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Bowler University #2
Make It Right
Max Payton lives by two rules: Size and strength win any fight, and never show weakness.
When a rash of assaults sends Bowler University into a tailspin, Max volunteers to help teach a self-defense class. One of the other instructors is the beautiful, pixie-faced girl he keeps butting heads with ... and who challenges everything he thought he knew.
Lea Travers avoids guys like Max--cocky jocks who assume she's fragile because of a disability caused by a childhood accident. She likes to be in control, and something about being with Max makes her feel anything but. During the moments he lets his guard down, Lea sees a soul as broken inside as she is outside. Trusting him is a whole other problem ...
When the attacks ramp up and hit close to home, Lea and Max must learn, before it's too late, that true strength can come from vulnerability ... and giving in to trust is sometimes the only way to make things right.
When a rash of assaults sends Bowler University into a tailspin, Max volunteers to help teach a self-defense class. One of the other instructors is the beautiful, pixie-faced girl he keeps butting heads with ... and who challenges everything he thought he knew.
Lea Travers avoids guys like Max--cocky jocks who assume she's fragile because of a disability caused by a childhood accident. She likes to be in control, and something about being with Max makes her feel anything but. During the moments he lets his guard down, Lea sees a soul as broken inside as she is outside. Trusting him is a whole other problem ...
When the attacks ramp up and hit close to home, Lea and Max must learn, before it's too late, that true strength can come from vulnerability ... and giving in to trust is sometimes the only way to make things right.
336 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published September 9, 2014
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Megan Erickson
49 books1,846 followersMegan Erickson is a USA Today bestselling author of romance that sizzles. Her books have a touch of nerd, a dash of humor, and always have a happily ever after. A former journalist, she switched to fiction when she decided she likes writing her own endings better.
She lives in Pennsylvania with her very own nerdy husband and two kids. Although rather fun-sized, she's been told she has a full-sized personality. When Megan isn't writing, she's either lounging with her two cats named after John Hughes characters or... thinking about writing.
For more, visit meganerickson.org
She lives in Pennsylvania with her very own nerdy husband and two kids. Although rather fun-sized, she's been told she has a full-sized personality. When Megan isn't writing, she's either lounging with her two cats named after John Hughes characters or... thinking about writing.
For more, visit meganerickson.org
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December 9, 2018
Make It Right es el segundo libro de la trilogia Bowler University escrita por la autora Megan Erickson y narra la historia de Max y Lea, personajes secundarios en la novela anterior.
Honestamente cuando empece a leer esta historia no tenia ningun tipo de expectativa, ni para bien ni para mal, solo queria leer una novela sencilla que me mantuviera distraida y que no tuviera demasiado drama, y fue eso justo lo que encontre en esta lectura, lo que no esperaba es que la historia de Lea y Max fuera a ser tan especial y memorable, pero la verdad es que este libro es muuucho mejor de lo que parece a simple vista, realmente vale mucho la pena.
Make It Right es un libro ameno, entretenido y nada complejo que te enamorara desde el primer capitulo, ademas la pluma de la escritora es muy agradable y en ningun momento se hace pesada o aburrida, sino todo lo contrario, se me hizo corto.
En conclusion, una historia muy recomendable para leer en cualquier momento, te dejara con una sonrisa enorme en la cara y te hara soltar alguna que otra carcajada ( Max es muy gracioso ).
3.75 Estrellas!
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August 7, 2014This book. Oh man. I hope you take this journey with me to see how hard Max fights for his future and his girl. :)
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September 29, 2014
I liked this one a little bit better than the first, if only because the relationship drew me in better. This is actually something of a surprise because you don't end that first book with much of an opinion of Max. It had to be a tough challenge for Erickson to redeem him, but she not only did it but made it look easy.
The book was a little predictable on a couple of levels, and that hurt my enjoyment a bit. Indeed, I stalled out for half a week or so just after the middle where a roadblock was pretty inevitable and I just didn't want to see the crash. Fortunately, as inevitable as the crash was, the fallout was everything I hoped it would be and that's something of a wonder—in other words, it worked out to the strength and benefit of Max and Lea and did so in an organic but completely believable way.
So yeah, it was a solid fourish stars with a bit of a dip for being predictable. Fortunately, Max was just so sweet that it was hard not to root for him to the very end (and yes, I know how very unlikely that sounds if you've only read the first book). If you don't fall in love with Max when he's with Lea I'm wondering why you read romance novels at all...
A small editorial note: The editing on this eBook was terrible. The kind of editing where it's apparent that changes simply weren't smoothed out. The kind where the author is the origin, but an editor who is even half-awake should have caught them. Some chapters (particularly near the end) had mistakes every other page.
A note about Steamy: There's two or three steamy scenes and they are steamy. Lea and Max aren't typical in any sense and when they decide it's time, there's nothing casual about it. I really liked how their intimacy was so much an expression of their inner character and admired how well it showed their burgeoning emotional connection as well. Very well done.
The book was a little predictable on a couple of levels, and that hurt my enjoyment a bit. Indeed, I stalled out for half a week or so just after the middle where a roadblock was pretty inevitable and I just didn't want to see the crash. Fortunately, as inevitable as the crash was, the fallout was everything I hoped it would be and that's something of a wonder—in other words, it worked out to the strength and benefit of Max and Lea and did so in an organic but completely believable way.
So yeah, it was a solid fourish stars with a bit of a dip for being predictable. Fortunately, Max was just so sweet that it was hard not to root for him to the very end (and yes, I know how very unlikely that sounds if you've only read the first book). If you don't fall in love with Max when he's with Lea I'm wondering why you read romance novels at all...
A small editorial note: The editing on this eBook was terrible. The kind of editing where it's apparent that changes simply weren't smoothed out. The kind where the author is the origin, but an editor who is even half-awake should have caught them. Some chapters (particularly near the end) had mistakes every other page.
A note about Steamy: There's two or three steamy scenes and they are steamy. Lea and Max aren't typical in any sense and when they decide it's time, there's nothing casual about it. I really liked how their intimacy was so much an expression of their inner character and admired how well it showed their burgeoning emotional connection as well. Very well done.
August 30, 2014
Make it Right was such a lovely NA read that was able to give me the warm and fuzzies. After I finished the book, I literally hugged my e-reader because Make it Right managed to put a goofy smile on my face. It was a sweet and romantic story about two people who grew and matured together as a couple.
Make it Right tells the story of Max and Lea. Both these characters were beautifully fleshed out. Lea, especially, was a breath of fresh air and a character who was easy to look up to. I'm always on the look out for books with characters with disabilities, because we obviously need more diversity in books, so I was pleased to find out that Lea had a mild disability in the form of a limp. What's great about this was how deftly Megan Erickson handled Leah's disability. She didn't make Lea's disability the focus of the story and the heart around which her personality fleshed out. Basically what I'm trying to say is that the author made sure that her disability didn't define who Lea was. Undoubtedly, it had helped her grow into a strong young woman who was independent, feisty and complex. Lea did what she wanted and never once did she mope and whine about her condition. She had grown to accept it as a part of her and she did not consider herself damaged, which I thought was such a great message to spread to readers. Max was also up to par with Lea. I'm not going to lie, after what he did to Kat and Alec in the previous book, I was a bit wary of how I would feel for him, but he completely redeemed himself in my eyes and I fell very much in love with him. He gave off vibes of being a complete jerk with his cocky and douchey attitude, but he was in fact a sweetheart. I think the moment I fell in love with him was when he adopted a stray cat he found around his house and started making gourmet cat snacks for it. Tell me, how could I not fall in love with that?
The romance in Make it Right was beautifully done, growing slowly from a friendship. The banter between Max and Lea was great. Those two were definitely a complementary couple. Most of the time, the romances in NA tend to focus more on the sexual tension between the characters. Here, Megan Erickson strove to seek a balance between the sexual tension and the adorable factor. I loved that there were some pretty steamy moments in the book, but it also was balanced out by the super cute moments that had me gushing and swooning and wanting to hug everyone around me. It was entirely too adorable for words and left me in such a pleasant mood. Additionally, this was a couple that learned from each other, most importantly, they learned about forgiveness and following ones dreams. There was obviously that one big misunderstanding that usually impedes a couple before the HEA that is commonly found in most contemporary novels, but the one in Make it Right wasn't the kind that made me want to pull my own hair. I think the only other thing that could have made me love this book more would have been the first person POV. I tend to prefer the first person writing over third person writing when it comes to contemporaries, but I did think the latter was done well with Make it Right.
All in all, I loved Make it Right and thought it was a wonderful and an endearing New Adult read that should be read by everyone who wants to smile, swoon and fall in love while reading.
September 15, 2014
Initial thoughts:
I can't stress how much I loved absolutely everything about this book. Megan had her work cut out for her, redeeming Max after his actions in Make it Count and making readers fall in love with him. But you know what? She pulled it off and then some. I love Max. I absolutely adored Lea. I want to be friends with every single one of these characters.
All. The. Feels.
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Find this review and more at kimberlyfaye reads .
So, I think I've sat down no fewer than five times to try to write my review for Make It Right, but I'm having such a difficult time saying anything more than "OMG I LOVE IT BUY IT IMMEDIATELY SWOONS AND FEELS" in shouty caps. I recognize that's not particularly helpful, so I'm going to try my best to reign in my inner fangirl and tell you WHY I loved this book so much. Just know that whatever I say, it won't do this one justice.
I have a great amount of respect for an author who can make me love a character I previously hated. Ok, maybe in this case "hate" is a strong word to use for Max, but let's face it, he wasn't a nice guy in Make It Count. He made just about every unforgivable mistake a guy can make. I had zero respect for him as a person, a friend and least of all, a boyfriend. He was arrogant and self-centered and even though I was completely ready to dismiss him, I was still excited to find out Megan was writing a book for him. I don't like disliking characters. I think nearly everyone has redeemable qualities and I love when an author can make me see the true character and make me admit I was wrong. And I was definitely wrong about Max.
The beginning of Max's transition began, for me, when he took in the stray cat. I mean, who doesn't love a guy who loves cats? It was obvious he identified with the cat and in saving the cat, he found a way to begin saving himself, too. One of my favorite scenes in the book, and in all the books I've read so far this year, involved Max explaining why he was going to make homemade (yes this guy BAKES!) treats for Wayne the cat because he deserved good things too. It was so heart-melty and swoony, I think I fell a little bit in love with him right then. Regardless of when it happened during this book, the end result is the same... Max completely redeemed himself in my eyes. And more than just redemption, he earned my love and respect. He is a genuinely good and caring guy. He just went through some stuff and even if I didn't like the things he did, after learning more about his backstory, I completely understand why he did.
