to kill the scientists and Genesys behind the nuclear apocalypse. And I guess, I was hoping to see more remorse, more desire to fight for humanity, from Atom and the other Genesys. By the end of this book, I just wasn’t convinced that the Genesys were any better than the countless innocents being sacrificed for humanity’s sake.
I very nearly DNF this one, but I’m glad I did, because I did see real emotion from Atom there at the end. Genuine, heart-wrenching emotion.
Thanks again to Aaron for the copy!
The premise: Following the fourth world war, hundreds of scientists congregated at a compound near the Great Pyramid of Giza and hatched a plan to save humanity. They created 12 genetically superior humans, Genesys, to repopulate the earth following a calculated nuclear apocalypse. Atom, the protagonist, must quickly get on board with this plan, and naturally, there are plenty of outsiders who believe these scientists shouldn’t be able to decide the fate of humanity.
Sounds pretty awesome, right?! I’ll start with the things I really liked about this book:
1: The premise. The idea here is a good one. Humanity very well could take a turn so far south that the only way to ensure our species doesn’t go extinct is to hit restart.
2: The futuristic world. Scientists can create carbon-copy clones who don’t question or fear death, create genetically superior humans capable of surviving the nuclear restart, and heal broken bones within a couple days. Again, the imagination behind our future was pretty good. My only gripe here was why, with all these advancements, are the Genesys only eating protein pouches? Why aren’t they engineering meat or plants in a similar fashion for human consumption?
3: Certain characters. Titan. I LOVED that he pushed Atom’s authority at every turn. Atom and Ev were pulled from their incubation tubes all of a couple months before Titan and the others, and Titan is the only one who wanted to know why he should follow them. Why shouldn’t the leader have to prove him/herself first?
Fe. She was spunky, clever, and didn’t give a rats behind that Atom and Ev were made for each other.
80. This clone broke away from the mold, grew from not caring about life to being willing to do anything to survive, and it was so fun to watch him make this transition. This reinforced the idea that no matter how much the scientists tinkered with the clones’ DNA, they couldn’t remove their humanity.
4: I liked that Grant had a husband, and no awkward attention was given to it. It was as though this sort of thing was not only acceptable but as normal as any other relationship.
5: I hadn’t guessed who was involved on the inside, except for one really obvious person noted in my comments as I was reading, so kudos there.
Okay, now for the things that just didn’t work for me.
1: IMHO, this book reads like a rough draft. I’d like to be clear that it doesn’t matter if it takes you three years or a month to write a novel, but DO NOT publish until the book is ready. And by ready, I mean polished to a shine. In addition to odd tense shifts and a slip into second person narration, here are some of the issues I encountered time and time again while reading Gene. Sys. I’ve added a couple examples to help explain what I mean.
Missing commas and repetitive word choices:
“Instead I slide down against the window and sit down against the wall.”
There was even an instance where I counted at least 8 instances of “run” on a single page.
“Look” is another popular word throughout the book: “My cheeks feel flush and when Rene looks at me I look away.”
“Titan steps to push Cal again but before he can I pull his arms behind his back and pull him away.”
“’He’s asked me to help him out and I want you to help me out.’”
Filters, filters everwhere:
“…we hear… I feel… I look up to see…” And this is from just one paragraph. As a reader, this sort of writing makes me feel as though I’m reading someone else’s account of the events rather than experiencing them right alongside the protagonist, so I never truly felt pulled in by the story.
Too much telling:
After Atom beats his combat instructor: “As he struggles to regain his senses I can see his true age. He is rapidly approaching 40.” Does he look haggard? Worn? Are wrinkles or dark circles more pronounced? I don’t know what Atom is seeing when he makes this assumption.
While Atom is talking with Ev: “I can tell she is growing uncomfortable with the questions.” Is she getting antsy? Shifting restlessly? Biting a nail? Again, I don’t know what Atom is seeing when he makes this assumption.
Other sloppy mistakes:
“Chills rush up my spine because I just realized that have probably had cameras on me my entire life watching everything I do.”
“Before they get her takes off running into the white abyss.”
2: Atom.
This is Atom trying to work out what Breekball is. “I try my best to imagine what that would be. It must be some sort of game.” And that’s all he’s got on the subject…
“’I’ve got him, Titan!’ the dark skinned girl yells at the blond haired guy, whose name I can only assume is Titan.” Brilliant skills of deduction.
