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218 pages, Paperback
First published August 27, 2014

I don't care how many ghosts you've encountered-the fear never goes away. I watched the bolt slide and felt myself shiver. A feeling of panic rose in my gut and had to be fought down. It was surreal, like a bad dream, watching that bolt scrape itself open.

"Mercy," I said. "Leave this family alone. Your time here is done. You need to move on."
Her lips drew into a sneer. She had no visible teeth or tongue-as with her eyes, it was just empty hallway behind her when her mouth opened.
She blasted one word at me. I felt it strike me in the forehead like a gust of Arctic air, and I heard the word inside my brain more than with my ears: Leave
"You don't understand, Mercy," I said. "You're dead, you died--"
A howling shriek hit me right in the brain. The ghost charged me, her misty face distorted and distending as she put on speed, her empty eye sockets and mouth hole stretching to inhuman shapes.

"So what do you think?" Stacey asked.
"Yeah," I replied. "I'd say this house is definitely haunted."

Ellie Jordan is a ghost trapper and her and Stacey are called on to investigate a mansion haunting by the owners. Thinking it is nothing more than residual haunting, Ellie and Stacy are taken for a spin when they discover that the mansion has many layers and each one is more sinister than the first. Now they are facing something truly evil and must rely on each other if they want to survive catching this thing.
"Naturally, zipping out to a dark, long-abandoned loony bin on a likely wild goose chase, was not how I would have preferred to spend my afternoon."
Admittedly I picked this one up because of Ali @ My Guilty Obsession and Heidi @ Rainy Day Ramblings and their awesome reviews. Wow, just wow. What a little gem. I came away with this so pleasantly surprised. The first book in the Ellie Jordan series came out a hit with me. The authors writing, imagination, realistic writing, setting and characters really resonated with me. I love how Bryan chose Savannah, Georgia for its known ghostly history. It made the story somehow more appealing because it made it kind of believable. I don’t know what I expected, but Bryan’s ghosts surprised me. Not only were they well written into the story, but they were kind of creepy and some of the scenes could come out downright scary, especially if you make a rookie mistake and read this book at night like I did. I came prepared for the final scene thanks to Heidi and read it during day time and that helped defuse the creepy factor.
I admit, when it comes to thrillers and ghost stories I am scared easily, but Bryan did an excellent job that beside now perking up at every sound at night, I found it truly enjoyable. The characters themselves were pretty awesome and the first book really set up the foundation for the rest of the series. It left me wanting more, I wanted to know more about Ellie and the ghost that set her on this path of ghost trapping, I wanted to know more about Stacey, but most of all I wanted more adventure.
I loved and admired how seamlessly Bryan can blend humor into the story. Ellie as the main voice of the story is funny, head strong, brave, but also underneath it all is still only just human and despite the brave facade that she puts up – she is just scared like everyone else.
"The bar looked like a place where meth-addicted rats went to die"
"We held each other while I cried and tried to get myself together."
I found the plot itself interesting and kept my attention. Moments that made me want to hide under my covers, and moments where I couldn't help but laugh. Overall, I felt like this was an amazing start to what is promising to be a very refreshing new series for me. I am looking forward to learning how Ellie's boss got into the business and his story.
The only thing I did not understand was Ellie's dislike of the idea of having a psychic work for them. It seems to me at times an extra pair of hands is not such a bad idea. Ellie seems to have a hard time believing the guy is genuine, but that does not stop her from using him, even if she still ends up denying his abilities while he is using them.
Also, did not understand fully how Jake's abilities work. He can somehow see the ghosts and they talk to him, yet where they violently attack Ellie, they did not seem to have wanted to harm him - at least in that one scene. Everything else did come together at the end, and I wasn't left with a lot of questions.
Oh the father of the family that called on Ellie, oh my god did I hate him for being such a jerk.
I have made a lot of highlights in the book of my favorite quotes and scenes. I will leave you with two more. If you love a good ghost story, I strongly suggest picking this book up now and giving it a shot. It is free on amazon at this very moment.
"If he'd hurt my cat, I would probably zap him in the eyeballs"
"Things I would rather do than get possessed by a ghost include eating a bucket of live leeches, swimming in piranha-filled waters while bleeding from a dozen cuts, and sticking my head into the mouth of a hungry, hungry hippo."