I can't begin to tell you how much I loved Lea. She was such a fantastic heroine. She was a strong woman who could take care of herself, despite her disability. She avoids cocky guys like Max like the plague. But, even with her mind set on avoiding him, there's no denying she has a bit of a crush on him. As she watches him flirt with so many girls around her, she wonders why he constantly teases her and doesn't give her the same attention. She might think she doesn't want him, but that doesn't mean she still doesn't want some of his attention. After he helps her out after her cousin is attacked, she realizes there just could be a lot more to this guy than meets the eye.
The dynamic between Max and Lea was just great. Neither of them backed down to the other. I love a girl who gives as good as she gets and Lea definitely did that. Their banter was fun to read, their chemistry was palpable and the sexual tension between them leapt off the pages. I loved getting lost in their world as they learned more about each other and grew closer to something real. There were as many sweet and swoony moments as sexy ones and I was completely enamored with the characters and their stories... both times I read it. (Yes, I read my ARC twice because I loved it so much.) The on-campus crime spree was not only important to Max and Lea's story, but I think it added another level of importance to the book. This is one of the things I love most about Megan's books. Not only does she give us kickass characters and sweet and sexy romance, but there's always a little bit MORE to them. This makes them more realistic to me... and it makes them stand apart from some other new adult books. I just can't recommend this series highly enough.
I received a copy of this book from the publisher, via Edelweiss, in exchange for an honest review.
I can't stress how much I loved absolutely everything about this book. Megan had her work cut out for her, redeeming Max after his actions in Make it Count and making readers fall in love with him. But you know what? She pulled it off and then some. I love Max. I absolutely adored Lea. I want to be friends with every single one of these characters.
All. The. Feels.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Find this review and more at kimberlyfaye reads .
So, I think I've sat down no fewer than five times to try to write my review for Make It Right, but I'm having such a difficult time saying anything more than "OMG I LOVE IT BUY IT IMMEDIATELY SWOONS AND FEELS" in shouty caps. I recognize that's not particularly helpful, so I'm going to try my best to reign in my inner fangirl and tell you WHY I loved this book so much. Just know that whatever I say, it won't do this one justice.
I have a great amount of respect for an author who can make me love a character I previously hated. Ok, maybe in this case "hate" is a strong word to use for Max, but let's face it, he wasn't a nice guy in Make It Count. He made just about every unforgivable mistake a guy can make. I had zero respect for him as a person, a friend and least of all, a boyfriend. He was arrogant and self-centered and even though I was completely ready to dismiss him, I was still excited to find out Megan was writing a book for him. I don't like disliking characters. I think nearly everyone has redeemable qualities and I love when an author can make me see the true character and make me admit I was wrong. And I was definitely wrong about Max.
The beginning of Max's transition began, for me, when he took in the stray cat. I mean, who doesn't love a guy who loves cats? It was obvious he identified with the cat and in saving the cat, he found a way to begin saving himself, too. One of my favorite scenes in the book, and in all the books I've read so far this year, involved Max explaining why he was going to make homemade (yes this guy BAKES!) treats for Wayne the cat because he deserved good things too. It was so heart-melty and swoony, I think I fell a little bit in love with him right then. Regardless of when it happened during this book, the end result is the same... Max completely redeemed himself in my eyes. And more than just redemption, he earned my love and respect. He is a genuinely good and caring guy. He just went through some stuff and even if I didn't like the things he did, after learning more about his backstory, I completely understand why he did.
I can't begin to tell you how much I loved Lea. She was such a fantastic heroine. She was a strong woman who could take care of herself, despite her disability. She avoids cocky guys like Max like the plague. But, even with her mind set on avoiding him, there's no denying she has a bit of a crush on him. As she watches him flirt with so many girls around her, she wonders why he constantly teases her and doesn't give her the same attention. She might think she doesn't want him, but that doesn't mean she still doesn't want some of his attention. After he helps her out after her cousin is attacked, she realizes there just could be a lot more to this guy than meets the eye.
The dynamic between Max and Lea was just great. Neither of them backed down to the other. I love a girl who gives as good as she gets and Lea definitely did that. Their banter was fun to read, their chemistry was palpable and the sexual tension between them leapt off the pages. I loved getting lost in their world as they learned more about each other and grew closer to something real. There were as many sweet and swoony moments as sexy ones and I was completely enamored with the characters and their stories... both times I read it. (Yes, I read my ARC twice because I loved it so much.) The on-campus crime spree was not only important to Max and Lea's story, but I think it added another level of importance to the book. This is one of the things I love most about Megan's books. Not only does she give us kickass characters and sweet and sexy romance, but there's always a little bit MORE to them. This makes them more realistic to me... and it makes them stand apart from some other new adult books. I just can't recommend this series highly enough.
I received a copy of this book from the publisher, via Edelweiss, in exchange for an honest review.
July 26, 2015
I read this series out of order. I read and LOVED book one, Make It Count. Then somehow I missed reading this one but then I was part of the book tour for Make it Last. It was time to fix that.
I adore this author. She does a great job of creating characters that feel real and have real issues. No perfect people here - it mirrors real life very well. I like that.
Lea has a limp. An accident when she was thirteen haunts her still but it doesn't defeat her. She's determined to do everything she can and pay the piper for things she shouldn't. And that piper is always pain. But some things are worth the pain...like time with Max.
She's attracted to Max and him to her but they aren't right for each other - or so they think. Max has made some mistakes. Been a guy he doesn't like. And his family has him being another guy that he doesn't much like, either. But he shows Lea the real him. And I so love the real him. He's kind to stray cats and helps girls when their life falls apart. He plans perfect dates. And he volunteers to be the attacker a certain black belt gets to demonstrate on. Yeah, there were bruises.
Trust is a big theme in this one. Everyone who has been hurt gets the idea that trusting can be dangerous. Lea's bad at trust. Max is bad at being who he is and and wants to be. It's an opportunity for them be vulnerable with each other and hope.
I was reading and suddenly realized where the train wreck would happen. It made me sad to see it coming and I wanted to read faster to get to the make-up. But while I was sure I saw where it was going, it wasn't exactly what I thought. And there was some pain in there that I just was teary about. But I loved the shirt...yeah you have to read it to know. I loved the adviser appointment. I loved the pulling to the side of road moment. There will be rose petals!
Another great New Adult read from this author. If you've missed this series, fix that.
I adore this author. She does a great job of creating characters that feel real and have real issues. No perfect people here - it mirrors real life very well. I like that.
Lea has a limp. An accident when she was thirteen haunts her still but it doesn't defeat her. She's determined to do everything she can and pay the piper for things she shouldn't. And that piper is always pain. But some things are worth the pain...like time with Max.
She's attracted to Max and him to her but they aren't right for each other - or so they think. Max has made some mistakes. Been a guy he doesn't like. And his family has him being another guy that he doesn't much like, either. But he shows Lea the real him. And I so love the real him. He's kind to stray cats and helps girls when their life falls apart. He plans perfect dates. And he volunteers to be the attacker a certain black belt gets to demonstrate on. Yeah, there were bruises.
Trust is a big theme in this one. Everyone who has been hurt gets the idea that trusting can be dangerous. Lea's bad at trust. Max is bad at being who he is and and wants to be. It's an opportunity for them be vulnerable with each other and hope.
I was reading and suddenly realized where the train wreck would happen. It made me sad to see it coming and I wanted to read faster to get to the make-up. But while I was sure I saw where it was going, it wasn't exactly what I thought. And there was some pain in there that I just was teary about. But I loved the shirt...yeah you have to read it to know. I loved the adviser appointment. I loved the pulling to the side of road moment. There will be rose petals!
Another great New Adult read from this author. If you've missed this series, fix that.
December 27, 2014
I didn't think I could love Max, not when I fell so hard for Alec in Make it Count. But I could tell Max had a side to him we hadn't seen yet, and Megan Erickson absolutely delivered on letting us in on what makes Max MAX. And omg I do love this boy.
Make it Right touches on something we all can relate to--how hard it is to be vulnerable because being vulnerable means opening yourself up to the risk of being hurt, and both Max and Lea have their walls up for very valid reasons. But here's the things with walls--they keep out the bad, but they also block the good. And the good that Max and Lea bring to each other absolutely jumps off the page.
Max and Lea teach each other so much, not only about love but about forgiveness as well. It's only when our hero and heroine forgive themselves for the hurt they caused others--and forgive others for the hurt caused to them--that they can have a real shot at the happiness they both deserve. And YES. Max deserves a happy ending too. His is a true redemption story. All you need to do is meet his cat to know what kind of love Max is really capable of.
All the love for this book. Can't wait for book THREE!
Make it Right touches on something we all can relate to--how hard it is to be vulnerable because being vulnerable means opening yourself up to the risk of being hurt, and both Max and Lea have their walls up for very valid reasons. But here's the things with walls--they keep out the bad, but they also block the good. And the good that Max and Lea bring to each other absolutely jumps off the page.
Max and Lea teach each other so much, not only about love but about forgiveness as well. It's only when our hero and heroine forgive themselves for the hurt they caused others--and forgive others for the hurt caused to them--that they can have a real shot at the happiness they both deserve. And YES. Max deserves a happy ending too. His is a true redemption story. All you need to do is meet his cat to know what kind of love Max is really capable of.
All the love for this book. Can't wait for book THREE!
October 17, 2014
Ever since I finished Make it Count this past summer, I could not WAIT to get my hands on this book! I knew Max Payton would get his redemption story and I could not have asked for a better heroine to help him do it! I loved Lea so much- she is such a strong, resilient woman and she is the perfect fit for Max.
I love Erickson's writing style. This is how college NA should be written! It's fun and cute, but at the same time the characters face their own challenges both individually and as a couple. Add in a strong set of side characters and you've got yourself a great read!
Let's start with how much I love Lea. She may have some physical scars and a slight limp from an accident that occurred during her youth, but that does not stop this girl. She has learned to rise above the pain and not be ashamed of who she is or what she looks like. After this particular accident, she craves control in her life, especially after not having had it in that very moment.
"There was something about Lea, this power or strength that lurked below the surface of her small, fragile frame."
I love that Max recognizes her strength right from the beginning. He doesn't treat her any differently because of her past injury and that earns him a lot of brownie points. Max hides behind this cocky façade, but he's a really good guy at heart. Having grown up with 2 older brothers and a hardass father, Max hasn't had the loving, affectionate home that Lea has. The glimpses of vulnerability she sees in him are what really endears him to her, thus deciding to give him a shot.
"That's what you've taught me, even if you don't know it yourself. I've never felt stronger than when I decided to open up to you. When I decided to surrender my heart to you."