He’s shocked and angry that no one apparently explained to him that Ev, the girl he’s been pining over since he saw her in her incubation tube, was created for him. Of all the stories in the library he’s so fond of, apparently he never read about Adam and Eve, because if he had, surely he’d have made that connection. Even Al, one of the other Genesys, knew: “Don’t be dumb, Cal. You know that he and Ev were created to be together.”
As Atom and 80 attempt to outrun outsiders: “Our enhanced genetics are definitely an advantage as we create distance between the outsiders and us. Most of them have slowed to a walk up the stairs while 80 and I continue at a jogging pace.” Really??? Ummm, are all humans in the future morbidly obese or just really unfit?
Grant expresses to Atom how vital it is that he SURVIVE. Not two pages later, Atom realizes suddenly, like he’s had this profound epiphany, that he was created to SURVIVE. And later he also says, “Suddenly, my purpose seems clearer. I wasn’t created to only save the human race; I was created to also preserve its history.” And when he’s trying to figure out who should go to which classes: “K and Hydro are a perfect match for Survival, but I don’t know where everyone else should go, including myself. I feel that I would be good for all of them.” Atom doesn’t come across as insightful or worldly. This kid sounds like he thinks WAY too highly of himself.
He just never comes across as very bright or superior in any way. I kept wondering why the restart wouldn’t include some of the brilliant minds or athletes or artisans of their century. Shoot, any of the scientists at the compound seemed more competent than Atom. I’m sorry, I just couldn’t get on board with the idea that he’s the best hope for humanity.
3. Ev.
Jealous much?! When this girl saw Atom for the first time, she was instantly possessive. I don’t care what she was told by the scientists about her responsibility to restart humanity with Atom; these kids are capable of thinking for themselves. Hell, there are other Genesys, and it’s not like the scientists would be around after the nuclear restart to reprimand her for not pairing with Atom.
4. Other things that just never sat well with me:
When Atom and 80 sneak out of the compound, Atom finds himself trapped behind a pile of rubble. Outsiders have guns trained on his location. Atom uses the reflection from the broken windows around him to locate the gunmen and 80. Based on the descriptions of the people and decay in this city, these windows are probably coated with decades of dust and grime. How is he able to catch a reflection?
The scientists have been grooming the Genesys for the fallout of the nuclear apocalypse. Over the course of about a half a year, the Genesys have been learning to survive. They are supposed to be smarter than your average humans, so I’m willing to accept that they might be able to learn things quicker despite this never actually being demonstrated. They’ve only ever subsisted on protein pouches until now, so logically, they need to learn which plants and animals are edible and how to prepare them. Let’s ignore the digestive issues that would come from this sort of switch in dietary habits, and focus on the fact that the scientists plan to launch a nuclear apocalypse--one capable of eliminating every human on the planet, except our genetically enhanced Genesys. Of the plants and animals they learned about, how many of those are likely to still be around after that kind of nuclear blast?
A lot of their preparation involves combat training in all sorts of conditions. The dead bodies simulation was particularly interesting. Actually, I genuinely enjoyed most of the simulations and watching as the Genesys learned to work together, but I never really understood why they were training. The compound seems to have an endless supply of drones willing to sacrifice themselves to ensure that no harm comes to the precious Genesys, so the combat training must be for the restart. But again, who or what are the scientists anticipating the Genesys will need to fight? Learning to fight might be a part of learning to survive, but you’d think finding food, water, and shelter or starting fires would rank higher.
Atom does seem to feel bad that everyone else will have to die, but not once does he think to try salvaging what is left of humanity. I had hoped that 80’s despair at wanting to live would wake Atom from his trance. Sadly, it didn’t. He has this to say about the outsiders: “I would say they aren’t worthy of survival, but [the scientists] are no better in this compound.” And this: “The Ragnarok that the scientists are planning is only expediting the inevitable because this current version of humans is doomed to extinction.” He just always accepts what the scientists tell him is right.
