This book gives me a sense that the MC never seems to learn from any mistake or otherwise painful or perilous situation he gets into. He often just barges blindly ahead in the moment, and then tries to convey a sense of intelligence when it's less important to think quickly. Can't say I'm a huge fan.
I find the MC frustrating. The book was fine otherwise. I think I shall have a little skim through the third, but I haven't decided for sure.
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6%: I feel like some narrative clarity is being lost or discarded in favor of flowery prose. It feels like the facts are being needless circled and wended through just so the sentences can be longer. Two pages to suss out whether or not the boat spoke to the MC, when it couldn't have been anything BESIDES the ship.
7%: The MC is pondering over not being able to speak his lizard friend's language outside of the dungeon, and instead of just...continuing to learn the language, he's of course pondering some enchanted item. He's really a one trick pony
17%: MC is present with a magic spear that's always sharp and never breaks and thinks "that's it?" and it perfectly illustrates my main gripe with this character. Despite all the training he did in the first book no one bothered to teach him it's best to be good at a few things instead of trying to be crap at all the things.
22%: MC barely knows how to swim and certainly doesn't know how to spear fish, but insists that he can contribute to the spear fishing expedition better than his naturally aquatic companion that grew up spear fishing. And of course, he makes a complete dog's breakfast of it. While ineptly trying to spear a fish, all he does is chum the water and attract a group of sharks. In a panic, he uses one of his magic abilities and mostly just manages to nearly kill himself. Honestly the incompetence on display this early on doesn't bode well.
24%: MC does not have the sense god gave a goat. Despite often having to face painful consequences for foolish impulsiveness, MC still cannot control himself and has yet again gotten into hot water.
34%: Once again the MC proves himself a liar about not being a fighter, and gets absolutely wrecked because he won't specialize in any kind of fighting style. And once again, surely, the MC will not learn from this experience and will instead seek to grab up even more useless abilities.