I love that Lea and Max aren't perfect. They both make mistakes when it comes to their relationship and learn from them. I felt bad for Max and Lea because they are both hurt by the others' actions. Thankfully, they realize their wrongs and work to fix them. They are a fabulous couple and I loved how sweet Max could be with her!
We get plenty of time with Kat, Alec, and Danica in this book. Kat and Alec are good friends to both Max and Lea. After the way Max treated Kat previously, it's so great to see them getting along and that she has chosen to forgive him. Which brings me to Danica. That is one girl to have in your corner for sure! She is Lea's roomie and fiercely protective of her friends. I love that she isn't afraid to be herself and tell it like it is.
"Danica was a rare creature. Like an albino deer. Everyone wanted her, but they wanted her to keep. And she didn't like to be kept. Pinned down. Forced into any sort of consistency. Her loyalty was unrivaled, but it was hard-earned."
After getting to know these characters so well, it's only natural that I would want them to have their happily ever afters. I'm super excited for Cam's story because I love second chance romances. Even though it takes place in Cam's hometown and away from Bowler, I know Megan will infuse it with the same spunky, fun vibe that she has given her previous two novels.
*Received a copy of this book via Edelweiss in exchange for a fair and honest review.*
I love Erickson's writing style. This is how college NA should be written! It's fun and cute, but at the same time the characters face their own challenges both individually and as a couple. Add in a strong set of side characters and you've got yourself a great read!
Let's start with how much I love Lea. She may have some physical scars and a slight limp from an accident that occurred during her youth, but that does not stop this girl. She has learned to rise above the pain and not be ashamed of who she is or what she looks like. After this particular accident, she craves control in her life, especially after not having had it in that very moment.
"There was something about Lea, this power or strength that lurked below the surface of her small, fragile frame."
I love that Max recognizes her strength right from the beginning. He doesn't treat her any differently because of her past injury and that earns him a lot of brownie points. Max hides behind this cocky façade, but he's a really good guy at heart. Having grown up with 2 older brothers and a hardass father, Max hasn't had the loving, affectionate home that Lea has. The glimpses of vulnerability she sees in him are what really endears him to her, thus deciding to give him a shot.
"That's what you've taught me, even if you don't know it yourself. I've never felt stronger than when I decided to open up to you. When I decided to surrender my heart to you."
I love that Lea and Max aren't perfect. They both make mistakes when it comes to their relationship and learn from them. I felt bad for Max and Lea because they are both hurt by the others' actions. Thankfully, they realize their wrongs and work to fix them. They are a fabulous couple and I loved how sweet Max could be with her!
We get plenty of time with Kat, Alec, and Danica in this book. Kat and Alec are good friends to both Max and Lea. After the way Max treated Kat previously, it's so great to see them getting along and that she has chosen to forgive him. Which brings me to Danica. That is one girl to have in your corner for sure! She is Lea's roomie and fiercely protective of her friends. I love that she isn't afraid to be herself and tell it like it is.
"Danica was a rare creature. Like an albino deer. Everyone wanted her, but they wanted her to keep. And she didn't like to be kept. Pinned down. Forced into any sort of consistency. Her loyalty was unrivaled, but it was hard-earned."
After getting to know these characters so well, it's only natural that I would want them to have their happily ever afters. I'm super excited for Cam's story because I love second chance romances. Even though it takes place in Cam's hometown and away from Bowler, I know Megan will infuse it with the same spunky, fun vibe that she has given her previous two novels.
*Received a copy of this book via Edelweiss in exchange for a fair and honest review.*
February 29, 2016
Max has got a massive chip on his boulder-sized shoulder and he is pretty much angry at the universe. Trapped in a life he does not choose for himself, he sees no way out of the future that is already mapped out for him. He harbors a secret crush on Lea, his ex's bff, but he can't stop acting like a total jackass around her.
Lea had been drowning under the weight of her own problems, but now that she's in college she has her shit together and she has a plan for her life. Because of what she has faced in the past she can see beyond the carefully cultivated mask that Max wears to the vulnerability underneath. Because Lea showcases her vulnerability Max opens up and starts to let her in. Then she locks down and the story goes back and forth as they desperately try to trust one another. I love books that essentially focus on the redemptive power of love and Make It Right is such a read.
I loved their love story and it was full of the heart-breaking, frustrating, angst-laden toing and froing that I love to torture myself with! Both characters are complex and solidly developed. I like the secondary cast of characters and they were decently detailed as well. I didn't read the first book, and you don't need to in order to enjoy this story, but I'm beyond curious to read the first book now, and when I have space on my reading schedule I will be downloading a copy.
Lea's disability was well written and not glossed over. I truly came away with a strong appreciation of how difficult it was for her to manage her condition, but she was a tough girl with a lot of inner strength and someone I very much admired. Max was very supportive of her in that regard and I warmed to him as a result.
I did find the plot fairly predictable and it lost some brownie points for that. However, the writing was great and the pacing spot-on, and for me, it was a real page-turner. I read this in two sittings in the space of twelve hours.
If you enjoy well-written NA that is character rather than plot driven then you will love this book.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. This book will appear on my blog shortly: http://myyanabookobsession.com
Lea had been drowning under the weight of her own problems, but now that she's in college she has her shit together and she has a plan for her life. Because of what she has faced in the past she can see beyond the carefully cultivated mask that Max wears to the vulnerability underneath. Because Lea showcases her vulnerability Max opens up and starts to let her in. Then she locks down and the story goes back and forth as they desperately try to trust one another. I love books that essentially focus on the redemptive power of love and Make It Right is such a read.
I loved their love story and it was full of the heart-breaking, frustrating, angst-laden toing and froing that I love to torture myself with! Both characters are complex and solidly developed. I like the secondary cast of characters and they were decently detailed as well. I didn't read the first book, and you don't need to in order to enjoy this story, but I'm beyond curious to read the first book now, and when I have space on my reading schedule I will be downloading a copy.
Lea's disability was well written and not glossed over. I truly came away with a strong appreciation of how difficult it was for her to manage her condition, but she was a tough girl with a lot of inner strength and someone I very much admired. Max was very supportive of her in that regard and I warmed to him as a result.
I did find the plot fairly predictable and it lost some brownie points for that. However, the writing was great and the pacing spot-on, and for me, it was a real page-turner. I read this in two sittings in the space of twelve hours.
If you enjoy well-written NA that is character rather than plot driven then you will love this book.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. This book will appear on my blog shortly: http://myyanabookobsession.com
August 25, 2014
Once again, Megan brings us a book filled with characters to fall in love with and a story that feels fresh. After falling for Alec and Kat's story in Make it Count, I was so very anxious to get my hands on Max's (goodies)...I mean story. He got sort of a bad wrap in the first book. The womanizing jerk who sleeps with his best friend's girl? I knew there had to be more to him.
And he didn't disappoint. I mean, a guy who nurtures an injured street cat? Give me one second...
And when you add Lea into the mix, a girl who's been through it and can still kick your ass? My favorite kind of heroine.
When these two got together, it was magic and when things blew up a little, well, I was pulling for them because they so clearly made each other very, very happy. I have to say though that my favorite relationship mending of all wasn't necessarily between our two MC's here. I'll keep my mouth shut on the details, but I think you'll enjoy it just as much as I did.
And he didn't disappoint. I mean, a guy who nurtures an injured street cat? Give me one second...
And when you add Lea into the mix, a girl who's been through it and can still kick your ass? My favorite kind of heroine.
When these two got together, it was magic and when things blew up a little, well, I was pulling for them because they so clearly made each other very, very happy. I have to say though that my favorite relationship mending of all wasn't necessarily between our two MC's here. I'll keep my mouth shut on the details, but I think you'll enjoy it just as much as I did.
July 26, 2016
Rating: 3.75/5
Review coming soon!
Review coming soon!
August 13, 2015
actual rating:3.5
December 22, 2014
*ARC Given to Blog for Honest Review*
4 “doll” “white knight” Kisses
Oh boy…so much to say, so many words and I feel like I can’t get everything out fast enough. I really enjoyed this book…like a lot. I mean of course I had high hopes, considering I loved Make It Count , the first book in the series, but Make It Right was a little trickier. MiR is part of the Bowler University Series…it’s possible for it to be read as a standalone, but I really wouldn’t recommend it. It makes more sense if you read MiC first, because that’s where we initially meet Max.
Max Payton…what do I think about Max…well, after MiC, I can’t lie – he was already at a disadvantage. It’s not that I didn’t like Max…I just wasn’t crazy about him. He’d done some not too great stuff (no…I’m not going into detail) but I guess I was a little ambivalent about him….I could take him or leave him, I wasn’t impressed…but I was excited about the prospect of him impressing me. And…he totally did…he could be the poster boy for proof that people can and do change. Don’t get me wrong, there are a lot of things to like about Max…he’s attractive…popular…can sing karaoke with the best of them – he’s a fun loving guy but very few people know the real Max. He is…full of potential but held back by so much…and I hate that he had to hold back in the first place. I think what surprised me the most was Max has such a big heart when he lets himself love…and seeing him let go…trust…feel without restrictions…he was like this gorgeous creature that I couldn’t get enough of. That’s what Lea did for him…
Lea Travers…oh my tough little cookie, Lea touched my heart in a very different way. She’s brave…she’s a fighter…and she’s got so much passion packed into her little body. Lea was dealt a tough hand…a car crash changed how she would live her life and while I think it made her a stronger person, it definitely made her more guarded. She trusts few and protects fiercely…none of which are necessarily bad qualities but it’s turned her into quite a control freak – which I can totally relate to! Lea’s sweet…funny…kind…strong in a million different ways that you could never imagine, it made my head spin. I adored her relationship with her father, who called her La La (loved the story behind that nickname)...and honestly it wasn’t until pretty late in the book that the differences between Lea’s relationship with her dad and Max’s relationship with his really set in for me…it was quite eye opening. But I digress…I grew very attached to Lea…and it was easy to do…she was full of surprises, from her tattoo’s and piercings to the way she was with Max…but he wasn’t the only one that changed…Lea went through her own growth, and it was all due to a boy with beautiful brown eyes.
Oh boy…what did I love most about Max and Lea? Their combativeness. They’re both so strong willed and stubborn…I love seeing them rile each other up…cause it was just one of many amazing emotions they evoked out of each other…but I absolutely thrived off the fact that Lea didn’t let Max get away with shit! Max and Lea each have their own unique insecurities…their own quirks and things to overcome…but it was all part of their journey. The beauty in what Max and Lea find and have together is their ability to trust in one another…to have faith in another person and know that they feel the same thing…the capability to share themselves and give wholly to another human being and seeing them open up to that was astounding. Max has never had a strong female in his life and Lea has never felt comfortable enough to let another man in as much as she does Max…so their both opening themselves up to a very vulnerable situation…but the fact that they allowed it to happen spoke volumes to me about their relationship and who they are as a couple.
