Misty Pulsiper's retelling of Persuasion as Persuaded is a masterful effort that works very well in the New England setting, instead of being set in England even though the place names have been kept the same. For those of you just reading Persuaded it is a perfect example of a classic being rewritten in a modern setting, it has the depth of characters and it is an interesting romance set against the backdrop of the sea.
The story starts in the past with Hanna Elliot and Derrick Wentworth being a young just 18 engaged couple, he wants to move up the date of their marriage until tomorrow, instead of in a week, wanting her to leave with him on his race around the world but she asks him to wait 6 months until the race is over, on the advice of her Aunt Maude. Derrick is upset and leaves the following leaving a note at the marina slip saying that she can keep the ring because no other girl would want it!
Now, 10 years later both unbeknownst to each other have returned home to the site of their romance and breakup in Old Lyme, Uppercross at their relatives respective homes near each other in beachfront gated community.
Derrick is a sailor of great renown having won that first race around the world and many more since then. Hanna Elliot is a kindergarten teacher in a small town near the Canadian border in Oregon. Both have lots of baggage from those years which add to the suspense of the beginning of the summer.
Derrick is staying with the Crofts, Adam and Sophie, his sister and Adam's brother Benny, who is mourning the loss of his fiancee of a year ago.
Hanna is staying with the Musgroves, Charles and Mary their sons C.J. and Walter and Charles sister, Ella.
Hanna and Derrick first run into each other on the beach after Hanna, Mary and Ella are out jogging and Mary faints and he offers to help revive her.. which he does and while doing so he recognises the pale blue eyes of Hanna, and she tightens her hoodie around her face when recognising his bright green ones and she hopes that he does not recognise her! But his memories are bitter ones of the way she refused to go with him as his wife, but he realises now that it would not have worked anyway!
Derrick is set for a summer of interesting events and Ella is the stunning beauty who attracts his attention, and her his!
Hanna's first meeting on the beach with Derrick brings back painful/wonderful memories because he was her first and only love, and she still has her unique engagement ring with her because she does not want to leave anything of value at home for the summer months. Ella seems to flaunt her relationship with Derrick especially in front of Hanna. Hanna who at the grand old age of 28 believes she will remain a spinster for the rest of her life! Hanna seems like a glorified non-paid nanny for her nephews C.J; 6 and Walter 2 because Mary spends most her time in bed and when she is up complains about the boys noise and Charles and his incessant sports watching on the television.
After several weeks Ella is looking at Bridal boutiques and magazines like she is planning a wedding, therefore when Derrick finds out he decides to slow things down a bit after both he and Ella being told they are not considering their are boys under the age of six in the house and their behavior leaves something to be desired, get a hotel room! Hanna then flees because she now knows she has lost Derrick forever, but Derrick is upset to about the whole episode and runs out into the night after Hanna, who has gone down to the breakwater and Lymelight, the old lighthouse and is climbing up the side of it but sliding back down into the sea and crying or is it the ocean spray? Then she hears a voice calling out to her and finds Derrick coming to find her. He helps her down and they push and shove and have a water fight and spend many hours together.. who knows what this will bring? will they see each other again? She of course agrees to be friends again but does she think that she will forgive him for her broken heart? or for the heartache and suffering he has brought her?
The story ended beautifully, it tied everything up nicely.
Miss Pulsipher's characters were both intriguing and full of life, we had some suspense as to who would become Derrick's fiancee but the best woman for him won for me, but you may feel differently therefore I recommend you read Persuaded for yourself and make up your mind. The tiins to Persuasion were nicely done, with the quotes from it at the head of each chapter and then the title.. all of the quotes are a constant but not unwelcome part of the book! The writing was spot on, the characters were all very 3 dimensional and fully fleshed out, all the main characters were interesting and there were complexities with them which were eventually solved in the book. Even the secondary characters were very well done each character adding flair to the story. I will reread this book from time to time because it was beautifully done retelling of a Jane Austen novel set now.
I highly recommend this book to romance readers, with some suspense and a little action and adventure involved, but first and foremost it is a romance book!
I received this book for an honest review, thank you Misty Dawn Pulsophrt