Yes, some people have done some pretty bad things, but this book conveniently doesn’t show that there are likely innocent men, women, and children who have done nothing wrong. It doesn’t seem to explain that those innocent children might be the reason some of the men and women are trying to kill the scientists and Genesys behind the nuclear apocalypse. And I guess, I was hoping to see more remorse, more desire to fight for humanity, from Atom and the other Genesys. By the end of this book, I just wasn’t convinced that the Genesys were any better than the countless innocents being sacrificed for humanity’s sake.
I very nearly DNF this one, but I’m glad I did, because I did see real emotion from Atom there at the end. Genuine, heart-wrenching emotion.
Thanks again to Aaron for the copy!
May 31, 2024
Fun read! I loved how the story explores the immaturity of the characters in contrast to their advanced intelligence/physical characteristics.
August 11, 2018
You or Me
A fast-paced story of preserving the human race. Twelve people who have been genetically enhanced are the only hope to save mankind from extinction. It evokes questions such as who has the power to say "you live and you die". I was entranced and reaction a day.
A fast-paced story of preserving the human race. Twelve people who have been genetically enhanced are the only hope to save mankind from extinction. It evokes questions such as who has the power to say "you live and you die". I was entranced and reaction a day.
January 24, 2015
Gene. Sys. by Aaron Denius Garcia
YA– Sci-Fi, Action
Never in my wildest imagination did I think a Sci-fi action book would get to me like it did. Another of Bethanie’s Faves has been found, and unbelievably it is another Sci-fi book. I may have to look into this genre a little more.
My heart is broken, though. With tears I closed this book. With hope I look forward to the next. There was never a dull moment. The action started pretty much from the get-go. I fell in love with the characters, but was disappointed by some. I will leave it at that. You will have to read it to see where my disappointment lay, but once I got over that, which made no sense as to why it was added to begin with. The rest of the book kept me on the edge of my seat.
I couldn’t put this book down. I read it in one afternoon. That is how much I liked this book. Most books take me a few days to read because everything starts off so slow, NOT in this one, though. It is a fast-paced, unbelievable-amount-of-action, packed-into-a-book, book. Feast on that for a little while. When you read it you will understand.
Writing and Storyline
I understand that this was an advanced review copy so the writing was probably brushed up before it was released to the public. There were some places I had to read twice to understand because words were missing, and there were some punctuation and capitalization errors. That however did not take away from the storyline of the book.
OH MY GOSH! The story was outstanding. Mr. Garcia’s play on words and acronyms for certain things were extremely creative. His creation of this almost impossible compound where everything took place was absolutely amazing. I could see everything and follow right along with the characters wherever they were. The “bad-guys” really weren’t “bad-guys”. I could understand the emotional stress these characters were under because of what was about to happen. The descriptions were amazing and all-senses encompassing. Mr. Garcia created this world and this story with an incredible amount of imagination and forethought. I am curious as to know how long it took him to write it. The way it ended there would have to be another book. I have to know what happens!
Disclaimer
Now some readers want to know and some readers don’t. There was some profanity used and one instance that I believe could have been left completely out of the story and it would have been just fine. However it was only about a six-word instance and I honestly don’t know what it had to do with the story.
Beyond that it was a great book. There was so much happening. It never stopped, until the flames. I’ll let that soak in too. I am hoping and cheering for the characters that brought me to tears. I will read the next book whenever it comes out, whether by review or purchase. Happy reading!! :)
~Bethanie
I was given an advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. No monetary exchange was made.
YA– Sci-Fi, Action
Never in my wildest imagination did I think a Sci-fi action book would get to me like it did. Another of Bethanie’s Faves has been found, and unbelievably it is another Sci-fi book. I may have to look into this genre a little more.
My heart is broken, though. With tears I closed this book. With hope I look forward to the next. There was never a dull moment. The action started pretty much from the get-go. I fell in love with the characters, but was disappointed by some. I will leave it at that. You will have to read it to see where my disappointment lay, but once I got over that, which made no sense as to why it was added to begin with. The rest of the book kept me on the edge of my seat.
I couldn’t put this book down. I read it in one afternoon. That is how much I liked this book. Most books take me a few days to read because everything starts off so slow, NOT in this one, though. It is a fast-paced, unbelievable-amount-of-action, packed-into-a-book, book. Feast on that for a little while. When you read it you will understand.