As usual, I fell more and more in love with these characters the more I get to know them. I loved seeing more of Alec and Kat…seeing little bits of their progression, even from someone else’s eyes, it just does stuff to me…one of the many reasons why I love series. I did not expect to fall more in love with…Danica! Of course I thought she was a riot in MiC and I loved her friendship with Alec, but she took on a different role with Lea…almost like a big sister. I kind of already have crushes on Max’s older brothers, Cal and Brent…they’re typical older brothers but with the way they were raised…they just have an interesting dynamic and I really liked their interactions. It showed a different side to Max…and if Cal and Brent are half as interesting as Max is, then oh boy, do I want! :-) (a girl can hope!). But…there was one character that completely stole the show…Wayne. Wayne is…a cat. Yup…a cat who in just a few scenes is magically able to show a completely different side to the tough and burly Max…I don’t want to give too much away, but Wayne totally rocked it out and I loved what he brought out in Max.
I was happy that the writing style pretty much stayed the same from MiC to MiR…the tone changed, obviously, with the characters but it’s still has the same feel. It’s dual POV, which I continued to enjoy…no scenes were repeated so it wasn’t redundant. And of course there was still that magical blend of emotional, funny and steamy…perfectly balanced between two insanely loveable and endearing characters. I really do enjoy Megan’s writing…she’s got a great flow and I feel like I’m consistently pulled in by what is happening. The plot was once again very unique and original and I really enjoyed it. It played both to Max and Lea’s strengths and weaknesses, which I appreciated. The balance and flow of this story was darn near perfect for me…just enough angst and pull to keep me on my toes…dear-sweet-lord-in-heaven was it sexy as hell…just the right amount of emotions, I didn’t cry like I did with MiR but I was feelin’ lots of feels!
I’m über excited about Cam’s story…he’s a man whore and I love my man whores, plus I can’t wait to hear his back story. He was set up perfectly over the past two books and if he’s any where close to the amazingness that Max and Alec are, then we’re in for an awesome story! Can’t wait to get my hands on Make It Last!
4 “doll” “white knight” Kisses
Oh boy…so much to say, so many words and I feel like I can’t get everything out fast enough. I really enjoyed this book…like a lot. I mean of course I had high hopes, considering I loved Make It Count , the first book in the series, but Make It Right was a little trickier. MiR is part of the Bowler University Series…it’s possible for it to be read as a standalone, but I really wouldn’t recommend it. It makes more sense if you read MiC first, because that’s where we initially meet Max.
Max Payton…what do I think about Max…well, after MiC, I can’t lie – he was already at a disadvantage. It’s not that I didn’t like Max…I just wasn’t crazy about him. He’d done some not too great stuff (no…I’m not going into detail) but I guess I was a little ambivalent about him….I could take him or leave him, I wasn’t impressed…but I was excited about the prospect of him impressing me. And…he totally did…he could be the poster boy for proof that people can and do change. Don’t get me wrong, there are a lot of things to like about Max…he’s attractive…popular…can sing karaoke with the best of them – he’s a fun loving guy but very few people know the real Max. He is…full of potential but held back by so much…and I hate that he had to hold back in the first place. I think what surprised me the most was Max has such a big heart when he lets himself love…and seeing him let go…trust…feel without restrictions…he was like this gorgeous creature that I couldn’t get enough of. That’s what Lea did for him…
‘She wondered if he realized how much those eyes gave him away when he wasn’t careful. She wondered if anyone ever tried to look deeper.
She wondered if he wanted anyone to.’
Lea Travers…oh my tough little cookie, Lea touched my heart in a very different way. She’s brave…she’s a fighter…and she’s got so much passion packed into her little body. Lea was dealt a tough hand…a car crash changed how she would live her life and while I think it made her a stronger person, it definitely made her more guarded. She trusts few and protects fiercely…none of which are necessarily bad qualities but it’s turned her into quite a control freak – which I can totally relate to! Lea’s sweet…funny…kind…strong in a million different ways that you could never imagine, it made my head spin. I adored her relationship with her father, who called her La La (loved the story behind that nickname)...and honestly it wasn’t until pretty late in the book that the differences between Lea’s relationship with her dad and Max’s relationship with his really set in for me…it was quite eye opening. But I digress…I grew very attached to Lea…and it was easy to do…she was full of surprises, from her tattoo’s and piercings to the way she was with Max…but he wasn’t the only one that changed…Lea went through her own growth, and it was all due to a boy with beautiful brown eyes.
‘Max stepped closer and she leaned slightly into him. Something was obviously wrong but he found a small bit of satisfaction that his presence seemed to comfort her. And that should weird him out. Because he didn’t do this “damsel in distress” thing. He wasn’t a white knight. He’d learned that the hard way. But something about Lea made him want to be.’
Oh boy…what did I love most about Max and Lea? Their combativeness. They’re both so strong willed and stubborn…I love seeing them rile each other up…cause it was just one of many amazing emotions they evoked out of each other…but I absolutely thrived off the fact that Lea didn’t let Max get away with shit! Max and Lea each have their own unique insecurities…their own quirks and things to overcome…but it was all part of their journey. The beauty in what Max and Lea find and have together is their ability to trust in one another…to have faith in another person and know that they feel the same thing…the capability to share themselves and give wholly to another human being and seeing them open up to that was astounding. Max has never had a strong female in his life and Lea has never felt comfortable enough to let another man in as much as she does Max…so their both opening themselves up to a very vulnerable situation…but the fact that they allowed it to happen spoke volumes to me about their relationship and who they are as a couple.
“Anything?”
She didn’t like this look in his eye. “Wait-”
“Go out with me,” he blurted.
She snapped her jaw shut, then licked her lips. “What?”
His gaze darted back and forth between hers. He was nervous. “Lea Travers, will you go on a date with me?”
“I-”
“You said anything-”
“Okay, but I might have some caveats.”
His dark eyebrows dipped. “I don’t know what caveats are but they sound fancy.”
As usual, I fell more and more in love with these characters the more I get to know them. I loved seeing more of Alec and Kat…seeing little bits of their progression, even from someone else’s eyes, it just does stuff to me…one of the many reasons why I love series. I did not expect to fall more in love with…Danica! Of course I thought she was a riot in MiC and I loved her friendship with Alec, but she took on a different role with Lea…almost like a big sister. I kind of already have crushes on Max’s older brothers, Cal and Brent…they’re typical older brothers but with the way they were raised…they just have an interesting dynamic and I really liked their interactions. It showed a different side to Max…and if Cal and Brent are half as interesting as Max is, then oh boy, do I want! :-) (a girl can hope!). But…there was one character that completely stole the show…Wayne. Wayne is…a cat. Yup…a cat who in just a few scenes is magically able to show a completely different side to the tough and burly Max…I don’t want to give too much away, but Wayne totally rocked it out and I loved what he brought out in Max.
‘“No, I’m not going to ask how I’ll know.”
She smiled. “Confident?”
He huffed out a breath and said softly. “Not at all.”
She sucked in a breath. “You still want a date with me?”
His chest hitched. “If a date with you means I get to look into your eyes when you smile and smell your hair when I’m close and feel those fingers on my skin when you laugh, then yes, doll. Yes, I want a date with you.”
It was too much and not enough all at the same time. Because he was all around her, he was her – supplying her legs and providing her heat and giving her breath because she inhaled him every time he exhaled.’
I was happy that the writing style pretty much stayed the same from MiC to MiR…the tone changed, obviously, with the characters but it’s still has the same feel. It’s dual POV, which I continued to enjoy…no scenes were repeated so it wasn’t redundant. And of course there was still that magical blend of emotional, funny and steamy…perfectly balanced between two insanely loveable and endearing characters. I really do enjoy Megan’s writing…she’s got a great flow and I feel like I’m consistently pulled in by what is happening. The plot was once again very unique and original and I really enjoyed it. It played both to Max and Lea’s strengths and weaknesses, which I appreciated. The balance and flow of this story was darn near perfect for me…just enough angst and pull to keep me on my toes…dear-sweet-lord-in-heaven was it sexy as hell…just the right amount of emotions, I didn’t cry like I did with MiR but I was feelin’ lots of feels!
“We’re talking about me, not you.”
“Right.” He nodded. “But that’s your logic. That I’m weak because I trust. You’re strong because you don’t trust.”
Well then her logic was flawed. Because nothing was stronger than the sight of Max grabbing the headboard, closing his eyes, and trusting her with his naked body and naked heart. “I don’t think you’re weak.”
His exhaled with relief and stepped closer, brushing his fingers over her bangs, eyes watching the hair fall back into place. Then he met her gaze. “I don’t think you’re weak either. I know you have it in you to trust. Is it me? You can’t trust me?”
Everything in her heart screamed she could but her head didn’t want to admit it. “It’s not you,” she whispered. “I don’t see myself as broken or hurt or weak. And I’ve never trust another person, other than my family, to feel the same way about me. To see me as an equal and not a fragile doll.”
He laughed softly, cupping the back of her head, thumb rubbing the shell of her ear. “I call you doll because you look like one. But you sure as hell aren’t broken.”
I’m über excited about Cam’s story…he’s a man whore and I love my man whores, plus I can’t wait to hear his back story. He was set up perfectly over the past two books and if he’s any where close to the amazingness that Max and Alec are, then we’re in for an awesome story! Can’t wait to get my hands on Make It Last!
December 31, 2014
This isn't up on my blog yet because I'm not posting it til the week of the release date but I couldn't wait and decided to post it on here first.
So here is my review to Make It Right.
Let me tell you...
All the things I love about my girl Lea here and of Make It Right.
Now... where to start *shifty eyes* Umm... Honestly, I don't know where to start, mainly because I loved everything, every chapter, every paragraph, every WORD that came off this pages. While I was reading MiR, I saw a broadway play (in case you didn't know, I see plays instead of movies when I read a really good book) and I was immersed into this story since the beginning.
I had an idea of how this story was going to end, I mean it's obvious when it comes to stand alone-ish romance novels, so that was a given, but I wasn't expecting the journey that Megan put these lovely characters and me through (Megan is the author if you didn't know). And that's probably what I love most about this story, Megan caught me off guard with my expectations.
The supporting characters were just as amazing as they were in Make It Count (<-- which I highly suggest because it's also lovely). Even though Make It Right isn't about them, you still are given this inkling of what's going on in their own lives. It's not all about Lea and Max, and because we are given this small knowledge of their supporting characters it's evident that Lea and Max are caring for their friends and family.
