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Rejected Luna, Reborn in Vengeance
Halfway through my Mating Ceremony, my sister Seraphina suddenly dropped to her knees in front of me and started banging her head on the sacred ground. "Lyra, please release Callum back to me. Just as you commanded, I submitted to those thirty rogue wolves. Please, just let me go!" My mate-to-be, Alpha Callum Blackthorn, completely lost it. He canceled the ceremony right there. Then Callum ordered his enforcers to drag me to "Blood Moon Den," the most notorious punishment territory for disgraced wolves, to "pay for what I'd done." For two months, they forced me to serve rogues non-stop while whipping me with silver - tipped ropes, even impairing my ability to shift. After that, Callum finally remembered me. But I just kept my head down, numbly kneeling at his feet, skillfully took off my clothes...
1021 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 13, 2025
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February 27, 2026
not worth reading
The original story ends at chapter 11 and then becomes a new story. I think it might be written by AI because there were several inconsistencies in the first 10 chapters. They said she was in prison for two months and then all of a sudden she was just a waitress for two months but then next page it was actually prison again.
The book is not described as an anthology but switching to a different story after 10 chapters and realizing it is over 1000 pages long suggests that is it. This book just isn’t worth reading. The description isn’t accurate, the inconsistencies, all scream AI.
The original story ends at chapter 11 and then becomes a new story. I think it might be written by AI because there were several inconsistencies in the first 10 chapters. They said she was in prison for two months and then all of a sudden she was just a waitress for two months but then next page it was actually prison again.
The book is not described as an anthology but switching to a different story after 10 chapters and realizing it is over 1000 pages long suggests that is it. This book just isn’t worth reading. The description isn’t accurate, the inconsistencies, all scream AI.
June 27, 2026
long read but worth it 3.5 stars
So I couldn’t decide between the rating. It’s not 3 but a 3.5 as I found myself scrolling pass paragraphs just looking for certain words. It became repetitive every now and then. I enjoyed the banter between the two Betas and really enjoyed the POV of all that needed to be explained. Not leaving anything unanswered. But again towards the last half it became repetitive and drown out I some areas. But still a good read. Some typos, not enough to cause confusion. Although there was confusion on some chapters because I don’t know whose pov it was. Causing me to reread the starting paragraph.
So I couldn’t decide between the rating. It’s not 3 but a 3.5 as I found myself scrolling pass paragraphs just looking for certain words. It became repetitive every now and then. I enjoyed the banter between the two Betas and really enjoyed the POV of all that needed to be explained. Not leaving anything unanswered. But again towards the last half it became repetitive and drown out I some areas. But still a good read. Some typos, not enough to cause confusion. Although there was confusion on some chapters because I don’t know whose pov it was. Causing me to reread the starting paragraph.
April 20, 2025
It wasn’t a bad book. I actually enjoyed it. But what confused me was the beginning. I don’t understand how it was related to the main story at all. It was random and the ending just tragic. There was no closure to it. If that hadn’t been part of the first few chapters of the rest of the book everything would have made more sense. The rest of the story was actually very good.
May 3, 2025
The story is decent bud the editing is awful. So many basics grammatical mistakes as well as left over comments between I am assuming the author and maybe a beta reader?
Plus the first prologue or short story is not called out as being related to the rest which makes it very difficult.
Plus the first prologue or short story is not called out as being related to the rest which makes it very difficult.
August 11, 2025
Good read but about 300 pages could have been cut and not been missed. The first 9 chapters were about the original curse the rest of the book is about the culmination of the curse and the aftereffects through generations.
March 1, 2026
LOVE THIS BOOK
I was so excited to find this book. I love finding good serial stories but the literal endless stories gets super old. I love the characters and humor as well as the justice delivered in this story cant wait til more is released on amazon
I was so excited to find this book. I love finding good serial stories but the literal endless stories gets super old. I love the characters and humor as well as the justice delivered in this story cant wait til more is released on amazon
March 5, 2026
Stunning
This is so well-written ...it had me late for work couple of times, the heart ache the love ....the loyalty the twists and turns ....I cant wait to read the rest once it is written
This is so well-written ...it had me late for work couple of times, the heart ache the love ....the loyalty the twists and turns ....I cant wait to read the rest once it is written
June 24, 2026
it was good
It was a good story, but had a lot of errors and inconsistencies. If you can get over that, you may like it. The beginning of the book is a completely different story, that was the one I wanted to read, but the one about Selene was great. I always love a bad ssa female who finds love despite all the heartache and pain she went through.
It was a good story, but had a lot of errors and inconsistencies. If you can get over that, you may like it. The beginning of the book is a completely different story, that was the one I wanted to read, but the one about Selene was great. I always love a bad ssa female who finds love despite all the heartache and pain she went through.
April 29, 2025
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A difficult to follow revenge para-mance. Would likely work well in a WebNovel premise. I'd encourage the author to find a good editor.
A difficult to follow revenge para-mance. Would likely work well in a WebNovel premise. I'd encourage the author to find a good editor.
May 13, 2025
Rejected Luna
The first chapter had my interest and it just keep building. Well written, looking forward to your next book.Thank you.
The first chapter had my interest and it just keep building. Well written, looking forward to your next book.Thank you.
Want to Read
July 7, 2025I got this through Amazon and it’s a great book for like 12 chapters and then switches to a whole different book.
Can anyone help find the whole book?
Can anyone help find the whole book?
August 30, 2025
It had a very anticlimactic ending
The book was a good read until it ended rather abruptly. It felt unfinished and rushed at the end of the book.
The book was a good read until it ended rather abruptly. It felt unfinished and rushed at the end of the book.
April 13, 2026
two stories in one book
Two stories in one book. It is a little confusing .the second story is a little jumbled. Still liked the story
Two stories in one book. It is a little confusing .the second story is a little jumbled. Still liked the story
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