Night Watch by Jayne Anne Phillips won the Pulitzer for fiction this year, and I can see why. But at the same time, it made me so uncomfortable, as it stigmatizes and even exploits the image of people with mental illness. It's also needlessly descriptive of violence against women and children.
Full review:
I found an audiobook copy of NIGHT WATCH by Jayne Anne Phillips on Libby. Read by multiple readers. All views are mine.
They believed in Grant. But they didn't want to die for him. For he saw them as one nameless sacrificial tide that must turn another. (1:37:13)
I was attracted to NIGHT WATCH by Jayne Anne Phillips because I love historical fiction written over periods that don't come up much– in this case, right after the Civil War. I found out froma friend's Goodreads review that NIGHT WATCH won the 2024 Pulutzer for fiction. I really expected to love this book, and I did love the writing and the main character, Conalee.
But this book's plot centers around a traumatized, mentally ill character and her time in a historically factual residential treatment facility, famous in history for its beneficent approach to treatment. However, much of what I read surrounding this narrative, the main plot, either stigmatized or outright exploited mental illness in its various representations.
I recommend this one for people who love Pulitzer winners. Beyond that, I wouldn't recommend it. I simply wasn't that impressed.
Reading Notes
Three (or more) things I loved:
1. This opening scene is strange. Not in a bad way.
2. I really like how Weed's sections are written. The narrator rarely uses a pronoun for this character, he or him. Mostly, Weed. It's a crude effect for a crude character.
3. I've read several reviews complaining about the writing style– basically, that it is too heavy-handed. I think it's gorgeous– A well handled purple that drew me into every POV section, which I usually struggle with. Rivers and falls swelled with snowmelt, rivulets in abundance, so clear and cold, the water ached in the mouth. Freshets of icy runs cast their rapids down the ridges, and Dearbhla dreamed of Conalee, the child, on her knees by the forest creek she'd known from birth, set afloat an endless fleet of curled leaves that dipped and swirled and plunged. (2:35:43)
4. The accounting chapter is extremely interesting!
Three (or less) things I didn't love:
This section isn't only for criticisms. It's merely for items that I felt something for other than "love" or some interpretation thereof.
1. This book really needs content warnings in the front matter, but I'm impressed with the author's handling of disabled rep and interests. *edit Consider this my content warning for abuse of a disabled person, SA, violence against children, abduction, psychiatric treatment facilities.
2. At the 25% mark, with the advent of Eliza's section, I don't know what the heck is going on. I really hate a convoluted narrative, it always happens with switching POVS coupled with switching timelines. The plot just gets to be a mess.
3. I often wonder what a writer's priority is when they write very detailed abuse scenes– rape, torture, animal cruelty, doesn't really matter the flavor. It takes skill to write these scenes in a way that shows empathy to the reader rather than drags their nose through the suffering. Whatever those priorities are, I wish writer's understood that we don't need them in order to understand pain and suffering, we can do that on our own. Life is more than happy to teach us all.
4. I don't care what year this is, a doctor feeling romantically toward his mentally ill patient is disgusting. I don't appreciate the author romanticizing that part of the story. She certainly didn't do that for anything else.
5. I read reviews calling the ending predictable. On the other hand, I find it a deus ex machina, as Phillips didn't plot this turn at all.
Rating: 👨⚕️👨⚕️ bad doctors
Recommend? Only if you have a thing for Pulitzer winners
Finished: Aug 18 '24
Format: Audiobook, Libby
Read this book if you like:
🏆 prize winners
👨👩👧👦 family stories, family drama
👭🏽 teenage girl coming of age
🕰 19th century travel
❤️🔥 very forbidden romance