There are countless moments between Lea and Max that are filled with fluffiest fluff ever. And I lived for those moments. Those moments brought a huge grin to my face (the hugest of huge grins). This is a text I sent to one of my best book friends "It was just GAH so much fluff. IDK but I was expecting more hot and heavy [scenes] BUT I LOVED IT SO MUCH MORE THIS WAY... I couldn't have asked for more!" Now hear me out, there are some sex scenes, but when I read these scenes, it wasn't just sex that was being expressed between these two. So I was fine, absolutely fine with their relationship because it WASNT FILLED WITH LUST.
Max. Oh lord. I loved a lot him since finishing Make It Count, but my love for him increased a million times reading his words. I mean COME ON. BON JOVI. COOKIES. CATS. CREATIVE. VULNERABLE. BEAUTIFUL FACE. (I can go on and on but I'm saving that for Lea). How can you not love him!?!? Okay. Okay. If you read Make It Count then there's a good chance that you think I'm crazy for loving him because he's a jackass. But if you think about it, everyone has a little donkey in them, it's just more prominent in people who have problems they can't seem to handle. It's a defense mechanism and a good one at that because no one wants to associate with a donkey. So only the people who are willing to try can break that barrier, and for Max that was Lea.
And now this is where I profess my love about Lea. I connected to this book in all ways possible for a person to connect to a book and that had a lot to do with Lea. I can say with full honesty that she is the character that I have connected to the most. Ever. It's hard to believe, given all the books I've read, but it's true. Lea your everyday person. She struggled and struggles with trust, self image, self security, and being vulnerable. But besides all that she's freaking badass. She's more than the perfect match for Max; she's a very independent woman, she could do without a guy and be absolutely fine, which leads me to believe that HE (Max) is the perfect match for Lea rather than the other way around. This is her story as it is Max's. She's everything I am and want to be, and she's a fictional character.
Make It Right is something fresh. It got out of a shower, put on coconut oil as lotion and walked out that door naked so everyone could view it. It shows another side of life and I have to admit that it's probably my favorite read of the year so far. If every NA novel where like this, fun, adventurous, insightful, deep, they would be something to fear and praise. Make It Right went above and beyond my expectations. And I couldn't have asked for anything better for Lea and Max.
I am extremely sorry about how long this review is, but I had a lot of love for Make It Right, so really I'm not that extremely sorry.
If you couldn't tell, this was a FIVE GOLDEN STAR read and the author is Megan Erickson (she pretty darn awesome)
-Vangie
1 Corinthians 1:4-5
P.S. Mix Lea and her dad together, and you have me. I swear, they are my spirit characters. I love them with all my heart.
So here is my review to Make It Right.
Let me tell you...
All the things I love about my girl Lea here and of Make It Right.
Now... where to start *shifty eyes* Umm... Honestly, I don't know where to start, mainly because I loved everything, every chapter, every paragraph, every WORD that came off this pages. While I was reading MiR, I saw a broadway play (in case you didn't know, I see plays instead of movies when I read a really good book) and I was immersed into this story since the beginning.
I had an idea of how this story was going to end, I mean it's obvious when it comes to stand alone-ish romance novels, so that was a given, but I wasn't expecting the journey that Megan put these lovely characters and me through (Megan is the author if you didn't know). And that's probably what I love most about this story, Megan caught me off guard with my expectations.
The supporting characters were just as amazing as they were in Make It Count (<-- which I highly suggest because it's also lovely). Even though Make It Right isn't about them, you still are given this inkling of what's going on in their own lives. It's not all about Lea and Max, and because we are given this small knowledge of their supporting characters it's evident that Lea and Max are caring for their friends and family.
There are countless moments between Lea and Max that are filled with fluffiest fluff ever. And I lived for those moments. Those moments brought a huge grin to my face (the hugest of huge grins). This is a text I sent to one of my best book friends "It was just GAH so much fluff. IDK but I was expecting more hot and heavy [scenes] BUT I LOVED IT SO MUCH MORE THIS WAY... I couldn't have asked for more!" Now hear me out, there are some sex scenes, but when I read these scenes, it wasn't just sex that was being expressed between these two. So I was fine, absolutely fine with their relationship because it WASNT FILLED WITH LUST.
Max. Oh lord. I loved a lot him since finishing Make It Count, but my love for him increased a million times reading his words. I mean COME ON. BON JOVI. COOKIES. CATS. CREATIVE. VULNERABLE. BEAUTIFUL FACE. (I can go on and on but I'm saving that for Lea). How can you not love him!?!? Okay. Okay. If you read Make It Count then there's a good chance that you think I'm crazy for loving him because he's a jackass. But if you think about it, everyone has a little donkey in them, it's just more prominent in people who have problems they can't seem to handle. It's a defense mechanism and a good one at that because no one wants to associate with a donkey. So only the people who are willing to try can break that barrier, and for Max that was Lea.
And now this is where I profess my love about Lea. I connected to this book in all ways possible for a person to connect to a book and that had a lot to do with Lea. I can say with full honesty that she is the character that I have connected to the most. Ever. It's hard to believe, given all the books I've read, but it's true. Lea your everyday person. She struggled and struggles with trust, self image, self security, and being vulnerable. But besides all that she's freaking badass. She's more than the perfect match for Max; she's a very independent woman, she could do without a guy and be absolutely fine, which leads me to believe that HE (Max) is the perfect match for Lea rather than the other way around. This is her story as it is Max's. She's everything I am and want to be, and she's a fictional character.
Make It Right is something fresh. It got out of a shower, put on coconut oil as lotion and walked out that door naked so everyone could view it. It shows another side of life and I have to admit that it's probably my favorite read of the year so far. If every NA novel where like this, fun, adventurous, insightful, deep, they would be something to fear and praise. Make It Right went above and beyond my expectations. And I couldn't have asked for anything better for Lea and Max.
I am extremely sorry about how long this review is, but I had a lot of love for Make It Right, so really I'm not that extremely sorry.
If you couldn't tell, this was a FIVE GOLDEN STAR read and the author is Megan Erickson (she pretty darn awesome)
-Vangie
1 Corinthians 1:4-5
P.S. Mix Lea and her dad together, and you have me. I swear, they are my spirit characters. I love them with all my heart.
September 13, 2014
An absolutely adorable, wonderful, charming New Adult romance, Make it Right was a fabulous read that I totally loved. I was utterly enchanted by this sweet book and I enjoyed it from start to finish.
Lea was a fantastic heroine. She had been in an accident that scarred her leg and left her with a limp. After wallowing in anger and depression about it for most of her high school life, she decided to make a change and refused to let her injury keep her down. She learned to fight and became an all around kick-ass girl and I really liked that about her. She did have some trust issues, especially after what her asshole of a boyfriend did to her in high school, but it was understandable and it didn't bother me, for the most part. The only time I got frustrated with it was when she still had a moment of mistrust with Max, after he had proved himself to her. But, other than that, I thought she was a great character.
Max was a surprise. After his horrible behavior in Make it Count, I didn't know how he would redeem himself. But, he certainly did and I ended up adoring him. I first started to warm up to him when he coaxed an alley cat to trust him and did the absolute cutest things for the scarred cat, like making him homemade treats. Any man that can be so sweet to a cat gets points in my book. Then, he continued to prove himself. He really could be sweet, when he wasn't trying so hard to be a jerk. I loved how patient he was with Lea and how determined he was to prove that he could change. By the end of the book, I totally adored him.
The romance was wonderful. Lea and Max were so great together. They both challenged each other to become stronger and better and I really liked that in their relationship. And, the chemistry between them was definitely hot. I thought they were a perfect couple.
The plot was fast paced and I was hooked the entire way through. I absolutely loved the story and the ending was lovely. I can't wait to read the next book in the series!
Make it Right was a fabulous, sweet, and overall endearing New Adult romance. It was a wonderful book and I enjoyed it from start to finish. Romance lovers, this is a book you won't want to miss.
*I received a complimentary copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review
Lea was a fantastic heroine. She had been in an accident that scarred her leg and left her with a limp. After wallowing in anger and depression about it for most of her high school life, she decided to make a change and refused to let her injury keep her down. She learned to fight and became an all around kick-ass girl and I really liked that about her. She did have some trust issues, especially after what her asshole of a boyfriend did to her in high school, but it was understandable and it didn't bother me, for the most part. The only time I got frustrated with it was when she still had a moment of mistrust with Max, after he had proved himself to her. But, other than that, I thought she was a great character.
Max was a surprise. After his horrible behavior in Make it Count, I didn't know how he would redeem himself. But, he certainly did and I ended up adoring him. I first started to warm up to him when he coaxed an alley cat to trust him and did the absolute cutest things for the scarred cat, like making him homemade treats. Any man that can be so sweet to a cat gets points in my book. Then, he continued to prove himself. He really could be sweet, when he wasn't trying so hard to be a jerk. I loved how patient he was with Lea and how determined he was to prove that he could change. By the end of the book, I totally adored him.
The romance was wonderful. Lea and Max were so great together. They both challenged each other to become stronger and better and I really liked that in their relationship. And, the chemistry between them was definitely hot. I thought they were a perfect couple.
The plot was fast paced and I was hooked the entire way through. I absolutely loved the story and the ending was lovely. I can't wait to read the next book in the series!
Make it Right was a fabulous, sweet, and overall endearing New Adult romance. It was a wonderful book and I enjoyed it from start to finish. Romance lovers, this is a book you won't want to miss.
*I received a complimentary copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review
November 24, 2014
I love a good redemption story and MAKE IT RIGHT is redemption at it's best!
Max Payton reminds me of a cookie dough cupcake.
Wait. What?
Don't get your icicles into a twist, Elsa, I'll explain...
On the outside, a cookie dough cupcake looks like a regular vanilla cupcake with chocolate buttercream frosting, but take a bite and you'll quickly discover it has a soft goey cookie dough center inside.
The same is true of Max. By all appearances, he's your stereotypical tall, dark and looking for a good time with no strings attached kind of guy. But hiding beneath all that playboy charm is a guy weighed down by other people's plans and expectations for his life. He's lashed out, made mistakes and hurt those who genuinely care about him.
All Max needs is someone to give him a chance to be the man he wants to believe he can be. To to see past all of his bravado right to the soft goey center of his heart.
Enter Lea. She's feisty, independent and full of kickassery. She and Max are like oil and water at first, but throw in some spicy self-defense sessions, a purple unicorn and a slice of pie and you've got yourself the perfect recipe for love!
(Not to mention some super smexy times.)