Writing and Storyline
I understand that this was an advanced review copy so the writing was probably brushed up before it was released to the public. There were some places I had to read twice to understand because words were missing, and there were some punctuation and capitalization errors. That however did not take away from the storyline of the book.
OH MY GOSH! The story was outstanding. Mr. Garcia’s play on words and acronyms for certain things were extremely creative. His creation of this almost impossible compound where everything took place was absolutely amazing. I could see everything and follow right along with the characters wherever they were. The “bad-guys” really weren’t “bad-guys”. I could understand the emotional stress these characters were under because of what was about to happen. The descriptions were amazing and all-senses encompassing. Mr. Garcia created this world and this story with an incredible amount of imagination and forethought. I am curious as to know how long it took him to write it. The way it ended there would have to be another book. I have to know what happens!
Disclaimer
Now some readers want to know and some readers don’t. There was some profanity used and one instance that I believe could have been left completely out of the story and it would have been just fine. However it was only about a six-word instance and I honestly don’t know what it had to do with the story.
Beyond that it was a great book. There was so much happening. It never stopped, until the flames. I’ll let that soak in too. I am hoping and cheering for the characters that brought me to tears. I will read the next book whenever it comes out, whether by review or purchase. Happy reading!! :)
~Bethanie
I was given an advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. No monetary exchange was made.
April 6, 2015
This book was a good read, I found myself not wanting to put it down at times and at other points finding it extremely frustrating (only because I was developing, as most readers do, a connection with the characters involved).
The story starts with our young character Atom finding out just what and who he is and his sole purpose in the world as he knows it today, which it seems is a harsh extreme. We find out a second Ice Age has come to the Earth and that war and poverty are at new extremes with people fighting just to stay alive. Atom knows he was created for a purpose and that is constantly being reiterated throughout the story.
Things for Atom are a little different, as he is the object of a love triangle. This love triangle plays an important part in the development of the characters and the story as a whole and I can for once say that I wasn't shaking my head saying "Of course, he has to make a decision who he likes more."
This book holds lots of drama, action, and slight romance involved. You find yourself liking both the Gene. Sys. characters and the outsiders trying to stop their main goal. The author did a great job portraying the vulnerability of the characters and yet their knowledge and abilities well. Overall I rate this book with a four based on the fact that it ends so soon leaving me waiting for what appears to be book two in a trilogy, so props to the author for building the excitement factor!
The story starts with our young character Atom finding out just what and who he is and his sole purpose in the world as he knows it today, which it seems is a harsh extreme. We find out a second Ice Age has come to the Earth and that war and poverty are at new extremes with people fighting just to stay alive. Atom knows he was created for a purpose and that is constantly being reiterated throughout the story.
Things for Atom are a little different, as he is the object of a love triangle. This love triangle plays an important part in the development of the characters and the story as a whole and I can for once say that I wasn't shaking my head saying "Of course, he has to make a decision who he likes more."
This book holds lots of drama, action, and slight romance involved. You find yourself liking both the Gene. Sys. characters and the outsiders trying to stop their main goal. The author did a great job portraying the vulnerability of the characters and yet their knowledge and abilities well. Overall I rate this book with a four based on the fact that it ends so soon leaving me waiting for what appears to be book two in a trilogy, so props to the author for building the excitement factor!
October 28, 2014
I got in touch with Aaron via twitter, and I'm so glad I did! He was kind enough to give me the first five chapters since I love reading and have a great passion for books. The story caught me attention and I found myself wanting more...Unfortunately I had to wait for the releasedate! I was like a kid on christmas when Ups delivered my copy =) I actually reread the first five chapters since I didn't want the adventure to pass too quickly..The storyline is captivating and it's not unbelievable that this could happen in our future. It's easy to get caught up in the story and the characters grows on you. Some you like immediately, and others you have to meet a couple of times before inviting them to bed! I didn't wanna stop reading but at some point I had to drag myself to work..and during all the workinghours I just wanted to go back to reading. I was sad when my book ended coz I wanted more..much more! Atom come back in my life!!!..pretty please? So..yeah I loved this adventure! And I would join Aaron for many more =)
April 2, 2016
Gene.Sys. is a Sci-fi, dystopian, young adult novel set in the near future. Humanity is destroying itself and the planet. A group of scientists have created 12 genetically engineered young people who are resistant to radiation. Their plan is to basically nuke everything while the 12 Gene.Sys survive in bunkers and restart humanity. As would be expected, not everyone is happy about this and there is resistance. The story focuses on Atom, the leader of the 12. The story moves quickly and is action packed. Atom's character matures over the course f the book, and he confronts the moral complexities of the destruction of everyone alive except himself and the other Gene.Sys for the sake of fresh start for humanity. Gene.Sys was a good enjoyable read, just could have used a little editing.
