This was a bit of an odd duck. I know that usually applies to a person, but I'm going to persist using it out context here. Anyone wonder where that expression came from? Anyway, this was my first SE Green story. The premise was really unique, but everything felt very unrefined. The tragedy of Lilly and Kinsley's parents dying and its lasting impact on the sisters, the growing psychoses of each woman, the oversexualized and aggressive behaviors and manipulation tactics, and the overall purpose of the book all seemed extremely underdeveloped. More focus was put on the moment-to-moment conversations between the sisters, but nothing expanded beyond that or brought any of the plot points full circle. Combine that with the constantly shifting, and at times very confusing, POVs from first to second person, the nonstop jumping to past years back to present, and it all just became lost in itself. In a nutshell, the book never found its flow and that made all of the good things that were created lose their impact. Now I think the plot and characters were dynamite, but none of it came together, and even the ending just felt very abrupt and unfinished. The content was good, but this really needed some additional editing to make it more palatable for the reader.