Max and Lea both have things to overcome but their willingness to be patient with each other was refreshing and I loved their banter!
This is a great addition to the Bowler University series!
Max Payton reminds me of a cookie dough cupcake.
Wait. What?
Don't get your icicles into a twist, Elsa, I'll explain...
On the outside, a cookie dough cupcake looks like a regular vanilla cupcake with chocolate buttercream frosting, but take a bite and you'll quickly discover it has a soft goey cookie dough center inside.
The same is true of Max. By all appearances, he's your stereotypical tall, dark and looking for a good time with no strings attached kind of guy. But hiding beneath all that playboy charm is a guy weighed down by other people's plans and expectations for his life. He's lashed out, made mistakes and hurt those who genuinely care about him.
All Max needs is someone to give him a chance to be the man he wants to believe he can be. To to see past all of his bravado right to the soft goey center of his heart.
Enter Lea. She's feisty, independent and full of kickassery. She and Max are like oil and water at first, but throw in some spicy self-defense sessions, a purple unicorn and a slice of pie and you've got yourself the perfect recipe for love!
(Not to mention some super smexy times.)
Max and Lea both have things to overcome but their willingness to be patient with each other was refreshing and I loved their banter!
This is a great addition to the Bowler University series!
October 3, 2016
2.5 stars
A couple of weeks ago, I was flailing over the cuteness of Make It Count, and I’ve actually already purchased a copy of it for a friend. Since I loved the little bit of Max and Lea at the end of that book, I was so excited for Make It Right. I mean, I already shipped it, so there’s no way that could go wrong, right? Wrong.
There’s definitely some good stuff in Make It Right. Lea’s got permanent leg damage from an accident, and she walks with a limp. She’s strong and doesn’t take shit from people. Any moment when Danica makes an appearance is a great moment, though I do wish the book had been about her and Monica instead. Lea’s dad’s a precious cinnamon roll. The family stuff with Max is pretty good too, though I think his dad’s emotional arc is a bit too rushed to be entirely believable. The whole plot about self-defense and the muggings on campus was great though.
Unfortunately, I don’t ship the ship. I don’t unship Max and Lea either, but I mostly don’t care about them. In theory, Make It Right is a hate to love story, but Erickson skips the hate part directly to the love. The whole reason I adore that trope is that it lends itself to banter rather than sentiment, but Make It Right is chock full of sentimentality. Though Make It Right is all about how hard both Max and Lea find it to trust, they both instatrust and instalove all over each other.
Make It Right is an okay book for me. If you’re cool with romances high on sentiment, you’ll probably really like it.
A couple of weeks ago, I was flailing over the cuteness of Make It Count, and I’ve actually already purchased a copy of it for a friend. Since I loved the little bit of Max and Lea at the end of that book, I was so excited for Make It Right. I mean, I already shipped it, so there’s no way that could go wrong, right? Wrong.
There’s definitely some good stuff in Make It Right. Lea’s got permanent leg damage from an accident, and she walks with a limp. She’s strong and doesn’t take shit from people. Any moment when Danica makes an appearance is a great moment, though I do wish the book had been about her and Monica instead. Lea’s dad’s a precious cinnamon roll. The family stuff with Max is pretty good too, though I think his dad’s emotional arc is a bit too rushed to be entirely believable. The whole plot about self-defense and the muggings on campus was great though.
Unfortunately, I don’t ship the ship. I don’t unship Max and Lea either, but I mostly don’t care about them. In theory, Make It Right is a hate to love story, but Erickson skips the hate part directly to the love. The whole reason I adore that trope is that it lends itself to banter rather than sentiment, but Make It Right is chock full of sentimentality. Though Make It Right is all about how hard both Max and Lea find it to trust, they both instatrust and instalove all over each other.
Make It Right is an okay book for me. If you’re cool with romances high on sentiment, you’ll probably really like it.
January 12, 2016
I liked this book and I'm sorry to see it has a lower rating than Elle Kennedy's "The Mistake", a book published this year that has mostly the same plot.
It doesn’t seem right.
I hate it when this happens.
I had the feeling of reading the same thing twice...a few minor changes make it probably not liable to be sued but still...
I wished there were less copies of the same story sold as a different book by someone else.
Since this book was published before "The Mistake" it should be acknowledged more than E. Kennedy's book.
Anyway...
Originality is a rarity.
Wish there was more of it out there.
I should probably rant about it on that book's review... and I will.
Good work for Megan Erickson! I wished I'd read this book first.
It doesn’t seem right.
I hate it when this happens.
I had the feeling of reading the same thing twice...a few minor changes make it probably not liable to be sued but still...
I wished there were less copies of the same story sold as a different book by someone else.
Since this book was published before "The Mistake" it should be acknowledged more than E. Kennedy's book.
Anyway...
Originality is a rarity.
Wish there was more of it out there.
I should probably rant about it on that book's review... and I will.
Good work for Megan Erickson! I wished I'd read this book first.
September 30, 2017
3 good enough stars
It wasn't as good as the first one but I liked the evolution of the hero Max but the heroine Lea didn't change all that much and she got a little annoying.
The main issue with this book was the editing. Can we get at least a proofreader.
I'd like to know Cam's story but can i deal with the typos?? I do want to know why he joined the military so guess I'm in for the last book.
It wasn't as good as the first one but I liked the evolution of the hero Max but the heroine Lea didn't change all that much and she got a little annoying.
The main issue with this book was the editing. Can we get at least a proofreader.
I'd like to know Cam's story but can i deal with the typos?? I do want to know why he joined the military so guess I'm in for the last book.
October 7, 2014
2.75 stars.
I didn't toally hate it, but having both the love triangle & (emotional) infidelity it just wasn't for me.
I didn't toally hate it, but having both the love triangle & (emotional) infidelity it just wasn't for me.
June 21, 2017
A second installment of the Bowler series as lovely as the first one, actually even better if I might say.
I like the series idea of having "handicaped" lead females (dyslexia for Kat, a limp for Lea) that just kick asses and overcome their issues with the help of supportive families, awesome friends and a bit of love.
Even if the structure is quite the same than MiC, and for that matter some parts of the plot quite predictable, it had the good sense of not reenacting what I reproached to the first book ("I'm breaking-up with him even though he loves and adores me more than anyone and has gone to every length to prove it, and would do anything for me, and is just sweet, smart and funny, because I have self-convinced myself that he doesn't see me for who I truly am, whatever the hell that means" I mean, please... Thank god Max and Lea's quiproquo was believable).
I really liked both Max and Lea (and that's saying something since I couldn't fucking stand Max in MiC, and now I might just have a bit of a crush on him, the guy loves cats and bakes and has a weird obsession for the movie "Frozen", this is top-notch sweetheart material), and I really liked the idea of redemption and how the author saved an unlikable character without denaturing him.
I'm super glad to have discover Megan Erickson's work (thanks for that, Manon) and will be sure to check out the rest of her books!
I like the series idea of having "handicaped" lead females (dyslexia for Kat, a limp for Lea) that just kick asses and overcome their issues with the help of supportive families, awesome friends and a bit of love.
Even if the structure is quite the same than MiC, and for that matter some parts of the plot quite predictable, it had the good sense of not reenacting what I reproached to the first book ("I'm breaking-up with him even though he loves and adores me more than anyone and has gone to every length to prove it, and would do anything for me, and is just sweet, smart and funny, because I have self-convinced myself that he doesn't see me for who I truly am, whatever the hell that means" I mean, please... Thank god Max and Lea's quiproquo was believable).
I really liked both Max and Lea (and that's saying something since I couldn't fucking stand Max in MiC, and now I might just have a bit of a crush on him, the guy loves cats and bakes and has a weird obsession for the movie "Frozen", this is top-notch sweetheart material), and I really liked the idea of redemption and how the author saved an unlikable character without denaturing him.
I'm super glad to have discover Megan Erickson's work (thanks for that, Manon) and will be sure to check out the rest of her books!
September 17, 2014
A copy of this book was provided by the publisher for an honest review at The Romance Evangelist.
After a year when I’ve declared so many romance tropes and subgenres off my reading list, only to be shown how good they can actually be, it should have been no surprise that I would find a book so wonderful that it redeems the one subgenre I’d swore off for good: New Adult. But make no mistake, MAKE IT RIGHT by Megan Erickson is the one New Adult romance that I truly believe even those weary of that subgenre could enjoy reading.
Although MAKE IT RIGHT is the second in Megan Erickson’s Bowler University series, it works quite well as a stand-alone story. Starting the series with this second book might even provide an advantage to the new reader, since the story revolves around the redemption of a much reviled character from the first book, MAKE IT COUNT.
Max Payton is infamous among his college friends for the rotten way he treated his last girlfriend, Kat, and how before that, he’d slept with the high school girlfriend of his best friend Alec. Now that Alec and Kat are a couple, Max must content himself with the occasional nightly pickup of whatever women are still willing to throw themselves at him. But when Lea Travers shows up one night at the local convenience store where Max is slightly drunk and feeling down about his life, he realizes that this girl is someone he’d really like to be the true version of himself with, just for once.
Lea doesn’t have the long history with Max from high school like her friends do, but what she’s heard about him is all bad. Still, she sees something genuine behind the jerk facade he puts on for everyone, and as events on campus conspire to bring them together, it’s obvious that the attraction is mutual. What both she and Max eventually discover is a deeper connection that could heal the invisible wounds they both carry inside. But can it survive the mistakes they’ve both made and their unshakable assumptions about loving and being loved?
So many New Adult books make the mistake of fetishizing tragedies in their relatively young characters’ pasts, but in MAKE IT RIGHT, this is never a problem. The perfect tone is set from the start, and what makes us sympathize with the characters is constantly balanced with moments of humor that are never out of place. Max is much more than what he shows to the world, and we see his troubled home life from his point of view, even as its effect on his behavior is made all too obvious as the story unfolds. Lea, too, has endured both physical and psychological blows that would be daunting for a person twice her age. But the histories each brings to this new relationship are presented matter-of-factly, with no superimposed drama to forcibly wring the last bit of sentiment out of readers. This careful balance between lightheartedness and deep emotion is what I find missing in so many New Adult romances, and its presence here is one of the big reasons I loved Max and Lea’s story so much.
The other great feature of MAKE IT RIGHT for me was how the author always kept me guessing as to how events would play out, while always ensuring the necessary groundwork had already been laid for what would happen next. Even when I was able to predict the nature of the inevitable Big Misunderstanding, I was still surprised by the series of events it triggered, leading all the way up to Max and Lea’s happy ending, blowing away every assumption I’d had up until then. Ultimately, neither Max nor Lea should have ever trusted each other to be the person they needed, but when they took that leap of faith, I took it with them, and was rewarded with one of the best romances I’ve read this year.