August 1, 2016
This book is insane! It's so so good!!
Atom and Ev are two genetically modified humans who are created with a huge task in their future.
Atom kinda pissed me off with his naïveté and just over all lack of knowledge with warning signs and bad guys. Etc.
The story line is fabulous, and the characters are slightly relatable. I'm just an average human, though.
While the entire book is really good, the last 10% is phenomenal! I could not like this part any more! Suspense and thrills. What's going to happen? Is anyone going to die? AHHH! So good.
If you are apprehensive about this genre, and don't think this book is for you, I urge you to read it, if only for the ending- because it is THAT good!
Can't wait for book 2!
Atom and Ev are two genetically modified humans who are created with a huge task in their future.
Atom kinda pissed me off with his naïveté and just over all lack of knowledge with warning signs and bad guys. Etc.
The story line is fabulous, and the characters are slightly relatable. I'm just an average human, though.
While the entire book is really good, the last 10% is phenomenal! I could not like this part any more! Suspense and thrills. What's going to happen? Is anyone going to die? AHHH! So good.
If you are apprehensive about this genre, and don't think this book is for you, I urge you to read it, if only for the ending- because it is THAT good!
Can't wait for book 2!
May 4, 2015
The author had followed me on Twitter and like most people on twitter they send a message either promoting or saying thanks for the follow. I decided to actually check out the authors page and saw that he had a book coming out, looked it up on Amazon and decided to put it on my to read list, sounded interesting enough.
As I started GeneSys I wasn't exactly sure what to expect but boy did it suck me in! I couldn't get enough of this book and especially everything being told through Atoms eyes, it was very visonary for me and I loved it. Now that I'm done with the book I just want to read more! I would definately recommend this book to anyone would ask for a new read!
As I started GeneSys I wasn't exactly sure what to expect but boy did it suck me in! I couldn't get enough of this book and especially everything being told through Atoms eyes, it was very visonary for me and I loved it. Now that I'm done with the book I just want to read more! I would definately recommend this book to anyone would ask for a new read!
February 23, 2015
Although it took me a while to read this book, I found it quite interesting and enjoyable. The author was probably going for a biblical meaning to the story, about Adam and Eve, and added a twist of the modern era to it, which made it more exciting for me, because coming from another religion opens your mind about other religions and they way the author wrote the book was just magnificent. Truly enjoyed the book, and hope that there's other books like this by him.
January 31, 2016
(Review by my 12 year old daughter) This book is a story about a dystopian future where DNA modified humans are created for a purpose that could change the world forever. It is a very action packed and dramatic book. I really liked the writing style and the story. It brings a sense of drama and action together in a compelling way. I couldn't put the book down, and I recommend this book to anyone who likes to read action books. I can't wait for his next book!
March 22, 2016
I bought book off amazon a while back thinking it looked good. It was fantastic. Quick page turner. The worst part of buying a book right when a new series starts is waiting for the next books....get this, the genre is jam packed right now but his writing style sets it apart.
December 24, 2014
Full review will be posted soon on my blog, Covertoocover.wordpress.com
September 27, 2024
3.5/5
Aaron Denius is a gem of a human being. I had the pleasure of meeting him at Long Beach Comic Con back in 2023 (and at the LA Times Festival of Books in 2024.) He was so genuine and kind. At the time, the writer’s strike was in full swing and we chatted for a bit about where we were picketing. I purchased this novel from him, he was kind enough to sign the book and write a wonderful note encouraging me to begin my creative writing journey. That book still sits on my shelf to this day. It’s an excellent addition to my library.
With those pleasantries out of the way, let’s get into the review.