After a year when I’ve declared so many romance tropes and subgenres off my reading list, only to be shown how good they can actually be, it should have been no surprise that I would find a book so wonderful that it redeems the one subgenre I’d swore off for good: New Adult. But make no mistake, MAKE IT RIGHT by Megan Erickson is the one New Adult romance that I truly believe even those weary of that subgenre could enjoy reading.
Although MAKE IT RIGHT is the second in Megan Erickson’s Bowler University series, it works quite well as a stand-alone story. Starting the series with this second book might even provide an advantage to the new reader, since the story revolves around the redemption of a much reviled character from the first book, MAKE IT COUNT.
Max Payton is infamous among his college friends for the rotten way he treated his last girlfriend, Kat, and how before that, he’d slept with the high school girlfriend of his best friend Alec. Now that Alec and Kat are a couple, Max must content himself with the occasional nightly pickup of whatever women are still willing to throw themselves at him. But when Lea Travers shows up one night at the local convenience store where Max is slightly drunk and feeling down about his life, he realizes that this girl is someone he’d really like to be the true version of himself with, just for once.
Lea doesn’t have the long history with Max from high school like her friends do, but what she’s heard about him is all bad. Still, she sees something genuine behind the jerk facade he puts on for everyone, and as events on campus conspire to bring them together, it’s obvious that the attraction is mutual. What both she and Max eventually discover is a deeper connection that could heal the invisible wounds they both carry inside. But can it survive the mistakes they’ve both made and their unshakable assumptions about loving and being loved?
So many New Adult books make the mistake of fetishizing tragedies in their relatively young characters’ pasts, but in MAKE IT RIGHT, this is never a problem. The perfect tone is set from the start, and what makes us sympathize with the characters is constantly balanced with moments of humor that are never out of place. Max is much more than what he shows to the world, and we see his troubled home life from his point of view, even as its effect on his behavior is made all too obvious as the story unfolds. Lea, too, has endured both physical and psychological blows that would be daunting for a person twice her age. But the histories each brings to this new relationship are presented matter-of-factly, with no superimposed drama to forcibly wring the last bit of sentiment out of readers. This careful balance between lightheartedness and deep emotion is what I find missing in so many New Adult romances, and its presence here is one of the big reasons I loved Max and Lea’s story so much.
The other great feature of MAKE IT RIGHT for me was how the author always kept me guessing as to how events would play out, while always ensuring the necessary groundwork had already been laid for what would happen next. Even when I was able to predict the nature of the inevitable Big Misunderstanding, I was still surprised by the series of events it triggered, leading all the way up to Max and Lea’s happy ending, blowing away every assumption I’d had up until then. Ultimately, neither Max nor Lea should have ever trusted each other to be the person they needed, but when they took that leap of faith, I took it with them, and was rewarded with one of the best romances I’ve read this year.
June 15, 2015
*I received this book from the Publisher in exchange for an honest review.*
See this review and more on my blog, Lilybloombooks
I am in love with this series. And Megan’s writing.
I mentioned in my review of MAKE IT COUNT, that I am always on the hunt for books (especially New Adult) that bring me something different and stand out. I am glad to say that MAKE IT RIGHT made the cut; just like it’s predecessor.
It takes a lot for an author to redeem a character. First impressions are huge – and when you have a character that has done some things you don’t like or agree with, and acts a certain way, it’s hard to get your head to NOT think a certain way about them. But Megan nailed it.
This book is about Max. Yes, that Max. The guy (sometimes jerk) that was Kat’s boyfriend that I tried to dislike but couldn’t. He did some things that were unforgivable to some, but he is also dealing with more than what he lets on; although he puts on a good front. I never thought it was a “bad guy” more a… misunderstood guy, and I was anxious to get his story. Not to mention, nervous. He wasn’t what I was expecting, that’s for sure.
You remember in Shrek – when he is talking to Donkey about how Ogres have layers? That’s Max. The layers – not an Ogre. We learn more about Max piece by piece, as his thick layers are peeled away. I think just about every assumption I made about Max was wrong. He is sweet, caring and passionate about a lot of things. He just hides it from his friends and family – because he was raised to be tough.
Lea is the type of girl that I love to read about, and admire. Bad ass, no-nonsense, but gentle too. She too, has her own issues to deal with – and her insecurities are tested to the Max (baha, get it?) But I loved how these two slowly learned to trust each other, love each other and make it work. There were many things thrown their way – and the best relationships are the ones that REALLY have to work at that HEA.
One thing I want to make a comment on – was Lea’s dominate side. This girl knows what she wants – and has no qualms about taking it. In the bed room. I love a character that is strong and comfortable with her own sexuality and takes control of it. Kudos, Megan.
My Peeve -
Nothing. :)
Overall -
I loved it! Megan is one of my favorite authors and she will hold that spot for a long time. If you love New Adult – or even if you don’t – I highly recommend this one. You’ll laugh, you’ll swoon and you will definitely fall in love with these characters – just like I did.
See this review and more on my blog, Lilybloombooks
I am in love with this series. And Megan’s writing.
I mentioned in my review of MAKE IT COUNT, that I am always on the hunt for books (especially New Adult) that bring me something different and stand out. I am glad to say that MAKE IT RIGHT made the cut; just like it’s predecessor.
It takes a lot for an author to redeem a character. First impressions are huge – and when you have a character that has done some things you don’t like or agree with, and acts a certain way, it’s hard to get your head to NOT think a certain way about them. But Megan nailed it.
This book is about Max. Yes, that Max. The guy (sometimes jerk) that was Kat’s boyfriend that I tried to dislike but couldn’t. He did some things that were unforgivable to some, but he is also dealing with more than what he lets on; although he puts on a good front. I never thought it was a “bad guy” more a… misunderstood guy, and I was anxious to get his story. Not to mention, nervous. He wasn’t what I was expecting, that’s for sure.
You remember in Shrek – when he is talking to Donkey about how Ogres have layers? That’s Max. The layers – not an Ogre. We learn more about Max piece by piece, as his thick layers are peeled away. I think just about every assumption I made about Max was wrong. He is sweet, caring and passionate about a lot of things. He just hides it from his friends and family – because he was raised to be tough.
Lea is the type of girl that I love to read about, and admire. Bad ass, no-nonsense, but gentle too. She too, has her own issues to deal with – and her insecurities are tested to the Max (baha, get it?) But I loved how these two slowly learned to trust each other, love each other and make it work. There were many things thrown their way – and the best relationships are the ones that REALLY have to work at that HEA.
One thing I want to make a comment on – was Lea’s dominate side. This girl knows what she wants – and has no qualms about taking it. In the bed room. I love a character that is strong and comfortable with her own sexuality and takes control of it. Kudos, Megan.
My Peeve -
Nothing. :)
Overall -
I loved it! Megan is one of my favorite authors and she will hold that spot for a long time. If you love New Adult – or even if you don’t – I highly recommend this one. You’ll laugh, you’ll swoon and you will definitely fall in love with these characters – just like I did.
March 22, 2015
As soon as I finished reading Make it Count, I jumped right in to Make it Right. I wasn't expecting to like Max at all. He was sort of a tool in the first book. I was wrong. I really do need to stop making assumptions.
Max is a senior at Bowler University, his path is planned, there is no other options. His dad is a jackass and if he wants his dad to keep paying for school then he has to do everything his dad says. Growing up it was just his dad and two brothers; and he's always felt like his dad would rather he had never been born. Mostly due to the fact that his mom is gone. From the first time he saw Lea he was attracted to her but she wouldn't give him the time of day. After he and Kat broke up and she ended up with his best friend, Alec, he knew he needed to change and after the secret he'd been holding in was out he was ready to change. Maybe now he could convince Lea that he wasn't the meat-head he was before. That he could think about others feelings but still do things for himself.
Lea doesn't think that Max is wanting to be with her because he is interested, its more because he can't get to her, she keeps everyone at arms length. There have been a few assaults around campus including her own cousin, so Lea tries and succeeds in getting a self-defense class started and Max ends up being the classes 'attacker'. Lea realizes that Max isn't a bad as she thought and maybe she should let him in.
Max was an enigma, he was totally that meat-head guy but there were layers to him. He really wanted to change his major but was afraid to say anything to his dad since it was just an assumption that he would go home and work at his dads car repair shop. Something happens that makes them all sit back and realize that life is too short to do things you don't love, and to not let the ones you love in. Lea has to learn that Max has changed and is constantly trying to be the guy he thinks she needs.
I really enjoyed Lea and how strong she was. No matter what was going on she was positive even when she had plenty of reasons to be weak. Max thought he could work his way through life all brawn and strength and meeting Lea showed him that sometimes walking away and getting help is the best thing. I really loved Max after getting to hear his story. Seeing the way he grew up explained a lot of things. Run, don't walk to get this book. It really is a great book! Leave the author love in the form of a review.
Max is a senior at Bowler University, his path is planned, there is no other options. His dad is a jackass and if he wants his dad to keep paying for school then he has to do everything his dad says. Growing up it was just his dad and two brothers; and he's always felt like his dad would rather he had never been born. Mostly due to the fact that his mom is gone. From the first time he saw Lea he was attracted to her but she wouldn't give him the time of day. After he and Kat broke up and she ended up with his best friend, Alec, he knew he needed to change and after the secret he'd been holding in was out he was ready to change. Maybe now he could convince Lea that he wasn't the meat-head he was before. That he could think about others feelings but still do things for himself.
Lea doesn't think that Max is wanting to be with her because he is interested, its more because he can't get to her, she keeps everyone at arms length. There have been a few assaults around campus including her own cousin, so Lea tries and succeeds in getting a self-defense class started and Max ends up being the classes 'attacker'. Lea realizes that Max isn't a bad as she thought and maybe she should let him in.
Max was an enigma, he was totally that meat-head guy but there were layers to him. He really wanted to change his major but was afraid to say anything to his dad since it was just an assumption that he would go home and work at his dads car repair shop. Something happens that makes them all sit back and realize that life is too short to do things you don't love, and to not let the ones you love in. Lea has to learn that Max has changed and is constantly trying to be the guy he thinks she needs.
I really enjoyed Lea and how strong she was. No matter what was going on she was positive even when she had plenty of reasons to be weak. Max thought he could work his way through life all brawn and strength and meeting Lea showed him that sometimes walking away and getting help is the best thing. I really loved Max after getting to hear his story. Seeing the way he grew up explained a lot of things. Run, don't walk to get this book. It really is a great book! Leave the author love in the form of a review.