I want to get my biggest negative out of the way before I mention my positives:
This novel would not be hurt by a pass from an editor. This is not a disparaging comment on the story, which I found really quite enjoyable. There are just a few things that needed a little cleaning up in the phrasing. (I freelance as a professional speechwriter and editor, so this very much might be a ME problem, haha.) But there were several instances with words that were repeated in the same sentence. (If memory serves, the word ‘Library’ was repeated 3 times in the same sentence. It felt… clunky.) However, going through the book again through Audible made it easier for me to ingest.
That is genuinely the only negative I have.
The characters are very memorable. I finished this novel prior to seeing him again at the Festival of Books and I still recall how vivid and real they felt. The world he created is soooooo interesting. I almost want a GoT style history book for this series. (But, again, the world got bogged down a bit by my phrasing gripe^.) Nevertheless, I found myself engrossed by the story.
I gotta take a moment here to also bring up the fact that the main character’s choice of weapon is a FUCKING CHAIN. That is metal as hell. Literally.
He did right making the sequel about 80, he was easily my favorite character from this book. Outside of the writing style, this story is genuinely great. I would love to see more novels from him in the future. Hope to see you with a new story at next year’s festival of books!!!!
Aaron Denius is a gem of a human being. I had the pleasure of meeting him at Long Beach Comic Con back in 2023 (and at the LA Times Festival of Books in 2024.) He was so genuine and kind. At the time, the writer’s strike was in full swing and we chatted for a bit about where we were picketing. I purchased this novel from him, he was kind enough to sign the book and write a wonderful note encouraging me to begin my creative writing journey. That book still sits on my shelf to this day. It’s an excellent addition to my library.
With those pleasantries out of the way, let’s get into the review.
I want to get my biggest negative out of the way before I mention my positives:
This novel would not be hurt by a pass from an editor. This is not a disparaging comment on the story, which I found really quite enjoyable. There are just a few things that needed a little cleaning up in the phrasing. (I freelance as a professional speechwriter and editor, so this very much might be a ME problem, haha.) But there were several instances with words that were repeated in the same sentence. (If memory serves, the word ‘Library’ was repeated 3 times in the same sentence. It felt… clunky.) However, going through the book again through Audible made it easier for me to ingest.
That is genuinely the only negative I have.
The characters are very memorable. I finished this novel prior to seeing him again at the Festival of Books and I still recall how vivid and real they felt. The world he created is soooooo interesting. I almost want a GoT style history book for this series. (But, again, the world got bogged down a bit by my phrasing gripe^.) Nevertheless, I found myself engrossed by the story.
I gotta take a moment here to also bring up the fact that the main character’s choice of weapon is a FUCKING CHAIN. That is metal as hell. Literally.
He did right making the sequel about 80, he was easily my favorite character from this book. Outside of the writing style, this story is genuinely great. I would love to see more novels from him in the future. Hope to see you with a new story at next year’s festival of books!!!!
March 11, 2019
** Copy provided by author in exchange for an honest review **
When I picked up this copy, I was worried.
It isn't something I'd normally grab but the synopsis had my curiosity piqued...
I adored this novel and I'm so disappointed it ended and I honestly, hand on heart, hope that there is a follow up because I want to see how the Gensys get on after the end of the world. And I am hugely disappointed that 80 wasn't saved... had a soft spot for that drone!
Just like in today's world, human nature has ruined the earth as we know it. between wars and god knows what else... the earth isn't that great. So, Rene and a group of scientists made a plan to end the world and start again. (I'm still unsure who made him God, might I add.) They have genetically created 12 Gensys that are above and beyond any human being and they are trained in how to survive in combat along with everything else that needs to be known in order for the earth to be as diverse as it is now...
What came as a twist was though, that the scientists, outsiders and drones are planning to stop his plan - the Mutineers.
I couldn't put this book gown it honestly captivated me and hooked me in a way that I didn't think it would or could. I am so glad that I was offered this opportunity to read it.
Now please tell me there will be a book 2!
July 23, 2018
Based on a scary premise, this book makes you wonder the lengths different factions would go to ensure the success of their experiments. It was an enjoyable but somewhat depressing read. I received this book as part of the Goodreads Giveaway program.
October 10, 2021
Fast paced and all consuming!
I really appreciated that the author allowed you to get to know each of the characters enough to make them memorable. I can't wait to read the next book!
I really appreciated that the author allowed you to get to know each of the characters enough to make them memorable. I can't wait to read the next book!
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