January 5, 2015
I was apprehensive opening this book. After all, Max was not the most endearing character in Make It Count, book one in this series. I needn't have worried. Seems I judged Max too soon.
Max Payton can't seem to get Lea Travers off his mind. She's small in stature but looms large in his head, and he'd like to get to know her better. And when they end up teaching a self defense class together, he finally gets the chance.
Lea Travers has a permanent injury from an accident as a kid, but she's not letting that stop her. She doesn't want anyone, especially not arrogant Max seeing her as weak. He just rubs her the wrong way with his cocky, prickly attitude.
But when a series of attacks on around campus hit too close to home, Lea begins to realize it's okay to lean on someone for support, while Max tries to prove to her he's more than the a**hole everyone sees.
Wow! Max was so very different in this book and I LOVED him. Don't get me wrong, there's plenty of WTF moments from him, when it seems his default jerk mentality came out to play, but it's balanced beautifully by his softer side. I felt for him, with his sh*tty father in the background, making life difficult. And I fell for him when he tried so hard to be a good guy again. There's a good guy under that rough exterior and Megan Erickson makes him right.
Make It Right was a sweet, sexy read and pretty damn funny in places. It's high on light banter and light on heavy, angsty moments. Don't get me wrong; there's tension and anguish here, but just enough to keep it interesting without making repeated trips to the tissue box a necessity.
I'm really looking forward to the third book in this series now. I've enjoyed the little we've seen of Cam as a secondary character - he doled out some decent advice in this book, so that makes him a-ok in my mind - so I'm hopeful he and Ms. Erickson will give me another romantic, comedic read to swoon over.
Make It Right is the second book in the Bowler University series. It can be read standalone. No cliffhanger. ~ Beth, 4.5 stars
Max Payton can't seem to get Lea Travers off his mind. She's small in stature but looms large in his head, and he'd like to get to know her better. And when they end up teaching a self defense class together, he finally gets the chance.
Lea Travers has a permanent injury from an accident as a kid, but she's not letting that stop her. She doesn't want anyone, especially not arrogant Max seeing her as weak. He just rubs her the wrong way with his cocky, prickly attitude.
But when a series of attacks on around campus hit too close to home, Lea begins to realize it's okay to lean on someone for support, while Max tries to prove to her he's more than the a**hole everyone sees.
Wow! Max was so very different in this book and I LOVED him. Don't get me wrong, there's plenty of WTF moments from him, when it seems his default jerk mentality came out to play, but it's balanced beautifully by his softer side. I felt for him, with his sh*tty father in the background, making life difficult. And I fell for him when he tried so hard to be a good guy again. There's a good guy under that rough exterior and Megan Erickson makes him right.
Make It Right was a sweet, sexy read and pretty damn funny in places. It's high on light banter and light on heavy, angsty moments. Don't get me wrong; there's tension and anguish here, but just enough to keep it interesting without making repeated trips to the tissue box a necessity.
I'm really looking forward to the third book in this series now. I've enjoyed the little we've seen of Cam as a secondary character - he doled out some decent advice in this book, so that makes him a-ok in my mind - so I'm hopeful he and Ms. Erickson will give me another romantic, comedic read to swoon over.
Make It Right is the second book in the Bowler University series. It can be read standalone. No cliffhanger. ~ Beth, 4.5 stars
December 22, 2015
Review originally posted on my blog: Mischievous Reads
Make it Right has got to be my favorite of the series, which, to be frank, was absolutely unexpected, since our boy Max wasn't exactly a likeable character in the previous book. In Make it Count, he obviously has his own issues--family issues to be exact, particularly with his dad, but that wasn't enough to make me feel bad for him. But in his book, Max is the smore you crave--a hard cracker on the outside, but all soft, delicious gooey marshmallow on the inside.
Readers meet Lea before the first book ends, and get a glimpse of her sweet, yet sassy nature but Megan Erickson definitely gives more depth to her character in this novel. At five feet, she's the definition of small but terrible, and the fact that she's a black belter just made her cooler in my book. She's fierce yet vulnerable at the same time, and absolutely selfless.
The romance between Max and Lea was one of my favorites. These two hard headed knuckleheads clashed head on and made every turn of a page sizzle with lots of tension! But don't get me wrong, they, of course, don't fight all the time, because Max definitely turns into a softie when it comes to Lea and the thought of it just makes me feel all giddy!
The plot is mostly centered on Max and his family problems; the way he tries to be the person he isn't just to please his father. It was a touching read, and it sure made me fall in love with Max's character, unlike my first impression of him in the previous novel, and kudos to Megan Erickson for that!
Make it Right was sweet and fluffy, and quite emotional, but it was definitely a wonderful read!
Make it Right has got to be my favorite of the series, which, to be frank, was absolutely unexpected, since our boy Max wasn't exactly a likeable character in the previous book. In Make it Count, he obviously has his own issues--family issues to be exact, particularly with his dad, but that wasn't enough to make me feel bad for him. But in his book, Max is the smore you crave--a hard cracker on the outside, but all soft, delicious gooey marshmallow on the inside.
Readers meet Lea before the first book ends, and get a glimpse of her sweet, yet sassy nature but Megan Erickson definitely gives more depth to her character in this novel. At five feet, she's the definition of small but terrible, and the fact that she's a black belter just made her cooler in my book. She's fierce yet vulnerable at the same time, and absolutely selfless.
The romance between Max and Lea was one of my favorites. These two hard headed knuckleheads clashed head on and made every turn of a page sizzle with lots of tension! But don't get me wrong, they, of course, don't fight all the time, because Max definitely turns into a softie when it comes to Lea and the thought of it just makes me feel all giddy!
The plot is mostly centered on Max and his family problems; the way he tries to be the person he isn't just to please his father. It was a touching read, and it sure made me fall in love with Max's character, unlike my first impression of him in the previous novel, and kudos to Megan Erickson for that!
Make it Right was sweet and fluffy, and quite emotional, but it was definitely a wonderful read!
August 8, 2015
4.5 out of 5 stars
I wanted to read this book as I had so enjoyed Dirty Thoughts and this book was Max's story, younger brother of Cal, hero of Dirty Thoughts.
Make it Right is, in itself the second book of a series. I didn't read the first book but I gather Max was a jerk in the first book and this one is his redemption story. Since I didn't read the first book and I'd already 'met' Max, he didn't need redeeming for me.
He is a bit of a party guy at the start of Make it Right but in a cute kind of way. I gather he's pretty smooth with the ladies but he has a thing for Lea but she's not impressed. See Max acts more like the boy in public school who sticks the girl's pig tails in ink because he likes her. Max likes Lea, but because he does, he says the dumbest things and makes the situation worse each time he sees her. But Lea senses something in Max that he hides from people and though reluctant, she gives him the benefit of the doubt. She realizes she was right and there is more to Max.
It's sweet watching these two fall in love until Max manages to screw things up because he doesn't know how to handle a situation.
I really liked both Max and Lea. Max is an adorable dufus when it comes to matters of the heart and I'm glad I didn't see what a screw-up he was previously and still is somewhat. I will be getting and reading the first book as I'm very impressed with Ms. Erickson's story telling.
Lea was a great heroine. She's a strong woman and has overcome a crappy incident that happened to her earlier in her life.
I'm very happy of what led to this author and I'm currently rereading Dirty Thoughts just cause I like these people so darn much.
I wanted to read this book as I had so enjoyed Dirty Thoughts and this book was Max's story, younger brother of Cal, hero of Dirty Thoughts.
Make it Right is, in itself the second book of a series. I didn't read the first book but I gather Max was a jerk in the first book and this one is his redemption story. Since I didn't read the first book and I'd already 'met' Max, he didn't need redeeming for me.
He is a bit of a party guy at the start of Make it Right but in a cute kind of way. I gather he's pretty smooth with the ladies but he has a thing for Lea but she's not impressed. See Max acts more like the boy in public school who sticks the girl's pig tails in ink because he likes her. Max likes Lea, but because he does, he says the dumbest things and makes the situation worse each time he sees her. But Lea senses something in Max that he hides from people and though reluctant, she gives him the benefit of the doubt. She realizes she was right and there is more to Max.
It's sweet watching these two fall in love until Max manages to screw things up because he doesn't know how to handle a situation.
I really liked both Max and Lea. Max is an adorable dufus when it comes to matters of the heart and I'm glad I didn't see what a screw-up he was previously and still is somewhat. I will be getting and reading the first book as I'm very impressed with Ms. Erickson's story telling.
Lea was a great heroine. She's a strong woman and has overcome a crappy incident that happened to her earlier in her life.
I'm very happy of what led to this author and I'm currently rereading Dirty Thoughts just cause I like these people so darn much.
September 20, 2014
I've never been prouder of my instincts. Mine weren't anything like Max's or Lea's were in this book, but they sensed there was an amazing story behind the cover of this book and they were right. I was surprised by how quickly I immersed myself in their story. I love that I was able to jump right in the deep end of sorts, especially since I hadn't read the first book in the series.
I really liked both Max and Lea. They're both perfect for each other. Lea was hurt in the past and Max hurt others in the past, so it was interesting to see them find a dynamic that worked for them. It's not like they didn't make mistakes. Ho boy, did they make lots of mistakes, but I liked how they kept working to fix them. I loved the chemistry the two of them had together.
The story is fast paced, and I couldn't help but feel Lea and Max's relationship was slightly, and I mean very-slightly, fast tracked. It's apparent from page one that these two already know each other so it could've been something I missed from the first book. I liked how there was never a dull moment. Between Wayne the cat and Max's brothers, I was always entertained.
I loved how important friends and family were in this book. It wasn't just about Lea and Max. I loved how my viewpoints on certain characters changed as the story progressed and I was very sad when the book ended. I'm really looking forward to Cam's book and in the meantime I'm going to go back and read Make It Count, the first book in the series.
I really liked both Max and Lea. They're both perfect for each other. Lea was hurt in the past and Max hurt others in the past, so it was interesting to see them find a dynamic that worked for them. It's not like they didn't make mistakes. Ho boy, did they make lots of mistakes, but I liked how they kept working to fix them. I loved the chemistry the two of them had together.
The story is fast paced, and I couldn't help but feel Lea and Max's relationship was slightly, and I mean very-slightly, fast tracked. It's apparent from page one that these two already know each other so it could've been something I missed from the first book. I liked how there was never a dull moment. Between Wayne the cat and Max's brothers, I was always entertained.
I loved how important friends and family were in this book. It wasn't just about Lea and Max. I loved how my viewpoints on certain characters changed as the story progressed and I was very sad when the book ended. I'm really looking forward to Cam's book and in the meantime I'm going to go back and read Make It Count, the first book in the series.
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